To the wonderful person who reviewed: thank you for you input, this story is written originally in very long chapters, but I decided to post it in short snip its. There will be more plot later, we're still in exposition.
And again thnk you for your review, it is the only reason I posted again, I was under the impression no one liked this story very much.
'A girl!' thought Fagin. If he could get a decent price worked out all his money problems would be solved, someone who looked like that would bring in barrels as a whore.
"Price?" he queried.
"A quid"
"I was think more a crown my dear friend"
"gim me three at least"
"I'm feeling generous so two"
"all righ'" agreed the man and the transactions were made.
It was a fair price not nearly as low as he'd have hoped, but when was he going to get another offer like this one.