Guys, what's going on? Over 400 people came onto my story since the last time the chapter was updated. Out of those, I had two reviews (thank you so much to mariovsluigi4 and Darkqueenofwonderland, you guys made my day) and two votes in the poll. Is something wrong with my writing? This was supposed to be the movies, but I would like some more feedback. Let's say 5 more reviews and 5 votes in the polls before the next chapter. Am I asking too much? Please tell me...

This is the chapter I intended as the surprise, by the way. Kinda switched it up a bit.

Jack

Before they went to the movies, Jack insisted that they stop at the mall. He wanted Elsa to see everything that was created here. What better place to do it at then at a mall?

When Elsa stepped through the doors for the first time, he had to smile. She was completely enthralled. Her eyes were wide as she scanned all the various stores lining the tiled hall. People were everywhere, talking and laughing and generally having a good time. A perfect place to let her see what the modern world had to offer. He grinned and snuck up to her. "Like it? Figured you'd want a few souvenirs for when we go back..." She laughed and threw her arms around him. "Wow Jack, this place is incredible! What's in the stores?" He smirked with the playful look he had perfected when he became a spirit that would make you glad he was on your side. "Do you want to find out?"

He learned that window shopping could actually be kind of fun. Elsa went from place to place, asking what seemed like millions of questions about what was displayed for all to see and, hopefully, buy. He pulled out the remaining money he had and counted it out. Perfect. He secretly set some aside, put it in his pocket, and gave the rest to Elsa, telling her to buy what she wanted. "But be careful" he added. "Some of this stuff is cheaply made and not of very good quality. Check with me before you buy anything." She nodded trustingly, and grinned. "So that means you have to stay with me the whole time..." Jack gathered her in a hug. "I wouldn't leave you behind anyway." When they pulled apart, he swore her eyes shone with tears.

At least she didn't try to buy the whole store. She found a pair of fuzzy, snowflake covered socks that she adored and had to purchase, a mini snowman doll that she said reminded her of Olaf, and a game of Monopoly, which she looked at the cover of and got hooked instantly. After she had bought all of those, she checked the war of money. "Um...I think that there's twenty six dollars left?" Jack came up to her. "No Ice Queen, sixteen. That one's a ten, not a twenty. Close though." She nodded in understanding before looking up. "What's that?"

Jack looked at the store she was pointing at and grinned happily. "Ah, Lindor Chocolate shop. Best place to buy chocolate in the universe." She nodded thoughtfully, then gasped. "Anna did ask for modern chocolate..." He smiled with understanding and quickly grabbed her hand. "What are we waiting for then?" He pulled her into the shop.

He watched as she marveled at all the flavors. When she heard about the 'dollar a bag' deal, she insisted on filling multiple bags for them and everyone at home. They ended up with one for him, one for Elsa, two for Anna (Elsa insisted on it), one for Kristoff, one for Olaf, one for Gerda (again, she insisted), and a final bag for the couple to share when they got back to Arendalle. Both knew they would finish their own here. Elsa wanted to get a bag for Sven, but Jack advised against it. He knew that reindeer could get sick from candy. When she asked him how he knew, he admitted he had tried something once with the reindeer at the pole. It had ended with eight very sick reindeer, one furious North, and Jack running for his life. Elsa could not stop laughing the whole way out of the store.

They made their way to the big glass dome that resided in the center off the mall. After relaxing on one of the benches for a few minutes, Jack turned to Elsa. "I'll be right back, I have to get something." He sped off before she could protest. After quickly speeding around a corner, he checked to make sure that she hadn't followed him. He wanted his trip to be a surprise for her.

It took him about ten minutes to locate the store. After about a million wrong turns, he found himself standing in front of the town's famous jewelry store. He walked in to find himself swamped in a tidal wave of diamonds, rubies, emeralds, sapphires, and more precious gems. It was a bit overwhelming, to be honest.

One of the clerks, a perky brunette, asked him what he was looking for. He thought for a minute, then decided. "A snowflake encrusted with sapphires on a chain, maybe with some pearls on the chain as well. Do you have anything of the sort?" The woman seemed to think about it before leading him to the back of the shop. She stopped at a display case and pointed, saying "I believe this is what you are looking for?" The necklace contained a single snowflake the size of a quarter, which was apparently silver, that had blue gems splayed out across it. The necklace also had three pearls on each side of the snowflake, each a small round ball the size of a pea. These were all stung on a silver chain so thin he could barely see it. Jack could only stare and nod. This was perfect.

As the kind lady rang up the bill, Jack's eyes wandered the shop in an aimless way. While mentally browsing, his gaze drifted over a small piece of jewelry. He stopped and walked over to where it lay in its case. His eyes widened as he got a better look at it. It was a ring, with a snowflake right in the middle. The snowflake looked a bit like the one on the necklace, except for the gems. These were diamonds, not sapphires. The lady came over with a bag containing the necklace in it. When she caught him looking at the ring, she nodded. "This is one of our finest engagement rings. Do you have someone special to give it too?" she added, lifting an eyebrow in the air. He laughed. "Maybe. I might return for it later, though. Thanks." She smiled and waved as he exited the store.

His thoughts were not on the necklace he had purchased for his girlfriend, but on the ring. He could imagine offering it to her in the future, watching her eyes tear up as she nodded and he slipped it on her finger... He shook his head. Not a talk for today. For now, concentrate on the now.

Besides, he got just as good a reaction from the necklace.

I believe I covered all my bases above.

Peace out peeps,

awesomesauce90