A/N : Hello, hello, hello! It's new year! Therefore, Happy New Year!
Ahem!
Well, straight to the point. I've changed my writing style from dialogue to narrative. The reason is because I showed my story to one my classmate (which is really good at writing) recently. She said that I should try using the narrative style when writing stories so that readers would be less confused and enjoy the story more. Is it true? Well, if this part didn't turned up well please tell me kay because I'm not that good at writing. I still need some improvement. (^o~)/
Note (To those who didn't know) – POV mean Point Of View
Chapter 5 : Mysterious Star Princes/Fushigi Boshi no Ouji (Part 1)
Fine POV:
The two gentlemen smiled. Their smiles were so heart capturing. Oh, I forgot to mention that these two are princes from another kingdom. Cool huh?
Meanwhile, Rein and I were daydreaming about these princes but when our eyes met each other, both mine and Rein's heart skip a beat.
Doki!
The one with dark blue hair and indigo eyes turned to his left and bowed to me. Doki! Once again my heart skips a beat. Well, you can say that its normal because I had a crush on him! Wait, did I just said that it's normal? Whatever.
I know him more than anyone, I guess. Prince Shade of The Moon Kingdom, a handsome young prince who is two years older than me. He is young, charming, smart yet irritating sometimes.
Oh no! Don't misunderstand that! When I said that he is irritating, I mean his words not him personally!
Sometimes he can be quiet a romantic person. He even brought me to his favourite place in the Moon Kingdom once. I love that place. That place gave an inspiring and calm feeling. The important part is that place is away from people (more like no one ever know that such a place exist).
That is Shade. He is quite an anti-social guy but his popularity never failed to amaze me. When we were at there, Shade told me that when he grown up; he wanted his own palace to be built there. Then when he's married, he'll move and live there. Having a jovial happy family with lot of kids is one of his dreams. Ha? What's with the 'lot of kids' thing? Well, according to the prince, his children will not feel lonely just like him if he has many of them. He only had Milky and it's somehow kind of lonely to him. Great huh? Who ever thought that Shade has this kind of dream? So far no one can even guess what's on his mind because he is so mysterious. I don't even know the reason why he showed me his secret place. He never told me.
The only thing that I know was the moon seemed so dear to us. It was as if I was sitting next to the moon. I even imagined myself being a moon princess. Hehe….
Eh?! Moon Princess? Blushing~
Uwahh! No! What am I thinking about?! I am a Sunny Kingdom Princess! Not a Moon Princess!
But…if I and Shade…*blush even more*
Oh come on! Snap out of it. Arghh!
Ah?! Wait. What…how…why am I being like this? Come to think of it, all this while my only affection is food. When did it start?
*look at Rein*
*soft whispering* "Bright-sama~" (Rein in her daydreaming mode)
Hmm… Did Rein daydreaming illness infected me?
*sweat drop* …
No! No no no no no no no and no! But…
*look at Rein again*
"Bright-sama~ hehe…"
In Rein's imagination:
Rein : Bright-sama!
Bright : *gentle voice* Rein. Princess Rein.
Rein : Ye..Yes! Wh..what? Mm..may I help you Bright-sama?
Bright : *gently smile* Of course. Would you like to go out with me?
Rein : Wh..what?! Really?! *doki doki*
Bright : Yes. Let us go to the Sunny-Drop Ceremony together. *lean on Rein's left ear and whisper softly* Just the two of us, okay?
Rein : *Blink! Blink!* Uwahhh~ I will! I will~
"Just the two of us.." *drooling* "hehehe"
Um…did I just saw Rein's imagination world? Wow that's kind of amusing.
Wait! What with the 'just the two of us' thing about? *sweatdrop*
A/N : Hehe.. In the end I mix both of the dialogue and narrative. Hahaha I'm still not used to it yet but I'll try my best.