POSTFACE
Et voilà !
Story's over.
What really fascinated me about it, from the very start, was that "duality" of the plot, with one part being positive – and very hot ! – while the other was extremely negative – and very cold, in the sense that it relates to Death.
The original storyboard by Garabatoz, made of 10 parts, was well-balanced, in that the dramatic turn takes place exactly at part 5 : the first half of the page is still about the girls' happiness, while the second half shows the first attacks of the strips. So no paramountcy between happy moments and drama : they are shared in two equal parts (or close enough to equals), which makes it a two-faceted story.
I recall reading or seeing love stuff turning into horror, but sex stuff (lemon)… now that's much more rare ! No memory of intercourse scene evolving into some chiller. X-rated material often includes sexually explicit depictions or physically violent events, but not that often both together or succeeding to one another. And it's also something that triggered my interest for this VERY graphic novel drawn by Garabatoz.
The plotline of this story you've just read faithfully follows the one of the original work, save for two things : the dialogues – there are none in the first place, just a few words, moans and muffled screams written in the comic's panels – and the moment where Goo cries. I added the later for dramatic emphasis, and while one may be terrified to die, tears can add up to that panic. Because when someone is really, really, scared, and realizes that there's "no way out", then that someone may very well be led to cry, out of sheer despair.
I hope the last part – my explanation of why the girls were brought there, and why exactly they were left to rotten – didn't sound/seem too… hum… out of place ? Awkward ? Because that part, where the plot suddenly stops and I address you guys directly, definitely contrasts with the rest of the story, where I just stuck to recounting a sequence of events. So yeah, because of that change from story to explanations (but with the latter still relating to the story !), it may have seemed weird, yet I still hope it was okay with you. Was it ?
I would like to express my gratitude to whoever read, favorited, reviewed this short story, whoever supported it/me. This is much, much, much appreciated, and if you like what you found, well I'm the happiest man round here then ! :D And I wish you lotta success with your own stories !
This story owes it all to Garabatoz and also, because that work of his was a commission (request), to his patron, i.e. the guy (or girl ?) who imagined all this and asked Garabatoz to draw it all for him (or her ?). But since I don't know the identity of that patron, most of my gratitude goes out to GARABATOZ for putting in pictures this both beautiful and horrible plot, exciting at first and scary afterwards. Thank you, dear Garabatoz, for your awesome, amazing, wonderful, marvelous, fantastic work which fascinates me on and on and on !
And that's pretty much why I decided to dedicate this story here to GARABATOZ, since I'm indebted to him for the whole storyline. Gara, if you got to read my story, and are currently reading this, I wanna wholeheartedly thank you for F-WRAP, a splendid artwork, with some hypnotizing two-sides plot, magnificent yuri scenes (Goo is definitely gorgeous as a teen !)… and a pretty original – yet frightening – way to die !
I encourage all you Folxxxx to watch F-Wrap on Hentai Foundry or or Myhentaicomics : it really is a great work of art ! And take a look at Garabatoz's other works as well : the lad is pretty gifted ! :D And who knows, perhaps some of you will soon propose him some commissions, mmmmmmh… ;)
Okay, time to let the curtain fall. Hope you enjoyed the ride, don't regret reading this and that will check out the original artwork on the websites I mentioned above.
Take care, all of ya, and may Happiness pour its sweet nectar over your heads, as often as can be ! =))))
Peace, Love, Ecstasy !
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Léo
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