I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore, Guys

by Mrs. Frodo Baggins

Five friends are murdered one night, and wake up to find themselves in Middle Earth, with one problem though, one of their friends finds herself to waking up as a friend of the enemy, Sauron. T for some swearing Pippin/OC Merry/OC Frodo/OC Legolas/OC

30. AN: PLEASE READ

I AM HORRIBLE I KNOW!

THIS IS NOT ANOTHER CHAPTER.

Cuss me out, I don't care. I just need some help!

As you guys know, I went to see The Hobbit, and of course, being the Frodo and Pippin and Merry lover I am, instantly fell in love with Bilbo. And the thought of, "Oh! Poor Bilbo needs a girl! How 'bout another OC?"

Pleasantly surprised, I found some new stories of The Hobbit that just came out, some Bilbo/OC stories! And the number of stories in that category are increasing everyday! *squeals*

SOOOOOOO... My story began to formulate, and I made a long first chapter.

It's long, but I am not pleased with it. I feel like I can't get Bilbo's character quite right. And I feel as if my OC is to cliche-ish. I don't know, I just need some answers.

So far, my OC is a good friend of Bilbo, has been for a long time. He finds her extremely beautiful (as do all the lads), while all the girls find him handsome (who wouldn't love a Baggins?). The two eventually discover they love each other. Eventually, it will happen.

BUT, then another idea popped in (DAMN MY IMAGINATION!). Maybe a girl he has always hated, or never really talked to before? It would still be the same girl and all, just a different relationship between the two.

She's also got some elf in her, which she will later discover.

So, my main struggle? Changing the first chapter.

Should she be a long time friend, or a complete stranger to Bilbo? AGH! I need feedback, quickly! Before I melt! Gah! I will post the first chapter soon, and if I get no feedback from this in two days, I will post it as I have written it. Maybe I'll work on figuring out Bilbo myself too.

Curse my love of the Baggins boys. CURSE IT!

Lemme know soon guys, I have great ideas for this story, and would like to get a head start soon!

THANKS! And blame me for getting everyone's hopes up of another chapter. I am writing chapter 5 of ROTK currently. So BE HAPPY!

Thank you!

BTW, anyone not just love The Hobbit Soundtrack?! Of course LOtR is better, but I still like this one! You've done it again, Mr. Shore!

-Mrs. Frodo Baggins

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