Alright, here's Chapter 3 rewrite. Please enjoy!
Haibara's P.O.V.
I wanted to strangle him or at least punch him once on the head. I didn't know how to respond back to Kudo's question. After thinking about how to react, my anger gradually decrease and my urge to hurt Kudo almost vanish...that is until he open up his BIG MOUTH...
"It's cute that Haibara has her first crush, especially on someone like Masudo-niichan who we just met." He then pause, possibly thinking of something very seriously.
"Don't tell me you prefer younger men..." He states just loud enough so that only I and no one else can hear him.
That moment, when the words escape from his mouth, was the moment when my fist connect with his head. Similar to how Kudo's woman's father does to him time after time.
The impact from my fist has cause Kudo to yelp in pain. "Oi Conan-kun and Haibara-san, quit fooling around." Koijoma-san said to us with Ayumi-chan and Tsuburaya-kun agreeing with him.
We then finish off our snacks. Well actually it was more like I was finishing my portion of snacks as Conan maintain a hold on his head from where I punch him. By that time it was already 8 pm, and so we decided to leave. We quickly said our good byes to Masudo-san and his older brother.
As we made our way home, my mind was on how to deal with this foreign feeling I have involving Masudo's older brother now that Kudo figure it out. Truth be told, I never have to deal with this in my previous life as Miyano Shiho. Studying aboard in order to continue my parents' research for an unknown organization with an unknown goal. Now I have another chance to live a happier life just how my sister would have wanted.
I wonder if you're happy for me... Onee-chan...
When I came to from thinking of Onee-chan, I notice it was only me and Kudo walking to Dr. Agasa's place. "Oi, aren't you going back to her?" I asks calmly. "I already called Ran-neechan that I will be sleeping over Dr. Agasa's place." He said without turning back. I walk up to him and grab his shoulder. He then stop and turn to face me.
"Why?" I ask. My eyes looking at his intensely. "There's something I want to tell you when we get there." He simply said. I let go, satisfy with his reply and we continue our way to Dr. Agasa's house.
As we came inside Dr. Agasa's house, Kudo suddenly start running ahead of me yelling, "OI DR. AGASA! GUESS WHO JUST HAD HER FIRST CRUCH TODAY!?"
That bastard! Embarrassed, I begin to chase him around the living room. When I finally caught him, he laugh. Exhausted by all that running, I merely stare at him as he continue to laugh. I decided to let him go with a few whacks on the head. I then went to my room to rest and to think on how I would overcome this unfamiliar emotion.
Two days as past and we haven't went back to Masudo-san's house. Even so, "Masudo-niichan" still remain on my mind. Even in my own dream, he continue to creep in my mind.
When I woke up, it was already morning and the sun was beginning to rise.
As I look around my bedroom, I felt a pair of eyes looking directly at him. It was from a small furry creature who started to rub her head against one of my cheeks. Her name his Mimi. She was recently a stray kitten that I found about two weeks ago at a nearby park. She's kinda cute with her amber eyes that seems to stare with such curiosity.
And again I begin to think about Masudo-san older brother. As always, it seems to be the case that my heart rapidly increase its beating and my face heats up above normal levels.
This feeling although troublesome does brings warm and comfort to me as I close my eyes in order to further experience, and for a moment... I felt almost completely happy.
Then someone just had to come in and ruin my thoughts.
Why am I not surprise...
"Oi Haibara are yo awake yet?" Kudo asks as he open my bedroom door and make his way toward my bed. I then shift my body so I can turn toward Kudo's direction with more ease.
"What brings you here in such fine morning?... Detective-san..." I said while petting Mim's head constantly.
Kudo seemly stare at my position and probably was annoy by my reference but then quickly recover. "Oh, I just want to let you know that we are going to have some guests coming over today." Kudo said as he then walk toward the window, maybe looking outside.
"Mm-mm..." I said, not really interested.
Kudo must have notice my lack of interest since he turn around. "Ayumi-chan, Mitsuhiko-kun, and Genta-kun are coming today for some cake." Kudo said as he made his way to my doorway but before leaving he pause for a moment and turn around.
"Oh, and one more thing, Rei-kun and his older brother are coming over right now. It seems they receive a new letter and this time it different from the rest."
After Kudo mention that fact that Masudo-san's older brother is coming over right now, my heart rate soar incredible heights.
"NANI! HE'S COMING OVER RIGHT NOW!" WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME ANY SOONER!" I suddenly yelled at Kudo as I being to panic. Mimi then got off me and jump down to the floor. I got out of my bed to the closet.
"Yeah... they should be here any minute now..." Kudo said as he look down at his wristwatch. Looking around in my closet. "Wa-it, h-hold on for s-ssssecond." I stutter but he already left my room.
My face turning even more red than before.
This can't be happening!
Normal P.O.V.
"I see, so the reason you guys came today was because you received another anonymous letter." Dr. Agasa said while sitting down with Rei and his older brother. The three children of the Detective Boys, Ayumi, Mitsuhiko and Genta were in the middle reading the letter in question.
Greeting Masudo-san,
You are courtly invited to Beika's Special Halloween Party this coming Halloween at Beika Harbor. Please present the card attached to this letter as prove of admission.
P.S. Friends and Family are invited as well. There will be a surprise for you and your guests if you attend this year Halloween Party.
"This seems like a normal invitation to me." Dr. Agasa said as he look at it.
"But isn't it weird that someone would sent this invitation four months from now?" Ayumi-chan asks. "Yeah, why would they sent a letter this early from the event?" Mitsuhiko questions.
"A better question is, what's the surprise?" Genta asks. "Maybe it a lifetime supply of rice with eel?"
"Is there anything else you think about besides food?" Ayumi question Genta.
"Man, Haibara-san is taking her time coming down." Mitsuhiko states. "Yeah, I wonder what's keeping Ai-chan..." Ayumi said, getting worry. "She usually start the day early." Mitsuhiko said.
"Hmmm..." All the kids except Rei said.
Haibara's P.O.V.
That was all I heard before closing my door. I came to the conclusion that I need more experience with this foreign feeling taking place within me. I sat down on my mattress to think.
What should I wear?
After several minutes later I came up with nothing. Every single idea I come up with I suddenly spot some form of flaw whether it a rational or irrational one.
"Oi Haibara, just here to check on yo..." I heard Kudo voice said.
"No!" I said as I slam the door at his face.
"Oi Haibara, what was that for? Huh? You still not ready? Don't tell me you're trying to impress Masudo-niichan?" He asks.
"I don't know what to do..." I finally told him. He then sigh and stop pushing the door. "Well look at the bright side..."
"What?"
"He already left with his brother..."
The word "SHOCK" does not fully explain the sudden realization I am experiencing right now.
"I can't believe I SPENT TOO MUCH TIME CHOOSING ON WHAT TO WEAR!"
I can't believe I wasted too much time deciding on what to wear and didn't even have nothing to show for it.
"NANI!"
END OF CHAPTER 3
Well that the end of this rewrite. Until next time!
