Lets get on with this shall we, now my favorite 2 reviews from Chapter 5:
hellhound-d.o.w-Thanks for the review and I appreciate the critiques, it helps quite a bit. As you stated and I believe one or more has before you I know I made a the weeks and months mistake. I will say I have started using a thesaurus website to expand my word usage as well as my sentence and paragraph structure. I will say that sometimes I will miss words, I blame the Spell Check on the site for that though since it's VERY accurate yet still screws up a word or two. Also I have started using the DocX program to have my friend yurei king Beta for me so I can catch and fix more of my mistakes. All in all thanks again and I hope to see another review for this chapter as well. Also your Ronin Warriors reference has given me some ideas so here's hoping then work. This comment also goes out to you as well Hyrulian Hero Akai spellcheck only can help so much and not using the Beta system with another author will hurt a fic, that's why I'm taking this more seriously and using more resources to perfect this.
Black Hearted Ninja-Domo Arigato for the kind words, and I appreciate those that find my use of another interest of mine being employed here. Also don't be to hard on yourself, I've read from this site since 2006. I didn't start reviewing as a Guest until late in 2012, and didn't create and account till December of 2012. Even then I didn't start writing a this fic till constant pushing from my sister and another author I assisted here. Everyone has their own pace, it might help if you try to set guidelines for yourself like I did. I promised to post a chapter once a month and make sure all my fics have at least 5k words of story. Just think on it. Finally as for Tayuya that will have to wait up till the end of Chapter 9 or the Invasion. Since my poll will close as of the Invasions end, so until that time Tayuya is up in the air. Though I'm probably gonna let her live and have some use if she doesn't end up with Naruto. Never liked killing off Female anime characters too much, unless they are very terrible character-wise(bland and overexposed with nothing interesting) or disgusting women (rapist, mass-murder, fangirl) you know that kind of stuff. Anyways thanks for the review I hope to hear more from you in the coming future.
Also to SV, since you don't have an account I will say to you now, that while Hinata did get captured by those Iwa-Nin early on (this being the Golden Bug Filler Arc). When the chips where down at the end Hinata not only destroyed a large portion (if not all) of their bees but also temporarily stunned the giant bee. And at that point in time I'd like to see Sakura do any better. The only time Sakura showed super strength before the timeskip was when she punched Naruto. Though I appreciate you at least accepting my wrestling references, I plan to use TNA too since AJ Styles and Austin Aries are awesome in my eyes.
As a heads up that many of you have realised, yes I am a wrestling fan and have been for quite sometime. Hell one of my friends got to be on WWE's ECW program at some point, although he was squashed by both Ezekiel Jackson and Vladimir Kozlov...it was something. Now on with the fic!
*Portal opens from the Ghost Zone, a second later massive gouts of fire come spewing out of it before the burned forms of Arashi and Yurei dive outwards, the portal closes*
*Both young men are currently lying on the ground, Yurei face up while Arashi was facedown*
Arashi: *Pants, raises head* Where the HELL did all those skeleton armies come from! I thought you had that covered with the Fright Knight joining our side?!
Yurei: *Tries to catch his breath* Pariah has the ability to call them, he made Fright Knight his steward which allowed him to command them for a time, his betrayal led to loss of his powers. Now all he has is the power of fear and skeletons don't fear much.
Arashi: *Raises Eyebrow* Oh I guess that makes sense. Oh well. So what you gonna do with the ring and crown, I know you let Fright keep his sword but what are you gonna do with Pariah's little accessories. By the way is it me or do you think he read Lord of the Rings at some point. It seems at bit wierd his main power tool and accessory was a ring of all things?
Yurei: *Chuckles slightly and slips the ring onto his finger* I knew Pariah before he got arrogant, he was a bit of a fantasy nut and he asked Clockwork to bring all manner of books from the future so he could read them. He told me he got over it when the whole domination thing happened but all evidence points to the opposite. Anyway, I'll keep the ring but the crown will be sealed for later. Now enough about are little squabble with the usurper, let your fans read what they came here to read.
Arashi: Right, although before that you wanna give them your quick heads up to your own fic process?
Yurei: *sigh* Fine. For those who may not know my laptop has currently gone heels-up and proclaimed itself dead. I dug out my old one and I'm working to re-do all my work I started so please be patient. That enough?
Arashi: Yeah, though why do you say it like it's an annoyance to say? I mean it's better than getting a whole bunch of reviews ONLY saying stuff like, "Awesome, update soon" or "When's the next update?" Those are not reviews, their people in a way complaining and that kinda destroys the purpose of reviewing in the first place.
Yurei: Point, now get to the story before they tell YOU our conversations are too long.
Arashi: *scratches head* One already has actually. Though your right, time to get things underway. Though I'd go over your Hit List so we can strategize over who dies next by the end of this fic. As for those of you reading, Enjoy!
The Bijuu Armors
Chapter 6: Haku's Memories & Bells vs Weasel
-Konoha Arena Floor-
"Will Sabaku no Kankuro and Aburame Shino please come to the arena floor!" was the command of Genma as he called for the next round. Hearing his name called Shino made his way to the stairs to reach the ground below. Noticing the eyes on him Kankuro's thought though where on an entirely different matter, 'Man if I head down to fight now I'll possibly show to many of my moves as well as what Karasu is capable of. Best to give up and wait for the invasion.'
With his decision made Kankuro rose his hand to call for his forfeiture, only to hear behind him the words of a certain Uzumaki, "I sure hope you weren't going to quit. After all that big talk earlier I guess your just that, talk." Turning around to look at the former orange wearing ninja Kankuro sneered, before he could retort Naruto continued. "You were about to weren't you. And here I thought you Suna nins where tough and here to win or are you like that arrogant Oto nin that got beat by Shino, all talk and no action?"
"Oh yeah that real funny coming from a gaki that wore a bright orange jumpsuit and shouted at the top of his lungs that he was gonna win this and become a Chuunin." Kankuro shot back. His smirk dropped at seeing Naruto's own, "Heh that may be so but at least I ain't wearing a giant black catsuit and cover my face with my sister's make-up. True it's better to wear dark colors for our profession, but I'd think something more like what Mr. Raccoon and
the hot blonde on your team would be better options. Your wearing all black...and you live in the desert, where you dropped on your head as a child?"
Hearing the snickering around him from the other competitors Kankuro's mood darkened. He was about to give the blonde a few words before a voice was heard from down below, "Will Kankuro come to the arena floor for his match, unless he wishes to forfeit you have 1 minute!" was the yell from Genma at the ground floor.
Turning around to give his reply to the proctor only to be cut off again, "Go on forfeit, a guess watching what Shino did to that big-mouthed Oto shinobi must have scared you too much. That or you're afraid of me. Hmmm, maybe that's it, you're afraid of having to face me afterwards. Well don't because if you're hesitating now to fight Shino then you obviously will neither win against him or stand a chance against me."
Growling in the back of his throat Kankuro turned to see that damnable smirk on Naruto's face, and feeling his pride take one to many hits decided to wipe it from his face for good. Quickly turning to the arena floor Kankuro hopped over the guard rail and landed on the ground while walking up to Genma and Shino.
Seeing both Genin present Genma yelled out, "Are both fighters ready?" Receiving a nod from both he raises his hand and as he brings it down shouts, "Hajima!" At his call Genma jumped away to give them space while keeping a close eye on the oncoming action.(1)
(I've decided on not showing the match between the two since I both don't think I could do it right, and felt it better to show more on Naruto's actions regarding his other opponents, as well as Haku's explanation on how she survived the Nami no Kuni Mission. So with that in mind the fight is very similar to canon. Only less trees, though there are more than just the small few in canon.)
-Fighter's Stand-
As Naruto and the others watching the beginnings of the match one Temari turned to have a word with our favorite blonde. However like those before her she ended up being 'blocked' by Haku. "Naruto-kun who do you think will win this match?" Looking to his pretty nurse attendant he was about to reply before being cut-off by Temari(2), "Kankuro will win, he's one of the best puppet users in the village and also the best Kugutsu no Jutsu user in the Genin forces of Suna." where the words of one prideful Suna kunoichi.
Turning now to face Temari Naruto said, "If he's one of your best then that's not saying much since he was about to quit before his match even began. Unless running away after talking big is a part of Suna's puppetry skill set." Seeing the knowing smirk on his face Temari scowled at forgetting that small detail. Turning over to Haku, Naruto spoke again, "To answer your question though Haku-chan, I'm putting my faith in that Shino will either win or force a draw."
"You seem pretty confident on that belief whiskers. But how much are you willing to wager I presume on that assumption?" was the challenging statement by one Yugito Nii. Turning towards the blonde Kumo nin Naruto replied, "Enough to bet this: If Shino loses I'll do any favor asked of me from the both of you. As long as it doesn't have me breaking any laws or regulations with my village that is." Hearing his challenge both Temari and Yugito blushed at his wager, both thinking of the not so clean ideas they had if they win said bet. Before anyone could say another word Haku spoke, "Are you sure Naruto-kun, that seems a bit to daring a challenge to give?"
Seeing the worry on Haku's face Naruto gave her a small smile, "Don't worry too much, even if I lose the bet I'm sure they won't try anything that will either get me in trouble or cause me any danger." While he said this a certain neko had other thoughts in mind, "Accept the deal kitten! Quickly before that young tom changes his mind!" "Quiet Nibi!" where the only response said Bijuu got.
Dismissing the more than inappropriate thoughts sent from the giant neko in her mind Yugito replied, "Alright I'll accept the wager although, what will you want in return should the Aburame win?" Nodding her head at the question Temari focused back on the blonde male. Thinking on it for a moment Naruto snapped his fingers at an idea, "Okay if Shino wins you two will have to teach me a jutsu of your respective element. And before you ask I don't care what kind of jutsu it is. It could be a E-Ranked one for all I care, just one jutsu each. Hows that?"
Seeing as he wasn't asking for anything really big or ridiculous both girls nodded and shook his hand to seal the deal. While this was going on one Tsuchi Kin felt a little left out so deciding to try to grab the attention of our favorite blonde she asked a question, "Ne, Naruto-kun. I forgot to ask you earlier of a question I wanted to ask you."
Looking over at Kin, while blushing only minorly, Naruto replied, "Sure what is it?" "Where did you learn those sealing techniques from? I saw you working on some the few times I came by the shop you worked at? I don't think I've ever seen the ones you where studying?"
Hearing her question Naruto took a moment to talk with his interior neighbor, "What do you think Kurama? How much should I tell her?" "Well seeing as it's only asking for trouble if you just speak the truth I'd go with more along the line of half-truths instead. That way you can answer her question without giving out too much information." Internally nodding his head Naruto said, "Most where some old scrolls I found in older parts of the villages archives that are hardly used much anymore. Others were taught to me by my sensei."
However during Naruto's brief inner talk with his demon Kin ended up in another glaring contest with not only Haku but Yugito and Temari as well. In fact the girls where so into their little stare off that not only did none hear his words but he could have sworn he saw lightning of all things shot from between all four kunoichi's eyes. All he could do was sweatdrop at their actions and look onwards confused.
While Naruto looked on in confusion and a touch of apprehension Haku, Yugito, and Temari had the same thought going through there heads, "How dare she call him Naruto-kun!" Their little contest was soon broken by a small but noticeable cough. All four turned to see a slightly nervous Naruto, realizing he had seen their small scene all four immediately blushed in embarrassment. Deciding to get things back on track Naruto repeated his answer to Kin's earlier question.
Hearing his response Kin said, "Oh I see, I was mostly curious cause I'm a bit interesting in seals myself and have tried to learn more on them. Sadly Oto doesn't have any real sealing experts, and the few that know anything aren't what you would call the teaching type."
Hearing her words and seeing the slightly disappointed look on her face Naruto spoke up, "Well if it's no real problem I could show you a thing or two at a later point." Surprised at his words Kin could only smile at his thoughtfulness and blush a little at the large smile he sent her.
Seeing this Haku could only smile herself at Naruto's actions, "He always wants to help people no matter who they are. It's that same concern and care that saved me on the Bridge in Nami." She could only smile more at thinking about how determined he was at saving her that day.
-Flashback to the Battle on the Bridge-
"Please Naruto-san...kill me." those were the words of one Yuuki Haku as she looked on at the still slightly enraged Uzumaki. Having used up nearly all of her chakra and being beat to all hell by a partly Kyuubified Naruto she had nothing left to fight with. Seeing him hesitate Haku tried to rile him up enough to do the deed. "I've just killed your friend and teammate why have you stopped!? I cannot fight back anymore neither can I hardly stand! KILL ME!"
Noticing her despite pleas weren't getting them anywhere she tried to yell at him again only for Naruto to speak up, "WHY DAMMIT! Why would someone like you not only work for someone like Zabuza but also someone like Gato!? And why do you think me killing you will do anything!"
Hearing his own small plea Haku begins to recount her early life in Mizu no Kuni: from her birth up to her discovery of her bloodline, and then of that horrible day where she watched her mother's murder by her father's hands and her subsequent killing of him and the mob he brought to kill them. Eventually bring about to her coming across Zabuza and his taking her in, along with all the training and care he took in looking after her.
Hoping her story would bring the needed courage for Naruto to end her life she finished with asking him a final time to kill her. Naruto still slightly dumbfounded could only ask, "Is this really the only way?" Seeing his depressed face Haku could only sadly smile at him for his concern but pushing her slowly growing feelings aside she said, "Yes, I can no longer serve him effectively so please Naruto-kun. Kill me."
However at hearing her words two things happened that would change the outcome of this moment and change Fate's plan concerning Haku and what was to happen here on this day forever.(3)
Unknown to both Haku and Naruto in his weakened state Zabuza heard nearly all that the two said even from the large distance from them. Now for most such a thing wouldn't be possible what with the constant splashing of the waves from down below and the constant sounds of battle going on between him and Kakashi. But for someone like Zabuza that was a much different matter altogether. See alongside his training in the Silent Killing techniques one not only needs great stealth skills but also a great sense of hearing.
And that was something Zabuza had in spades. Alongside his great sense of hearing he also had the advantage of a sensory removal, which is to say the ability to temporarily shut down a sense at will. And with his currently closed eyes and lose of smell (caused by a broken nosed via Kakashi's fist) Zabuza heard nearly everything both young teens had been talking about after the brief explosion of chakra caused by Naruto's temporary release of Kyuubi.
Know alongside Zabuza one other heard her words, those of course being one Uzumaki Naruto obviously. Now at first Naruto had taken to killing Haku, no matter how much it bothered him, a little bit more easier since it was 'his' technically last request. However at 'his' calling him Naruto-kun, he realized something that made said option get thrown out the proverbial window. Haku cared about him! 'He' had some concern for his wellbeing!(4)
Now knowing this he could not in any way kill 'him' but also realizing Haku would possibly kill 'himself' Naruto decided to trying knocking Haku out. However during his moment of thought and preparation for said action, things changed.
As Haku saw Naruto charge at her, kunai in hand, to finished it she felt almost instantly the silent need to defend Zabuza. Knowing she may still serve a purpose to him after all she quickly dodged Naruto's 'attack' and with a call of, "I'm sorry Naruto-kun but there's still one last thing I can do for Zabuza-sama" she used the last of her chakra to create an ice mirror to warp to Zabuza's side.
However as said before Zabuza listened in on Haku and Naruto's conversation and realizing the true depth of her loyalty to him and her growing bonds with Naruto he knew that something had to change. Seeing Kakashi's incoming kill shot using that noticeable powerful jutsu intent on goring him to death knew exactly what Haku was planning. So it came as no surprise to him when she appeared via her ice mirror in front of him to act as a human shield for the coming raiton jutsu.
However as some beliefs and stories say when one feels death upon them time seems to slow and their life flashes before their very eyes, and in that instant Zabuza saw not just his life but Haku's as well. And at that moment knew that she didn't deserve to end it like this. So in a move that shocked all present (that being Kakashi, Haku, and a just arriving Naruto) Zabuza ripped his very arm to shreds to escape the hold held on him by Kakashi's ninken. Using what little control and strength in said arm left he pushed her out of the attacks range.
With a the sound of flesh being pierced and a large quantity of blood spewing forth from both Zabuza's mouth and chest all became silent of the bridge. All three ninja could only watch in bewilderment at Zabuza's sacrifice. Knowing his former enemies life was not long for this world Kakashi stop the flow of chakra to his hand and slowly lowered Zabuza to the floor. Haku gradually approached the dying body of her master as a growing trail of tears fell from her eyes. "No...no...no...no...no...NO...NO...NO! ZABUZA-SAMA! Why, it was supposed to be ME!" she screamed as she threw her arms around his wounded body.
Feeling a hand on her shoulder Haku turned her head to see a solemn faced Naruto looking at her. Shaking him off she hugged Zabuza's body and cried even more over him. However in her hysterics she heard a small voice break her from her episode, "Stop crying *cough* on my account Haku." Looking downwards at his face she saw the still alive Zabuza looking at her.
"Zabuza-sama hold on I'll heal you. Just give me a moment and you'll be up soon." where Haku's frantic words at seeing him still alive, if just barely. However as she reached for her supplies in her pouch a hand grabbed it and slowly moved it away. Looking up at Naruto she quickly tried to pull away only for Naruto to shake his head. Before she could push him away Zabuza's voice claimed her attention again, "Don't waste your time *cough* on me Haku, I'm not gonna survive this no matter *cough* what you try."
Shaking her head in despair she yelled out, "No, I can fix this. I will heal you and we can try getting a job somewhere else. Someplace better with better pay for your chance at restarting your rebellion in Kiri." Unfortunately for Haku, Zabuza knew this was his last few minutes alive, accepting this he turned (with what little strenght he had left) to Kakashi and Naruto.
"I want you two, to promise me here and now *cough* Kakashi to take care of Haku for me. The same goes *cough* for you too gaki. Take her with you to Konoha *breathes heavily* and have her start a new life there. She has no connections to Kiri outside of me and that's not much anyways." said Zabuza. Understanding his dying wish Kakashi nodded figuring not only would this bring a new bloodline to Konoha but someone with knowledge of several Kirigakure unique jutsu and knowledge, how selfish this might be it would keep the more darker elements of Konoha's council and military from abusing her. Especially if Naruto can persuade the Sandaime to protect her.
Nodding his head at Zabuza he looked over at Naruto to see him nodding as well. Naruto himself spoke up, "I figured you where just using Haku for your own gains, *he gains a small smirk* I guess I wasn't entirely right. I promise to protect Haku and take 'him' to Konoha and give 'him' a chance at a new life from this one. And Uzumaki Naruto never breaks his promises."
Smirking a little at Naruto's words and lack of knowledge to Haku's true gender, he just nodded and turned back to Haku who was now crying on his chest, "Haku." *Lifting her head at hearing her name* "I want you to promise me that you'll keep on living and *cough* not allow my passing to keep you from doing so. I want you to go with them to Konoha and make a new life for yourself, a better life. Understand?" Seeing her nod he turned back to Kakashi, "Two last favors if you don't mind Kakashi."
"Sure" Kakashi replied. "Burn my body after this and help Haku learn to wield my blade. It's tradition after all, a member of the Seven Swordsmen pass on their blade to a student whether through retirement or death. And in this case Haku's deserves it most of all." said Zabuza, seeing the son of the White Fang nod. Feeling his life start to ebb away he closed his eyes and said, "Goodbye Haku you where the daughter I never had and...I love you, musume." Hearing those words Haku, whispered in reply, "I love you to...otou-san."
Soon all was quiet and Zabuza's breath stopped, in her still depressed state Haku spoke, "Otou-san? Zabuza-otou-san? Tou-san!" Realizing what's finally happened Haku broke down again crying over the deceased body of her father. Lowering his head in mourning Kakashi lowered his headband. Naruto himself just looked on as Haku cried.
Only for the depressing silence to be broken by a loud clapping. With Zabuza's death the mist he conjured via the Kirigakure no Jutsu lessened till it was all but gone, only to show a short man dressed in a business suit standing amongst a small army of mercenaries. Said midget soon spoke, "Well I guess I was right after all. Zabuza was a baby demon in the end. Couldn't even kill an old bridge builder, one man, and a bunch of brats! Well it's no skin of my back anyways, I wasn't gonna pay him in the end after all."
Following his small speech he started to laugh alongside his hired help. However hearing his words only caused to enrage Haku. "YOU BASTARD! ZABUZA DIED TRYING TO DO YOUR DIRTY WORK AND YOU DIDN'T INTEND TO PAY US!" where the words of one very angry and distressed kunoichi. Seeing the person who had the gall to yell at him and recognizing her the now revealed Gato yelled back, "Oh I see you're that little bitch that broke my arm. I'll make sure to pay you back extra for that!"
Turning to his thugs Gato ordered, "I'll pay double to whoever brings me Tazuna's head and that little bitch alive and mostly unspoiled." Turning his attention back to Haku. "I plan to have a little fun with you for what you did to my arm."
At his words most of the mercenaries started to cheer while a few charged. One particular eager thug quickly drew a crossbow and aimed at Haku, only for his shot to be body blocked, by Naruto. Said Uzumaki took the deadly bolt straight in the stomach, with nearly the entire bolt inside him. All present of the completed side of the bridge stared horrified at Naruto's action. Combining the pain from the crossbow bolt and his earlier fight with Haku was too much for the Konoha Genin and soon Naruto passed out from the pain and severe exhaustion.
As Haku screamed in fright at Naruto's move to save her she rushed to his aid, only for something very surprising to follow.
What no one knew at the time was that since Naruto's learning of Kyuubi being sealed within him and his first use of its chakra during the battle with Haku said Bijuu has slowly been gaining more and more ground in making contact with his vessel. The recent actions that have led to more than one life threatening situations for Naruto has enabled the Kyuubi some measure of control in their shared mindscape.
Said control being mostly limited to viewing memories and seeing parts of the outside world through Naruto's eyes. With his most recent conduct, those being using the fox's power earlier and now taking the shot meant for Haku with said bolt hitting directly on his seal, has allowed the fox an opportunity to take some actions of his own. Knowing that the death of his container would only cause terrible repercussions for him Kyuubi used what little time he had to briefly take over Naruto's body.
That leads us to the cause for Haku and Kakashi's fearful situation now as Naruto's body was, for the second time today, being covered by a red-orange cloak of chakra. Said chakra and power giving off a very terrifying and dark sensation. Others too soon felt the presence those including Tazuna, Sakura, and one Uchiha Sasuke that had just recently awakened from his false death state caused by Haku earlier.
The mercenaries and Gato however in their own foolishness and arrogance saw nothing truly fearful from the display, most would account this to a combination of stupidity and false belief that both numbers and money would protect them from this new apparently small problem, you can only guess the believers of such thoughts.
What happened next astonished all present when the newly revived Naruto grabbed what little of the bolt still in his gut remained on the outside and ripped the whole thing from his chest. Dropping the now useless weapon Naruto opened his eyes to reveal the slitted eyes of one Kyuubi no Kitsune and dashed towards his enemies.
Ignoring the cries of his sensei and new friend Naruto ran as fast he could towards the amassed group of thugs until he was only few feet before them, knowing he had only so much time outside Kyuubi drew in what amount of chakra he could draw forth and focused it to the vicinity of his lungs. The with one deep breath followed by an incredible roar he exhaled a sea of flames from his mouth!(5)
Said flames engulfed the league of men and continued you onwards till nearly all were burning alive only those that stayed near Gato, which was very few what with his added money incentive from earlier, survived. Watching in horror at his near entire armies demise he fell backwards on his ass and slowly tried to crawl away. Only for that to be stopped by an arrow landing smack dab behind him.
Those still alive on the bridge swung their heads around to see a large column of people standing there. All ages and genders where present standing together holding a large assortment of random tools and makeshift weapons. It took only a second for those present to realize the large collection of people where in fact nearly the entire population of Nami! At the head of this group was none other than Inari and Tsunami, Inari himself holding the crossbow that released the arrow that landed near Gato.
Seeing the large group of people here Kyuubi decided he overstayed his welcome and released his hold on Naruto. This causing said Uzumaki to land face first on the ground truly and fully knocked-out. Seeing Naruto fall once again Haku made a quick dash for his body and dragged it as fast as she could in her current exhausted state over to Kakashi.
Still having some chakra left Kakashi placed his hand on Haku's shoulder and spoke, "Leave the rest to me, you watch over Naruto while I help the people here clean up this mess." With a small inclination of her head she went to checking over Naruto while Kakashi went to finish off the rest of the mercs and capture Gato, immediately afterwards going over to check on his other two students.
Looking down at Naruto Haku could only give a small smile at his earlier words and said smile grew as she heard the him say her name in his sleep. 'I promise to live on Zabuza-tou-san, I'll live and do so at Naruto-kun's side.'
-End Flashback-
"Shousa, with both Sabaku no Kankuro and Aburame Shino unable to stand I declare this match to be a draw!" the shouting of one Shiranui Genma. Following his words the stands erupted with cheers for the interesting match up and great display of Insect Jutsu vs Puppet Jutsu. Hearing the proctor's call and the stadiums cheers broke Haku from her reminiscing. Turning to look at the field below she sees as Medic-Nin gather both Shino and Kankuro on a pair of stretchers and carry them off the the nursing station set up for this tournament.
Realizing she missed the whole thing during her recollection of the events that lead her to Konoha she turned to ask Naruto about it only for her mood to darken. Reason being one Tsuchi Kin standing near shoulder to shoulder with her Naruto-kun.
More than a little pissed off at this hussy trying to get close to her Naruto, she walked over to try to regain his attention. At her approach she caught the end of their conversation, "...and don't worry after everything concerning the exams is over I'll start teaching you some Fuinjutsu lessons, kay?"
"Arigato Naruto-kun, and I do appreciate the help." replied Kin. "What are the two of you talking about?" both ninja turned to see Haku behind them smiling, although in reality it was mostly forced. "I was just talking to Kin-chan here about some things, you where a bit deep in thought earlier so I figured to let you be. What were you thinking about so much earlier, you didn't respond when I was talking to you a few minutes ago?"
Seeing his slight concern Haku just smiled and said, "Just remembering how we met and what brought me to living here is all." At hearing her answer Naruto began to blush from embarrassment, mostly on account of the fact that Naruto eventually learned of Haku's real gender after accidentally walking in on her while she was in the shower, thank Kami she didn't scream.
Back to the present Naruto looked to see Haku and Kin glaring at each other again. Before he could try to separate them Genma was heard from down below, "Would Tsuchi Kin of Oto and Sabaku no Temari of Suna please come down to the arena floor for their match!"
Hearing her name called Kin turned around to head for the stair only for her right hand to be grabbed, she looked over to see Naruto had done so. "Just wanted to wish you good luck Kin-chan." Blushing a little at his words Kin, responded with a "Thank you." and headed for the stairs.
Before more could be said Temari quickly said, "And what about me Naruto-kun!?" Haku could easily hear the heavy infliction she placed on the kun suffix after his name, not liking it she grabbed his arm and pulled him towards her. Not really noticing Haku's quite hostile feeling towards Temari, Naruto said "I'd say good luck but I quickly remembered what you did to Tenten-chan so nevermind." Seeing his frown and hearing the less than happy tone with her Temari could only sigh and give a sad smile in return.
"I guess now would be a bad time to say I'm sorry huh?" Naruto slowly reigned in his anger but stilled replied, "Yes it is, not to mention the real recipient of that apology should be Tenten, not me." Nodding her head at that she slowly walked down the steps, seeing her downcast form and cursing at his noble and chivalric ways Naruto called out, "Still, it says something for your character to wanna apologise, even if it doesn't seem like your truly sorry, talk with me and Tenten after the exams and I might forgive you. Whether Tenten does is up to you."
Listening to his little speech Temari could only smile a bit and nod her head. As she continued down the steps her thoughts where another story, "great look what you've pulled yourself into this time Temari. Falling for a guy that might not survive the invasion and if things go the way their planned then I very well might meet my end at his hands with everything that's been happening today. I wish kaa-san was still alive, she'd have known what to do, better than tou-san at least."
-Arena Ground Floor-
Soon both kunoichi where standing apart from each other. "Are both of you ready?" asked Genma, receiving a nod from both he raised his hand then brought it down as he made the call "HAJIME!" With the call made both girls shot into action, as Genma jumped backwards, Kin sent several senbon racing towards Temari.
Seeing the attack coming the Suna kunoichi brought forth her fan and batted them away while still closed. Not being deterred Kin continued with a small onslaught of senbon needles, interestingly enough none of which had a bell attached to them. Temari continued batting them away showing no signs of tiring or injury proving none hit her.
Stopping after a few more throws Kin began a quick charge mid-throw hoping to catch Temari off-guard during her blocking. This proved only minorly successful since the space between the two was only a few yards, Temari while being able to block all the senbon was slightly surprised by her opponents head-on attack. Still being prepared for physical confrontations she quickly positioned her fan for mêlée combat, only to be shocked by the Kin she was about to strike vanish in front of her.
It was only through her well-trained reflexes she was able to avoid the kunai sent at the back of her head. Turning she sees Kin sent three more kunai her way, deciding to dodge this time so as to keep her eyes on her Temari ducks and dives to the side avoiding the kunai...only to meet the Tsuchi girl's knee ramming straight into her face. Said blow sent the eldest Sabaku backwards on her back, quickly getting to her feet Temari looks to see multiple Kin's surrounding her, far more then were used against Shikamaru in the Prelims.
Remembering Kin's specialty Temari quickly brings her hands up to realise the Genjutsu placed on her. With a shout of "Kai!" the Genjutsu was broken and showed the true Kin to be nowhere in sight. However with her senses back in control she quickly noticed the growing shadow growing above her, looking up she sees the real Tsuchi Kin diving straight for her with several more senbon held in between her fingers.
Noticing the chance she had Temari unveiled her fan and brought it back while calling her jutsu's name, "Kamaitachi no Jutsu!", Temari sent a large blast of cutting winds towards the airborne Kin. Not being able to avoid the jutsu Kin quickly threw all of her senbon around the main center of the wind technique and after doing so brought her arms and legs in to shield herself as best she could.
Alongside the cutting winds the jutsu also ended up sending Kin straight into the arena wall, oddly enough right near the same hole Naruto made in his own collision. Bringing her fan down to rest Temari smirked, looking over at Genma who went to check on Kin's state he soon found her conscious in a small crater in the wall.
Seeing the match finished Genma raised his hand to make the call only to hear for the second time this day a familiar *pop* come from the crater. Taking another look he saw to his slight surprise a small piece of paper in the whole instead, oddly enough one shaped like a person.(6)
Realizing Kin escaped her again Temari sharply turned around her to see if she was hiding in any of the few trees surrounding the battlefield. Not seeing her Temari put her hands in the Genjutsu release sign again to break any possible illusions placed on her during the recent time.
With a quick "Kai" she checked to see no changes around her until she looked up to see Kin running at her again, sadly for Kin she was to far from her to avoid the next attack. Having gotten tired of Kin's tactics and this fight she brought her fan up and released another Kamatachi jutsu and blasted Kin into a tree. Not wanting anymore tricks quickly bring the fan back for another attack Temari called out a new jutsu, "This will end it! Daikamaitachi no Jutsu!"
With her cry and swing of the fan she sent forth an incredibly large stream of wind towards Kin, said attack engulfed both Kin and the surrounding trees. It went on to destroy most of the trees in the arena as well as leaving a massive crater in the wall. Folding up her fan and leaning on it Temari used her still remaining strength to stand, "Dammit, that jutsu still takes a lot out of me. Gonna need to rest a bit after this so I can be ready for the coming Invasion. At least I know there's no way she'll get up from that!"
Soon the dust settled and revealed to everyone present Kin's form.(7) Temari smiled at seeing her lying beat up and unconscious on top of a few trees, while being stuck under another. Genma hurried over to check her status only to find none. Seeing as she was killed Genma raised his hand to call the match, only for both himself and Temari to be fooled again.(8)
-Play Mega Man X- Command Mission OST, T05- Marino the Thief, Play till chapter Ends-
"I don't think so!" was the loud voice of a very alive Tsuchi Kin! Raising her head to look at Temari she said, "If you think your little breeze was gonna take me out that easily your dead wrong!" Soon the world began to distort around both Genma and Temari as well as nearly the entire stadium! In a small flash all that was shown as a still destroyed forest but no Kin. Looking around for her neither Temari nor most in the arena could see her anywhere, only to hear a small chuckling heard from all around the colosseum.(9)
"Looking for me!" Everyone soon turned to see Kin standing on the very top of the stadium's ceiling, right at the edge of the hole in the roof. She was looking none the less for wear showing only the signs of being thrown the first time into the trees before the larger attack following. Before more could be said by anyone Kin brought her hands up into the Hebi hand seal. All around Temari and the ground itself rose numerous senbon, oddly enough the spacing seemed evenly placed as well as the fact every other senbon would have a bell at the end.
"You know it's said we got a whole month to prepare for the Finals, later pushed to two. One would think that at least one of use participants would have the forth thought to make preparations in the very ring before the matches themselves." Many realizing what Kin was saying, stare at her in shock.
-Kage Booth-
The Raikage could only sit there and laugh, who have thought to actually set up traps before hand in the very arena itself before the month wait was over. Calming down a bit A then said "HA! I'm starting to like this girl!" The Sandaime himself couldn't help but chuckle a bit at her actions, "Indeed, to think she came here and had set up a plan before she even fought is truly incredible, I think I can see a bright future for this young kunoichi if she continues to surprise us in the coming fights."
All present in the booth nodded their heads at his words, although the Kazekage less enthusiastic than the others present.
-Arena Floor-
Realizing she needed to do something before Kin began whatever it was she was planning Temari brought her fan to bear and readied another Wind Jutsu to try to finish her. Sadly Kin had other plans, before she could finish the her swing Temari left forth a pain filled scream, "Ahhhhhhh!" In fact the pain was so much she released her hold on her fan and fell to her knees.
After a bit the pain slowly subsided, only to hear a voice in front of her. "It hurts doesn't it, and before you try to break it don't bother this particular Genjutsu is far more complex than you'd imagine." Looking up she sees the face of Kin not two feet from her, raising her head to look up towards the roof she sees another Kin still standing there, and still holding the hand seal.
"Before you ask no I'm just a clone of sorts. That's the real me up there, know here's what's gonna happen you can either surrender or a make you feel so much pain you pass out. Either way I win but you'll get less pain if you choose option A." with her part said the Kin clone raised her hand and held up three fingers. "I'll give you three seconds to decide" at her words she started to lower one finger.
Hearing her words Temari quickly tried to stand only for her body to heavily protest to the action, "One." Looking at Kin in slight horror Temari tried once more to stand, and sadly again failing to move off her knees. "Two." Seeing the second finger fall Temari started to desperately try to figure a way out of her current situation, unfortunately before she could think of any real plan Kin's voice cut her off, "Three."
Just as she began to feel the early sensation of pain bubble to the surface Temari screamed out, "I QUIT, I QUIT! JUST PLEASE DON'T!" Hearing her give up Kin (the one up top) released the Genjutsu and dispelled her clone. Hearing Temari quit Genma raised his hand (for the third time in one match even) and shouted, "SHOUSO, Winner of Match 3: Tsuchi Kin of Oto!"
The arena was silent for a minute before there was a loud cry from the fighter's box, "YEAH! WAY TO GO KIN-CHAN!" Those nearby or familiar with the shouting recognized the voice of Uzumaki Naruto doing the shouting. Soon after the entire arena started to cheer and clap as well, leading to a very loud ovation for Ms. Tsuchi. Smiling brightly at her win Kin pulled a grappling hook and long rope from her ninja pouch and, hooking the claw onto the roof, slowly repelled down from her spot.
-Fighter's Box-
Naruto couldn't stop clapping the match was great. He was at first afraid when Kin got sent into the wall, and even more so when she got nearly buried under all the trees. He was a little weirded out by the scene since he thought he saw something else at points during the match. Now going over it with Kurama they realized that Kin's mass Genjutsu must have only minorly affected them with him being what he is messed the effects up a bit.
Haku could only look onwards with a little annoyance at seeing Kin's skills, taking note of them she made sure to work more on her Genjutsu defenses, "There's no way I'm letting you beat me for Naruto-kun's heart you siren whore."
Ironically very similar thoughts where running through one Nii Yugito's mind as well. It didn't help Kin's future plans any that Yugito was being coached along by the Nibi no Bakeneko, Matatabi very much either. Said coaching being more along the lines of turning the tiny cowgirl, said nickname being for her black and white camo outfit and admittedly larger bust size compared to Yugito, into her very own scratching post...yes not good future plans for Yugito indeed.
-Arena Floor-
By the time the medics arrived to take care of Temari, Kin had reached the ground. Looking back at Temari being helped into the stretcher she called out to her, "Temari, *seeing Temari face her* sorry for being so rough but it was a bit personal for me."
Surprised at her words Temari said back none to angrily, "For what! Last I checked no one from Suna has caused a problem with Oto!" However instead of getting angry Kin just gave a sad smile, "I wasn't talking about Oto, you hurt my friend. Her names Tenten." At seeing Temari's surprised face she continued, "I met her and Naruto over the two month period and became fast friends with both. After the time spent together, no matter how short, I decided since I was going to face you I could use your unneccessary roughness with someone, who's from a village allied with yours no less, to be my motivation to beat you. And it sure worked out for me didn't it."
Not being able to really deny her logic she just stayed quiet as she was taken to the med-center. Although Kin's last words to her shocked her, "I be careful on who's side you fight for soon, I'd rather not like to actually kill you."
Temari could only turn to watch as Kin walked off one hand resting on her hip as she slowly but confidently walked to the stairway.(10)
CHAPTER END!
Arashi: And another one done. I'm glad so many have stuck it out this far with me. Although I am more than a little unhappy with the lack of love my second fic got. If you have things that bother you about it PM me and I can explain to the best of my ability (which translates to: trying not to spoil too much) about my plans and ideas for said fic. Another note to mention is part of my time spent on this is hampered by a combination of playing Dragon Age, life, and becoming more and more disappointed with Kishimoto's taking of Naruto canon. Really it's not bad enough Sasuke gets recognition from the past Hokage's, gets to see a Uzumaki owned building I'm sure Naruto's never seen or even heard of, has a very loyal fangirl (that's an Uzumaki as well) still love him even though he clearly stated before he had no more use for her and very nearly killed her just for his revenge mind you (showing that yes Sasuke will in fact kill allies for said revenge, take that Sasuke fans)! Now you wanna give him Naruto's dream...what's next Kishi, Sasuke learns the Hirashin? He claims Hinata and Sakura to revive his clan? Give him the Rinnegan? Here's an idea why not just change this from Naruto Shippuden (Hurricane Chronicles) to Naruto Sasuke or Uchiha Chronicles, cause that stupid hax clan sure has more impact on the plot at this point then the Uzumaki or Senju have. Not to mention Naruto is treated more and more as a secondary protagonist then it's main. All I have left to say at this point is this *takes a deep breath* "FUCK YOU KISHIMOTO, FUCK YOU, YOU UCHIHA AND SASUKE LOVING PIECE OF SHIT!" *breathes heavy for a few seconds* Okay I feel kinda better now. Yurei, anything to say of my rant or about the update?
Yurei: *stares at Arashi* You have some seriously repressed anger issues don't you?
Arashi: *Gives sideways glance* You have no idea. So what's your thoughts on the chapter?
Yurei: I can guess, we are friends after all. It's excellent by the way.
Arashi: Thanks I'm trying my best to make this as close to perfect in my hands as can be. That's why I'm using the sites Spellcheck, having you Beta it, and using a thesaurus website to broaden my vocabulary use here. So, who's next on your list? I heard you mention something about Kishin earlier, you wanna go hunt Asura in the Soul Eater 'Verse?
Yurei: Nah, those brats took care of Asura on they're own. The problem is there's a few others that are pretty smart. Their laying low in some plaguelands, using the deaths their to gather souls until they're strong enough. I let the Death in that world know about it and he asked for some backup. So, wanna go hunting?
Arashi: Does talking about Kishimoto and Sasuke send me on rants? *Raises hand* Wait, don't answer that, but yes let's hunt. By the way I forget did they ever kill that one Law guy that turned traitor and joined Asura? The one guy that didn't need a meister?
Yurei: Hmm, I don't know. We can ask when we get there. *Waves hand and a new portal opens* Oh, by the way look out for Blare. She likes to flirt...a lot. And if I catch you messing around while we're working I'll lock you up with Pariah Dark in the same coffin.
Arashi: *Gives dumbfounded expression*...how in the HELL did you know I had a Cat-girl 'interest'?! Besides, what if we bring her along? I happen to have some kind of 'animal' magnetism, don't believe me ask Felicity from Darkstalkers 'Verse. At one point I actually contemplated getting a restraining order...for about one minute.
Yurei: Because I know you, you idiot and NO she is NOT coming with us! The last time I visited Death City that insufferable kitten almost got me and I am NOT letting that happen again. We get there, kill the maturing Kishin and get out.
Arashi: *Pouts* Oh come on, if not taking her with us then how about after we're done hunting, I go find her to hangout with. I mean I haven't been to that 'Verse ever. And you haven't been there in some time I assume. We are gonna need to be going back and forth from Death City and wherever the next target is so taking a day or so break in between hunts would be a sound idea. After all Spirit King or not EVERY king deserves a day or two to rest before taking on the next big job. Whatever it might be. Besides if this weird 'animal' magnetism thing of mine gets to her she probably won't leave me alone, which means she will leave YOU alone.
Yurei: *Growls* I know I'm gonna regret this...but fine. IF we take a break you can visit with Blare. But I swear I will leave you in the deepest pits of Tartarus if you fail to do your job. Understood?
Arashi: *Sweatdrops* Dude no need to be harsh, if there's one thing I love just as much as the ladies it's fighting. Besides I just looked it up, Justin Law is STILL alive, so yeah I'm gonna kill that traitor, although it also says he's possibly a victim to some weird-looking clown guy, so yeah gonna kill THAT too. *Enters Serious Mode* Oh not to mention we're probably gonna wanna kill Crona, poor he/she is for all intents lost. Unless you think you can save him/her?
Yurei: We'll solve that when it happens...and I think it's a she. Anyway, if we can save 'her' we will, as for Justin...why not, go wild. I might have a shot at getting through, Ragnarok could be a great asset if we pull it off but it will be hard. If I remember right he's a fan of sweet stuff so I might be able to strike a deal...*shrugs* like I said, deal with it when it happens
Arashi: *Salutes* Roger! And you're right maybe use a soul ability you might have to give Rag a body of his own? Also maybe work a soul searching or reverse mind-rape technique to heal Crona? Think you can do those, cause I keep them busy if it requires time, I just don't have the abilities or skills to do those kinds of things myself.
Yurei: There are a few techniques but I'm not as studied on them as the combat. We'll have to stop in my home dimension, I need to see my library to update my knowledge. We're taking too long, by now the readers are bored. Let's go! *Jumps into portal*
Arashi: True, anyways hope you enjoyed the chapter see yeah! *Waves as he jumps through the portal*
Arashi: Oh wait please review! GAH! *Yurei's arm grabs and pulls Arashi in by the throat Loony Toons style*
Here's the Reference Sheet guys!
1-I hate how nearly no one on this site ever thinks to do this. It's one thing to copy from canon, it's something entirely different to not realize a few facts. For one no matter how you look at it Kankuro wouldn't be hurt enough not to be able to recover enough to help Gaara escape in the invasion, wounded yes, unable to walk or fight no. He proves this in canon after his fight with Shino he recovered enough to show up after Naruto and Gaara's battle so why not here? Also it just seems really stupid to have him talking all big and shit during the Prelims but to always have him pull out in the Finals like a hypocritical coward. If there's one pet peeve I hate nearly the most it's Hypocritical Cowards. It's why I hate Bully Ray Dudley from TNA: Impact, Bully's wrestling character is always the same, a giant pussy that runs from the faces and talks big but always needs aid to win. Just check out his reign as TNA World Champion: he's been helped in every title match and most of the time by his brother Devon. Hell they all ended the same way mostly, he gets a lucky blow to the head of his opponent with a small hammer then pin.
2-I'm cutting people off a lot aren't I? If it gets a bit annoying let me know.
3-I.e. Naruto canon.
4-Just to be clear at this time Naruto didn't know Haku was a girl, he still was under the impression she was a he.
5-This is by all rights a more scaled down version of the fire attack Kurama used against Nagato during the Battle for Konoha. What with it being not even one tail of chakra used in all.
6-Fans of Negima should recognize this, and don't worry I'll explain on it next chapter.
7-Just imagine a more smaller scaled version of what Temari did to Tayuya, it mostly the same scenario.
8-I also apologise for my bit of excessive use of fake and near defeats, but sadly for you lot I happen to like both Heroic Second Winds and Come from Behind victories. Face it a good portion of the time they are just too awesome.
9-Just to be clear Kin planted a Fusion of Fuinjutsu and Genjutsu with a LOT of prior preparation to trap nearly ALL but the Kage's, Jinchuuriki, and a few High Jounins in a large-scale Genjutsu.
10-Just imagine Marino's pose in her main character art. Like the one shown in her Theme video on YouTube.
