Title: The month that kept getting worse
Disclaimer: I do not own CSI:NY or the characters I'm just borrowing them for a while I will give them back. Maybe
Summary: The characters are a little OOC. Mac and Stella have been dating for the last year or so. Lucy is about 5 years old at the start. A month (ish) following the life of Stella Bonasera. There will be self-harm, eating disorders and suicide attempt hence the high rating of M.
Pairings: Stella/Mac, /Don/Jess, Danny/Lindsey
Authors note: this is the first piece of fan fiction that I have ever written so any reviews are greatly appreciated, I am also dyslexic so I apologise for any spelling or grammar errors. I'm so sorry that this took so long to post it has just been a very difficult few weeks for me. Thank you tiCocoChanelle for reviewing. Keep them coming criticism and prise welcome.
In response to the review from a non-member. I am sad to say that I am not JK Rowling or another famous writer as previously stated this is the first fan fic I have wrote. I am only using the characters as a base line to build on, as I am writing about make believe people who we have seen less than 150 hours of and only in very specific locations, I think I am entitled to my own creative opinion on how I can build on the base line and the character don't change in the story I simply mean they are a little different then how they are perceived on the TV episodes. As this is only the fourth chapter and I am only planning on bringing the self-harm etc. in latter on there has been no mention of it so far so I don't understand how u can comment on whether I am representing in believably or not when you haven't read any of the chapters about those issues yet. However I will take your criticism of my writing style on board and I am grateful for your opinion and tiCocoChanelle's and lolitathegoddessorca860's.
Well here is chapter 4 enjoy my lovely's.
Xoxoxoxoxo
Mac woke up at 8am; Stella was still yet to fall asleep. She had been sat on the patio hugging her knees and crying since Mac had gone to bed at 12:15. Mac came looking for her.
Mac: 'Stella?' Stella turned and looked up at him.
Stella: 'It's all my fault' Mac sat next to her, looked into her saddened green eyes and wrapped his arms around her.
Mac: 'Shhhhh no it wasn't'
Stella: 'If I can't look after Lucy for less than 5 minutes how am I supposed to look after him?' she motioned to her stomach. Mac just held her tighter and she cried into his chest.
Mac: 'Don't worry you will be a great mother ok Stell? Trust me' Stella kept crying and mac rocked her. She quickly got up and ran into the bathroom and throw herself at the toilet mac followed her in and rubbed her back, when she was finished he gave her a glass of water. There was a knock at dons connecting door, mac went to go and let them in.
Don: 'Hey Mac we are going down for breakfast with Danny and Lindsey do you want us to save you both a seat?'
Mac: 'Ok, please Don me and Stella will get ready then meet you down there'
Don: 'How is Stella?'
Mac: 'struggling, she thinks that it is all her fault and she thinks she is going to be a really bad mum'
Don: 'That's tough Mac'
Mac: 'I know, anyway we will be down soon' Don left and mac closed and locked the door. Stella walked out of the bathroom.
Stella: 'Who was that?'
Mac: 'Don, they are all going down to breakfast and then going looking again. He is going to save us a seat so let's get ready' Stella nodded and walked over to her wardrobe she took out some shorts, a grey cami top, a thin cardigan and her flip plop. She got changed facing away from Mac.
Xoxoxoxoxo
It was now 10am the boys had gone with the police to follow a lead and the girls were at the hotel in case he brought her back. The girls were walking past their rooms; there was no one outside and no cameras. Stella was walking at the back looking at her phone suddenly a hand wrapped around her mouth and a gun was pressed against her chin she dropped her phone and screamed, it was muffled but loud enough for the others to hear they turned and were greeted with men pointing guns at their heads.
Thomas (the man in charge): 'If you want to see your daughter again you will put all of your guns and phones down on the floor now and not make a noise.' The girls did as they were told. 'Get them in the van and do it quickly' the two other men did as they were told while Thomas went into Stella's hotel room. The women were thrown into the back of the van with their hands taped together; their mouths taped shut and knocked unconscious. Thomas came back outside and the men got into the front. They drove to an abandoned building.
Xoxoxoxoxo
Authors note: So that's chapter 4, sorry it's took so long, I will try and get the next one up quicker. Please follow, favourite and keep reading the next chapter will be up soon. Save the hero xxx