Author's Note
I have to ask, has this story actually been funny to anyone? I've tried to put in some humor, but haven't really heard anyone talk about it. Is it just the smut that's good? I know it sound a bit insecure, and it is, but I just want to know if I should continue on with the bits of humor I try to put in, or just focus on the smut.
I also might be doing two chapters per day, mainly because every odd numbered chapter doesn't seem to properly update the story. I could always just remove the chapter and reupload it, but I don't want people to get two emails. I've been there, it's annoying. So, if you want to make sure you're staying updated for the most recent chapters, make sure you follow this story and turn on updates.
Also, this is a the shortest chapter I've written so far, but mainly because it's main point is smut. But, with a twist! A bit of an obvious one, probably, but it's something I decided to go with.
Warning! This story will contain language, sexual situations, and possibly fetishes that some people may feel uncomfortable with. If you are easily offended or disturbed, don't complain, you've been warned.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto
Chapter 16: A Taste of Heaven
"Sorry about earlier, we weren't really expecting anyone over." Ino said to their guests. It had been a couple hours after Naruko and Satsuki had come by, and the girls had finally woken up. Temari was busy cooking brunch, Kin was washing sheets, and Ino and Tayuya were talking with the two new girls, who seemed to look scarred for life. As for Yoichi?
"Yeah, I forgot to mention what room not to go in, too. So it's my bad." He said, lying across the laps of Ino and Tayuya, his head resting in the latter's lap. What? It was comfy.
"W-well, I guess it was to be expected…" Naruko said, still flushed, not able to make eye contact with anyone. Satsuki looked as if she had gotten over it, but her inner thoughts were different.
"If there was something like… that, then we could have just waited a bit longer." The raven-haired girl said, Yoichi shrugging, only to get hit on the head by Tayuya.
"He can be a bit of an asshole sometimes." The red head said with a sigh, idly rubbing where she hit him. "But hell, he's one good fuck, that's for sure."
Naruko and Satsuki definitely weren't the most comfortable, hearing about anything sexual, especially with him laid out over the two they were talking with. Thankfully, he sat up, sitting between Tayuya and Ino who both scooted closer to him.
"I'd also like to apologize for anything that might be done or said that makes you uncomfortable in any way. I'll do my best to control myself, but as for the others…" He looked to Ino and Tayuya. Ino just shrugged.
"I'm not. I mean, look at them! They look so yummy~" She gave them a lecherous grin, licking her lips slowly. Tayuya smirked and nodded.
"Oh yes~ If either of you felt like having a fuck, I wouldn't mind~" She said, doing the same, before both her and Ino began to giggle. Yoichi sighed.
"As you can see, they've got little modesty left while here. And it's not that much of an improvement in public either." The others nodded slowly.
"Maybe we should find another place…" Naruko said, making Ino and Tayuya drop their smile.
"No, don't worry, we were just teasing. Guess it just went too far. Yoichi will put us on a short leash whenever you're around." Ino said, Satsuki crossing her arms and furrowing her eyebrows.
"You'd like that, wouldn't you?" Ino could neither confirm nor deny that statement. "Whatever, hopefully this isn't for long. But we're at least going make the most of it. Kind of like… a vacation or something." Satsuki said, Yoichi tilting his head.
"Well, that's one way to put it… But I'm still confused as to why you went from leaving the village to just sticking around?" Satsuki shrugged.
"I don't have the seal anymore, and I pretty much failed. Plus, these are no longer the same circumstances." Naruko still gave her a scornful look.
"Is that really the reason why? Or is it because you-" She wouldn't be able to interrupt her sentence, Satsuki pouncing on her to get her to be quiet, the two fighting each other on the ground, albeit not in the regular way.
"Yep, that's Sasuke and Naruto for you." Ino said with a sigh. Tayuya leaned in to whisper.
"So, who do you think is going to be Master's slut first?" Yoichi sighed.
"Now, now, they're guests. They'll be here until we figure out exactly what happened." Tayuya rolled her eyes.
"Oh, come on! That's because they want to leave. You give them a fucking reason to stay, and they fucking will. Besides, I like these whores better than who we had before." Ino tilted her head.
"Now that I think about it, it's hard not to agree. Just look at Satsuki's ass, it's perfectly heart-shaped! And Naruko's lips? Wouldn't you want those around your cock?" Ino asked, leaning in to Yoichi. He let out a sigh.
"I can't just mark them like that… It wouldn't feel right." The girls thought for a moment.
"Well, why do you need to mark them? Cant your Seduction Fist still work either way?" Yoichi blinked. That was a fair point. This called for a bit of extra experimenting. But, that would have to wait as Temari came out, announcing that the food was ready. Yoichi ate with his girls to either side of him, while Naruko and Satsuki sat away from each other and the rest of them.
They spent some time talking to them, trying to get to know more about them, but any sexual innuendo or joke would always make Naruko stop talking for a short bit. Once everyone was done, Kin and Tayuya took the duty of cleaning up, Ino and Temari heading out to do some work, promising when they get back they'd take Naruko and Satsuki out shopping for whatever they needed. Wanting to see if anything about the vllage was different, Satsuki went out as well.
That left Yoichi alone with Naruko, who looked like she was trying to hide inside her jacket after all the teasing and jokes.
"Hey, mind if we talked in the other room?" He asked her. Naruko looked at him, alarmed, but from his expression, she could tell he wasn't up to anything. They went back to the room she picked out to sleep in, her sitting on the bed, scooting away from him some when he sat down as well.
"I can tell you're really nervous about being here. It definitely isn't the same place you grew up at, no matter how similar it looks. I know things arne't being made easier by the other's jokes that are making you uncomfortable, but they're just trying to help lighten the mood for you. All I want to know, is how I can help you be more comfortable." He gently placed on hand on hers. She thought of pulling away, but felt like he was just trying to be nice. Plus, his hand was so warm…
"Well… I don't know… it's just so weird… I just feel a bit… scared." She said, looking into his eyes. She didn't notice until now how they seemed to change color. It was almost mesmerizing…
"I know you must be, and I don't blame you. I want you to know, I'm here for you, and for Satsuki. I may sometimes seem like a jerk… well, most times… and it's not that usual to have so many girls around me, but I care for each and every one of them, and I'll care for you both as long as you're here." She felt herself move a bit closer to him, but didn't think anything of it. She could only stare into his eyes, feeling the warmth of his hand holding hers.
"But… why?" It came out almost like a whisper. His other hand reached up, gently cupping her cheek. She had seen him do it to the other girls, and they enjoyed it, but she couldn't tell why until now. Her eyes closed as she leaned into his touch. It was so warm… so comforting… so caring… She eventually let out a soft whine as his hand pulled away, trying to lean in to it again.
"You really are adorable." He said, smiling at her. She blushed brightly, but instead of embarrassment, she felt… happy. Then, she widened her eyes some, the scent of something tingling in her nose. While she ddn't have the Nine-Tails inside her, she had a few of her senses heightened because of the leftover chakra.
She didn't know what it was, but the scent was so tantalizing. It was like the smell of ramen, but multiplied by one hundred. She bit her lip, feeling her body heat up. She tried to keep herself composed, but it was too late. She needed it. What did she need? She couldn't tell. Standing up, ignoring Yoichi completely, she sniffed the air, trying to find the source.
"Naruko? Are you okay?" He had meant to try and seduce her, of course, but this wasn't something he had expected. She turned to him, leaning in. The closer she got to him, the more intense the scent was. She leaped onto him, throwing him off guard as he fell back in the bed. Naruko clutched at his chest, her head in the crook of his neck as she inhaled deeply. It was definitely his scent.
But there was something else. She slowly move down in body, Yoichi in a bit of shock but not going to complain. When she reached his groin, she stopped. It was here. Under his clothes. Unable to think straight, she grabbed his waistband and yanked his pants and underwear down, almost being smacked by his length. She stared at it in a sense of wonder, the source of this intoxicating smell before her.
She was driven on instinct alone. Leaning in, she nuzzled her cheek against the warm shaft, eyes closing slowly. Yoichi couldn't help but watch, letting out a groan as her soft skin rubbed against his sensitive organ. Hearing his pleasured sound, she looked up at him, sticking out her tongue and running it slowly up the shaft, one hand holding it gently to keep it in place.
When she reached the tip, she opened her mouth some, her tongue swirling around the head. She didn't know what she was doing. She wasn't thinking at all. She just followed what she felt she should do, never breaking eye contact, her sparkling blue eyes locked on his mesmerizing, technicolor ones.
Without a bit of hesitation, she opened her mouth wider, slowly taking him into her mouth. She couldn't help but moan at the taste, having more sensitive taste buds than a regular human. Her eyelids fluttered, trying to close but also wanting to keep her eyes on his. Slowly, she moved her head down, running her tongue over every inch she could get, and stopping when she felt it reach the back of her throat. She started to pull back, but just as she started to move…
"Further. Take it all in." Yoichi's voice rang through her ears, unable to resist without any other thought. She obediently complied, forcing herself down, feeling herself try to gag and resist, her eyes watering, but she never faltered, never looking away. Eventually, she felt her soft, pouty lips touch the base of his shaft, a few tears escaping as her body struggled to breath.
"Good girl…" That was all she needed to hear, her eyes rolling up in bliss as she felt her body release, her throat relaxing as she seemed to melt at the praise. She was going to need some new pants, fast. She didn't notice how much she needed to breathe until she began to see black spots in her vision, before being forcefully yanked up, taking in a lungful of air, the scent of his shaft heavy around her.
"How do you like my cock, slut?" She felt her body quiver at the name, her eyes half-lidded. Was that what she was? It sounded right…
"It tashtesh sho good…" she slurred out, unable to hold herself up as he let go of her hair that he had pulled on to let her up. She fell forward, back into his lap, nuzzling against his member again, giggling giddily.
"You know, I wasn't expecting this sort of development… but who am I to pass up on this? Suck on it more." Again, Naruko obeyed, picking herself up with a bit of energy she wouldn't have on her own, sliding it back into her mouth, and forcing it down in to her throat. Already she was getting the hang of it, her tongue lapping at whatever she could. It not only felt good, but it tasted heavenly. She didn't know how she would be able to live without this anymore.
Grabbing her by her twin ponytails, he moved her head up and down, Naruko moaning around his length as she was used like this. The pain of her hair being pulled like that further added to her arousal. Her mouth and throat were nothing but a hole to be fucked by his thick, delicious rod. As he used her, his length began to throb until he pulled out just enough as he came, spewing his thick, hot seed into her mouth. She drank it down like it was the last drops of water in a desert, her lower lips convulsing as she orgasmed from the taste. When he was finished, he sat up, pulling her off his length.
"Strip." There was again no resistance. She almost tore her clothes off, feeling them suddenly more constricting on her body. He smirked down at her, her eyes once again staring into his, trapped in his gaze, her firm breasts heaving with every breath, her nipples hard as rock. She wasn't the biggest of all the girls, but hers were at least Ino's size.
"Mmm, good girl~" Hearing those words again made her tremble, her body having a small orgasm at knowing her body pleased him.
"On the bed. Hands and knees." She scrambled into position, her legs parted just enough to show her soaking wet slit off, her juices dripping down her thighs. She looked back at him with a pleading look, biting her lower lip, only to let out something akin to a howl, feeling him thrust inside her. It was cut short, however, as she felt something tighten around her neck, her eyes widening.
A collar? She tried to think of when it was put on her, but a movement of his hips made everything go blank. She didn't care, she only cared that she was of use. She only cared about pleasing him. She didn't care as his thrusts picked up to speeds that were practically inhuman.
"Good girl." Those were the only words she needed to hear, setting off an explosive orgasm, her body continued to be used.
"Good girl." There they were again. And again. She felt her mind melt away as he continued to tell her what a good girl she was, until all that was left were his words, the pleasure, and her obedience. And then, there was nothing.
Naruko woke up suddenly in her room. Looking down, she saw she was fully dressed. Her body felt completely fine, only the phantom pleasures of a dream lingering still. Wait, a dream? Was that all it was? She didn't remember going to sleep…
Then she did remember. She remembered how she had suddenly felt tired, so she decided to take a nap until later. But... what was with that dream? It had felt so real. And so… good. Shaking her head to clear her thoughts, she walked out to see the others talking with each other.
"Hey Naruko! We were just about to let you know we were about to head out. Ready to go?" Ino asked, Naruko taking a moment before responding.
"Oh! Yeah, sure." She said, smiling to her, before her gaze moved around the room, landing on Yoichi. As her eyes met his, she could feel an itch build up inside her. She quickly looked away, following after the other two blondes with Satsuki.
"Here's your drink, Yoichi-sama." She heard behind her.
"Oh, thanks Kin. You're such a good girl." Naruko widened her eyes and frozen, feeling her legs become weak, biting her lower lip to stifle a moan as she felt herself cum. Before anyone would notice she stopped, she would keep going, walking a bit quicker to keep up as they left.
"So, when are you going to make your move on either of those girls?" Tayuya asked, her and Kin on either side of Yoichi, him popping a grape into the darker haired girl's mouth.
"Don't worry, I already have."
Author's Note
Ohohoh, I liked this one. The idea came to me halfway through writing the smut, and I decided to go for it. Was it a dream? Kind of. Did it really happen? Eh, kind of. Will I give you a straight answer? Well, that would ruin the fun, wouldn't it.
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