Run

by JessBubble

Lieutenant Tegan James is running from an old enemy who wants her dead out of paranoia. She's a British marine with a lot of influence, and after pulling a few strings she's managed to wind up in the Pegasus galaxy as the new girl on Lieutenant Colonel Sheppard's team. He finds her intriguing, too intriguing and is soon sucked into her problems, everyone else left but will he stay?

21. I'm Back!

Hello everyone!

Finally I am back and my exams are finished! I'm sorry it took a little longer than expected, unfortunately life got in the way there and it took longer than I thought it would to review my chapters, but I've done it and reposted them all for you now. I've changed any spelling mistakes and as much of the grammar errors as I could spot in the text and a few other things that were pointed out to me back in May/March. The plot itself is largely unchanged, with the start of the story following episodes from season 5 and the end following my own little plotline. Hopefully, the chapters are now as near to perfect as I can get them for you.
Whilst I'm here I'd like to thank the people that inspired me to improve as best I could, the main two being Guest 64 and paulaballa85, who not only gave me the constructive criticism that was the kick in the pants I needed but showed so much support for this story in the reviews they shared. Thank you also to Lizverse, who pops up more than once in the reviews too with lots of positive feedback (even when I look back and think I don't deserve it). I have written other chapters, I just need to review those and correct anything I missed in them before I post them and move the story along.
Finally, I'd like to mention that it's been suggested that I get a Beta Reader to help me out with my writing. I regret to inform you that although there are still a few chapters to go before this story comes to an end, it is quite close in my mind to being finished, and for now I'll hold off on the Beta Reader idea. However, this will not be the last story I post (I hope), since I have others in the wings for various other fandoms (including another Atlantis one for everyone's favourite Major Lorne) that I'm planning on sharing. Given how this one went I can't help but think that a Beta Reader would be a great idea for a fresh story, and if anyone could give me more information about how that would work and how I could go about finding one I would very much appreciate it.

Thank you again to everyone who hasn't lost patience with me and is still here, I'm so sorry about the long wait but I hope the quality has improved enough to make it worth the wait.
Best wishes,
JessBubble