Thanks for all the reviews! This actually sat in my computer for a while before I got the courage to post it. The story is pretty much finished I'm just adding some tweaks to the ending chapters but I always welcome suggestions! I am willing to add or change things to make it better. This is my first time ever really writing something and I am pretty proud with how it turned out. I know it is very long, it takes place over like 18 months and each chapter is a month long so if your sticking with it thanks! I will definitely be posting the rest over the next few days.