Thanks everyone for reviewing. I appreciate all of the ideas and complements.
I'm going to go with the angst version because that's what seems to be what everyone wants.

I did fix a bunch of stuff on the first chapter so it's probably easier to read.

I also lied to you guys. I said that this was going to be a quick two shot, but I feel like I can't end it in only two chapters. It will probably end up being three to four chapters. Hope you enjoy.