Calling that mass of revolting sludge of yours a story is like calling a bucket of putrid, stinking, maggot-infested garbage a steak dinner. Like rotting garbage, there's occasionally some recognizable trace of what it was supposed to be, which only makes the rest of that disgusting sack of offal posing as fanfic just so much worse. Then you have the utter gall to beg people to praise your efforts, as though you actually made some effort instead of just scribbling down your brain drool and contaminating the Net with it. Nobody with the intelligence of a body louse would pretend that was a story. In fact, I owe your lice an apology for saying that. I've had toenail fungus that was smarter than you. I've read better stories in random combinations of words made from old bills that have gone through the paper shredder. You would have to get smarter to become a drooling idiot. Whoever deluded you into believing you could write ought to be flogged. Not only do you expose unsuspecting readers to the foul mess of slaughterhouse waste you call a story, but you cry like the whiny little baby you are when people don't tell you it's the best story ever... I bet you're crying right now. You're an infected boil on the buttocks of fandom. Your momma curses herself daily for ever letting a stupid brat like you be born.
Go to Wattpad bitch!
This was said to me by Doom Marine 54 not only rude but said the same thing on my other stories. It's funny because he said I should be crying when I read his message but I won't. I want to keep doing what I love and that's writing. It's funny cause he took so much time out of there life just to criticize me. Why? because they probably don't love themselves so they want to make people feel bad about themselves but I don't care what he says. He's on a high horse and he needs to hop the fuck down. Yes, if you go to my previous stories they were utter trash but at least I tried to write an actually story unlike you. The only thing you posted on here was about a story being stolen. Yes it good of you to do that. But what story could you write? I am on here trying to get better at my writing and being descriptive about what I write but your on here being a little pussy who can't do anything except be mean to people. I already know I'm bigger than you so hop the fuck outta my life. I asked for constructive criticism not rude thoughts of some jerk on a high-horse. You can't even write stories but your trying to tell me I'm that bad. That's funny. Try writing a story and see how that works out for you. I hope it works great. Maybe people wouldn't have reported you if you hadn't been so rude then again that's all you know how to do. Also why are you so concerned about my stories? If you don't like them don't read them, it's as simple as that or do you want to try to be extra and cause problems.
Also I prefer Thot not bitch, thanks