2nd chance.

I would like to give a special thanks to KaylaDestroyer. She made a fantastic review and she marked my story as one of her favorites.

Mary is a medium sized saber-tooth tiger. She has a light body build. She has light grey hair with a few blotches of white here and there. She had deep blue eyes that glistened like the sun. Her husband was Richard. Richard is a large sized saber-tooth tiger. He had deep brown fur that sometimes glowed. He also had lite green eyes. Their daughter was Shira. Shira had white fur, she sometimes used that fur to play pranks on other saber cubs in winter. Since she had white fur she could sneak up and throw snowballs or pounce on the saber cubs. She had lite blue eyes that looked like the sky. Sometimes her eyes glistened like a ocean.

Mary: "Sniff, sniff. Yes that is a rabbit"!

Shira: "Can I go get it"?

Mary: "Not yet Shira, you first have to learn how to "get" the rabbit."

Shira: "Okay"! (My mommy is finally teaching me how to hunt)!

Mary: "The most important part is stalking it. Lets go find a good place for me to teach you.

Lets go there." (she said while pointing to a big field full of grass.)

Shira: (she jumps in the tall grass)

Mary: "First you need to find which direction the wind is going. Then you need to go

so that the wind is blowing your scent away from him. That way he will not be able

to smell you. To stalk the animal you need to walk as quietly as you can. And not

be seen. I will go in the middle. Your goal is to catch me without me hearing you

or seeing you." (she walks quickly to the center).

Shira: "Okay, so I need to check which direction the wind is going. Lets see now. (she licks a

finger and sticks it up in the air). So I go this way so she doesn't smell me. I have to

be careful, so she doesn't find me. SNAP! Shoot! The birds all the way on the top of

the tree heard that! I hope my mom didn't hear that.

Mary: "I heard that"!

Shira: "Darn, she heard me"!

Mary: "Try again, this time when you walk, use the pads on your paws.

Shira: "Okay! I am gonna get her this time"!

Mary: "Try two! Show me what you got"!

So, do you think that Shira will catch Mary? Read, comment and you will find out soon!

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