Hey guys, Atomaton here now! So this is my first story on fanfiction! I have been planning this for a while, so I hope that it goes over quite well. Please provide constructive criticism! This story will provide a timeline in the Naruto series and also takes a few concepts from the Pokemon ReBURST series (although the latter will have some things altered for the sake of this story).
July 7th 2015 update – Minor corrections. Also please check out the public kik group #BetaReaders. It shall be a way to communicate with my readers as well as possibly gain a community to start proofreading each other's stories. Anyway…
I do not own Naruto or anything from the Pokemon franchise (especially ReBURST).
STORY START: Chapter 1~!
The first few rays of the day came shining through all the windows over the natives of the village Konoha. The birds chirped, children played, the wind blew a nice breeze. Yes, the Land of Fire certainly had some of the best mornings when compared to the other villages. And nothing could interrupt this peaceful morning… nothing really. Not even that blond bundle running away from-
"THIEF! THIEF! SOMEONE CATCH THAT THIEF!" Shrieked an angry old woman in the distance.
Yep nothing could interrupt the peace at all.
Hearing the painful screams, one of the nearby jonin decided to check out what the problem was. "What seems to be the problem miss?"
"THAT BLOND HAIRED BRAT STOLE AN APPLE FROM MY PRODUCE SHOP! I SAW HIM YES SIRIE! I want that creature to be finally taken care of once and for all!" The angry, cranky woman stated while grinding her crooked teeth and forming poorly made fists.
While the poor jonin tried to reason with the obviously furious woman, some of the other nearby villagers and shinobi forces had already started to run after this little kid. While the civilian folk were not able to catch up, some of the shinobi were able to quickly see the little swift blond kid from earlier.
"YOU FUCKING BRAT GET BACK HERE!" GIVE BACK WHAT YOU STOLE YOU LITTLE MONSTER!" "I KNEW NO GOOD WOULD COME FROM CITY FOLK AND THEIR FLYING MACHINES!" These screams came from the few able to keep up with the little kid.
At this moment the unnamed blond 'brat' looked back to see the gather humans starting to form a rather large cloud. "Dammit! I have to think of a way to get rid of them somehow!" He thought while extremely worried as they started picking up even more speed. He turned a few corners sharply and start to go through his clearly worn out pockets. "Feathers… glue… whoopee cushion… AHA! SMOKE PELLET! THAT'S PERFECT!" As the kid started to head into a fence – clearly cornered – he took out all of his smoke pellets and threw them at the ground quickly, successfully creating a cloud of dust.
As the dust started to clear we see all of the people who were chasing the kid were coughing rapidly from the dust cloud. "Hmph!" One said clearing his throat for good. He then came to his senses, realizing that blond kid got away. "SHIT! We almost had that little brat this time!" Said the nameless fellow now known as nameless shinobi #1 in outrage. "Tch, calm down. Next time we shall get that little demon for sure. I can't wait to see the beast's pathetic face where it belongs. Which is instead of a locked cage!" his buddy nameless shinobi #2 chuckled with deranged glee. On that note, nameless shinobi #2 started to lead his friend back to where they were before they had started to give chase.
But little to their knowledge, another pair of ears heard their little conversation. Narrowing his eyes, he took his face away from the small covered hole in the fence that he escaped through beforehand. After he brushed some of the dirt off of himself, he took out his newest possession from the rags he wore called clothing; a shiny red apple. Walking slowly and cautiously, he took a bite of it while grumbling to himself.
"Hmph. Not my fault the cunt was a greedy bitch. Why do I have to pay 100 Ryo for an apple that other people pay only 10 ryo for! Who the hell has that kind of money! Except those fucking white eyed perverts. Not to mention the fucking stank eye she gave me." The kid stated as he took another bite of the juicy fruit. "A boy has to eat somehow. But no matter – for the great Uzumaki Naruto-Sama shall forgive them when they bow to me as the Hokage one day!" He exclaimed as he did a mini fist pump in the air.
See this little kid, who conveniently introduced himself as Uzumaki Naruto, was quite the unwanted celebrity in this beautiful village known as Konohagakure. While unware, this little shrimp with a dirty smiling face held a great power once used to destroy everything in his path. Yes, the powerful Kyuubi no Kitsune was held inside of a seal on his stomach that was still quite unknown to him. The villagers all feared him (Shinobi and Civilian), thinking that he is the very threat that killed many of their loves ones years prior. So to retaliate this kid was overcharged on food prices, charged at by any mobs and even charged for crimes he did not commit (as well as a few thefts that he did commit) and many, many more crimes. But this kid took it all with a foxy grin across his face, for he in his heart knew that he would change this world he lived in one day. However little to his knowledge and everyone else, the turning point would start in this chaotic actually quite common day in his life.
As little Naruto decided to walk back home slowly for a few hours and saving the rest of his juicy prize for later, he tripped over a box. "AHHHH!" He screamed while flailing his arms to achieve balance, while only achieving to quite comically fall flat on his face and crushing the apple he had just gotten after taking all morning to get. After spitting out a few things of dirt that he got in his mouth and getting up, he starting swearing slightly in anger and confusion. "WHO THE FUCK WAS THAT! When I finally get the guy that tripped me I-" He said stopping short when he noticed the box. "… Woah. I wonder what that is… I hope it is something awesome!" He said excitedly and foolishly, for any person with common sense in the ninja world would be cautious with strange boxes in case they held a paper bomb of some sort. But luckily this box had no bomb, for when the boy opened it he saw a few small objects. They were a crystal of some sort, a red and white ball and lastly a note of some kind.
"Strange… I never saw anything like this before… I wonder if this is some kind of toy that our kids have their parents buy for them…" Naruto said with slight gloom. He filed any thoughts of his nonexistent family for later as he took the note to read. "… WHY THE HELL DID I THINK THIS WAS A GOOD IDEA! I CAN'T READ!" He said raging before he calmed down slightly. "Okay calm down Naruto. Saru-Jiji says that a true shinobi has to be ana.. anali.. that's right! Analytical!" He exclaimed. He looked over the note to find possibly any word that he would be able to understand. After looking at the message again, two words next to one another did finally stand out. "…Throw down?" Looking at the red and white button ball and the seemingly fragile looking gem, he decided to try his luck with the strange sphere.
After being slightly startled with the ball becoming bigger in his hand, Uzumaki Naruto on this day changed his life forever, by throwing down the ball down on the ground.
A small flash appeared and quickly went away, living only a creature never seen before in his path. It was a small thing, only about 1'04 in height to his short 3'5. It had small feline body with blue and black fur + paws along with yellow marks. The creature's front paws were blue, hind paws were black and it's black tail had a star on the very end of it. The little thing at this time decided to look up at his face, letting Naruto see that it also had yellow eyes, a tiny red nose and a small tuff of blue fur at the top of his head. It was – dare he say it… cute.
'Woah… I always wanted a pet!' Naruto thought with glee. 'Still, I'm not sure if I am cut out to take care of it considering I have been stealing lately just to get by with lunch.' But as the thing tilted its head slightly, Naruto could not help but just want to cuddle it. 'Maybe Saru-Jiji will give me more ryo though so that way I could take care of it too, or maybe help me find it a home.'
Making up his mind, Naruto grabbed the small box and put it where he kept his destroyed apple from earlier. He then bent down to pet the head of the little feline cub, slowly seeing it getting somewhat into an attacking position. "There, there… who's a cute little thing?" He cooed while grinning. "You are, you are – AH WHAT THE FUCK?!" He screamed as the little lion thing bit his head. Suddenly he felt a jolt of pain as he tumbled back onto the ground. He then saw the little thing run off. "Hey, come back here!"
Naruto started off on his now second dash of the day, except this time HE was the one chasing after the annoying little thing. 'Agile too.' he noted, as the thing jumped over another fence while he also jumped after it. But alas, he finally did catch up to the little cub. "I GOTCHA" he exclaimed with glee as he jumped and slid on his belly, catching it in his hand.
But to his soon realization, they were not the only beings located in the alley at this time. "Well, well, well…" slurred now nameless drunk shinobi #2, "Look who finally decided to show his face after this morning!" He continued, nudging his partner nameless drunk shinobi #1. They both shared a look and a grin with one another, while moving in on the defenseless little 6 year old.
Seeing that Naruto was in a bad state and accidentally used all of his smoke pellets from earlier, he chuckled nervously and decided to try and reason with the wasted two. "Now, now gentlemen, I'm sure that there is a way that we could all figure this out. There is no reason to be violent!" he continued while sweating pellets.
But alas his words were not to be heard by the drunk pair. "I'm finally going to fuck you up real good, demon boy!" slurred nameless drunk shinobi number #2 as he got out a kunai from his little kit around his leg. As Naruto's eyes widened in fear, the little blue bundle in his handle suddenly shot out and tackled the first pathetic excuse for an addition to the ninja force. "What the- MY EYES!" As suddenly a flash from the cub's body suddenly went off in the faces of the two buffoons.
As Naruto quickly recovered, he scooped up the cub in his hands and ran away as fast as his little agile body could take him. After a few minutes of running and a little more of huffing, he took another look at the little blue lion cub.
"You sure are somethin'." He said as he looked at the cub. But aside from literally shocking me from earlier, I think I'm going to like you!" He grinned. The cub then stuck out his tongue and started to lick Naruto's face, as Naruto then started to giggle slightly. "There's no way that I am goin' to give you away now, not with all those cool things you did before! So I'm goin' to give ya a name!" After in deep thought for a few seconds, Naruto finally thought of a name. "Since you scared me earlier, I'm going to name you Jolt!"
And from that day on, a legendary duo was born.
STORY END: Chapter 1~!
So yes! Please like, review and give plenty of constructive criticism! I go to college, so school might get in the way somewhat of writing my story chapters. Put hopefully I shall keep up somewhat and not just post once a year! 8P See you all next time hopefully!
Atomaton out!