To the Coward that reviewed as a guest. You can't put your name so I can address your review personally so I have to do it here.
I forgot the question mark at the end. Kill me. The Hey Rach was not a question. Neither was the yeah Finn. I usually do correct my own work.
And I don't critique question marks. I critique word that sound the same but are not such as their and there or through and Throw. They're and their. See. But I also put my name so people can respond to my reviews and I'm not a coward. I can admit my mistakes.
I try to be respectful of my reviews. I will always attach my name so the writer can call me out on my bullshit or thank you for the constructive criticism I always try to give.
I would usually let your anonymous bull shit go, but I'm tired of it. I'm tired of people like you who won't leave a name and say shit about stuff that doesn't matter. Too many writers have stopped writing because of bullies like you who don't even care to name themselves. Just like the cowards they are.
I write for myself and share it so others may enjoy it. If you don't like it that's one thing but leave me your name if you want to have a real back and forth dialogue.
I always approve any review, because as a writer I can only get better if I know what I did wrong and what I did right. So you will see your nasty comment on the review page. I'm not afraid of bad reviews or critiques far from it. I am sick to death of the cowardice that comes with an anonymous review.
Grow some balls and tell me your name
Kelly
6/10/2017- I have updated this story. I made a few minor adjustments and in doing so I realized that "Hey Rach." Is actually a question so I fixed it. I still stand by this authors note. You want to criticize, bully or be down right hateful, so be it. Just leave your name and a way to contact you so I can find out how to be a better writer.
thanks again Kelly