Hey Everybody, Bropower125 here, and welcome to chapter 2 of the rewrite. I know last chapter I didn't put much dialogue (Speech ( I believe that one reviewer got it wrong, not sure though...still understood what he meant though.)) and because I understand the importance of speech (Even though I hardly ever use it, for sake of hoping to not be OOC) I will try to use it much more than before, let's hope that for the sake of this fanfic I don't get too OOC.


I do not own Rosario+Vampire


"Hey, Tsukune, are you coming?" said the young yasha known as Fang-Fang.

Tsukune quickly snapped out of his thought induced daze and ran after the young Yasha. When Tsukune caught up to the yasha the two young yokai had found themselves in the jungle on the island. The sound of rattling bones could be heard all around them. As if on cue, Fang-Fang shivered uncontrollably and said,

"Creepy"

Tsukune shrugged and continued walking; he didn't really know how to respond. The pair continued through the jungle and found a monster durian. Knowing enough about the durians; the two decided not to follow it and continued on their path with the durian following behind them trying to lure them to its host body.

"Hey, Tsukune, have you ever thought about joining my family's gang? It could protect you a lot better than hiding at yokai academy ever could" Fang-Fang tried to seem as un-biased as possible during his little speech that was solely intended to get Tsukune, a dhampir, who had very high potential on his side.

"No, not really" Tsukune said making it very evident that he could care less about being in a gang.

"Well, maybe you should think about it" the yasha started to wonder if he was pushing too hard and would scare Tsukune away.

"Maybe," said Tsukune who was simply saying it to get the Yasha to shut up about his family's gang.

This is going to be a long walk if he doesn't stop talking about his little gang, thought Tsukune.

"Is that a no?" said Fang-Fang who clearly didn't know when to shut up.

"Yes, that's a no" said Tsukune who was starting to get peeved.

"Okay..." said the Yasha who was a little down in the dumps after Tsukune's rejection.

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After a lot of walking the two found a small city-like village town that seemed to have a large solar powered machine that shouldn't have been working anymore. It looked like it had been repaired recently and the two quickly realized that this was the machine they were looking for.

"Think you can smash it?" the yasha said to the dhampir.

To reply to Fang-Fang's question Tsukune smashed the machine and then cleaned the dust off his hands by wiping them on his pants. Just then the rattling sound grew larger and the two looked behind them only to find a rattle snake.

Phew, thought Tsukune.

Just then they heard the sound again and it wasn't from the rattle snake. They looked up to where the sound was coming from and saw a giant bone monster right above them. The two began to run for their lives. Eventually they came upon a dead-end. The dead-end had a nice open space and lots of blood stains. This must have been where the thing got all of its bones from.

"Should we take it on?" said the Yasha who wouldn't let Tsukune speak first at all.

"I guess..." said Tsukune who was still a little rattled about the whole thing.

As soon as Tsukune felt like the gashadokuro was gone it seemingly appeared out of nowhere and began to attack. Tsukune started to notice a sort of attack pattern. It would go invisible long enough to make you put your guard down and then reappear and attack you. Tsukune figured that while the beast was invisible it couldn't make it itself invincible giving it a weakness. Tsukune quickly punched in its direction as it was becoming invisible which caused a few of its bones to shatter from Tsukune's attack.

"Attack it while it's invisible!" yelled Tsukune who didn't like the idea of fighting against the giant bone monster that could literally become invincible, one bit. Of course the monster could only become invincible for short periods of time and so because of this it became invisible to avoid taking hits when it could actually get hurt. However when Tsukune learned of its weakness it started to try to alter its attack pattern and attack while invisible which would have been scary had it gone for Fang-Fang however being bat-like Tsukune was able to hear where it was and countered it's attack; hitting it right between the eyes causing it's skull to shatter.

"Well then..." Fang-Fang said while wiping the sweat from his forehead due to trying to summon a creature and ending up with his panda, which made him utterly useless.

The two then started their walk back to the boat. The fight between the two children and the bone monster had been oddly one sided, almost like it had already been weakened.

When they reached the boat they got on and without a word Nurari set sail back to a dock near the academy.


Sorry for the relatively short chapter. I hope this was good to read. I really put in as much effort as I could to make Fang-Fang and Tsukune seem believable with all the speech I put in so I hope it was worth the read.