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Please imagine Draven's laughter yourself
The self-proclaimed glorious executioner strides through the streets of Noxus, throwing his spinning axes at every living creature he sees. ( Except humans) Laughing out loud as the creatures splatter into blood. As he walks though the halls and homes disturbing almost everyone with his laughter. He started to hear other laughter as he walk though a shop, he turns toward the source of it, only to see a entrance with lighting of all kinds, with a big board that says Rift Casino. He suddenly came up with a thought. What's a casino? He thought to himself.
He started laughing hysterically as he walks into a casino. He saw all kinds of mysterious machines that he never touched before. He glides forward on the smooth red tiles observing every detail of the mansion. Then, he saw a very big room crowded with people that says Normal Match up. He walks forward and saw a guy in black suit, and red tie. "Do you wish to place a bet?" He spoke with a clumsy sound as if he's been asking the same question for the whole day.
Draven, who doesn't have any idea what's going on, said "Yeah"
The man in suit questioned, "The red team I assume? Since Noxus is fighting against Demacia in the red team..."
Draven simply replied, "Yeah"
"That will be 1000 G, sir" the man said, in a bored tone.
"I don't think I..." Draven's words were cut off by a feminine voice behind him.
"I'll pay for him" a certain red haired girl with a tight black leather jacket spoke out.
She stepped before Draven and handed the waiter 2000 G, "I'll vote for the red team too"
"Thank you for voting, if you win your bet, the reward will be sent to you by your address." The waiter muttered in a low voice and began slowly walking away.
Kat quickly pulled Draven into a bar in the casino, they both sat down as Kat ordered the most popular alcoholic drink. After a long awkward silence, Kat spoke up, "Sooo, why did you come in here?" She asked in a playful tone.
That took Draven a while, "I dunno, maybe because I'm Draaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaven!" Draven started to laugh hysterically again.
Kat sat there for a while as the drink came. Starring at him and at the same time noticing his muscular chest. 'Maybe I could stay with him tonight?' She thought. She sipped her drink as she realized that Draven already drank 6 bottles of alcohol. He looked drunken and sleepy.
Kat swing his arms across her shoulders, he dripped saliva down her shirt and was starring at her cleavage. She smirked as she dragged Draven across the silent night on the way to her house. "We're home!" Kat shouted out, which snapped him out of his trance.
She opened the door to a dark room and lay Draven down on the sofa. She starred and Draven again, inpecting every inch of his muscles and downwards. She wanted him, she wanted to explore his body, she hadn't had the feeling of a man embracing her for a while. And now, she wanted to use him to satisfy her desires for months.
Draven still drunken and sleepy, couldn't make out where he is, he only knew that he is lying down in a dark room. Suddenly, memories started flooding back into his brain. He remembered he got to the bar with Kat, drank a lot, and got dragged back into...
"Your finally awake!" Kat exclaimed, causing Draven to jump.
"Where am I..." Draven began.
Kat shumpo'd onto Draven, and putting her index finger on his lips, "Shhhhh..." she began to embrace him, forcing her tongue into his mouth and assaulted his tongue. Their tongue thrashing and fighting back and forth, not letting each other breathe. Draven stopped, he started to think why he was doing this.
"What's wrong?" Kat asked, pulled away from him and catching her breath.
SORRY 4 EVERYTHING, I HAD NO IDEA SOMETHING REALLY BAD HAPPENED TO ME, I WILL CONTINUE THIS NEXT CHAPTER