Hello everyone! I have a question for you all. Due to Modern Warfare Remastered, I have been toying with the idea of the first story. FNaF: Dark Rising Remastered. It honestly is the best of all my stories, but the writing done in it is just plain awful. I can improve the writing for it, and revise the screw ups I've done in it. Who knows, maybe even certain things that happens within it could even change, at least slightly to make some things happen much more smoothly. I would love everyone's opinions on this.
- FlameSpeed
[FFP]
Flare had his katana blade locked with Flame's scabre. Flame chuckled as he twisted the blade, causing Flare to drop his katana. Flare tried to grab the blade, but Flame quickly punched Flare backwards, and kicked the katana behind him, into some curtains. Exo stepped in and tackled Flame to the ground.
"Get a grip damn it!" Exo shouted at Flame. Flame smirked, and kicked Exo upwards, pinning him to the wall.
"Make me." Flame said. Foxy growled, coming out of the safe room.
"Damn it all! I've had enough o yer bullshit!" Foxy snapped as he sharpened his hook. He ran at Flame. Flame stared at Foxy and slid under his legs, using his claws to cut at the legs. Foxy groaned, and put his hand up, attracting Flame's scabre out of his hands into his.
"Huh, sort of like a cutlass..." Foxy muttered as he got closer to Flame. Flame teleported from vision. Foxy growled, looking around him.
"Stop using yer cheap tactics!" Foxy shouted, looking around him. Flame came from above, using his elbow to hit Foxy up on the head. It cracked the back of his head, causing a large amount of oil to leak out, as well as him dropping the scabre. Flame grabbed the scabre, and was about to mortally wound Foxy. Flare groaned as he got back up on his feet. Flare shook his head, and took a knife off of a table. He threw it at the scabre. knocking it out of Flame's hand. Flame turned to look at Flare.
"Ohhh, why would ya ruin the kill?" Flame said with a laugh. Flare growled as he grabbed another knife.
"Flame... snap out of it! Please... you're trying to... slay your own family..." Flare pleaded, readying the knife in case Flame tries something. Flame laughed at Flare, cracking his knuckles as he got closer to him.
"Snap out of it? Oh Flare, I'm as well as ever!" Flame responded, pointing his scabre at Flare, "You're all the insane ones!"
Flare sighed as he held the knife, "This is just like some Peter Pan shit." Flare thought as he pointed the knife at Flame.
"Do I need to subdue you now?" Flare asked, staying motionless. Flame smirked, running at Flare. He slashed towards Flare, but Flare deflected the blow with the knife. Flame skidded to a stop, and turned at Flare.
"The f*ck is this?" Flame muttered as he charged towards Flare again. Flare barely moved from his original position. He again used the knife to block the scabre from hitting him.
"Flame!" Swift's voice echoed through the halls. Flame perked his ears up, and smirked. Swift ran into the room, her daggers held in her hands.
"Oh look who decides to come back..." Flame said, staring at Swift. Exo groaned as he looked up at Swift.
"Swift... I said get out..." Exo said as he slowly got back onto his feet. Swift stared at Exo.
"I know what I'm doing. Trust me." Swift said as she looked back at Flame.
"The lion returns to get hunted. How foolish." Flame said, scratching his claws against the scabre. Swift whimpered at Flame's voice, and shook her head.
"Stop the unnecessary fight! We're not the ones you're suppose to fight! Swift stated. Flame chuckled.
"I fight whomever seems fit." Flame said as he cracked his neck.
"We're family! We don't fight each other! The true enemy is Clyde! We need to stop him!" Swift pleaded.
"Clyde? Why would I care about him?" Flame said as he slowly started to get closer to Swift.
"He put us all in this damn mess! Clyde is the one screwing everything up! Clyde's the reason you're acting like this!" Swift snapped at Flame.
"Well then he's how I got this power to destroy you..." Flame said coldly. Swift grit her teeth, her daggers prepared.
"Flame..." Swift said with sadness in her voice.
Flame rushed towards Swift, the anger still running through him. Swift used her dagger to block Flame's attack, and slash at him with the 2nd. A little bit of oil was leaking through Flame's hip, and he growled. Flame swung his sword at Swift, and she leaped backwards to dodge the attack. Flame growled, and used his claws to nick Swift in the shoulder. Swift whimpered as she felt the cut, and a bit of oil was coming out from it. As Swift was distracted, Flame got a hold of Swift's tail. Swift yelped as she was swung into the ground, breaking parts of her back. Large amounts of oil was now leaking from her.
"Swift!" Exo shouted, "No!" Flame simply kept laughing as he raised up his scabre.
Toy Flame came into the room, holding Talia in her arms. Talia watched as Flame was about to cut down Swift.
"D-daddy?" Talia said, clearly terrified. Flame perked his ears, and turned to see the source of the sound. Flame gasped when he saw Talia in Toy Flame's arms.
"T-Talia..." Flame said as he lifted the sword away from Swift, putting it in the scabbard.
"Talia!" Flame exclaimed happily as he started walking towards them. Talia managed to get herself out of Toy Flame's arms, and ran to Flame. Talia jumped up into Flame's arms, knocking the both of them down to the ground.
"Ha ha ha... ha ha ha!" Flame laughed happily as he hugged Talia. Talia nuzzled Flame's chest. Toy Flame grinned as she watched the two of them get reunited.
"It's been awhile, hasn't it?" Toy Flame asked. Flame nodded, "Yeah, It has..." Flare grinned, and walked up to them.
"Are you alright now?" Flare asked. Flame looked up at Flare.
"Yeah... core lock... something I really don't enjoy." Flame responded. Toy Flame grinned, and took a power core out of her pocket.
"We got a power core for ya, we've just got to replace the corrupted one." Toy Flame said.
"Good, I'd rather not be in core lock much longer." Flame said as he got up, with Talia in his arms. Flame looked at Swift, and frown.
"And... we need someone to fix Swift..." Flame said, drooping his ears. Toy Flame nodded.
"Foxy should know how to, but he'll need to fix himself too." Toy Flame said. Foxy got up from the ground, holding his head.
"Don't ye worry bout me lass, I'll be fine, just can't fight against Clyde when the time comes." Foxy told them.
"Didn't Mike teach you the basics?" Flame asked as he turned to look at Foxy. Foxy nodded.
"Repairs and safe core replacement, everything that I need fer ye all." Foxy said, "I'll just need tah go tah the Parts & Service room tah fix ye all up." Flame nodded, then looked down at Swift. Flame put down Talia on the ground, and looked her in the eyes.
"Look sweat pea, mom and dad needs to go get fixed, but Toy Flame here will be here for ya. We'll be back soon, I promise." Flame said to Talia. Talia nodded, and looked up at Toy Flame.
"Aunt Toy Flame?" Talia said, going to her. Toy Flame sighed.
"How many times must I say- fine yeah Aunt Toy Flame." Toy Flame said as she knelt down. Flame and Flare nodded, and went to Swift. They grabbed each arm, and lifted her up. Oil that was on her back splashed onto the two of them. Foxy walked up to Exo, and held his hand out. Exo took the hand, and Foxy pulled him up. Foxy had Exo's arm around him to help him walk.
"Alright, do we need tah get anyone else tah the Parts n Service room?" Foxy asked. Flame shook his head.
"I think we're all we need." Flame said as they all trekked to the Parts and Service room. The room was dusty when they entered. Foxy let go of Exo, and Exo sat on the wall. Foxy went to the table, and wiped off the dust that settled on it.
"Disgusting." Foxy said as he used a convenient towel to wipe off the dust, "Settle the lass down on the table o'vr here." Flame and Flare went over to the table, and laid Swift down.
"First and foremost, we need tah turn off ye all. I'll let Flare and Exo stay on fer now, but Swift needs tah be off fer me tah to this safely. Flame doesn't really matter; the lad's just on no matter what setting we have him in when he's in core lock." Foxy told them. Flame nodded, and went to Swift's back panel. He opened it up, and pulled the switch on the inside to turn her off.
"Done, what now?" Flame asked. Foxy grabbed the core that Toy Flame gave him.
"Well normally, ye do the more deadly wounds, but fer safety we have tah do Flame first, who knows how long he'll last in the happy state he's in?" Foxy explained. Flame sighed.
"I suppose so..." Flame said as he grabbed the hatch to his chest. He opened it up, and the flesh covered endoskeleton was there, as well as the power core, severed in half. Foxy groaned.
"I sometimes forget that ye have that shit in ye." Foxy said as he sharpened his hook, "This is the reason we have tah turn ye off fer the operation." Foxy cut 3 parts of the endo skeleton going towards the power core. The power core simply fell out of Flame, and the broken core was laying on the ground in front of him. Flame grit his teeth.
"Holy shit that hurt." Flame said as oil was spraying everywhere. Foxy quickly inserted the new power core, and it fit neatly. Flame flipped his switch, and electricity started flowing. Some strange green electricity was expelled out of Flame, and landed on the ground. Exo perked up his ears.
"Whoa, is that bad?" Exo asked. Foxy shrugged.
"It's probably nothing tah worry about." Foxy said as he looked at Swift.
"Now this'll be harder tah fix; the lass's entire back is fractured." Foxy said as he started cleaning off the oil. Sure enough, the back was fractured in 7 pieces. Flame drooped his ears.
"So, what will we do?" Flame asked. Foxy nodded, and grabbed some material spray.
"Huh, this was that experimental healing device, wasn't it?" Foxy asked as he spray some of it on a part of fracture. Sure enough, it made the metal regrow. Flame's eyes widened.
"Holy shit..." Flame said as Foxy continued spraying the bottle. After 10 minutes, Swift's back was completely fixed.
"Wow, I love the future." Flare said. Foxy was about to turn Swift back on, but Flame stopped him.
What are ye doing?" Foxy asked.
"Just... gimme a second." Flame said, as he was looking around. Flame grinned as he found a golden gear, around the size of Swift's ring finger.
"Is there a blow torch?" Flame asked. Flare looked around, and grabbed one.
"What are you trying to do?" Flare asked. Flame grinned.
"You'll see. Soon." Flame said as he used the blow torch to heat up the gear to a bright orange. He then molded the gear into a ring. Flame went to a specific tile of the floor, and broke it, revealing a small capsule. He opened up the capsule, and inside was a small diamond. he placed the diamond onto the cooling ring, and put it down.
"Done." Flame said as he grinned happily. Exo perked his ears, and smirked.
"Oh, I know what you're doing~" Exo said as he motioned to Swift. Flame hesitated.
"Yo-you don't know that!" Flame said as he grabbed a container to put the ring in. He then closed the container and put it in his pocket. Exo chuckled.
"I think I know exactly what you're planning on doing." Exo said. Flame looked away.
"N-no you don't!" Flame said, as Foxy flipped Swift's power switch.
"Alright, fer the rest o ye it isn't that complicated." Foxy said as Swift was powering on.
Ooooo, what is Flame doing? Tell me what you guys think Flame is doing in the reviews below! Anyways, I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter. Don't forget to leave reviews!