So I was not happy with the story and I know I said I wasn't going to change it anymore... but I did. Nothing really huge has been changed but I do think the story flows much better and now that I am all finished I can work on the next chapter! I'm hoping to have it up by 9/19
Also I've noticed that the majority of people skipped chapter ten, Mary's back story is pretty important and I do recommend reading that chapter if you skipped it. I cut the chapter in half so now Mary's story is in chapter eleven.
I want to thank everyone who has supported me up to this point! Thanks everyone for the Reviews, Follows, and Favorites! And special thanks to Andreas-Corelli for all their help!
So! Here is a change log by chapter and you can decide if you'd like to reread it.
Chapter One: Different Smut/Dialogue
Chapter Two: Different Dialogue
Chapter Three: Added and changed a scene, combined chapter three and four together.
Chapter Four: Changed/removed a few scenes
Chapter Five: Changed/removed/added a scene
Chapter Six: Changed/removed scene, fixed inconsistencies
Chapter Seven: Changed scene, combined chapter seven and half of chapter eight together
Chapter Eight: Changed/Added scene, combined Eight and half of Nine
Chapter Nine: Changed/Removed/Added scene
Chapter Ten: Changed/Removed/Added scene, Only Edward's back story now
Chapter Eleven: Changed/Added Scene, Removed entire Christmas scene, Only Mary's Backstory, A lot of Smut
Chapter Twelve: Changed/Removed Scene
Chapter Thirteen: Changed/Removed Scene, Changed name of passed away children
Chapter Fourteen: Removed Scene
Chapter Fifteen: Changed scene, different dialogue