Ok people, this is it! The final chapter! The last one of this story! I hope you will read and review just like before, but I would like ti know what you thought about the chapter and the whole story! Thank you and now enjoy!
Amy was desperately seeking for Tuomas. She has to find him before he finds Zhalia and the others.
"Where the fuck are you?" she asked while running from street to street.
Suddenly she stopped. She realized that he doesn't know where Zhalia is right now. He left the message for her, not Zhalia. He wanted her to come and find him, and if she wouldn't do so, he would go and find Zhalia like he said.
Zhalia was mostly staying at Dantes house because they were spending lots of time together, but she had an apartment too. It was a small apartment in a small alley, with almost completely destroyed stairs and only two small windows. Amy was here before and she saw the apartment from the inside too.
It wasn't big. It had a small bedroom (if you can call a room with only a bed and a night table a bedroom), a toilet and a living room in which was a couch, a sofa, two chairs, a microwave, a small stove and on the wall was a hanging kitchen cabinet in which were some plates and more kitchen stuff. Once when Amy was over at Zhalias place she asked why is she living here.
Flashback
Amy was heading Zhalias apartment because they wanted to spend some time without Sophie and Lok, and that was impossible in Dantes house. When Amy saw where she ended up, she checked the address one more time.
"This is it" she said and shrugged.
She carefully went upstairs on the ruined stairs and looked for Zhalias apartment. She knocked on it and when Zhalia opened the door she went inside. Amy looked around the place.
"Wow! And you're talking me about having a messy room" she laughed a bit.
"Oh, sorry for the mess. I don't have time to clean it because I'm most of my time with Dante or on a mission, so…" Zhalia looked around and apologized.
"Don't worry, I don't mind. You haven't seen my room in the Headquarters, have you?" Amy asked with a small smile. Zhalia shook her head.
"Thought so" Amy giggled.
She sat down and Zhalia went to cook some tea. She took the two cups out of the cabinet, while Amy was looking around.
"Zhalia, can I ask you something?" Amy asked in one moment.
"Of course" Zhalia answered without looking at Amy.
"Why are you living here?" the younger girl asked with wonderment.
"I don't have money to get a normal apartment" Zhalia said with regret.
"Why don't you go to the HQ?"
"I don't want to be there. I don't want to disturb or annoy anyone" Zhalia said with a small smile.
"And why don't you move over to Dante?" Amy went on.
"Why would I? I already spend too much time with him and at his place. I don't want to bother him" Zhalias eyes looked away from Amy.
Amy only sighed a bit. They stood still for a moment, but soon they went on with the chatting.
Flashback end
Amy remembered the place and she was praying that Dante was smart enough to keep Zhalia at his house. She started to run to Zhalias apartment, sure that Tuomas will be there.
After a few minutes of running she was almost in Zhalias street, but she turned into the one before Zhalias. It was a little, dark street, just like the one beside it and the other streets in this part of Venice. With a Hyperstride she jumped on a building. From there she saw the next street without getting noticed. She was on a high place and the sun was almost completely down, so she wasn't afraid of getting noticed by people, not even by Tuomas.
As she was watching the dark street her eye caught a little movement. She turned to it and saw Tuomas slowly walking towards Zhalias apartment. He wanted to wait for her in her own apartment. She remembered what Angelus thought them.
'If you're hunting someone, find out everything about him. Where he lives, how does his house looks like, what is he doing during his day, who are his friends and relatives, and the most important, is he an easy target or not'
Amy smiled a bit.
"Let's get it started" she said and jumped down using Featherdrop.
Tuomas quickly turned around as he heard someone move behind himself. When he noticed that it's Amy and evil grin appeared on his face.
"Well, well, well, look who's here. The little traitor" he said and started to walk towards Amy.
She didn't move away, she was just standing there like she was waiting for her fate.
"What is it? Won't run away again?" Tuomas went on teasing her.
"Why would I? What do I have to loose?" she answered in a calm way.
She remembered her past, all the bad things in her life, how she lived before she met the others, how she lost her beloved one, what a life she had because what she was. It all made her realize that she really doesn't have much to loose. Actually, she didn't have anything to loose.
"So you had enough of your life. In that case, let me help you get rid of it" he said with a dark voice and attacked her.
As Tuomas jumped in Amy's way, she jumped a bit backwards, but she didn't calculate her jump well, and she didn't land far enough from Tuomas. She was just about five or six steps in front of him, and it wasn't enough. He jumped at her before she could have reacted.
He pushed her down on the ground with all his weight and strength. Amy was struggling to get free from him, but he was too strong. Tuomas caught her neck and started to choke her. She wanted to fight back, but she didn't know how.
She slowly let his hands go as he went on choking her. She was giving up. She thought about what she is leaving behind. She couldn't think about anything worth fighting for, but than suddenly she remembered her team.
Dante, Zhalia, Lok and Sophie were all worried for her, they didn't wanted her to go, but she was too stubborn to listen to them, and now she was dying. She looked up into Tuomas's eyes. She saw a grin appear on his face. She knew he won't stop after he's done with her, he will leave her here and go find the rest of the team. The team! Her friends! That was worth fighting for!
When all the air left Amys lugs, she remembered a move Zhalia showed her before. She slipped her leg further between Tuomas's legs, and she simply kicked him over her head. As he flied a few steps away from her, Amy quickly jumped up. Unfortunately for her, Tuomas did the same.
He was having a really angry look in his bloody red eyes. He was sure Amy will give up the fight and that she's almost dead, but she fought him back.
"Wait! Let's talk about it! You remember the good times back in Helsinki? We were friends Tuomas! Amy reminded him.
Memories started to fly in front of her eyes.
Flashback
Amy was running up the hill with Tuomas after her.
"You can't catch me!" Amy yelled to him while laughing and she went on running.
She almost reached the top of the hill when Tuomas caught her shirt right on the top of the hill. They fell across a bigger dry branch end rolled down the same hill they were running up, only on the other side.
When they reached the ground at the feet of the hill, they sat up and looked at each other with shock. Amy looked with her emerald eyes into his big, light blues ones.
She started to giggle, and soon both started to laugh.
They went back home to Angelus, and even if they got scolded, they had a great time rolling down the hill.
Flashback end
"Why are you doing this to me?" Amy screamed at Tuomas.
She didn't want to bring this to an end. She knew that at the end of this fight one of them will be dead. She was sure she can't win.
Tuomas was an experienced vampire and she was… She was not.
"Why am I doing this? For power of course! What else would it be! You will tell me where's Angelus, and if you do it on your own I will give you a quick death" Tuomas threatened her while showing his fangs.
He had white and obviously sharp fangs, bloody red eyes which were yelling danger and pale skin like he never saw a ray of sunlight. He was the perfect example for an evil blood sucking vampire.
On the other hand, Amy was his opposite.
"That's it!" Amy whispered to herself.
That's why she was loosing the fight. She was loosing it because Tuomas was fighting like a vampire, and she was fighting like a seeker. If she fights him back as a vampire, she might have a chance to survive.
"What is it? You remembered where he is? Because if not, you will die screaming for mercy" Tuomas said and took a step closer to Amy.
He was surprised when she didn't try to flee like his other victims always did. All his victims were trying to run away from him, but in the end he always caught them and killed them.
Amy in the other hand didn't, and he didn't like it.
"No, but I remembered something else" Amy smiled at him with an evil grin.
In a second her fangs grow out and made her look really dangerous. Tuomas felt the danger and he wanted to end the fight as soon as possible.
He run to Amy and tried to bite her neck, but she kicked him and he fell on the ground. He jumped up again and growled, but Amy was just smiling.
"I'm not afraid" she said stepping closer to Tuomas.
"You should be" he growled at her again, but without any effort
Tuomas was attacking Amy again and again, using all his strength trying to hit and hurt her. He was attacking without stopping, hitting her, kicking, trying to bite her and doing everything to make her fall or get tired.
With every attack he got weaker and more tired as Amy blocked his attacks. There were hits she wasn't able to block, but she was refusing to fall on the ground. She was all bruised and covered in blood as Tuomas hit and bite her. They were both tired and weak.
Tuomas' last attack went really wrong when he tried to push his claws into Amys shoulder.
She moved out right and hit him with all her strength that was left in her. Tuomas flew through the air and hit the brick wall with his back and then fell on the ground onto his stomach. There was a loud sound of bones breaking and Tuomas spit out some blood. He tried to stand up but he wasn't able to. He looked at Amy with a really angry and killer look, but she saw that he was helpless and unable to harm her. Amy was standing a few steps away gasping for air.
"Now you see what I'm able to do" she said and turned her back on him.
She felt how every part of her body hurts with every step. She was a few steps from the exit out of the street when she felt how a pair of fangs gets buried into her neck.
As she got pushed on the ground onto her back she heard a loud, sharp and blood freezing scream, but than she realized that it's hers. She felt the pain get worse as Tuomas pushed his fangs deeper.
Amy couldn't do anything but try to kick him of. On her great surprise, she succeeded in it and Tuomas took a few steps backwards from her.
She opened her emerald eyes, and although her vision was blurry she saw blood dripping from his mouth. She crawled a bit more backwards from him, but she couldn't go too far.
Tuomas started to come closer to her, and she started to panic. She wasn't able to fight him back, neither was she able to get up and run away.
In one quick moment Tuomas jumped in Amy's way, planning to land on her and push his fangs into her neck and suck out all the blood that was left in her. Amy desperately looked around to find something to protect herself, but she didn't find anything.
In a moment before Tuomas landed on her, her hand found something long and cold beside her body, she held it in front of herself and closed her eyes.
She was expecting to hear herself scream and feel pain again, but instead she heard Tuomas gasp and moan in pain and felt his whole weight on her body. She reopened her eyes and saw him lying on her, his body relaxed and not moving.
Amy pushed him off of herself and slowly stood up. He was dead. The long and cold thing Amy grabbed was an iron bar. As Tuomas jumped on Amy the iron bar drove through his chest and heart.
Amy took a deep breath before she slowly walked away. She was confused and sad and she didn't know what to do or what is she doing. She was walking through Venice, completely exhausted and without any thoughts.
She looked up on the big moon and in the same moment remembered someone. Someone who was connected with the moon. Someone whose name included moon.
"Zhalia!" She remembered her and Dante.
She thought for a moment and remembered what Dante told her once:
'Whatever happens you can always come to me. I'm not only your mentor but your friend too, and you can trust me. I will help you, just like the others will do the same'
After some time she reached Dantes door and knocked on it. Dante opened after some time and saw Amy standing outside. He looked at her with disbelief and shock.
"Amy! Oh my God! What happened to you?" he asked and stepped out of the house.
"Not much. I just had a fight with Tuomas. Why?" she answered barely managing to keep her eyes open.
It was partly because she was really sleepy and tired, and partly because she was weak and she lost much blood.
"Where are you hurt?" Dante asked instead of answering her.
"Hurt?" Amy repeated his last word, not understanding what is he talking about.
She didn't know that she was covered in blood, hers and Tuomas' as well. Dante wrapped his arm around her shoulder and lead her into the house. He stopped only for a moment to lock the door, and he led Amy in.
Amy saw Zhalia sitting on the couch next to Metz, but Sophie, Lok and Cherit were missing.
"Amy!" Zhalia gasped and run to them. Metz stood up as well and went over to them too.
"I'm fine, really, I am" Amy was assuring them, but actually she wasn't.
In one moment her legs went weak and she almost fell down, but Metz and Dante caught her before she fell. She was on the edge to pass out.
"Metz, please call Lok and Sophie and call them back. Tell them that Amy's here" Dante asked his mentor.
Metz nodded and let go Amy. As he let go, Dante picked her up, carried to a room and put her down on the bed.
As he put her down, she fell unconscious.
He wanted to take Amys clothes of from her because they were covered with blood, but he blushed.
"I'll take care of her" Zhalia said and pushed him gently away.
He didn't know what to do until Zhalia does her job, so he went to take bandages and alcohol and went back to the room. Zhalia just covered Amy up when he entered the room.
"What could have happened to her?" Zhalia asked with worry.
"I don't know" Dante lied.
He knew what happened, Amy said that she had a fight with Tuomas. He didn't want Zhalia to freak out because of what happened.
Zhalia took the alcohol and the bandages from Dante and went to Amy.
"I'll better go now. I'll wait for Lok and Sophie" he said and went out.
In a few moments Amy woke up.
"Zhalia? What are you doing?" she asked with closed eyes.
"Helping you" Zhalia answered with a silent voice.
Zhalia was cleaning her wounds with alcohol, and than putting bandages on them.
"What happened to you? Did that vampire attacked you?" she whispered while cleaning the wound on Amys arm.
Amy only nodded.
It took about half hour to clean all wounds and put on bandages on all wounds, but Zhalia did a great job. She just finished putting on the bandage on Amy's neck and stood up to leave, when Amy caught her hand.
"Zhalia, you don't have to be afraid of him. He can't harm you anymore" Amy whispered to her.
Zhalia looked into her emerald eyes and understood what she is talking about.
Amy got rid of Tuomas so he wouldn't hurt her or anyone else from the team.
"Thank you" Zhalia said softly and caressed Amys face.
Amy only nodded and fell asleep.
XXX One week later XXX
"So, did you found out anything new?" Amy asked walking to Dante through the living room with painful steps and bandages all over her body.
"Hello to you too" Dante said as he looked up at her from his Holotome.
"Yeah, sorry Dante. Hello. Did you found out anything?" Amy said and stood in front of him.
"No. I read the newspaper, searched on the internet… I even hacked the police but I found nothing!" Dante answered and closed his Holotome.
"Are you sure he was dead?" he asked.
"Yes! He couldn't survive it! I'm sure!" Amy answered, sure in what happened.
She saw him dead, she saw his blood on her clothes. Tuomas was dead for sure. Dante sighed.
"Sorry, there is nothing! Not any trace of him at all! Like he never existed" he said as Amy sat down on the couch.
In that moment Zhalia walked downstairs. She was in her room until now, leaving Dante to do whatever he was doing.
"Hey Amy" she greeted the younger girl.
She went over to hug her, and after it she sat down in her (Dantes) armchair.
Dante was glad to see Zhalia happy and that she took Amy in as a teammate. He remembered how he wanted to reject Amy because she was a vampire, but now he was glad that Zhalia stopped him before he could do that. Amy wasn't his best protégé, and he had often to argue with her, but she was a good seeker and a good fighter.
"Where are the others?" Zhalia asked when she looked around.
She wasn't paying attention while she was in her room, although she was surprised that she didn't heard any yelling from downstairs.
"Still in school. They should soon come here" Dante answered and went to the kitchen.
"How do you feel?" Zhalia asked when she got comfortable in the armchair.
"Better, thank you. Especially that I didn't had to go to school for a whole week" Amy answered glad, but Zhalia was able to see in her eyes that she's not feeling alright.
"Amy…" Zhalia wanted to say something, but Amy just shook her head.
"It's nothing, really" Amy was trying to keep her tears on their places.
"You know you can always tell me everything that is bothering you. Whatever it is, it will fade away with time" Zhalia went on assuring her.
"Yeah, right. I killed a person Zhalia! How will that fade away?" Amy said with regret and a single tear rolled down her cheek.
Zhalia stood up and walked over to Amy.
"Listen, I killed many people while I was in the Organization. More than you think. I was and I still am an assassin. I did really bad things and I wasn't able to forgive myself, but Dante forgave me and he showed me how to forgive myself. He gave a second chance when no one else wanted to do it. He showed me that I have people who care about me and that I will always have a family which will support me no matter what I do" she was trying to calm her younger friend.
"I did bad things too. Things I'm not proud of and will never be. But I had to do such things because I was all on my own and no one ever cared about me. All I wanted was to survive" Amy sat back and said with an empty gaze.
Zhalia looked at her for a moment confused, before she realized things. She realized that she was having the same feelings as Amy, but she wasn't showing them.
"You grew up on the street?" she asked quietly.
"Yes. On the cold and snowy streets of Helsinki. My parents were murdered and I was taken away to an orphanage. Children were mocking me, hitting and were really mean to me. I was 5 years old when I run away from there. I hated that place. From the moment I run away I cheated, lie, stole, fought… I did everything to survive. I'm not proud of it, but I don't regret it neither" Amy said and shook her head at the end.
"And you shouldn't. You did it to survive. I was lucky that Klaus took me in from the streets. I would be either dead, or like most of the orphan girls in Amsterdam, I would be a whore. Those girls make it for money, and they can't say no to anyone who wants them" Zhalia said with disgust in her voice and in her eyes.
"I'm not saying that it's a good thing that I ended up in the Organization, but you know…" she said now thinking about her past and comparing hers to Amys.
It was obvious that Amy had it worse. Zhalia had Klaus to take care about her, but Amy had to take care of herself.
While those two were talking in the living room, Dante was listening to their conversation from the kitchen. He only moved from the living room to listen to their conversation in the first place. He knew that Amy and Zhalia won't talk about their feelings in front of him, especially Zhalia.
He was shocked and he couldn't believe what he just heard. He knew that Amy and Zhalia don't have parents, but he didn't know anything else about them.
Now he was feeling bad for spying on them like this, but he felt even worse for not finding out about them more, and talking with them about their past.
Dante never thought how bad their lives have been. He had it easy although his parents died as well; Metz was always there for him, helping him and taking care of him and his sister. But Amy and Zhalia didn't have had anyone to take care of them and show them what a real family is.
As he was thinking about their pasts, images were flying in front of his eyes. He wasn't able to stop them; they were just going in front of him, like he was watching the happenings right now.
He saw Amy as a little girl walking through the snowy streets of Helsinki. She was about 5 or 6 years old. She looked so weak and helpless, so fragile. She was walking between people, asking them if they could give her some food. People were passing her by and no one wanted to help her. Some of them even pushed her to move out of their way. She sat down on the snow and started to cry, but still, no one stopped to even look at her or ask her if she's cold or hungry.
As this image faded out, another one appeared in front of Dante.
Now it was spring, he knew it because the snow was melting away. Amy looked older now, but she was still a child, about 9 years old. She was walking carefully between the people who were rushing on the market place. When an old lady went over to the salesman to ask for the price of something, Amy used her chance and grabbed an apple and run away. The salesman was yelling after her with anger, but she wasn't stopping.
Dante shook his head, and on his surprise the image faded.
"I didn't know it was this hard for her" he whispered to himself
He knew that it's all his imagination, but he was pretty sure that Amy had to live like that to survive. Now he remembered Zhalias words as well. They were echoing in his mind.
'I would be a whore'
Without any warning, a new picture appeared in front of him.
He saw a girl standing on the streets. She was dressed into clothes which barely covered her body, although it was really cold. She wore a tank top with a deep cleavage, a really short skirt which was barely covering her underwear and she had high heels. She was really skinny and bruised all over her body. Dante thought that he knows her from somewhere, so he decided to see who she is. As Dante approached her, she turned around and looked at him with fear.
"Zhalia…" Dante said as he looked at her.
It was Zhalia, his Zhalia, his beloved one who was standing on the streets. Her chocolate eyes weren't as shiny as usually. They were darker and full with fear and sadness. Dante shook his head one more time, and the picture of Zhalia faded, but her eyes were still haunting him.
He walked over to the table and sat down. He wasn't able to take one more picture. Not about Zhalia. Not like this one.
But his mind wasn't listening to him. It wanted to show him one more picture. This last picture made him shiver in fear and anger.
He saw Zhalia, the same Zhalia who was standing on the street in the last picture. She was now taking her clothes off in a dark room. As she took them off, a guy pushed her roughly down on the bed. "Nee" she silently said as he spread her legs. The guy only smiled devilishly. He threw money on the table beside the bed. Zhalia looked away and let him do whatever he wants to do. The guy caught her wrists and started to get rougher with her with every push. "Stop het!" she screamed at him, but without any effort. Tears started to roll down her cheeks from the pain and disgust.
Dante shivered roughly and the picture disappeared. Dante looked on the floor now, the pictures left, but he felt bad, really bad. This last picture made him feel sick, and he was barely managing not to throw up.
He stood up to take a glass of water, and on his way to the sink he looked out into the living room. There were Amy and Zhalia sitting next to each other, now calmly chatting about things while smiling and laughing softly. He looked at Zhalia and saw her chocolate eyes shine as always.
He calmed down at this picture. Now he knew that all those pictures were only the result of his imagination.
This was the reality, Amy and Zhalia being safe in his house. He was sure that what he saw can't happen.
He won't let it happen. Both Amy and Zhalia were in his team, and he will do anything to take care of them and give them a chance in life. To give them a fair chance.
He got back to reality when he heard Sophie and Lok talk in the living room. He went over and joined them.
Just to make sure to make Zhalia feel safe, he sat down beside her. She only smiled at him, and he smiled back.
"How do you feel Amy?" Lok asked as he threw his bag on the floor.
"Good, Thank you" Amy smiled at him.
Sophie wasn't too rude with her anymore, but she still kept the distance, although they still had small fights (Dante and Zhalia always separated them before they could start a real fight).
'Incoming message from the Huntik Foundation'
Dante went to the big screen and answered. On the screen appeared Metz with Guggenheim behind him, doing some paper work.
Dante was glad to see that Metz isn't alone. His opinion was that Metz is still too weak, and that he needs someone to take care of him.
"Hello team. I see you're all here, that's good" Metz said with a big smile on his face.
Everyone greeted him.
"Dante, have you told them the news?" he asked and his smile widened.
"No, not yet. Lok and Sophie just arrived, and Amy Zhalia just came downstairs, so I didn't had the chance to do it until now" Dante answered, knowing what his mentor is talking about.
Amy looked at Zhalia with a questioning look, but Zhalia shrugged and shook her head.
"Oh, in that case we'll stop by later. Goodbye" Metz and Guggenheim said goodbye and the screen went blank again.
"Um, Dante?" Zhalia looked at him, waiting for an explanation.
Dante smiled a bit before he started to talk.
"You remember what happened a week ago?" he looked around who will answer first.
"I don't know, let me think. Oh, yeah! I almost got killed by a Finnish vampire" Zhalia said full with sarcasm.
"Ok, that too, but I'm talking about something else" he answered with patience.
"I know! Cherit came back into the team!" Lok cheered.
"Aye, my boy" said Cherit and flew on his shoulder to give him a high five. Dante sighed.
"You guys really don't know or are you doing it on purpose?" Dante asked a bit irritated.
The others started to laugh.
"So you know what I'm talking about" he said with a smile.
"Yes. You're talking about Amy and her test to become a seeker" Sophie said.
Dante nodded.
"Cherit, you were the judge. Was everything alright?"
"Everything expect one thing" the white titan said.
"What, that Dante cheated?" Amy asked with a grin.
"No. Expect the fact that a vampire attacked you. Besides that one thing, I think you were great" Cherit answered her.
"Is anyone against that we take Amy in as a full-righted member of the Huntik Foundation and out team?" Dante asked and looked around again.
Sophie started to raise her hand, but Lok quickly caught it with his and held it down. Sophie blushed a bit when she saw that Lok is holding her hand. She looked at him, and Lok winked at her with a smile. That made her blush a darker shade of red. She smiled back at him and completely forgot why she started to raise her hand.
"Good. In that case…" Dante said and stepped closer to Amy.
Zhalia pushed her up till now and Amy was now facing Dante.
"As your mentor and team leader I want to welcome you. Welcome to the team Amy Greene" Dante said and they shook hands.
Amy stood still for a moment and than she suddenly said: "Oh, why the heck not?"
With that she hugged Dante.
"Thank you" she said with happiness.
The rest of the team went to congratulate her. They were all glad and happy, but Amy was the happiest of them all. Not that she got a team; she got friends and a family she can always trust and go back to.
XXX Somewhere in Italy XXX
In the same moment somewhere in Italy, in a castle made of stone, in a dark room, the Dark Lord was sitting on his throne earned with death and blood.
He was dressed in red royal clothes with a black coat on his back. He was old hundreds of years, but no one could say it when they looked at his face. He looked like he had 25 or 30 years, but he was far more experienced. His face was pale, his fangs were visible across his grayish lips, his light-blonde hair was falling all across his back and his bloody red eyes were shining with anger and pure hatred.
Beside him were sitting the other two Lords, one from the left and one from the right side.
One was wearing brown royal clothes with a black cloak on them, his eyes also red, his fangs also visible, and his hair was brown and short.
The third one was wearing the same clothes as the second one and the same black cloak on his back. The hood of the cloak was on his head, so his face wasn't visible at all.
All around them were vampires, their guards who were keeping them safe, although they could protect themselves. They were also following their orders. Just like when he ordered to remove Tuomas' body from the streets of Venice, they did it in less then an hour.
"So she's ready to give her life for her human friends. That's good. She has a weak point. I will get you and when I do, you will beg me to kill you" the Dark Lord said with an evil grin and his evil laughter echoed through the stone walls of the big castle where death lies for everyone who is brave or stupid enough to step in.
The End
So, that's it my dear readers! Renewal is done! So, as I said, I want you to tell me what you thought about this last chapter and the whole story. I hope I made you satisfied by writing all these chapters, and I hope you won't have to much negative thoughts about the story. Sorry if I have messed up some things, but this is my really first story. I'll try to improve for the next one, which is by the way, the sequel to this one. Thank you all for the support and the great reviews! I'll start the next story this week (if everything goes as planed). So, I want your opinions about this! Thank you!
