sorry I didn't realize that the new program I have on my windows 8 wont lent me make changes to what I already wrote without typing back a whole paragraph so spelling errors are here cause I was going to proof read so yeah next chapter will be a lot better with spelling cause I will be checking as I go

"The right in passage is the willingness to sacrifice something or someone important to you than and only then will you have the right in passage into white gates."

that is what my mother has always told me when I lost my way!

I pull up into the driveway switching the black and white 2005 cobalt off, and pushing back my black/brownish hair. I look into the review mirror at my sharp red-brown eyes and my sharp tilted eyebrows. I lean back on the car seat sighing.

the restaurant was extremely busy, because of the spring dance that happened in springsport highschool. where I attend as a senior

I think over my day, it started off with a set of twins screaming their heads off. to make it worse when the dance was over students came with their dates and cause trouble, while ask stupid questions about the menu like, asking how many calories are in the food on the menu. a women with auburn hair asking how many calories were in the water we serve!

I stepped out of the car, the chilled wind blowing making my long hair wisps out of my face like feathers in the wind. Looking up at the full moon, black clouds have wound their way around the moon making it look like its wearing a scarf. I smile and close my eyes, relaxing in the cool night air.

"I love nights like this." I sigh turning my head away from the moon as the rustle of the leaves being blown by the wind and distant calls of an owl echo's through the night's wind.

walking up the stone steps and unlocking the cold white door, stepping inside. I lay my coat on the gray recliner. the clanking of my heels on the hard wood floor reverberated through out the dark house. while I flick on the kitchen light, scanning the fridge pulling out some cold chicken and hot sauce. I grab a fork sitting on the stool next to a fire place, while setting the food on the counter.

scarfing down the cold food in a matter of a minute its gone, I yawn lifting up my arm and giving my arm pit a sniff."ugh.. I need a shower!" taking my uniform off while I switch the shower on, putting my hand in the jet stream of water"hmm still cold..oh well." stepping in while leaning my head on the wall.I let the now luke warm water run down my back, smoothing and unwinding the muscle under my skin.

"I missed my day at the gym..." I yawn letting my mind drift. "hmm... tomorrow is my day off." I half whisper to myself picking up the shampoo and lathering it though out my hair, while I scrub the grime off my cream-colored skin. switching off the water and wrapping in a towel. I switching off the bathroom light as cold air clashes with the hot steam from the bathroom, making a shiver rake through my spine.

I sigh while walking quickly in the dark shadowy hall, feeling the cold wall to find the door of my room. opening the door and flicking on the light, the neon green walls and white bed greets me. sighing I flip back off the light and jump into the hard bed letting my mind wander.

I look out the window at the moon through the white see-through curtains. setting my dreams take me. "smoke...?" that's all that could be seen through the musky taste burning my wind pipe, I quickly lose my breath clutching my neck."escape! I need to escape!" I try to run. vines wrapped around my arms and legs restricting my movement causing my bones to pop and pain to flare! but not enough to break the bone.

the sound of water splashing and crashing in the distance catches my attention. the sound gets closer and closer until its reverting through out the air like a thousands of drums playing at the same time.

shining water started to pool around my feet and rise slowly, I couldn't scream, I tried but nothing comes out at all. all I could hear was the rapid water, as it finally covers my head.

air! I needed air! I gasp swallowing water into my lungs, this was it, I am going to die, it's all over. until a light shines above me. I reach out to the light, but gasp again as a misty hand grabs mine and pulls me up into the light.

I awake with a jolt and as a response I flail out of bed, and face plant onto the hard wood floor. "owwwwwwwwwww! that hurrttttt..." I rub my face while I turn on my phone, playing porcelain and the tramps. while sliding on a black tank top and black skinny jeans with sneaker heel boots on. also, black and white.

"what will I do today?" saying out loud to myself, pulling my dark brown silk like hair into a neon green hair tie. my thoughts are interrupted by my tummy growling at me. picking up my cellphone, I call sakuras sushi ordering for delivery. I check my phone its 6 at night. 'well, I did get home at 1am! so, I guess I did sleep in but, what should I do?' I sit for a few minutes.

"ZELDA!" i scream out-loud thundering through-out the house to get my old gamecube along with my copy of Ocarina of Time cartridge. running into the living room and flopping down in front of a couch.

I plug it into the flat screen tv, the dark screen flashes to life with the gamecube logo. I pop the cartridge in the slot while pressing start on the controller. the screen flashes and the starter screen music rings through the speaker, the screen shows link on epona riding through hyrule field. I press the start button, "hmmm... I still have my last save from when I was 16! ...niiiiiiccccee!" the save point is at the fire temple or heading to the fire temple, from the save already having the forest medallion.

I click start but something is wrong! the game screen goes black and then goes back to normal. adult link is standing at the tree outside, the village that started with a 'k'

".hmmmm.. I think it was kakariko village? if I remember correctly..." the screens starts to buzz and static "most be something wrong with the cartridge."

I reach for it *RRRRRIIIIINNNGGGG* the door bell breaks me out of my trance, I get the door and pay for the sushi.

I ordered. while closing the door, sitting down to eat. my eyes flicking back and forth from the sushi to the cartridge the entire time, until the sushi is gone.

I touch the cartridge "OW! damn thing cut me!" holding my bleeding finger the blood drips onto the cartridge making it spark. I scream out trying to get the cartridge out, it wont budge! I strain my muscles of my forearms and back but It doesn't move.

the buzz on the screen gets louder and louder, making my ears hurt. my eyes lock onto the screen. the screen is in first person now, it's looking at the moon that slowly rising above the landscape. the light pieces through the screen, it shines into my face the words vibrate through my ears. "The right in passage is the willingness to sacrifice something or someone important to you!" its a women's voice, like silk.

I gasp the screen changes again! it changes to the broken bridge, but it wasnt right it looked so realistic the screen flashes again. I let go of the cartridge and back away vines are slithering out of the tv! " HELP ME!...PLEASE!" backing up, but falling over the small table and falling onto my back with a thud.

the vines wrapping around my arms pulling me forward. i pull back against the vine. the screen now black and cloudy, but ripples just like water. I fighting even harder my hands enter the screen

"NO! LET ME GO PLEASE!" I scream and cry out adrenaline in my system. my arms slowly gets sucked into the water-like screen. its freezing cold, I pull even harder. my nose touches the screen closing my eyes. I let go letting myself be taken away by the vines.

...blackness follows nothing that's all I could think to describe this. what is going to happen to me now? will I be saved? will anyone miss me? I close my eyes. I cant breath!...a light flashes above me reaching out my hand. my eyes widen a large feminine hand grabs my body and pulls me out of the darkness, and into the silver light. I looking down the moon is above me but... my face pales. the ground isnt wind whips past my face.

I can see the ground below me coming closer quickly, closing my eyes and bracing for impact...

-lol i cliffed hanger you i would love some constructive criticism just what i could do better the next chapter will be in as soon as i can type it hope you like the first chapter this is the first time i tried this