Burnt wounds, fresh pain
*10 minutes before end of last chapter
"Come on, we need some medical attention over here!" the man known as Luke Cage shouted as he pried open the concrete slab with the help of the large meta-human known as the Thing. The paramedics rushed over and helped the surviving people out of the crater they were hiding in. some of the more injured people needed additional assistance.
"Its ok, ya safe now" Ben smiled as the paramedics began to tend to the children and wounded. Of course the smile he had on his face was an act; inside he was torn up as he looked over the rest of his surroundings to see the damage that had been done.
To say it looked like the place had been bombed would have been an understatement.
Houses were still ablaze and were collapsing if they were not halted in time. The streets were almost unrecognisable due to how they had been compacted and burnt, and not to mention the hellish hue of red that the sky now held.
But the worst things were the bodies….and the smell.
The skeletons and burnt corpses of the dead could be seen in plain sight, as they could be located almost anywhere if you looked. The skeletons seemed to be the most prominent as they could be located closest to the blast zone, meaning they could be collected in a respectful manner, while the burnt corpses were a different matter.
They were like he burnt husks in Pompeii, once live humans, burnt to the spot like meat that had been left on the grill too long, still frozen in the posture they had taken in their last second of life.
Tony and Steve were standing by as the effort to save more innocents proceeded. Tony was now in his MK6 armour which had scorch marks and ashes, while Steve had managed to stay in one piece; his shield was going to need a new paint job for sure after the damage it took from the blast.
"Steve…" Tony asked the Veteran Avenger
"Yeah" he replied, as he wiped the ashes from his face.
"Was….was this what the war was like?" Tony asked as he looked over the destroyed city. He especially took note of the fiery buildings, burnt bodies and the many injured people that were being treated by the countless Paramedics whom were working as hard as they could.
"It's not that far off Tony…and I mean that" Steve said as he looked over the horrendous sight. All the death and destruction was actually worse than what Steve had experienced during the war, on the battlefield, men, women and children weren't burned alive and reduced to skeletons.
It wasn't just firemen and paramedics that were assisting in the rescue efforts, as the X-Men and The Fantastic Four were helping in their own ways. Psychics like Hope Summers and Avengers like the two Hulks were hoisting large pieces of debris while Storm was assisting Thor in putting out the flames as he was only at half strength due to his fight with Cyrus. Shield had also arrived and Agents were all over the place, helping by giving medical attention to the Meta-humans that were a little more high maintenance than most of the others.
"As if our situation wasn't bad enough, I tell you Spiderwoman, this is the straw that broke the camel's back. You mark my words" Goliath said as he picked up a huge piece of debris. At the moment Bill Foster had grown up to at least 30 feet while Spiderwoman was below, helping Wonder man haul up more burnt skeletons from underneath said debris.
"You think?" Jess asked rhetorically, her British habit of using humour to defuse the tension, not working as she intended.
"Are you kidding me? After the attack on New York 2 years ago, Hulk and Abomination trashing Vegas, the attack on Latveria and the New Warriors nearly blowing up Sanford? This is the start of the witch hunts, they'll be coming after us with Torches and Pitchforks, and it won't just be masked vigilantes, it'll be Mutants and anyone that can fly or lift a car" Bill said with a serious tone.
"You had better not mention the word 'Witch Hunt' to Viktor when we find him Goliath. He would kick your arse all shades of black and blue if he heard you say that" Jess replied as she and Simon hauled up another large piece of debris.
"Come on Jess, maybe they're right this time. I mean…who the hell can justify all this?" Simon said gesturing to thousands of filled body bags littering the ground around them.
"Tragedies don't make discrimination right Simon, no matter what you say" Jessica replied. She agreed that what had happened was a tragedy; all of the innocent people of this city had been killed in an instant.
*CLANK*
Jess looked down and found that she had stepped on a metallic object beneath her feet, but unlike the rest of the melted and burnt wreckage littering the area, this piece of metal was gleaming and still shone brightly. Under closer inspection she found that it was the handle to a sword, so she grabbed ahold of it and yanked it free from underneath the pile of rubble.
It was Viktor's Adamantium broadsword.
Jessica hadn't seen this sword up close, as Viktor never shown it to any of the other Avengers except Laura after he had modified it after taking it from Zemo. But Jessica had to say that it looked beautiful under closer inspection, the engraving on the blade seemed to be a mix of German (probably thanks to its former owner) and the runes Viktor had on his pendant and Gauntlets.
Jessica knew for a fact that Viktor's father was a blacksmith when he was alive, so it only made sense that Viktor had experience in metallurgy with 900 years to practise. Though the fact that Viktor managed to modify and engrave an Adamantium blade wasn't very unbelievable as he was someone who could probably superheat metal to temperatures equal to a sun.
'He's going to want this back I suppose' Jess thought as she continued admire the beautiful craftsmanship of the blade before turning her attention back to the burnt and destroyed landscape.
The Shield Helicarrier was hanging high in the air; its four rotors were helping in clearing the smoke out of the air. Of course with the amount of fire present, it was merely a small help as blackened smoke kept billowing into the air.
The director of Shield, Nick Fury was standing at the bridge of the Helicarrier, looking over the horrific sight before him. The veteran soldier had seen many things that would make grown men break down into quivering lumps of meat, but what he saw in front of his one eye was like a glimpse into the very depths of hell.
"Sir" Hill asked as she approached her CO from behind.
"…What is it Hill?" Fury asked as his posture and blank facial expression didn't change.
"It's just that…well sir…I…" Hill honestly didn't know how to explain the news to her superior. The one eyed director of Shield turned and responded "Just spit it out Hill" he said with a firm and commanding tone.
"The…The Death toll…it just reached 2000, and it's still rising" Hill said, causing the one eyed Director's single eye to widen substantially. 2000 deaths was not a light matter, in his book even 1 death was considered a terrible loss, but this was on another level entirely. Only wars and National tragedies would have casualties of this scale and with the American people in such a delicate state at the moment, this was undeniably going to cause some major problems not just for Shield and the UN but for Meta-humans and Vigilante's in general.
"Sir? Are you alright?" Hill asked as she responded to her CO's silence. Fury was quick to respond and quickly straightened his figure and regained his composure.
"I'm fine…how are the rescue efforts going?" Fury asked, he needed some good news or at least some news that was a complete disaster right now.
"Well sir, I can honestly say we have seen better days. Our agents are doing everything in their power to assist in the rescue efforts and Agent Quatermaine is doing his best to co-ordinate them in a way that will clear the area of survivors as fast and efficiently as possible. That being said we are finding more corpses, fatally injured and critically injured than we are survivors, and not to mention the Avengers that were critically injured in the blast" she explained
"What state are they in?" Nick asked, fearing for the safety of Earth's mightiest heroes.
"Not good im afraid sir, a large number of them will be out of commission for quite some time, The Black Panther has suffered many broken bones, torn ligaments and second degree burns, if not for his Vibranium mesh he would probably be dead, he is on his way to a Wakandan embassy where he can receive proper medical treatment from his people. Falcon and Wasp have suffered from no more than some second degree burns from the blast and few concussions, Yellowjacket however will be hospitalized for quite some time as he has suffered some grievous third degree burns as he tried to protect may other Avengers from the blast. Though the Avenger who seems to have suffered the most has to be the Vision" Hill explained
"It can't be that bad, the guy's a robot" Fury reasoned
"Actually a large portion of his body was incinerated as he shielded the Scarlet Witch from the initial blast. 80% of his body was completely destroyed, parts including his entire lower body, his left arm, his mid-section and the left side of his face were burned beyond belief. If you were to look at him now you would only recognise him by his forehead gem" Hill explained
"Is there any chance of repairing him?" Fury asked
"It's uncertain right now sir, many of his systems seemed to have been fried beyond recognition, not to mention his power cells are pretty much dust. No one has any idea weather his CPU is ok or not, and don't get me started on if there is any way to repair him or not" Hill explained
"Have Richards and Foster take a look at him, besides Pym, those two have the best chance of fixing the tin can" Fury ordered
"Yes sir" Hill nodded as she turned to leave
"And Hill" Fury called
"Yes sir?" she responded
"Any word on Brimstone and Cyrus?" Fury asked
"None sir, our men and a few Avengers are making their way into the blast zone right now, but I would put too much hope on their chances after an explosion like that" Hill said
"…Thank you Hill….Dismissed"
"Hey Kid! Slow down dammit!" Logan shouted as he tried to keep up with Laura as she scanned the area like a bloodhound, using her very developed sense of smell to try and find Viktor. Logan was also flanked by his and Laura's fellow X-Force members whom had arrived to help them, Domino Warpath (Movie gear) Archangel whom was scouring the area from the skies and Deadpool. The latter of which had arrived apparently because he thought it would "Be neat to be introduced quicker than the last story" whatever that meant.
"Dammit Vik, where are you" she whispered to herself as she kept sniffing to try and pinpoint Viktor's scent. The amount of smoke and Sulphur in the air made it extremely hard to find him, as Viktor's scent was a very distinct one that no humans had. Laura's nose was developed to a point where she could tell a person's personality from their smell, and Viktor's smell was the most unique she had experienced.
"Well guys, I for one an kind of creeped out how Dakkaman777 thinks it's necessary to spend time talking about how a guy smells instead of concentrating on me" Deadpool said, putting his hands behind his head in a relaxed fashion.
"Now isn't the fucking time Wade!" Laura snarled at the Merc with a mouth, the other mutants were shocked at how Laura snapped at Wade, sure he had a way of getting under their skin, but Laura was usually way more relaxed and calm about it. It just went to show how much Viktor meant to her.
"Oooooh well someone is grouchy, and people wonder why I don't mention this guy in the other stories I appear in, stupid asshole blows up a city and people still seem to like him, but when I try to blow up a city people are always like 'you can't do that wade you can't…"
*SKNIKT!
"Thanks, Warpath" Laura said as the Native American Mutant sheathed his knife in its holster, stabbing Wade's vocal chords was sure to keep him quite for a while.
"Don't mention it" Warpath replied as Laura continued to scout the area.
"Archangel, do you see anything?" Logan asked pressing a finger to his ear.
"Sorry Logan, but with all the smoke and wreckage its hard to get a read on anything" Archangel replied over his radio.
"Can you hear anything kid?" Logan asked Warpath, as his senses were heightened to levels that humans could not handle.
"Over the flames and buildings falling over? Sorry Logan but it's tough" he replied
"Well can you see anything?" he asked
"Wait a sec….I need to find a higher point" Warpath said as he scanned the area and saw a large pile of rubble which could serve as a good lookout spot. He leapt up on top of the pile and scanned the area for traces of where Viktor could be.
"Hey Webhead, how are things on your end?" Logan asked as he pressed finger to ear.
"Not good buddy, we haven't found a trace of Vik or that Psycho. How are things for you?" Peter replied over his radio
"Not good, it's hard trying to find his scent, Warpath isn't picking him up with his sight, so it's pretty bad" Logan replied
"I think it would make sense if he was located near the centre of the explosion, though those two may have been blown back a few feet" Carol said over her radio.
"No need Ms Marvel. I think I found him" Warpath said as he spoke into his radio. Laura hear what Warpath just said and instantly turned and asked "Really? Where is he?"
"I think I see him…what colour was his hair again?"
"Black…Pitch Black" Laura quickly responded
"Are you sure it's not silver?" Warpath replied as Laura and the others froze.
"….What?"
"Silver, is his hair Silv…" before Warpath knew Laura was already sprinting as fast as she could towards where Warpath was looking. If Cyrus was there then chances are we would try to kill Viktor, her mind was in a state of panic as she popped her claws, she wasn't thinking if Cyrus was still strong enough to take her down, all on her mind was making sure Viktor was safe.
"Dammit! Warpath! Deadpool come on!" Logan ordered as he popped his claws, Warpath unsheathed his knives and Deadpool unsheathed his Katanas and shouted "Yaaaay Shooty Shooty stab stab time!" as he ran.
Laura couldn't see Viktor or Cyrus as the smoke was still too thick to see through, but she was beginning to pick up the scent of Viktor's blood. As if she wasn't worried enough she heard the sound of a harsh and powerful impact like a kick. She then picked up the pace and as she got closer and closer she heard a loud electronic buzzing followed by a bright flash of light in the direction she was running.
Laura shielded her eyes as he halted, the smoke began to clear and she saw what she had been running towards. Viktor was on his back and looked like he was barely breathing.
"VIKTOR!" Laura shouted at the top of her lungs as she ran as fast as she could towards her companion. As soon as she was close enough she skidded onto her knees and her hands found their ways to the side of the Obsidian haired avenger's face. Laura instantly began to cradle his head in her lap as she noted his unconscious state and instantly checked his pulse.
He was alive, just barely.
"Oh thank god" Laura gasped in relief
"Is he ok?" Logan asked as he, Warpath and Deadpool caught up.
"He's just barely alive, he needs medical attention and fast" Laura said. Logan and the other had to admit it was very rare, no, nearly impossible to find Laura like this, acting as caring as this was a near impossibility when considering what she was like when they first met. She cradled Viktor's head in her lap like a caring lover while not taking her eyes off him for a second.
"Uh…do you two need some time alone?" Deadpool asked scratching the back of head awkwardly.
"Goddammit Wade" Warpath sighed
"Webhead we found Viktor and he is in bad shape, he needs medical attention right away got that?" Logan spoke into his earpiece.
"You got it buddy!" Peter replied quickly on the other side of the radio.
"Wait…does this mean no killy killy fun time?" Deadpool sighed with an annoyed tone
"Yeah, that's exactly what it means dibshit" Logan replied, hoping that Cyrus had cut Wade in half and put him out of everyone's misery.
"AAAAW COME ON! Am I not good enough for your action scenes Dakkaman777! This is why you suck, that and you never update that often!" Deadpool shouted at the sky, waving his Katanas around.
"Wade shut the hell up alright!" Laura shouted at Deadpool once again in that tone that not many people heard from her making Warpath and Logan's eyes widen while Deadpool simply shrugged his shoulder before whispering into the sky "To be honest I loved the fight scenes man….you just need more me and you get 10/10" Logan simply face palmed and Warpath leaned closer to him and asked "You want me to cut his vocal chords again?"
"Nah, he'll just talk even more when they grow back" Logan sighed with his arms crossed.
"Viktor, just hold on, I'm here" Laura spoke softly as she held Viktor closely. Viktor's breathing was very slow and laboured as his chest rose and fell. Laura's eyes couldn't help but be drawn to the scars adorning his chest, even though Viktor could sometimes heal just as rapidly as Logan while in his empowered state, he still had scars of past encounters. Laura's eyes couldn't help but notice the scar on his sternum, from when he stabbed himself to get at Doctor Doom during the incident in Latveria 2 years ago.
But the scars that Viktor had reminded Laura of one thing, even though his skin was extremely tough and he could heal faster than an average human, he was not totally impervious to harm. The fact that he was 9 centuries old may have thrown off people to that fact, but a mortal injury would probably put him down for good.
That scared Laura more than anything.
There was just something about Viktor that affected her like nothing else, he was different to everything she had ever known, it was something she saw in those eyes of his. Viktor was the only person who had genuinely made his way into the part of her heart that she never knew had existed, where she cared more for his life than hers.
Before Laura even knew it, Carol, Peter and a contingent of shield agent's hooved into view, among them were more than a few experienced Medics who most likely specialized in treating Meta-human patients. Laura barely noticed them approaching as her eyes were fixed on Viktor's face and her grip on him was practically unbreakable as the agents tried to pry them apart so they could administer treatment to the British Avenger.
"Hey X, X!" Peter said firmly as he grabbed a hold of Laura's shoulder, bringing her back to reality she snapped her gaze away from Viktor.
"Can you let go of him now? The medics need to treat him" Carol said as she landed onto the ground next to the members of the X-Force. Laura looked at Viktor's unconscious face, all his features laid bare as his mask had been incinerated and she knew she could trust the shield agents to not blow his identity, hell it was their job not to.
"Ok" Laura mumbled, reluctantly releasing her grip on Viktor. The Agents then went to work on doing their job and the medics opened up their kits to do their thing.
"So doc, is he gonna be ok?" Peter asked crouching down beside the medic.
"Ok, we need to move this guy onto a stretcher, he looks like he might need more advanced treatment" one of the medics said as the other agents went to pick him up.
"Jesus! This guy weighs a fucking ton!" one of the Agents grunted as they could barely get him up off the ground. it was a known fact among many of the Avengers that Viktor's anatomy meant that he weighed way more than an average human would, this was due to the immense density of his muscle tissue and bone structures.
"I got it, where do you want him?" Carol asked as she picked Viktor off the ground with her superhuman strength. Carol had to admit Viktor was one heavy guy, even when the two of them would have a sparring match it was dam hard to get him off the ground against his will.
'What else should I expect from a man who can do this' Carol thought as she looked at the desolate land around them. Within the past few hours, Viktor may not have discovered what he was, but surely the world had seen what things he could do. Even though Carol trusted Viktor, as he was Peter's best friend, she couldn't help but feel the slightest bit scared of what he had turned into during that last fight.
Not many of the Avengers saw what Viktor turned into during his fight with Cyrus, Carol was one of them and she had to admit that what he turned into on Genosha was a tame puppy by comparison. At least on Genosha he still looked the slightest it human, but the appearance he took during his fight with Cyrus was like something pulled straight from the pits of hell. Carol had faced enemies from hell like dimensions before and hadn't flinched, but the images of Viktor, snarling like a beast with flames pouring from his eyes and drooling magma was now imbedded in her head.
She had to admit that now, he scared her.
"Just lay him down here" the medics told her, motioning to the stretcher. There was no chance in hell that the agents were going to be able to carry him by themselves, but it was better to administer some first aid on a clean surface as opposed to the burnt rubble below. Carol did as they said and gently laid Viktor down on the stretcher so the medics could get to work on administering some care to him.
Carol then felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to meet eyes with the large white eyes of Peter's mask. She could tell that her fiancé had a look of concern behind that mask, it was a side effect of her close intimacy with Peter, she could tell exactly what was going through that head of his through simple body language and the way he handled himself.
"Im fine" Carol whispered before Peter had a chance to say anything, putting her gloved hand on his.
"Are you sure? After today I don't think anyone would blame you for being a bit shaken up" Peter said with care. He knew that she could still be quite sensitive when it came to how others viewed her, so the last thing she would do it admit to being shaken up. However he could tell something was bothering her, but if it made her feel the slightest bit better he felt like shit too.
"I told you I'm fine" Carol replied sternly and Peter simply decided to let the issue go. Peter then noticed how intently Laura was watching the medics treat Viktor, he and the others were going to go back and help the others, but he could tell that she didn't want to leave Viktor's side.
"Hey X, you stay with him alright?" Peter said, putting a hand on Laura's shoulder.
"I...I will, thanks" Laura smiled back at Peter; he could swear he saw a tear in her eye. It was like yesterday when she was the emotionless killing machine that would slice open his throat rather than speak to him, but how being with Viktor had changed her was amazing, his friend was defiantly something.
"Jesus, I didn't think a burnt robot could smell this bad" Quatermaine said, holding a hand over his face to block the smell from his nostrils. The smoking body of the vision was hauled up and dropped onto a stretcher that would be taken to the Baxter building for repairs.
"Oh…sorry" Quatermaine apologised as he locked eyes with a scowling Quicksilver and a weeping Scarlet Witch. Pietro had his arm around his sister's shoulder, trying to comfort her as the tears on her face dried. The Synthezoid known as the Vision had risked its life to save Wanda from the devastating blast and thus ended up in this devastated state.
"Don't worry Wanda, I'll have him right as rain" Reed Richards said in a caring tone to the Scarlet Witch.
"Are you sure Richards? I don't want you giving my sister false hope" Pietro left his sister's side momentarily whispered to Reed so that Wanda wouldn't hear.
"I'm sure Pietro, it may take a while until he is up and running again…"
"How long?"
"…I don't know, at least it's the slightest shred of good news you can get today" Reed replied
"Yeah…I suppose" Pietro replied before he returned to his sister's side and put his arms around her, in an attempt to comfort her.
"It's ok sis, it's ok" Pietro whispered to his sister.
"Pietro, I can't take it….it hurts" Wanda whimpered. Pietro's eyes widened, he never thought his sister would take Vision getting fried so hard.
"Don't worry sis, Reed will have him fixed good as new, before you know it" Pietro said back.
"It's not that Pietro, it's worse" Wanda whimpered, fresh tears dripping down her face.
"What do you mean?"
"I feel it Pietro, it's like a gut instinct, I can feel something bad is coming" she replied, her hands shaking
"Something is coming Pietro, something much worse…. Can feel it" Wanda looked up at Pietro, showing just how red her eyes had become from the tears coming from them. Pietro had never seen his sister like this, but he knew one thing for sure, if she felt bad was about to happen, he was a fool not to pay heed to it.
Whatever Wanda was feeling, it wasn't a good sign. Pietro always knew that his sister had a strange connection to if things were about to go wrong, the best way he could describe it was that her power to shift reality made her a lot more Intune with the world around her.
Little did Pietro know, but Time would prove her gut feeling right.
*Unknown location
"Ugh…Ah…." Cyrus groaned as he slowly opened his eyes only to see a few bright lights hanging above his head, drowning out the rest of his surroundings.
"Good to see you are finally awake" said a female voice from his right side. Cyrus turned his head, but because of the lack of light in the room he could only see the figure's outline of a woman with shoulder length hair and two very feminine shaped glowing red eyes.
She reached out her hand and cupped Cyrus' cheek, her hand was armoured with clawed fingers, yet her touch was gentle and caring. Cyrus couldn't help but lean into it as the warmth of her hand played across his skin.
"How long was I out?" Cyrus asked
"A few hours, but it's not at all surprising when considering how durable you are" she replied
"Why….Why can't I fell anything below my neck?" Cyrus asked, worried for his physical state after his battle with Viktor.
"It's amazing you are conscious right now, the fight had a terrible toll on your muscles. But that numbness you are feeling is simply your system rebooting and healing itself, it's to be expected when you strained yourself so much. Anyone else would have passed out immediately after power down, but you managed to stay conscious and staggered back here by sheer willpower" the female figure said with a tone of joy. Cyrus simply grinned in return.
"Well my body isn't permanently damaged, that's a relief" Cyrus grunted, the memories of his fight coming back. He couldn't believe the adrenaline that ran through his veins, it was like nothing he had known before, even when he fought opponents whose skill rivalled his own, his overall power and Physical capabilities would prove overwhelming.
Viktor did more than match his power, he challenged it. And that lit a fire deep within the Samurai's heart that he felt even now.
"Ah…finally awake are you?" came a new voice, defiantly that of an older male. Cyrus could not move his head, but he defiantly recognised the sound of at least 3 pairs of metal Sabatons clanking on the floor as the wearers approached. The first male that spoke was obviously the leader due to his strong and confident voice as it rumbled through the room.
"You look like shit" said a gruff and growling male voice.
"Cut him a break, he went through a lot I imagine" said a more suave and articulate male voice.
"Yeah, and you are one to talk about looking like shit" Cyrus grinned in reply hearing the third male and the female chuckle, before he knew it he felt a long and thin blade pressing against his throat.
"Watch who you are speaking to, runt!" the gruff voiced male growled back.
"Enough" the first male spoke firmly. The gruff male huffed before the blade retracted from Cyrus' throat. It was obvious that the first male had a sway over the others in the room with the way he commanded them.
"You did well, very well in fact, better than I hoped actually" the first male spoke, the smile on his face audible in his voice.
"Glad to know" Cyrus replied plainly.
"But then again, you aren't interested in that are you? All you want is blood and the freedom to fight whomever you want to your fullest? Isn't that right?" he asked Cyrus.
"Yeah" Cyrus replied plainly.
"Oh I don't think so" the first male said yet again his smile audible in his tone of voice. It was then that Cyrus heard the man's armoured hands slam down at both sides of his head and loom over him. The silhouette of the man's head showed naught but his glowing red eyes and the glint of his teeth as he grinned a savage grin.
"You want vengeance don't you?"
Cyrus' eyes narrowed
"Is that what you truly desire?"
Cyrus' plain expression went sour and his eyebrows arched
"To kill him?"
Cyrus bared his gritted teeth
"To end his wretched life for what he did to us all?"
His eyes began to burn brighter
"Hehehe….then that is what you shall have" the man smirked, his teeth and eyes glowing a savage red as Cyrus' eyes burned in reply. The man chuckled lowly and took note of the look in Cyrus' eyes, the look of disinterest was now completely replaced with a look of pure hatred.
The flames were lit and the war was close to begin.
Sup everybody, yet again im sorry it took me this long to get this chapter done. I hope you guys enjoyed this, because a lot of interesting stuff is going to happen within the next few chapters that will only contribute to the feels you will get when the faithful chapter comes.
You guys know which chapter I mean *evil grin*
Now who were those people talking to Cyrus as he recovered? I WILL NOT TELL! But that doesn't mean you can't speculate and tell me what you guys thought.
ANOTHER THING: I was thinking of using one or two chapters as flashback chapters to Viktor's life before he met the Avengers and after his family died, these chapters wouldn't add much to the plot right now but would serve as character development for Viktor and a look at the man he was before he met them (plus it could count for some awesome situations like combat tournaments and sieges and stuff) let me know if you guys find this interesting to see and if you have any ideas for it (PM ME IDEAS! I WANT THEM PRIVATE SO OTHER READERS DON'T SEE THEM COMING!)
Yet again guys
What did you like?
What (or who?) do you hope to see?
And now for the big kicker
DO YOU GUYS THINK I SHOULD HAVE CAROL GO CAPTAIN MARVEL IN THIS STORY?
Let me know guys and as always see you next chapter :)
Dakkaman777 out!
