Ok I wanted to do something big for the tenth chapter and I think I have, you be the judge.
I did struggle at part of this chapter, just letting you know, I wanted to do this perfectly and so I didn't write anything unless I was totally and completely sure of it.
Chapter 10
''guy's before I do what I'm about to do is there anything you can tell me about this person?'' asked Jaune.
''no I just know her name, don't know any details'' said Thunder.
''ok cool, lets do this'' said Jaune, looking the left side of the hall and then the right he sad 2293 coming ''besides this guy owes me for taking me to the Warden to enjoy experiments on me''
as 2293 walked past the bars of the cell Jaune whistled loudly ''what do you want Lawbreaker'' he sneered turning to him.
''I just wanna tell you something come hear'' Jaune said motioning him to come towards the bars which 2293 did ''come on closer'' to many it would seem obvious what was coming next… unfortunately for 2293, he was not very smart, so Jaune grabbed his collar and dragged him into the bars banging him of the Bars, he then grabbed 2293's arms and positioned them so he could break them if needed.
''ah what do you want Lawbreaker!'' cried 2293 panicked.
''information'' said Jaune ''about someone I've been hearing about, the Renegade''
''yeah what about her?'' asked 2293.
''your gonna tell me who this Renegade person is and in return I'll leave you with some teeth'' said Jaune raising his fist and punching a bar, said bar bent and showed just how serious Jaune was and how much damage he could do.
''ok, ok cool down alright I'll tell you'' said 2293 panicked as he saw Jaune was serious ''the Renegade is Neon City's version of you Lawbreaker, she showed up and started breaking the law left and right and started to preach that the people of the Satellite should be treated equally, only difference, aside gender, is you show your face no problem, she doesn't, she keeps her face concealed with this black mask that covers the lower half of her face''
''describe her now'' ordered Jaune.
''ok, ok, she's hot that's all I can say, she has a slender body, quite buxom if you catch my drift, the cloaths she wears or her 'Renegade suit' I guess, is skin tight so yeah, she's your age we think'' said 2293 panicking ''she's fair skinned, she has green eyes and pink hair and… look I've only seen pictures and not full body pictures that's the best description I can give''
''does she have a deck?'' asked Jaune.
''yeah she does'' said 2293 ''before you ask, she plays a deck nobody's seen before it's like your deck, nobody has seen anything like it''
''anything else I need to know?'' asked Jaune.
''well lets see… she's a skilled hacker we know that as she hacked many rich people accounts and transferred them all over to the satellite, she can fight damn well'' said 2293 ''she's also got pretty impressive stealth skills and disguise skills, oh and she's a turbo duelist and she apparently, she rides a Duel Runner''
''that all?'' asked Jaune.
''it's all I know I swear!'' cried 2293.
''I believe you'' said Jaune letting go of 2293 who proceeded to run off.
''fine everything out that you want to know Sonny?'' asked Uang.
''I don't think so, but I think I want to meet this Renegade'' said Jaune.
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meanwhile as Jaune sat in his cell, a party was going on, a party of the riches of the tops in Neon city, the party was celebrating the Lawbreakers capture, but as everyone enjoyed the party, the music, the food, the dance, nobody noticed as a young woman with pink hair slipped away, she was wearing her favorite black and pink party dress, with black heels, she wore makeup which wasn't really necessary but she still wore it, nobody noticed her picking up a gym bag that was at the door.
Taking an opposite turn to the exit, she saw a guard with his back facing her, she quickly took out a handkerchief and poured some chloroform into it, she then slowly crept up behind the guard and then swiftly grabbed him in a hold and held the handkerchief to his mouth and nose, quickly knocking him out, letting him go and hit the floor, she then got ready.
She quickly unzipped her party dress and letting it fall to the floor revealing she was wearing a skin tight body suit under it, she then put the dress in the gym bag and took out a pair of knee high boots and proceeded to put them on while putting the heels in the bag, she then pulled up a black piece of spandex like material which became a black mask over her lower face, she was the Renegade.
The Renegade then quickly started to go through the building knocking out guards left and right, as she made her way to the main room of the party building where she could do some real damage, as she came to the main rooms door she opened the door to see three guards inside, luckily she could do stealth rather easily and jumped up and compressed herself on the celling, two of the guards went to investigate only for Renegade to jump down behind them, she tazered one in the neck before knocking out the other with the handkerchief and chloroform.
''what the!'' cried the third guard but Renegade quickly pulled out a gun and shot a knockout dart into his shoulder knocking him out instantly, as Renegade walked to the computer.
''ok time to get to work'' she said sitting down and starting the hacking process ''lets see, oh good they took all finger prints, so I can use those to hack into the bank accounts and transfer millions to Satellite, now I don't know what this party's about I don't care for gossip, but eh worth it in the end, so lets see anything fun to do?''
just then alarms went off ''aww spoil my fun why don't you'' huffed Renegade as she ripped off the air vent and crawled out, she used the air vent to get to the lower level of the building where her Duel Runner was waiting.
Her Duel Runner was a hot pink and black, it was a newer model of a Duel Runner fitted with the newest engine and other parts, it was a slick triangular shape which zipped though so easily and quickly (it kinda looks like Aki's/Akiza's Duel Runner) she quickly got on, putting on her helmet that covered her whole head face included and started to drive, but security was already on her tail.
''you pull over'' said a security guard.
''oh a woman security guard'' said Renegade slowing down so the security guard could catch up ''so you have a name or a number?''
''my numbers all you need to know Renegade, that number is 2243'' said the security woman.
''well then how's this 2243 we duel you win I pullover, I win you leave me alone for the night deal?'' asked Renegade.
''fine Renegade it's a deal'' said 2243 ''I'll activate Speed World Cyber''
''ok whoever passes this corner goes first'' said Renegade.
They both sped towards the corner as fast as they could with Renegade just being way faster and got the first turn.
''Duel'' they both said.
''my move I draw'' said Renegade.
Speed Counters:
Renegade: 1
2243: 1
''hmm what to do what to do, so many moves so little time'' said Renegade.
''just make your move!'' snapped 2243.
''touchy, touchy'' Renegade chided ''well if your going to be like that I'll just make my move, I'll start by summoning my Sharp Shot Huntress''
(look I'm going to do another chapter to show all these monsters full stats for now it's just this)
Sharp shot Huntress:
Attack: 1800
Defense: 1600
A woman dressed in wizard like robes appeared holding a high tech sniper rifle, she had dark purple hair, and green eyes.
''after that I'll end the turn with a facedown your move'' said Renegade.
''alright then I draw'' said 2243.
Speed Counters:
Renegade: 2
2243: 2
''I'll start by activating the spell Hand Destruction so both of us send two cards in our hands to the graveyard, then we draw two more'' stated 2243.
Speed Counters:
Renegade: 2
2243: 1
both of them discarded cards and then drew ''next I'll summon Cyberdark Horn'' stated 2243.
A large mechanical monstrosity, with a dark edgy rusty deisgn, it looked like some kind of dark dragon with four large horns, it had a design that made it look like some kind of skeleton.
Cyberdark Horn
Level: 4
Type: Machine
Attack: 800
Defense: 800
''Cyberdark's Horns effect now activates and I equip a dragon type monster in the graveyard to it, I'll equip my Hunter Dragon to it'' stated 2243 as a dragon was then summoned forth only to be taken over by Cyberdark horn, causing its attack points to rise.
Cyberdark Horn: 800 + 1700 = 2500
''now with that I will attack with my Cyberdark Horn'' stated 2243.
The dark machine let out a roar before firing four blasts of black lighting.
''hmm too bad I already prepared for this, first I'll activate the ability of my Sheild Guard Huntress'' stated Renegade ''first I need to remove her from play and by doing so my monster is not destroyed and I take no damage''
a woman wearing blue robes and had white hair raised up her hands and formed a shield which blocked the black lightning.
''damn you'' growled 2243.
''but that's not all you see since I just removed a monster from the game I can now special summon this monster, a friend that I like to call Sword Slash Huntress'' stated Renegade.
A new monster appeared, another female monster who had black hair and gold eyes, she wore black robes and wielded two swords that had laser blading around the edged of the blade.
Sword Slash Huntress:
attack: 1900
defence: 900
''fine my turns over'' said 2243.
''alright then let me show you a turn, I draw'' said Renegade.
Speed Counters:
Renegade: 3
2243: 2
''but first things first, I'll activate my Sharp Shots ability, since there's a monster that's been removed from the game your dealt 500 points of damage'' stated Renegade.
Sharp Shot clicked her gun before firing a blue laser which hit 2243 and dealt damage.
2243: 4000 - 500 = 3500
''now I'll play the spell card Double Summon, then I'll use that to summon my Bell Call Huntress and my Transference Huntress'' stated Renegade summoning two more huntresses to her side of the field.
the first huntress was wearing robes that were clearly Japanese, they were pink in colour and she was holding a short stick of sorts that controlled two balls of energy that remembled bells that floated around her, she had short black hair that reached her neck.
the second huntress was a little girl holding many rings, she was wearing a black tutu and had orange hair that was done up into pig tails.
Bell Call Huntress:
attack: 1600
defense: 600
Transference Huntress:
attack: 0
defense: 0
''don't worry though I'm not done, by using Bell Call Huntresses ability I remove her from the game to summon two more huntresses, I'll summon another Bell Call and a Quick Quiver Huntress'' stated Renegade
Both of the bells rang and then in a burst of light Bell Call huntress disappeared and in her place appeared another Bell Call Huntress appeared with a new huntress, dressed in the same style as Bell Call this huntress instead wilded some kind of cybernetic bow.
Quick Quiver Huntress:
attack: 500
defense: 2500
''big deal none of them are strong enough'' said 2243.
''that's the thing of security strength, not strong enough, not strong enough, that's all I hear you all say, well they're not strong enough along but together there more than powerful enough'' stated Renegade ''besides my moves not done so shut up and let me finish now where was I? oh yes, using my other Bell Calls ability to remove her and then summon another Quiver and another Sharp Shot''
Another burst of light happened and Bell Caller disappeared leaving behind another Sharp Shot and Quick Quiver.
''and now with these monsters I can form a gateway to the future'' said Renegade and the Link Circuit appeared ''the conditions are met so now I'll use Sharp Shot Huntress, Sword Slash Huntress and Transference Huntress and set them as the Link Markers to Link Summon, Prime Huntress Pyrric!''
A new Huntress appeared, she had long red hair and green eyes, she was dressed in greek robes, but she also had a long cloak with a fur collar and she was wielding a large gold bow that had blue cyber lines covering it.
Prime Huntress Pyrric:
Attack: 2300
''that's it?'' asked 2243 who then began laughing ''maths not your thing is it?''
''actually it is especially since I calculated this just right'' stated Renegade ''now first thanks to my Transference Huntresses effect I can special summon one monster I used to Link Summon with her, so I'll bring back Sharp Shot, next I'll use Quick Quivers ability to attack you directly''
Quick Quiver pulled back her bow and an arrow made out of blue energy formed before being fired into 2243.
2243: 3500 - 500 = 3000
''and then Quick Quivers ability kicks in and she removes herself from the game and then I can summon back a monster that was previously removed from the game'' stated Renegade ''I'll call back Bell Call''
Quick Quiver was covered in a gold light before it burst off and revealed Bell Caller.
''so that's it that's your plan?'' asked 2243 ''just hit and run?''
''no the plan is to use Pyrric's effect, you see Pyrric's ability is when she's linked to a monster she gains 500 attack points also if the monster is removed from play then one of your monsters loses 500 attack points'' stated Renegade ''so let him have it''
Pyrric then held up her bow and it automatically fired a lightning bolt which shocked Cyberdark Horn causing it to roar in pain as it lost attack points.
Prime Huntress Pyrric: 2300 + 500 + 500 = 3300
Cyberdark Horn: 2500 - 500 = 2000
''so now my other Quick Quiver will attack you directly'' stated Renegade.
2243: 3000 - 500 = 2500
the process repeated and Bell Call reappeared and Pyrric electrocuted Horn again.
Cyberdark Horn: 2000 - 500 = 1500
''now Sharp Shot will attack your Cyberdark Horn'' ordered Renegade.
Sharp Shot took aim and fired hitting Cyberdark Horn directly, but Cyberdark Horn survived the attack.
''my Cyberdark Horns ability will survive by sacrificing Hunter Dragon'' stated 2243.
''but it now loses all its attack points'' stated Renegade ''and your life points don't survive''
Cyberdark Horn: 1500 - 1500 = 0
2243: 2500 - 200 = 2300
''but now this game ends because now Pyrric will finish this'' stated Renegade.
Pyrric held her bow up generating a blue energy bow string pulling it back, she formed a giant blue energy arrow which she fired, it hit Cyberdark Horn destroying it easily.
2243: 2300 - 3300 = 0
with that 2243 was forced to stop, the Renegade had won.
''damn it'' growled 2243 as Renegade stopped right in front of her ''what do you what?''
''just to say, sorry honey, but your not taking me in this time, ah well, gotta go'' said Renegade quickly driving off.
The next day the Renegade, out of costume strolled into her apartment, with a subtle sway of her hips, she often did this as Renegade and it was now a habit, ''hmm last night was fun, nice party, nice food and nice getaway'' she said laying down on her couch, she raised her legs up as she kicked her shoes off and then looked over to her coffee table and saw the newspaper.
''what's this?'' she asked ''Lawbreaker finally imprisoner? Hmm curious'' she went over to her wardrobe and took out her Renegade outfit ''the Renegade is curious''
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The next day, Jaune woke up drowsily ''oh good your awake'' said a familiar voice.
''oh hey 2293'' said Jaune ''you going to meter maid duty today or just hear to brag about how I kicked your ass?''
''well its your day of luck Lawbreaker, your being transferred'' sneered 2293.
Ok maybe I exadurated, maybe not everything has changed, but yeah the Renegade is now hear, she is a character that will play an important role, before you ask, if anyone can guess who the Renegade is I will PM you and congratulate you, probably no one will guess one thing that depresses me about this fic is only one person comments to it, I've had two pm's for it but only one persons reviewed it… it's kinda sad for me, but anyways yeah Renegade hope you like her cause she is important in this.
Renegades deck is getting its own chapter to explain what cards are in it and how the OC cards work.
Please also note I might be revisiting Cyberdark later to do them how I would do them.