Hello in my the newest chapter of Phantasmagoria in Konoha. In previous chapter, Yukari, Ran and Naru fly to Scarlet Devil Mansion. And Naru beat Cirno in a 'duel'. I still can't call it a duel for whatever reason. Maybe it's just me.
I just want make one remark. Don't and I mean DON'T write about my gramma errors. Please. I got them over my head. If something else is not right, write it. But if it's only gramma then you can already stop writing the review. I'm searching for Beta right now, so when I will have one, these chapter will be updated.
I just simply don't want to make you wait God-know-how-long for chapters before they will be check by Beta Reader.
So. After that thing is deal with, let's move to the story.
Oh I would forgot! The result of the poll are like this:
1. Kurama 7
2. Sakuya 6
3. Hinata 3
4. Mokou 3
5. Sanae 3
6. With no one 1
7. Ino 1
8. Shizuka 0.
That's mean Naru will be paired with Kurama and Sakuya. This was your choice so don't whine later. If someone whined and didn't vote, it was his own fault.
Now to the story!
Stage 5
Vampire sisters
Scarlet Devil Mansion
Naru was watching at Remilia with little shocked expression. Before her was girl no more that her age. Her height was also close similar to her own. This Remilia wasn't looking that powerful, Naru was assuming that she is in equal power as she. But something was off. Then she remember.
"Listen Naru. The person we gonna meat is really strong. Don't make her angry."-Yukari voice trailed in her head. So probably this was Yukari friend. Remilia grin rose a bit and she said.
"My,my Yukari. You got someone new with you. Want you introduce her?"-Remilia said pointing slightly at Naru. Naru broke from thoughts and bowed slightly.
"Naru. Naru Yakumo, youkai."-she said nervously. Remilia eyes opened wide for no more that second before grin again appear on her face.
"What a surprise. Yukari why didn't you tell me you're mother. I would love to see her earlier."-Remilia said with grin and with teasing voice. Yukari grin back and said.
"Oy, Sorry, Remi. But I was making sure that my daughter would be trained to take care of herself."-she respond discretely shooting lighting bolts from eyes. Ran saw how these two were glaring at each other. Naru didn't.
"Here they go again..."-Ran sighed. Naru titled her head confused. She didn't catch what Ran was talking about. Soon Remilia and Yukari broke from stare and Remilia said.
"Sakuya."
"Yes. Ojōsama?"-voice said. Naru looked behind her and noticed girl wearing blue-white maid outfit. She got silver hair and blue eyes. Naru jumped slightly from shock. Sakuya, Naru guess because she appeared when name was called, just give Naru quick glance before she turn her gaze at Remilia.
"Prepare the food. Tonight we will have small party."-Remilia said with smile. Sakuya nodded. Ran said to Sakuya.
"Here. Take this basket. We took with us some wine and food for party."-Ran gave Sakuya basket. She nodded and said.
"I will go prepare everything then. By your permission."-Sakuya bowed. Remilia only waved her off. Soon Sakuya disappeared as fast as she appeared. Naru was amazed and shocked. Remilia noticed it and said.
"I see you're interested in my Sakuya, don't you."-she teased Naru. She quickly glanced at Remilia and shocked her head.
"Not at All! Just wondering how she appear and disappear so fast."-she said. Remilia answered.
"It's her ability. She can manipulate Time and Space. One of the most useful skills I meat with."-Remilia said with proud. Yukari said.
"I see, you value Sakuya a lot. Like always."-Yukari smiled. Remilia snicker and said.
"That's right. I at least value work of my servant do. Not like one youkai I know."-Remilia back fired at Yukari. A vein popped on Yukari face. Both of them moved their face closer to each other.
"I at least don't look like child, you loli vampire."
"Said old-hag. From this distance I can see wrinkles on your face. I can even count them." More veins popped at Yukari face.
"Said the desk, who got over 500 years on her neck. You want to charm child from human village with this tiny breast of your."-Yukari said. This time on Remilia face pop out veins.
Naru and Ran sweat dropped at situation in front of them. Naru chuckle slightly and asked.
"Are you sure they are friends?"-she pointed at them. Ran nodded awkwardly and said.
"Yeah. But some times even I have doubts."-Ran deadpanned. After little 'cat fight' Remilia showed them way to place where they will eat. While they were walking Naru was looking around.
The corridor was painted with scarlet-color paint. On the floor was also scarlet carpet. The windows were quite big revealing night sky. On both side of them were curtains made from scarlet material. Naru admitted, if this wasn't called with 'Scarlet' in the name, then she didn't know how to call this place.
Soon they reached to their destination. The room was big and contain big table on which was prepared food. There were also candles and flowers. The food looks delicious and smell was also gorgeous. Naru felt how saliva was gathering in her mouth. Around hall were monuments with different vases on them. They were looking really old. On the left side was fireplace. The fire was dancing his wild dance illuminating room, which gave secrecy to it. The windows were cover with curtains so the only source of light was fireplace and candles. But that was enough. She could see everything clearly.
Sakuya bowed and said.
"Everything is prepared Ojōsama. May I ask about your sister?"-she asked. Remilia start thinking and said.
"She will appear anyway in her won time. Don't call her. I got feeling that she will appear soon enough."-Remilia said not really carrying. Sakuya only nodded. Yukari said to Naru.
"I see you're hungry. We will soon start eating, but we will wait for the rest of residents."-Yukari said. Naru nodded. She felt how her stomach demand something to eat. After twenty minutes, everyone gathered. Naru noticed Meiling and two other persons. The first one was girl with long red hair and wings on her head and backs. They were similar to Remilia but different in the same time. She was wearing some kind which was black with white sleeves. She also got eyes matched with her hair. And her face got small smile on it, through the whole time.
The girl next to her was smaller that devil next to her. She was wearing pajama like dress which was pink. She got also purple eyes and hairs, on which were ribbons. On her head was slightly similar to Yukari hat with moon on it. In her hand she was holding book which Naru didn't recognize.
They walked to Her and Yukari and said.
"Welcome Yukari. I see you are in good health."-said purple girl or women. Naru had doubts.
"Why Thank you. I see you also is in good health."- Yukari said back. Women nodded and said.
"Today I'm in special good health. Ohh. And who is that?"-Women asked noticing Naru. She flinched and straight her posture. Yukari smiled and pat Naru head.
"This is my daughter. Naru Yakumo. Naru this is Patchouli Knowledge and Koakuma. Patchi Koakuma, this is Naru."-Yukari introduced. Koakuma eyes wide opened from shock. Patchouli was also surprised but not so much.
"Good evening."-Naru said little embarrassed. Yukari chuckled.
"I see. Nice to meat you. I hope you will enjoy your stay here."-Patche said and walked away. Koakuma then flew to her and grabbing her hand start shaking it.
"Nice to meat you~! I hope too see you in the future~!"-she said excited. Yukari said.
"We're not leaving. We still got party to start."-Yukari said trying to safe Naru arms. Koakuma eyes wide opened and said.
"That's true. Sorry for that."-Koakuma put her hands in apologize gesture. Naru only nodded awkwardly. Koakuma smiled and flew back to Patchouli who was sitting. Naru sighed and asked.
"Are everyone so lively like her?"-Naru asked. Yukari smiled and nodded.
"They are few like her. But don't worry. Come, we should sit to table."-Yukari gestured. Naru nodded and they sit down. Ran and Sakuya were talking about future dishes which would be served. Before that Yukari called Ran and whispered something to her. Ran only nodded. Naru asked if this was something important but Yukari shocked her head.
Soon they start eating. Naru couldn't stop herself from eating. The meat and salads were delicious. Yukari sweat dropped at Naru.
"Y-You sure enjoy your self with meal, are you?"-Naru only nodded. Remilia snicker and said.
"I see your daughter really enjoy my food."-Naru stopped eating instantly and swallowing food she had said.
"So-Sorry..."-she muttered. Remilia laughed and waved this off.
"Don't worry. Eat as much as you like. It's party after all."-she said. Naru smiled and nodded. Soon tea was served. Naru ate quite a lot, and she still could eat more. Yukari was wonder if Yuyuko didn't infect her with her gluttony. She hope not. After eating everyone was enjoying tea. Meanwhile new person appeared.
She got blond short hair with pony tail at side and red hairs. She wears a red dress and vest, with a pink shirt underneath. But what caught Naru attention were her wings. Instead like Remilia her were looking like metal and got crystal. Naru wonder how could she flying with them but she dismiss it. Yukari told her that in Gensokyo many things don't have sense, and it's wise to don't always relay on it.
After tea the girl walked to her. Well more like she run to her. With bright smile on her face, and excitement in her eyes. Naru was little surprised. The girl grab her hand and asked.
"Ne, Ne~!? Will you play with me!?"-Yukari and Remilia look at both of them. Naru nervously asked back.
"And what we… gonna play?"-the girl was going to respond but Remilia interrupted her.
"Flandre. You should introduce yourself."-Remilia said with irritation. Slightly but Naru could said that it was there.
"Sorry, Onee-san."-She jumped slightly away from Naru and bowed slightly, while grabbing her skirt, doing same which Remilia made when she welcomed them.
"My name is Flandre Scarlet. Nice to meat you."-she said with big smile at the end. Naru bowed slightly as well and said.
"Naru Yakumo, it's pleasure."
Both Yukari and Remilia were watching this with small smile. Remilia asked.
"Do you think they will become friends?"-she looked at Yukari. She just hid her face behind her fan and said.
"It would be nice. Naru don't have much friends. The only one is Youmu and Yuyuko. But she treat them more like family. Oh well. I hope that Flandre won't use her power on MY Naru or consequence would be dire."-she narrowed dangerously her eyes at Remilia. She felt large pressure and said.
"I-I will tell Flandre to be careful. Don't worry."-she answered. Remilia maybe was friend with Yukari but she knew how much she can say to Yukari, and feeling such pressure mean that Naru was this to Yukari which Flandre to Remilia. Part of Family.
Flandre said to Naru excited.
"Ne Ne~?! Do you know danmaku?"
Naru nodded and said.
"Yeah, but I'm still quite weak compare to my mother for example. I still need more training."-admit Naru. Flandre get even more excitement. She grab both Naru hands and said.
"I will help you. I don't have much friends. Only Marisa is coming sometimes. Let's go! I will help you and also we will have fun!"-Flandre said and dragged away. Naru yelped surprised. She didn't expected that Flandre was so strong to drag her without much problem.
"Play safe, got it Flandre!?"-Remilia shouted so both of them could hear it. Flandre just waved her hand. Naru was still surprised so she didn't respond.
"Ohhh…. They are gone."-Yukari said to herself. Remilia just sighed. She was wondering how much damage her residence will suffer. Hope not too much.
Several hours later
Remilia with Yukari and the rest were standing outside of mansion looking at it with eyes wide open. Right now from mansion left only Library and clock tower.
*Crumble*
Now...only Library survived. Remilia got veins all over her face. On her face was devilish grin and her eyes brow was twitching uncontrollably. Sakuya and Meiling were watching this scene with nervous smile. Patchuli just sighed. She was happy that her Library was untouched. Koakuma was...well… shocked.
Yukari was giggling behind her fan and Ran just sighed. She was wondering how this happen.
One hour earlier
Yukari and Remilia were talking in room where there was party.
"So. Can you tell me, how did you acquire daughter? Don't tell me you slept with someone."-Remilia grinned behind her hand. Yukari put down her cup with tea and said from behind her fan.
"Ohhh. No. I'm not that kind of women. I saved her from death."-Yukari answered. Remilia looked little surprised because she rose her eye brow. It wasn't common that Yukari would help someone.
"I see. But I think it wasn't because of kindness. We know each other for too long. So tell, what is so special about her?"-Remilai asked curios. Yukari looked at Remilia and sighed not really caring. Soon or later Gensokyo will know about her. So there is no point hiding.
"She got the same ability as me. That's all. But with the time pass, I get more fond of her. I guess I just need such change."-Yukari said with small, honest smile. Remilia whistled.
"So that how it is. I see now. Well… I hope nothing bad will happen. I wonder if she will cause an incident? It's the only way to be acknowledge by most of Gensokyo."-Remilia said not really caring. But inside she couldn't wait to see what that girl will cause in near future.
"I know. Well, we will see. Time only will tell."-Yukari said and was going to take another sip of tea but then she felt small rumbles. Remilia felt them as well and looked around, wondering what was happening. Do Marisa break into the Library again?
Soon her question was answered when big explosion hit the wall next to them. Remilia jumped away quickly. Ran and Yukari disappeared in gaps. Sakuya used her power to stop time and move away to safe distance. Soon the wall collapse and the dust filled the room.
The gap opened near the ceiling and Yukari popped from it with Ran.
"W-what was that?"-Ran asked. Yukari chuckle and said.
"I see Naru and Fladre have a lot of fun together."-Yukari said looking at five figures flying through the dust and then through the window. Naru was trying to fly away but Flandres were right behind her. Four of her to be precisely. Nar ugot scary expression her face and Flandres got maniacal smile on her face.
"Naru, stop running and play~!"One of Flandre shouted. She fired column of big blue balls. Meanwhile the other fired two circles of yellows balls and the rest fired circles or red shards. Naru was trying her best to avoid the bullets but there were still too many bullets for her. Remilia fly next to Yukari and said with irritation.
"I said to be careful… And now I got walls and windows destroyed. Yukari chuckle.
*KABOOM*
Both Yukari and Remilia saw how part of clock tower was destroyed because of danmaku which Flandre fired. Remilia got veins all over her face, and she was trying her best to not explode and stop this madness. Yukari was chuckling evilly for Remilia misfortune. Hana would be happy to gather such misfortune from Remilia.
*KABOOM*
Another explosion could be heard. Remilia didn't stand this anymore. Her power erupted from her and she shouted.
"THAT'S IT! I'M ENDING THIS RIGHT NOW! DIVINE PUNISHMENT "YOUNG DEMON LORD!"-Remilia declared. Soon Flandre and Naru found themselves surrounded by lasers and big bullets. Naru was scared, and Flandre got worried. Soon both of them were covered in bullets. Remilia ended that farce, but she destroyed part of her mansion as well.
Yukari was now near Remilia via gap and said.
"I see your you finished not only this farce but your home as well."-Yukari pointed down. Remilai looked at place where they ate and saw that there were only rumbles. She grab her head in hands and shouted.
"MY MANSIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!"-her yell could be hear all around Gensokyo. But nobody cared.
Back to present time
Talking about culprits both of them were kneeling in front of Remilia with lowered heads. Naru was scared and Flandre worried.
"So… You don't have anything to say? Not even apologize!?"-Remilia said with twitch. Flandre and Naru jumped from fear and both shouted in union.
"I'm Sorry Remilia-san/Onee-san!"
Remilia sighed and massaged her temples. This was the worst. It will pass a lot of time before her Mansion will be fixed. Sakuya dragged Meiling to start the repairing. Koakuma and Patchuli walked away to search for spell to help in repair. Remilia was going to punch both Naru and Flandre but Yukari stopped her saying.
"Calm down, Remi. Ran will help you, right?"-she asked.
"What!? Yukari-sama, are you serious?!-ran shouted but quick slap with Yukari fan quickly make Ran silent and made her nod in agreement. Yukari smiled and said.
"I will then take Naru. I will see you soon."-Yukari said and opened the gap. Naru was going to walk trough it but Flandre said stopping her.
"Let's play again, Ok?"-she asked with smile. Naru looked at Flandre with smile and nodded. Soon both Yukari and Naru vanished. Flandre sighed but soon she felt terrible power behind her. She slowly looked behind her with scary face, only to see pissed off Remilia. A sweat was running down Flandre face.
"Now, Flandre! Looks like you'll need to be Punished(A/N: If someone got the reference that person will get cookie)"-Remilia said.
"Kyuuuu!"-Flandre only shouted when Remilia dragged her away. Ran and Sakuya looked at this with sweat.
"I sympathizes Flandre."-Ran said.
"Right, no?"-Sakuya respond.
Just another, normal day in Gensokyo.
Two years later
Naru was standing outside standing the house. She got her eyes closed. She was trying to concentrate about something. She slowly moved her hand upward. Soon small crack appeared in front of her. It got orange ribbons at the end. Soon crack opened revealing it was full of eyes. Naru opened her eyes and smiled. Soon she heard clapping behind her.
Yukari was watching it with smile. She couldn't have be more proud of her right now.
"Good job Naru. You opened the gap. It's still take you a lot of time, but it's nothing good training wouldn't fix."-Yukari said. Naru smiled and said.
"Yeah, and it's still little tiring. I got hope to be as strong as you."-Naru said Yukari chuckle and said.
"I don't want you to be strong just like me. I want you to surpass me. That's how it's always work. Student must surpass his teacher. That's how legends are born."-Yukari said. Naru nodded and sigh she was tired. Opening border was much difficult that's it's seem. You need to find right border, separated it from the others if it's connected, visualized it and open it without using brute force. If you use brute force it's big chance that it will be unstable.
Naru walked to Yukari and grab tea and took sip. Yukari said.
"You can open simply border. So for now let's leave it and let's create your first spell card. Do you remember my explanation about Spell Card Rules?"-she asked. Naru nodded.
"Good. You almost master your non-spell cards attack which you got how many? Six I think? Doesn't matter. Look at these."-Yukari pulled from her sleeve few blanks cards. Naru took one in hand and looked at it curiously.
"These are Spell Cards card. In these cards are gathered power of one spell card in various level. For example. Do you remember Flandre spell 'Four of a Kind'?"-Yukari asked. Naru nodded. Naru sometimes visit Flandre and 'play' with her which cause a lot of trouble for Remilia because her Mansion is always destroy in a small or greater extent.
"Flandre spell cards are slightly different. She just don't have level various of it. Chen for example got it. From "Easy" to "Lunatic"(A/N: I don't even care anymore! Do what you want! This Fourth wall couldn't stand too long when you are involved Yukari. Yukari: That's right~. Author: DON'T BE HAPPY ABOUT IT!). This makes spell cards users fight on equal level so they can enjoy the duel. Of course It's not required, but it useful."-Yukari said. Naru nodded in understatement.
"So, how I should make my spell card?"-Naru asked. Yukari answered.
"It's quite easy, but you require a lot of magic to create it. Much more that normal attacks. That's why I didn't allow you to create it at t he beginning. People who think it's easy are stupid. How it's easy to pomp advance patter with different various of level? It's not! For my two last spell cards (A/N:'Border of Life and Death' and 'Danmaku Bounded Field') required a lot from me. I was out for two weeks, when I rushed with creating them."-Yukari puffed out her cheeks.
Naru sweat dropped. Her mother loved breaking the Fourth wall. She must admit.(A/N: I told. I don't care anymore…).
"Anyway. Let's get started. You need to think of pattern, how your spell cards should work, then name it. Everything in your mind. After that pomp your magic into the card."-Yukari said. Naru nodded and concentrate.
Yukari saw how Naru was thinking about the pattern. It was intensive. Soon Naru opened her eyes and start pump energy in the card. Yukari saw how card start glowing and soon Kanji appeared o nit with the name. After Naru finished she fall on Yukari laps. She was tired. Yukari smiled and pat Naru head. She looked at card and after a minute of examination it she smiled.
"Well, Well, Well. Looks like this pattern it's very similar to one of mine. Not that I mind. It's similar, but also different. Can't wait too see it."-Yukari smiled.
Ok that's it. Here is chapter fro you guys. I got good news and bad news as well. The good one. I found beta reader. The bad one he is busy for next week. So after that time he will start checking this story so In future, I hope, My chapter at least to this story won't have gramma errors. Or at least it won't have them in such number as right now.
Also Naru spell card. Wait for next chapter. Her spell cards will be similar to Yukari but also different. Oh I GOT IDEA!
READERS! Listen to me! I want to know if there is someone among you who is good with Danmakufu program. It's game engine which allow you to create your own danmaku game.
And here I want to ask you. I want you to create for me video with Naru spell card. Write to me and I will write down specifics how her spell cards will work. I can't wait to see your progress.
About Yukari remark about spell cards. Yeah. It's another of issue I got inside me when I read stories when OC or who ever create his spell card with minimum effort and magic he or she used. It's Called Spell CARDS for a reason. It must have great amount of magic so they can work how long they can. Or how complicate they are.
But it's probably just me. About Naru masters her non-spell attacks. They are not so advance and Naru was training then through whole TWO years, so it's not too fast at least to me. Also Naru meanwhile was learning how to open borders. And she opened one today.
Anyways, Write down the review and see you guys in the next chapters.
OMAKE Flandre Punishment
Remilia was sitting with tea in her hand. She was watching at scene before her with devilish smile. She was in lower part of mansion she order Patchuli to prepare. It was big swimming pool with water in it at length almost 200 meters.
Remilia was sitting few meters above looking how her sister was receiving her punishment.
Right now Flandre was...swimming in the pool. Vampires became weaker in water. But Flandre is losing all her power and turning her into normal child.
"Onee…-san… I can't… swim… any...more"-Flandre whined. Remilia smirked and fired danmaku at Flandre, which cause Flandre to swim faster. She said.
"It's your punishment! Now! You got 200 more laps to do!"-Remilia said. Flandre gave yelp of surprise and shouted.
"ONEE-SAN NO BAKA!-Flandre shouted while continuing swimming and avoiding danmaku. When someone pissed Remilia, she could make Oni running for it's money.
END OF OMAKE