warning: smut and sad stuff. pm me if you want version without smut.

Sasuke and Sakura lazed about in bed while Sakura played with the tendrils of Sasuke's hair.

"You know, I forgot how I was so addicted to you."

Sasuke grunted in reply. "Is that so."

"Yeah," Sakura sighed, snuggling up to him. "It's kind of coming back now, that same feeling. Just wanting to be with you and hold you." She ran a hand down Sasuke's chest. Sasuke held it in place.

"You'll make me hard."

"And?" Sakura purred coyly, nipping at his shoulder. Sasuke looked back at her. "I trust you can control yourself." Sasuke's eyes widened ever so slightly. Sakura's hand slipped out of his grip and landed on his hip.

"You're a tease."

"Maybe I am, what are you going to do about it?" Sakura asked. Sasuke smirked. "Don't pretend you don't like it," Sakura whispered in his ear, and she let her hands roam over his abs.

"What's gotten in to you?"

Sakura really didn't know. Maybe it was the freedom of not having a child in the house, but she was fucking horny and all she wanted to do was tease Sasuke all day. Her fingertips slipped into the hem of his boxers, and Sasuke was so surprised that he jerked back a little bit.

Sakura bit her lip as she played with the hairs right below his belly button, and Sasuke started panting lightly. His hands twitched towards hers, but Sakura slapped it away. "Nu-uh. No touching." Sasuke sighed, and Sakura smiled coyly. She gripped him in her hand, and she shuddered. "This is a reward."

She stroked him once, and Sasuke stiffened. "Sakura…" Sakura sped up her strokes, and Sasuke's hips started thrusting in time with her movements. He clutched the bed sheets and cursed underneath his breath. "Sakura, it's been too long, I-" he gasped, and Sakura felt him pulsing in her hand. She grasped him tightly, and Sasuke let out a moan as he came embarrassingly fast and loud.

Sakura kissed his neck as he came down from his high, his breath uneven and his body jerking. "How was that?"

"Hm. All right."

Sakura growled, offended. They play wrestled for the rest of the morning.

Sasuke awoke first, treading lightly so he wouldn't wake Sakura. He took a quick and quiet shower before heading to the first floor to make himself some coffee.

He sat at the kitchen table and idly sipped at the drink as he heard Sakura's tiny feet pitter patter. She yawned. "I smelled the coffee. Yum." She wrapped her arms around his neck from behind him, and Sasuke did not know what to do with this gesture; it was unfamiliar. "What's on the agenda today?"

Sasuke shrugged. "I don't know."

"Do you want to walk around, get to see the place for the first time in, what, 10 years?" Sakura smiled and rested her chin on top of his head. Sasuke closed his eyes. Yes, this was comforting. He remembered how his mother would do this when he was young.

"Okay, let's do that."

Sasuke was shocked when Sakura took his hand, but he relished in his warmth. He almost felt like a child again.

Sakura, too, was happy. She had forgotten what this level of security had felt like. After Naruto and Jin weren't regular parts of her life, she had to adjust. This was nice. Sakura was so overwhelmed with happiness that she did not notice all the strange looks that people were giving her. Not all the looks were strange, however. In fact, a great deal of them were horrified and backing away.

Sakura saw a flash of glossy black hair and blue skin, and her smile grew larger. "Haruna, hey there!"

Haruna, at first, was smiling, but the moment she realized who Sakura was with, her face grew pale. "Sakura," she acknowledged, bowing her head ever so slightly. Sakura took note that Haruna was taking baby steps backwards with Takara in her arms, and Kisame was stepping forward, shielding his friend with his body. "Sorry, we have to go!" she said, averting her eyes.

"Haruna, wait!" Sakura reached out and grabbed Haruna's shoulder, startling the woman so badly that Haruna grabbed Sakura's wrist, twisted it behind her back, and threw her into Sasuke's chest. Sasuke caught her, and they exchanged looks of confusion. Sakura gasped in surprise. That had actually hurt. She knew Haruna had been a shinobi, but she hadn't expected her to be so proficient after all this time. Kisame was now on edge, his hand at his sword. "Haruna, what's wrong?" Sakura cried out. "You're not yourself."

"What's wrong," Haruna began, her jaw clenched, "is that thing you are walking with," she said, pointing directly at Sasuke. "That…is what's wrong." She backed away, and Kisame followed suit.

Sakura felt herself become angry, and she stomped forward. "What the fuck did you say?"

"It's not worth an explanation," Haruna spat out. "If you don't realize it now, then you never will."

Kisame nodded in agreement. "I have not seen anyone change their mind about a person so fast with such little conclusive evidence."

Now, Sasuke became enraged. His hand flew to the hilt of his sword, and Haruna let out a yelp of fear. Haruna looked directly at Sakura. "This is what I'm talking about, Sakura! I never told you before because I didn't want to scare you."

"Tell me what?" Sakura roared, her fist so white it matched the color of the moon.

"After I gave birth to Takara, Sasuke was in the hospital. He found me. He threatened to kill my child, and he tried to kill me. I would be dead if Saobi had not shown up in time. I was weak from labor." Haruna swallowed, her lip trembling. "He's not coming anywhere near my family."

Sakura gulped, and she looked to Sasuke. His eyes were stern and unforgiving. Sakura figured Haruna was blowing it out of proportion, otherwise Sasuke would have shown remorse, right? "Haruna, you need to calm down."

"Fuck you!" Haruna bitterly said. "You can have your little monster, but I don't forget. I suggest you think about your son and remember as well."

Haruna and Kisame both jumped away, going from rooftop to rooftop. Sakura frowned and shook her head. "Forget about them," she said to Sasuke. "Let's just get some lunch."

After a somewhat painful lunch, they headed back to Sakura's house. Once in, Sasuke kissed her so passionately that Sakura thought that she'd forget how to breathe. Once they broke apart, Sakura licked her lips. "Do that again," she pleaded breathlessly.

And Sasuke did.

They stood like that for a while, pressed up against the front door with their lips mashed together, and their arms entangled. Somewhere along the way, teeth had entered the equation, and Sasuke was nipping hungrily had Sakura's lips. Sakura could barely breathe, and she loved it. "Sasuke," she moaned.

Sasuke couldn't believe how riled up this woman could get him. It was almost insane, comical. He lifted her by the hips and held her snug to him, holding her against the door panel. He could feel her wetness through her panties, and he nearly groaned at the thought of being inside her. He set his hips at a steady grind, and that made Sakura shiver. "Oh, Sasuke!" She gripped onto him tighter, and she moved her hips along with his. She eventually pulled his shirt up so far that Sasuke decided that clothes just weren't worth the hassle anymore, and he pulled it off while keeping Sakura in place with his legs and pelvis.

Sakura slid her hands all over his chest, loving the feel of hard muscle underneath her fingers. That firm, secure chest. She licked a path up his neck and bit, hard. Sasuke let out an audible moan and dropped Sakura onto her feet.

Sakura yelped when she felt strong hands rip her panties, but that yelp turned into a sigh as she felt a finger stroke her slippery folds. Those callused fingers ran over her clit again and again, and Sakura was so close until the miserable stop. "Why'd you stop?" she whined, clutching her sundress to her waist.

Sasuke smirked. "What do you want?"

Sakura quivered. "You know I want you." Sasuke nibbled at her neck and inserted one finger inside of her, making Sakura's eyes roll back into her head.

"Be specific, Sakura." He stroked her insides with a curled finger, and Sakura was having trouble standing upright.

"I-I want you…" Her face was beet red, and her legs were shaking uncontrollably. "To fuck me."

Sasuke inhaled sharply, and he turned Sakura around. Sakura found herself excited for what came next. She heard him unzip and the shift of clothes and then his warm chest was at her back again. She felt him so close to her pussy, and it twitched in excitement.

"Say it again," he hissed, kissing the nape of heck.

"Fuck me, Sasuke!" Sakura finally screamed out, and Sasuke slammed inside her. He placed a hand on her lower back as he thrust fast and hard into her, and Sakura loved it. "S-so rough," she groaned, instantly more aroused when hearing the wet sounds coming from their union. Sasuke was panting and grunting in time with his strokes, and he relished in the slapping sound of his abdomen meeting her ass.

"Your pussy is so tight!" he gritted out, pounding into her. At that point, Sakura couldn't even say anything. She could only whimper in time with the thrusts as her climax approached. Sasuke looked at his throbbing cock thrusting into Sakura's wetness, and he grinned, only to start driving into her even harder, keeping one hand firm on her hip and pulling her back to meet his thrusts.

"Sakura, touch yourself," he demanded, and Sakura obeyed, her fingers lightning fast on her clit. Her pussy started pulsing, and she knew that she had broken. Sakura felt pleasure rip through her body, and a scream tore itself through her throat. She went limp, but Sasuke wasn't finished yet. He held her body up, and Sakura felt even more pleasure course through her. "Fuck."

Sasuke breathed hard as he felt his orgasm approaching, and he sped up his thrusts as Sakura's walls clamped down on him. He knew at that moment he was done as he cock throbbed insanely, and he felt himself release inside of Sakura, not stopping his thrusts until he was empty.

The pair was breathing hard, with Sakura supporting her weight with her arms and Sasuke holding Sakura close to him. Sakura was still trembling from her climax, and she squeaked when Sasuke ran a finger over her swollen clit. "It's sensitive," she whispered, and Sasuke snorted.

Just like that, half naked and thoroughly fucked, they kissed tenderly at Sakura's front door.

Jin woke up in the middle of the night, hearing crying. Saobi heard it as well, but she told him to rest as she went to tend to Kenji. She scoffed. There wasn't much he could do right now with two broken legs anyway, and that lead to a glare from Saobi.

She knocked Kenji's door. "Hey, is it okay if I come in?"

She somehow understood his words through all the sniffling and bawling. "Yeah, p-please. Please." Jin quietly opened the door, and she sat down on the floor next to Kenji. He was crying intensely, and it seemed he had thrown up in the trash just a few minutes before. She knew it had been another bad dream; she didn't need to ask. "Baby, come here." Kenji was unwilling to move so Jin gently placed her arms around him and cradled him in her lap like a small child. He tucked his head into her chest, and she stroked his hair.

Jin was a terrible singer, but she had done this for Kenji before. It was often used for bad dreams and sleepless nights back then too, especially when Sakura was so tired she couldn't get out of bed.

She looked down at someone she considered her child and started rocking him back and forth.

"Hush, little baby, don't say a word,

Mama's gonna buy you a mockingbird."

She paused to gauge his reaction, and Kenji was now silent, his eyes glassy and his cheeks rosy as he waited for her to continue. So she did.

By the time she was done with the song, Kenji was asleep. However, she stayed up rocking him the entire night.

Sasuke looked down at Sakura as she licked the underside of his dick, his abdomen tensing as she did so.

"This is payback," she said with a cheeky smile, and Sasuke didn't bother to correct her.

Her technique was something to be worked at, but Sasuke was enjoying himself either way. Feeling her slick lips moving up and down his cock was soothing and electrifying all at the same time. Sakura fondled his balls as she sucked, and Sasuke moaned at that. How did she know his weakness?

Sakura pulled off his dick and smiled at him. "Use me how you like."

Something within Sasuke snapped, and he grabbed her hair and pushed her down on his dick. He controlled her movements, and Sakura moaned happily. She gagged a few times, but it was worth it for Sasuke-ku…For Sasuke. It was worth it to bring pleasure to Sasuke.

Sasuke cried out as he came into her mouth, and Sakura swallowed the bitter substance.

Sasuke panted. "Payback accepted." He flashed a cocky smirk at Sakura, and she pouted, trying to hold back a smile.

Itachi came back, and Haruna smiled at him. She was busy doing some housework so Itachi settled for kissing the side of her neck. "I got permission from the Hokage to move into the Uchiha compound." Haruna's smile disappeared, and her mouth set in a grim line.

She simply replied, "Oh." Itachi felt that something was off and decided to bring up what he had heard from passerbys. His name had been cleared, and he was now renown as a hero. It was…refreshing. Still, the situation was concerning, to say the least.

"I heard what happened in town," Itachi murmured, almost so quietly that Haruna couldn't hear. However, Haruna did hear, and she was afraid for the day that this conversation would come.

"Did you." She said flatly, folding up her freshly dried clothes. It wasn't everyday she went to the Laundromat, but she had forgotten the whole convenience of it all, not being with Itachi.

"Why did you react so violently to Sasuke?" Itachi finally asked. Haruna froze in place.

"Itachi, you know what he did to me," Haruna said dangerously quietly.

"He had his reasons," Itachi countered back. Haruna's eyes widened in anger, but she could hardly say she was surprised.

"That's always your excuse," she responded, gathering up little things here and there and placing them on the bed. "You Uchiha and your reasons." She neatly gathered things together, and she shoved in Takara's things with her own. "They're never good reasons, but they're reasons."

"Haruna, why can you accept mine, but not accept Sasuke's faults?"

Haruna tightened her bag. "First off, he's not my husband. Second, I accept what happened. He tried to kill me; I accept that." She paused. "I am afraid, Itachi. People are not so easily changed."

"I changed," Itachi said weakly. "So can he."

Haruna draped a shawl over her shoulders. "You're the one in denial here. Over everything. Absolving everything of fault as always."

Itachi swallowed. "Where are you going?" he asked, trying to keep calm.

"I found an apartment. I'm not going back to the Uchiha compound. Ever. I'm taking Takara with me to live there. Sasuke is not allowed anywhere near her."

"She's my daughter too!" Itachi suddenly snapped, and Haruna turned back to face him, fire in her eyes.

"Well, until you get sorted out, you're not allowed anywhere near her either!" Haruna yelled, forcing Itachi back. Itachi felt his chest tighten, and for the first time in a long time, his eyes stung.

"Haruna, please." He was on his knees, begging. "Don't leave me. We can work through this."

Haruna nodded. "Yes, but that's completely up to you, isn't it?" She slung the bag over her shoulder and entered the other room, picking up Takara. Itachi heard the door slam shut as he wandered into Kisame's room. It was so neat, so uncharacteristic of Kisame.

"It's just us again."

Kisame was silent. He scratched the back of his head and shifted his bag higher. "Buddy, I'm going with her." Itachi's eyes widened in something akin to hurt or betrayal. "Sorry, man. She's right. Catch you later."

And Itachi was alone again.

Sasuke's tongue lapped at Sakura's clit, and she squeezed her eyes shut. "Please," she found herself whispering. "Please."

Sasuke lifted himself up. "Want to be inside you," he rasped, and Sakura climbed on top of him, kissing him deeply. She moaned as their tongues tangled, and they broke apart, saliva all over their faces.

She lowered herself onto his cock and started moving slowly, seeing how frustrated Sasuke got by the rhythm. She ground her hips in circles and gasped as he hit something inside her. "Yes," she sighed, and she repeated the action, feeling the burn intensify.

Sasuke took control, grabbed her by the hips, and slammed her onto his cock. "Where is it?" he growled, and Sakura moved ever so slightly.

A gasp. "There!" Sasuke aimed toward that spot with his thrusts, and all Sakura could see were stars. "Yes, yes!" Sakura pushed Sasuke's torso down forcefully and started bouncing erratically, using his body roughly. Sasuke couldn't complain. He was enjoying the view of her breasts jiggling in his face, and he had never had a woman take control like this before. Seeing her so lost in her own pleasure was exhilarating.

Sakura was crying out in pleasure with every thrust, and she could feel the fire building inside her-it was so hot, that she couldn't control herself.

"Yes, yes, YES! OH, SASUKE!" she cried out, rubbing her clit furiously. "COMING! AH-YES!" Sasuke felt her fluids drench his member, and Sakura's bouncing had slowed down considerably. She was clenched so tight around him that he could feel every pulse going through her. He thrust into her tight warmth a few times before coming himself, sighing against her shoulder.

Was this what love felt like?

Saobi sat at Jin's side while she did paperwork, dark circles under her eyes. "Want help?"

Jin laughed. "That's what Chojuro is for."

Chojuro, indignant, looked away and pouted.

Saobi rubbed Jin's back. "They have been in there quite a long time."

"Shut up." Jin tried to act like it wasn't affecting her, but he could tell it was. She was tense and irritable, and she didn't want to seem like it was affecting her work but it was. She was having trouble delegating things and finishing work on time, and when she came home, she was always exhausted. However, she always found the strength to take care of both him and Kenji. "Lots of feelings to process," Jin eventually murmured, and Saobi knew that was all he was going to get for now. He noticed that what she was working on was actually not paperwork, but a letter.

About a half hour later, Kenji emerged from the room with the therapist, and the therapist took Jin aside.

"Honestly, he's been dealing with it very well. You've been very good to him. As a mother, you should be proud of yourself."

Jin turned bright red. "Wh-what? I'm not his fucking mother!" she sputtered out, embarrassed.

The therapist chuckled. "You keep telling yourself that." He tore off some paper. "This is your bill. Will I be seeing him tomorrow as well?"

"Yes," Jin said, a little calmer now. "Yes, same time and place."

"Very good." The doctor smiled at Kenji. "See you tomorrow, Kenji-san!"

"See you tomorrow, sensei." Kenji said, a small but sure smile spreading on his face. He was quiet for a moment before taking Jin's hand. "Auntie…thank you."

Jin's eyes softened. "Kenji, it's no problem at all." She ruffled his hair, wincing internally when he flinched ever so slightly. "Do you feel better?"

"A little yeah. Can me and Saobi go eat dinner now, can we?" Kenji asked excitedly.

"Yeah, can we?" Saobi demanded, rolling his chair toward Kenji's side.

Jin sighed, beaming at both of them. "I guess so. Pick something up for me, will ya?" Kenji nodded, and Saobi assured her that he would, though Jin knew he would probably be the one to forget.

The two left, and Jin pulled a chair up next to her. She smiled at Chojuro. "Hey, bitch, time to get to work." The boy just exhaled in disappointment.

"Yes, Mizukage-sama," he said sarcastically.

Naruto was beginning to panic. What if this plan wasn't going to fall through? What if Tobi failed? That would be unacceptable, and he would probably be leading his country into war against a much stronger nation.

"Naruto-kun?" Hinata's gentle voice carried him out of his panic. His shoulders were relieved of tension by the simple tilt of her voice.

"Hinata-chan," he said, relieved. "What are you still doing here?"

Hinata blushed, and she fidgeted in place, playing with her fingers. "I was just worried about you, Naruto-kun. You've been working so late recently."

Naruto's heart melted. Hinata was so sweet. And she was so cute… He beamed at her, and Hinata felt her heart race when she saw a smile that she had not seen for the longest time. "Hey, Hinata-chan."

"Y-yes?" she asked, startled.

"Let's go get some ramen together."

Saobi had once again put his chopsticks so far up his nose that he had Kenji doubled over in laughter (Jin was laughing as well, but she wasn't the one in any trouble, now was she). He licked his mucus off when he took them out, making Kenji laugh even harder. Jin just shook her head. She was still going to be kissing him later.

Kenji smiled. "Hey Auntie, how'd you and Saobi meet?"

Jin grimaced, but Saobi just cackled. "I'm her sister's friend, and a few years ago while visiting her sister, she attacked me because she thought I was an intruder!" Saobi was guffawing so hard that he had to slap the table and gasp for air. Kenji burst into giggles as well. Jin muttered a soft, "Asshole" but she was just glad that the kid was smiling again.

"Wanna watch a movie?" Saobi asked Kenji, and the boy nodded very enthusiastically. The kid brought his bowl of pork-cabbage delight with him to the couch. It was one of Jin's original creations, and it was Kenji's favorite.

"More, please!" Jin rolled her eyes but gave him more anyway. After all, he certainly deserved it. Who knew the next time he could have the real thing again, not Sakura's crappy imitation? She sat down with her two boys on the couch, and Kenji curled up in Saobi's side. Now, that was just fucking cute, both the redheads cuddling together.

Kenji was sleepy by the end of the movie but was quite determined to stay awake for one more. After all, it was his last night with Jin. So she gave in and let him watch another one, though he fell asleep halfway through.

Jin took that opportunity to sit next to Saobi. "Wow, getting frisky with the kid here?"

Jin snorted. "You wish."

"I do," Saobi agreed.

She laid her head on Saobi's shoulder. Affection didn't come easy for her, but Saobi knew that. Saobi kissed to top of her head, and Jin snuggled closer to him. "Hey."

"Hm?" Saobi said, his eyes closed.

"I love you."

Saobi was suddenly very awake and very red. "Wh-what, what, what, what?" he stuttered, his heart beating wildly.

"Shit, stop freaking out, you little bitch!"

"That made me so happy!" Saobi said, placing a hand over his heart. "You've never said it before! Say it again!"

"No way."

"Please? I love you too, come on!"

"…love you." That was good enough for Saobi, and he kissed her full on the lips.

Morning came too quickly for the three. They had all fallen asleep on the couch, and Kenji had not cried out at all the last night, a huge difference from the ten days previous. Instead, he slept peacefully through the night, and he was even smiling in his sleep.

Jin and Saobi woke up once the sun started shining in their eyes, and Jin immediately went to work, packing Kenji's things along with her letter to his mother inside his bag. She put on some suitable clothes for travel, and when she descended the stairs, Kenji was up and laughing with Saobi. Her lips quirked at the corners.

"Hey, kiddo. Ready to go?"

Kenji frowned. "Do I really have to?"

Jin coughed. "I promised your mom I'd get you back by tomorrow. She'll rip my heart out if I don't!"

Kenji sighed. "Fine, but I want to say bye to everyone!"

"I know, I know. They'll be waiting for you at the gate."

Kenji and Jin walked toward the entrance while Saobi struggled with his wheelchair, Jin making fun of him the whole way there.

At the gates, Kenji hugged his doctor, Chojuro, and most importantly, Saobi. Saobi felt his shirt become wet, and he just let the boy cry. "We'll see each other again soon, okay buddy?"

Snot dripping from his nose, Kenji said, "Okay!" He started saying his last goodbyes to his new friends, and Jin walked to Saobi. She leaned over and kissed him deeply.

"I'll be back before you know it," she whispered, and they just stared at each other as if that was the last time they'd see each other. "Love you."

"Love you more."

Kenji held Jin's hand, allowing himself a simple childish pleasure. No one could see, and this was the last time he'd see Jin for a while.

"Remember, I have a letter for your mom in there!"

"Yes, yes, I'll remember, I'll remember."

"Uhhuh, sure you will."

Kenji chattered on about their visit, when Jin noticed something strange. She stopped in her tracks and looked at her surroundings. Something was off.

"Auntie-"

"Shut up for one sec, kid." In the distance, a twig broke. That was her only warning. "Kenji, get back!" she yelled as she grabbed her spear and countered a kunai coming right at the boy.

An eerie laugh came from the woods. "I did teach you well, Torino. Or is it Jin now? I suppose that's why you're the only one of my students left."

Jin backed away as a dark figure surfaced from the ground. He turned around, and Kenji eyed the orange, swirly mask. "The lollipop man!" he whispered in fright.

Jin's heart stopped for a moment. "You know him?" she bellowed, and Kenji nodded frantically. Tobi threw another slew of kunai at Jin, and she threw them all back with her spear. "Kenji, I need you to go back to the village now."

"What?" Kenji's eyes widened in fright. "N-no!"

"Kenji, do as I say!" Jin screamed, grabbing him by the collar and dodging fireballs. "Do it! Now!"

She felt him trembling in her grasp. "I'm scared," he whimpered. Jin's chest tightened. She was scared too. But now was not the time to admit that. She had to be strong.

"Hey, I'll be right back, okay? I just gotta take care of this guy first, okay?"

"Jin, will you be okay?"

A pause. "Yeah, I'll be fine. Get back to the village." She looked back at him. "I love you."

At that moment, all Kenji could do was run, run, and run. When he got back to the gates, Saobi laughed. "I said I'd see you soon, but I didn't mean this soon!"

"Jin is in trouble!" Kenji cried out, tears in his eyes. "The lollipop man came, and she's fighting him now!"

Saobi's face turned white, and Chojuro immediately ran to his kage's aid. "Kenji, stay here!" Saobi commanded, and the doctor held Kenji back from following the two shinobi. Despite his tremendous injuries, Saobi forced his body to move through the pain, and he got out of his wheelchair and ran to Jin's side.

Chojuro got there first, and he was obstructing the view. "Chojuro, where-"

That's when he noticed the pool of blood. It was as if time stopped at that moment. He slowly walked around Chojuro, and he saw Jin laying there, her eyes open and a hole in her chest.

First off, whoo! This was a bit of a charged chapter, I know. Sorry for the little wait, but I think you guys are all used to it now. There was lots of foreshadowing going on there. and i think i did better on the hinting that sakura and sasuke's relationship is off. I think this is the best chapter i've written in a while.

Second off, thanks for all the reviews last chapter :3 They made me happy for the most part so thanks for all your support guys!

Kay, I will be responding to your constructive criticism here.

1. Sakura has always been shown to be insecure for the most part in my eyes. Different interpretations may apply and that's totally okay. Kishimoto fucked it up with her, and at parts, I fucked it up with her too.

2. You're right, part of it was intentional, part of it was not. The simple truth is that I would like to finish this story and have sort of neglected it. I won't elaborate on the intentional part, but I think the readers should be able to feel that something is kind of wrong with their relationship and the asspull personality change. I plan as I go, but some things are very intentional lol.

2b. This is where I get angry. I know how rape victims act. Your experience as a psych major is valid, but my experience as a survivor is also valid. Like I said before, I sometimes use this story to cope. Also, if you are forcing a rape victim to tell you about their rape, they probably weren't comfortable with you to tell you freely in the first place. Guys, never do this. Do not use force. I'm not gonna fucking read up on Piaget, because after being a victim of such a horrid act one does not usually grow up as normal children do. it's unfortunate but true.

3. All your other points are vaild, thank you for the criticism! I will keep it in mind.

lol guys it ain't happily ever after yet. wait for more heartbreak.