The Castle of secrets: chapter 2

So I think this is okay? Thanks for the reviews though, sorta of motivating. Let's get onto the story.

So what Lance understood, with his very short attention span, that his town. That was supposedly human, was actually full of magical creatures that were suppressed by the an old fungus, planted by Zarkon, Emperor of the Galra Empire. What Lance didn't under stand, is to how he became a magical creature. "So how are you doing this again?" Coran had also explained that he was in fact a demon, and there was also an incredibly beautiful demon princess in the castle called Allura, who also had a very good aim. Lance's still aching from that Ye olde lamp. "Well you step into the circle over there, we light some candles, chant a few words and pronto! Your true form!" Coran was a bit loud to say the least. "We will have to wait for the other rider though, he should be hear soon" Allura's voice was elegant, it matched her stride as she walked forward to bitch slap him in the face. "That is for thinking my voice is elegant!" "WAAAH?" "Alteans are a telepathic breed of demons. The pink marks on my face glow when I hear thoughts" she pointed to them on her cheeks, just under her eyes. "But what do you mean by rider?" "You, along with four others, will ride powerful beasts of great strength. They each have unique qualities, but together, they form the most dangerous weapon in all of the kingdoms, Voltron!" She raised her hands up, and behind her a holographic beast appeared. It's head had 5 eyes on each side, and its jaws were filled with rows of different teeth. It had a white under belly and it's back and head were black. Each of the eyes were a combination of black, green, red, blue and yellow. One of its large clawed arms were red, the other was green. One of its large legs was blue and the other yellow. Its tail was black and its biggest feature, its wings, were red and yellow.

As the holographic beast retracted, footsteps were heard and a teenager with a black mullet and a cropped jacket walked in. "Am I interrupting anything?" His voice was monotone, but it held the slightest hint of confusion. "Keith! Your here! Meet Lance, he'll be in the ceremony with you. As he's also a fellow rider!" Coran squeezed Keith's shoulder. "KEITH!?" Lance was gobsmacked, his rival was a rider?

I hope you enjoyed this, I'm hoping to lengthen the chapters as I go on. I'll try to update again, so please enjoy this next enstalment!