UPDATE: I know it's been a while again but I actually have a valid reason this time! I got a new computer for my birthday (which makes me soooo happy) but it took a while to get office on it because my brother was getting it for me (he got a discount because he's in college).
I also wanted to take this time to respond to a few reviews so here we go!
To Dixie.f.9—I know it was a lot of getting to know you fluff but that was important because in reality Carlisle still doesn't know a lot about Natalie.
To TrulyScrumptious—I wasn't meaning for this story to be much more than messing around until after I started writing it which is why it pieces together so quickly but I do understand what you were saying. Also pathos is both a form of persuasion and a term used for Greek literature meaning the height of emotion in a play. Just to keep going (because you reviewed a lot-thanks by the way) It said in the story that the fairytale book was from Natalie's childhood, Alice's Adventures in Wonderland is just one of her favorites :P (Just trying to clear up any confusion)
Anyways, thanks for the reviews guys!
Now to the main reason for this update—I think I might discontinue the story. I've been really busy lately and it's not fair to my readers to only update every couple of months. On top of being busy I just don't feel inspired to continue the story-like epic writers block. That being said, I have been considering letting someone adopt the story but at the same time I don't want to give it up either because I know there's more stuff I want to happen in the story and (I know this sounds bad) I don't want it to end up in a different way. Does anyone have suggestions? Would you guys like me to keep writing with fewer updates or should I give someone else the chance? If I get enough people telling me to keep it up I'll try to update more often than I do know. Please let me know guys because I'm really conflicted!