Hey guys! I am posting this to let you know that 1.) My next chapter will be done and posted by Saturday and 2.) I am now open to suggestions to what will happen to the story! If you want them to go on a date and eat Thai food, suggest it! If you want some muggers to try to attack them but Asami and Korra kick their asses, suggest it! I will do my best to accommodate your wishes. The only things I won't allow (That I can think of right now) are Asami and Korra breaking up, one of them dying/getting raped/some other violent thing happening, and one of them cheating on the other (Maybe in future chapters, but not this early in their relationship.). If your request is something I don't want to do, I will let you know and ask you to revise your request or think of something else. I will write chapters in the order of the requests sent, so don't worry if it's been a few days since you sent your request and I'm posting other things, I'll get to yours! I will always message you back saying I got your request and when you can expect the request to be finished and posted. (No promises on exact dates, things happen).
I also want to thank all of you who reviewed my story so far, here's a shoutout:
Thank you:
Guest- This is definitely a new take on these two. Most of the time Asami is the one with the abusive family but I like the change and the fact the story starts with them knowing each other so you can go straight into their relationship.
Response- Thank you guest! I did want to change things up, I don't like it when the main character of a show is perfect and is the savior, so I switched things up, wrote in Asami's perspective and had Korra have the abusive family.
Guest- Cool story... Update soon please...
Response- Thanks for your imput, I will be done with the fourth chapter and have it posted by Saturday.
amateraszu- captivating story, look forward to seeing it play out. But I am curious if Korra's friends/Asami now know she was being repeatedly abused why would they go to Korra's house without backup?
Response- If it were me, I wouldn't want to make my friends go and see my abusive father, so I wouldn't tell them. Asami already knew they were going and if I had a girlfriend who wanted to go with me, I wouldn't say no. They were also rushed to get it over with, so Asami also wouldn't realize that they should call for backup, and Korra didn't remind her.
Wolfiememo123- I like your idea on this book and I think it'll get a lot of positive remarks due to it's main idea and I will look forward to seeing the direction it takes. The story is a bit rushed but it you went into detail on some things it would be a lot better. Hope to read more.
Response- Thanks for the feedback Wolfie! I will definitely slow down, right now I have been a bit rushed with school, so I've had less time to write. I tend to write a lot of really good stuff in spurts, to get anger or sadness out of my system, but the stories I write on here are written because I have lots of ideas and I want to incorporate them into something others will read. Thanks again ofr the feedback and compliments!
I hope I get lots of requests from you all, talk later! Please review, I will always message you back (As long as you aren't a guest, then I can't message you back) and/or put you into my shoutout with my response! If you want me to do something don't be afraid to ask, I don't bite!
-A Game of Bones