Hi everyone! ^^ I decided to give up on getting another person to review; I had so many ideas about my story so I couldn't wait any longer! I really love to read other peoples reviews, it is fun to see what you think about my story. If you hate or love it (or both) you really should review to make the author happy!
Heng Shi: -Twitch- Why did you have to continue with this story. I was having some peace this past month.
Hey! –Pouting- I like this story, and so do you. And if I would not have continued, you would not exist any more.
Heng Shi: -Twitch twitch- How the hell do I like this story? You let me save an asshole and a brat, and also let myself to show happiness towards a stupid woman like Gun-Gun. That is something I am not happy about.
No you are happy with my story! ^^ I know you like Gun-Gun since she gave you second life, and because she gave you an awesome room and because she is that kind of person that you like the moment you see her. And you know that it is interesting for you to care about someone, even though it is a guy.
Heng Shi: -Twitch twitch twitch- Don't you dare make save those bastards again. And don't you dare tell my secrets!
Heng Shi, my friend. Consider it already done, I have already told some of your secrets in the story. ^^
Heng Shi: -Cold evil glare- Alright little girl, time for torture! –Clenches his fists with his awesome game gloves so that spikes comes out from the knuckle holes-
Eek! How the hell can you have your game gloves in reality, it's not fair!
Heng Shi: -Grin- I don't know but I like it.
Oh, and AnimeVamp1997 asked if the spikes are like wolverines claws, they are not. –holds Heg Shis' clenched fist towards the screen and point at the spikes- As you can see, there are four holes one on each knuckle. And they are about 0,79 in tall, so they are nothing like his claws.
Heg Shi: -throws a punch at me as he growls- Stop touching me.
-Gets hit on my shoulder and slams into the wall- Ouch, that hurt! Alright, this is the first time I have to write a disclaimer! I do not own Prince, Lolidragon or Meatbun; I only own Sabre and Garel. Time to start the story, enjoy! ^^
On my way to the pet store I still try to calm down my anger. I try to think about all the good sides out of this event with the celestial and the demon brat. 1: I got to kill a high level monster. 2: I leveled up and got a new skill. 3: I am a magic swordsman. 4: I got a pet (that is yet to hatch) 5: I got a pair of gloves 6: I care about… How the hell can number 6 be good?
I growl as the memories comes flooding back to me, I hate it. I grip my egg, which I hold under my right arm, tighter. This is like a never ending pit of hatred that will take a long time to crawl out from, but I can't let it show on my face. I search in my mind, trying to find something to calm myself down. If I think of elder Gim, I think back on how he used me and deceived me. If I think back to the assassin academy, I think back on when I became the elders apprentice which leads to Gim again. He seems to haunt me; I thought I erased him from my mind when I escaped 3 days ago.
I try to think of a happy memory, which is not related to the elders or Gim. I learned to ignore all the stares from all the players a while ago; I am still drenched in blood after all. I close my eyes; it is still a long way to the pet store, and dig deeper into my memory. I think back to my parents, those are happy memories. My father Ren and my mother Jilie, the only persons that I truly loved. They have been dead a long time but my memories of them are like it happened yesterday. When my father took me for the first time to his research lab, when my mother thought me to write and speak different languages, when we went camping up in the mountains for a week. At that time, I was naïve and let my emotions flow like water. Now I am colder on the inside, but can easily put on a fake emotion for the people around me. A smile creeps on my face as I remember my mother playing her ocarina.
The melody flows within my mind and drives away the anger from my being for the moment. It is the song that my mother made herself for my fathers' birthday, I was only 5 years old at that time, but I can still hear the melody clear. I have learned to play this song myself; I found my mothers notes in her bedroom. At first it was hard, but after a while I got the hang of it. I open my eyes again, still playing the melody in my mind to keep my calm, and walked into the pet store.
As I open the door I hear a lady say "Will the owner of the pet please place a drop of blood on it, thus taking ownership." I look over to the counter. A white haired boy in newbie clothing and a girl with her brown hair in a "half ponytail" (guess who they are) are standing at the counter with their back towards me. They look down at something, probably their new pet. "No matter how I look at it, it looks like… a bun…" Says the brown haired girl. A bun? What kind of pet is that? The boy points at the pet and say "No, if you look carefully, its shape and size both speak of a hidden goodness… Its skin is smooth and soft, and it's emitting an aroma that makes one drool." The boy looks over to the girl. "I don't think it's just a bun, but a… Meat bun!"
By the time he finishes his sentence I am next to them and look at the weird pet. It is a meat bun. The girl smacks her arm against the boys' throat and screams. "You complete moron!" I snort in amusement and get the attention of the girl, since the boy is lying half dead on the ground. She stares at me with a deep blush as I point to the bun and say. "You must be joking, is that thing really a pet? Are you sure it hatched from an egg?" The girl could only nod slowly as she keeps staring at me. The boy gets up and looks towards me and start to blush as well. I raise an eyebrow towards him. Is that guy gay or what?
I decide to let it go and look over to the NPC and place my egg on the counter, she blushes too. "Hatch this" I commanded simply. The brown haired girl turned her gaze towards the egg with her eyes widened. "How did you get your hand on that?" She asks me with awe as she strokes a finger on the purple flamed shell. I just shrugged. "Got it from a monster, how else." The girl looks over to me, again at the egg and then at me. I seriously want to give the girl a deep cut right now, but I will only still my blood lust on the monsters, that is something I decided when I started the game. At least, in the beginning. And right now i don't feel like killing this woman.
I look over to the NPC again and say in a colder tone. "Hatch my egg, or I will become angry again. And you don't want to see me angry." The NPC wince at my cold tone nods and takes the egg to the back of the "store". "How did you manage to get that egg? It is only 0,001% chance to get it from a boss, and even if you killed a high level boss it would still be 0.009% chance to get it." The girl says to me in a serious tone. I look over to gaze into her eyes, determent to get an answer from me.
This girl knows about this egg and how rare it is, I didn't even know it was rare up until now. That must mean she is a hidden GM that I read about in the manual. I let an evil smirk show upon my lips as I say to her in an evil tone. "Well, I killed the purple phoenix a few minutes ago; the egg came from that monster. But as for the rareness, I really don't know. Maybe it was my helmet that gave me this egg, or maybe it was just destiny." I showed her my glove with the white dragon on. The girl gasped in realisation while the boy, that has watched us during our conversation, looks between me and the girl in confusion.
The NPC comes back with a baby dragon in her hands. The dragon glares daggers at the NPC as she step away a bit from the dragon from fright. The dragon has pure white skin with green "spikes" going down along its back, becoming smaller and smaller further down and stops by the sharp tail. It has sharp teeth and claws and glares now at me with its pure red eyes. Its chest has a light yellow color and it has two green horns on the top of its head that is shaped like a S. Its two green wings is folded behind its back, it breathes out some red flames out of its nose and turns to look at the other two people in the store. It glares later at the meat bun that stands next to it, the meat but gets tears in its eyes. I grin evilly as I study my new dragon.
The other white haired boy is the firs one to talk. "Wow, that dragon look so cool." Immediately the dragon turns to the boy to glare at him instead. The NPC speaks now with a little more nervous voice. "W-will the owner of the pet please place a drop of b-blood on it, thus taking ownership." I snorted "You don't have to tell me that." I clenched my right hand, making the spikes come out from the gloves. I was granted by 3 surprising gazes upon me. I ignored them and press a finger upon one of the spikes; it didn't take long until it started to bleed. I reached out my bloody finger towards the dragon, it stares at me. I gave it a grin in return. "You will be named Garel, is that ok?" Even though I don't like animals that much, a dragon is something else. I want the dragon itself to decide to be my pet; they are smart creatures after all. And i think he too realises that we make a good team.
The dragon looks over to my finger and then back to me, and then it strokes its head against my bloody finger. I stroke him back before turning around saying. "Let's go then, Garel. I don't want to have blood on myself any longer." I begin to walk away as I hear the flapping of wings, soon after I feel a heavy weight on my shoulder. "Wait." The girls' voice stops me by the door and I turn around my head to glanze at her and her companion, they have both the look of admiration and confusion in their eyes. I turn towards them fully and Garel shoots out some more red flames from his nose in irritation, I feel the same way as my dragon.
"What now?" I ask bluntly. She bits her lip nervously before speaking. "The way that dragon treats you, how did you manage to gain so much trust in just a few seconds? It is supposed to be hard to control since it is so reckless and aggressive." I give her a devilish grin and pet my dragon as confirmation on my words. "We are alike, that's why." The girl shuddered in fear; Garel is probably making the same expression as I am doing right now. Even though it is a baby dragon, it seems like it can be scary judging by the feared looks on him.
The boy speaks to me politely, but with a hint of fear as well. "My name is prince, and this is Lolidragon. What's your name?" I turn towards the door again and give them a second glance as I hissed. "Sabre" before I walk out from the store with Garel still on my shoulder. I and Garel looked at each other with amusement in our eyes, we really are alike. We really enjoyed scaring those two (or four if you count in meat bun and the NPC) this is going to be a lot more exciting from here on out. I walk into an ally and Garel jumps off my shoulder when I log off. I have to find a nice university before Christmas begins.
Sooo, what do you think? Like it? Hate it? Either way, review!
Heng Shi: I actually like this chapter; I really have a great dragon. –Grin-
Yay! I knew you like this story! And you said you didn't want me to continue, but now you have changed your mind right? ^^
Heng Shi: -Twitch- You are annoying…
Oh yea I am~! And I can be more annoying if you want me to! ^^
Heng Shi: No
Anyway about Heng Shis' secrets, I decided to tell them a little bit further into the story. This chapter is needed and I had to write it during the time he plays for real for the first day since Prince gets meatbun during her first day. I have big plans for Prince and odd squad later! ^^
Heng shi: Yea, only Prince started to play in summer, it is now winter...
But... you still took a long time with the phoenix... So it could match up with the original story...
Heng Shi: It only took me one day. Change the story.
No! I can't do that! :O
Heng Shi: Yea, yea. Just promise me to let me kill something in the next chapter. –Blood lust grin-
Wow~ sure, sure just hold on for a while longer before you kill someone or something. I need ideas about what he will do during Christmas. Please help me… I don't know what to write… T_T Anyway, see you sometime. But I have no idea when! ^^