Well hello other humans on planet Earth! I know the last few chapters are short, and they are shorter than I would like them to be. I just want to let you guys know I am pouring my heart and soul into this fanfic. I am planning to start another story so I would like some of your guys suggestions. I have made a few attempts at a Harry Potter/ Frozen fic and have the beginnings one. So please tell me in the comments! Before we begin the story I would like to thank mxdnxghtlxve for following the story. Also, a special thanks to shinigamgymnast13 and Midnight-silver-moon-goddess for favoriting the story!
(Guest) There are a lot of Newt love stories out there, and I always wanted to see one that had Newt as more of a best friend or brotherly figure sort of thing. So I thought, why not write one myself? Thank you for your compliment on my writing! I really don't know if it's good or not, I have been working on trying to be a bit more descriptive.
(too many ships to count) I am glad it is one of your favourites! Also, thank you for following me and my story!
(Guest 2) Yay Thomas is officially in the story now! I really don't like when there is like a lot of drama in other stories. So, I know how you feel. I promise not to do any of that major drama stuff. I don't know about Lynn and Thomas, should they be in a relationship? I think I might just have them be Best Friends Forever. It's okay, I wouldn't like it either if someone took my favorite character out of there story, so I understand the whole Teresa situation. I have a lot planned for this story and I am excited to get on to the other two books. As for killing people off, I don't know... We'll just have to wait and see.
(mxdnxghtlxve) LYNHO IS LOVE, LYNHO IS LIFE, WE MUST ALL SHIP LYNHO! I know I tend to leave a lot of #suspense in my stories... I guess it's kinda like my trademark. It's not going to end like Les Mis, I promise! I would never bring that much sorrow to my readers. *sniff sniff* You will not end in tears! I promise! I don't think I am as good as JK but, I try. Your feels will be well and alive when this story is finished, well maybe...
I just wanted to give you guys a heads up that when I wrote this I completely forgot about Ben being Banished. So, if it's okay with you guys I am going to skip over that part. If you humans want to know what happened I will write a one shot about what went on separate to the story. Good that?
Lynn was woken up rather abruptly by someone shaking her awake.
"Chuck," She whined, swatting away the hands that were shaking her.
"Lynn," A familiar voice whined in response, it was Minho. Her eyes opened to see Minho hovering above her. Lynn's eyes widened and quickly sat up to see everyone else sleeping.
"Minho," she sighed, "Why did you wake me up so early?" A smirk appeared on Minho's face,
"I wanted to spend time with you before I go out into the Maze with Albster over there." He motioned to Alby who was a few feet away, tugging at the straps of his runner pack.
"Aw, does that mean I'm your favorite Glader?" She asked, "I'm Minho's favorite, I'm so honored!" she clasped her hands together and pretended to act like it meant the world to her. Minho lightly shoved her shoulder, "Shut up shank." said he.
"Minho!" They both looked towards Alby who was standing in the middle of the Glade with his hands on his hips, Newt standing beside him. "Let's go!" The boy quickly sat up,
"Bye Lindy Lou," After only taking two steps, Lynn quickly stood up and followed him. Minho stopped and looked at her. "What are ya doin' girly?"
"Coming with you,"
"No your not." Minho said firmly, placing an arm out in front of her.
"Not in that way shuck-face. I want to say goodbye to you before you head into the Maze." Lynn said, pushing his arm away. The pair continued to walk towards the North entrance.
"Took ya long enough," Alby commented as they trotted up to him and Newt. While Newt was lecturing Alby on being safe in the maze and to come back safely. Lynn gave Minho a hug,
"Be safe out there Minho," she whispered in his ear.
"I will Lynn," he patted her back and they pulled back. Lynn took Minho's large hands in her small dainty ones. "Promise me you'll come back and make it through those doors before they close." He kissed her knuckles,
"I promise Lynn." He let go of her hands and walked towards the Maze doors, which were already wide open. She stood to the side and watched her brother bid Alby and Minho a farewell, the blond twins watched the two boys run off into the concrete labyrinth.
"They'll be back in time...right?" Lynn asked looking at her brother.
"I hope so Lynn," Newt wrapped and arm around his sister's shoulders, "I hope so."
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Lynn spent most of her day with Newt, Thomas, and Zart in the gardens. It was about mid-afternoon and she was on her hands and knees in the dirt, pulling weeds out of the ground with Thomas beside her. She was worried about her brother, he kept sending glances over to the West Door. Thomas had told her he caught Newt standing at the opening earlier waiting for Minho and Alby to return. Well, Newt had the right to be worried. They should have been back by now, and Lynn was staring to get slightly worried. Minho and Alby should be back in the Glade right now. But Minho promised her that he would come back. He promised.
Lynn couldn't seat and eat while knowing that Minho and Alby were still in the Maze when they should be back right now. Her and Newt waited by the West Door, she was leaning up against the wall with her arms crossed while, Newt paced in front of the large opening. After dinner was over, a crowd gathered by the doors, waiting for the two boys to return. Lynn stood next to her brother with Thomas on Newt's other side.
"Why don't we send out a search party?" Thomas suggested. It was a stupid suggestion but, what Lynn wanted nothing more was to run into that Maze and search for them.
"Bloody he-" Newt paused and pinched the crown of his nose. He took a deep breath and said, "We can't. Okay? Don't say it again. It's against the rules, especially with the bloody doors about to close."
"But why?" Thomas pushed on, "Won't the Grievers get them if they get stuck out there? Shouldn't we do something?" Newt's head snapped towards him,
"Shut your hole, Greenie!" he shouted, "Not a bloody week you've been here! You think I wouldn't risk my life in a second to save those two?!" Lynn slipped a her hand into Newt's, eyes still locked on the doors, she could feel him grip her hand tightly in response. The last thing she needed was anyone fighting.
"You don't get it Tommy," She said softly, "Going out there at night is practically begging for death to come for you." A silence came over the crowd,
"Lynn and Newt won't say it, but I will." Chuck said from her right. "If they're not back, it means they're dead. Minho's to smart to get lost. Impossible. Dead." Newt's hand slipped from Lynn's and hung loosely by his side. A loud boom echoed through the air, the doors were starting to close. He Promised, Lynn thought, He Promised. They large walls began to close, something seemed to stir in the Maze. When all hope seemed lost, two forms appeared around the corner. Minho and Alby.
"Run Minho!" After Lynn shouted this, the crowd went into and uproar, shouting for them both to hurry up. Something seemed wrong, Lynn focused her eyes on Alby, he wasn't moving. Minho began to drag Alby towards the slowly closing door. "They got him!" Minho shouted. Alby was stung, but how? Time seemed to slow as they doors were coming closer together. Thomas and Lynn looked at each other, and nodded seeming to be thinking the same thing. Time sped up again as they both darted for the opening.
"Lynn no!" Newt shouted, lifting a hand to grab her hood but it slipped from his fingers. Thomas and Lynn slid in between the walls, which were closing faster than usual. Until, they squeezed through the walls, them making a loud thundering noise behind them. The only sound being the pair of greenies panting. They both looked on at Minho who was now sitting up against the stone wall with Alby unconscious on the ground a few feet away.
"Good job shuck-faces," said he, "You both just got yourselves killed."
Ohhhh cliff hanger, I've never done one of those before. What d'ya think? Both Lynn and Thomas risked their lives to save Minho and Alby. There will definitely be some Maze adventures in the next chapter! But Lynn has already spent a few nights in the Maze, remember? I can't wait to write the next chapter! So I have a little project for you lovely humans. You see, I haven't decided what I want Lynn's tattoo to say in the second book. That's where you guys come in, I want you to tell me in the comment what you think it should be. I am also free to suggestions to what I should do with the story! Until next time humans!
-Broadwaykid1832
