(You remember those 3 chapters? Those were the "betas" of my story and my character has been changed.)

It was a cool morning, perfect for fishing, as my granddad said. I was sitting on a rock, waiting for my brother, Ken, to meet me at Swampy Hills.

Now Swampy Hills has a special history before this war thing started. It was perfect for picnics and swimming, maybe even picnics WHILE swimming, but after the Red Fang started this war, Swampy Hills served more as a cemetery, since most people who go there never even return. I heard feet padding the smooth rocks coming towards me, it was Ken of course.

My brother Ken, he was adopted, since he has feathers instead of scales, but even with his sharp beak he's still a geek. Hah, that kinda rhymed.

"You ready to find out this mystery? and THIS ANNOYING buzzing?"

"Sure as I'll -wheezing, multiple breaths- EVER BE -wheezing- . MY brother, he had problems as a child, such as being addicted to study bugs, and other organisms, and he is never in shape, hence why I call him a geek..

"Alright then" I hopped off my rock, and walked into the forest, my brother following me like I am the God of Protection. We trailed into the damp, dark forests of Swampy Hills until we found a shack. This was some kind of homeless man's shack, as it had rotten wood, nails bent and rusted. This shack probably was more dangerous than the whole forest itself it seems.

Yet this shack was off, it had a symbol on it's side... It appears to be a snake with a fang on it... and it's red... could this be the group I've been hearing about?

The "Red Fang"?

This shack now seems more mysterious to me, And I'm DYING to know whats inside!

As I opened the shack door, it made the most cliche creaky door sound I've ever heard. WHAT I SAW WAS... Nothing. What? How come there is a group so notorious that they have a 1,000,000$ Bounty on their leader?! It doesn't matter because I can hear the buzzing louder inside.

"John, are you sure you are supposed to be in there, because it p-prett-"

"Shut up and help me move this barrel" I snapped at him. Our brotherly relationship isn't that great, I'm always the dominant one and he just keeps getting yelled by me, I don't know why. But I always seem to take pity on him, yet I know he'll be stronger one day.

He waddles over to me, looking for any bugs near this infested shack, and picks up the barrel with me. As we through it behind the shakc, I headed over the spot where the barrel was, and there was a keypad there. Strange. So maybe this shack isn't abandoned after all! But this is a dead end for me, since I do not know the code.

"Ken, come take a look at this" Ken scuttled over to my side, staring intently at the keypad.

"This keypad has advanced technology, far from my knowledge of understanding."

Damn. Then we can't get in, but I've thought about the Red Fang history... then I started to punch in the year Red Fang started the rebellion.

The keypad clicked and both of us wobbled as the floor beneath us started to descend into the earth.

"Where are we going!?" Ken screamed. "I don't know but be quiet, who knows whats down here?!"

As the elevator screeched to a halt in a space age hallway, we stepped onto the cool steel floor.

"Woooooww..." my brother sayed in awe. I too should be in awe, because this facility was huge, machines were moving and there were tanks, missles, and soldiers everywhere.

I should've payed attention. Ken screamed and I was yanked by the arm and dragged me away from ken, who was flailing away from the other soldier. Who knows where I'm being transported to now. All I can do is hope things don't get worse.