Anyways, I have just changed the last bit of the 3rd chap...sorry, just wanted to see reaction. Would you mind also giving the ages? Seeing I could post more appropriate stuff. No more bad stuff...
Anyways...Enjoy! oh and happy Olympics.
Mount Olympus.
Aphrodite stormed into the library. She saw the person that she wanted to see, Athena.
"Tell me Athena, what are you doing trying to break those two up!" Aphrodite Yelled,
"You of all must know what i'm doing." Athena replied calmly.
"Of course!...Argh, Why in Hades are you trying to! Your breaking your own daughters heart!.
Percy.
"Annabeth, its not what it seems." I yelled.
"Nor what it seems, then what is it!?" She yelled straight back
I didn't get a chance to reply, she just stormed off towards where my car parked. She realised she couldn't get back home, because I was the one that dropped her here.
"Give me the keys Percy!" Annabeth yelled, her voice had cracked, her face was teared up, and her eyes had gone red. I walked straight up to her and hugged her, she didn't hug back.
Short? Yes, I just wanted you guys to stay attended to this
Anyways, do you guys want me to put in the Gods, our not. I have two storylines planned and you people can tell me which one.
One involves questing, the other involves just normal college relationships with just a little of Athena and Aphrodite.
By telling you the above, you have gotten nothing, the story hasn't been ruined, cause I got a card under my sleeve.
Tell me!
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