Our first Mary Sue has the full name of Latana Maxwell, and her codename is Explosion. She is 21 years old and part of the X-Men Evolution fandom. She was created by my older sister, who is also on FanFiction with the pen name of Splo.

NOTE: The exclamation marks are used for "emphasis" of the purple prose, not because I actually like this character. In fact, I DON'T.


Latana is described as a beautiful Argentinian girl who is "incomparable" to a large majority of other models. She stands tall at 5'9 and weighs 125 pounds, perhaps one of the most perfect height-and-weight measurements for a model. Her lithe build is graceful and athletic, with long, toned legs and muscular but slender arms. She is very flexible from years of gymnastics and can do multiple things and is a level 10 gymnast! It's quite the workout for her and while she has complete potential to be in the Olympics, she would prefer not to. Perfect hips, a large D sized bust, a large, firm, beach bosom, small waist, and defined curves hug her body tightly. Her measurements are regarded as "incredibly sought after" and "completely faultless" by multiple sources, including CEOs of modeling agencies that would go to great lengths and take many drastic measures for her to be the cover of their magazines and the main girl on their catwalks.

Her creamy, olive skin is flawless and completely free from any form of acne, eczema, or blemishes of any kind, even though she doesn't obsess over her skin care like many young people do. It is naturally flawless, which she can thank her wonderful genes for. Her youthful face is charmingly rounded and sculpted perfectly, with soft features and a perfect jawline. She has a perfect sloped nose that can cause other girls to seethe with envy, full plump lips as pink as a rose in full bloom, radiant eyes are shaped like ripened almond seeds and eyes as blue as the clear ocean and glistening, long eyelashes. And her hair! It is dark brown, like the bark of a towering redwood tree at the peak of its greatest years of eupepsia, and it is long and as soft as silky fibers woven into a magnificent robe to the touch. This healthy mass of hair atop her head can be styled many different ways.

These are the very reasons that she garnered the attention of a significant modeling agency! In fact, Latana has been and still continues to be actively pursued by well-known modeling agencies, including Elite Management, New York Model Management, Ford Models, IMG Models, L.A. Models, Nous Model Management, Wilhelmina Models, and more! She is just so faultlessly gorgeous to look at, or even more so, to gawk at with eyes wide and mouths agape. Guys want to be in a relationship with her and girls wish that they were her, with her inculpable figure, skin that emits a warm olive tone, and luxurious velvety hair that falls like a rushing waterfall down her back in seemingly never-ending cascades.

Latana adorns herself in only the highest quality clothing one can afford. Obviously, as an international world-class supermodel, she has made quite the fortune and does not hesitate to confidently flaunt her beautiful figure on social media. Being in New York, she has access to some sought after designer clothing. Latana, however, tends to be inelaborate in public settings, wishing to be unseen unless at a large event with some very important people. In public, you can see her wearing platforms and boots from one of her favorite designers, Dior. She wears dark, unpretentious colors such as the most valorous of jet blacks, various shade of indistinct grays, and unostentatious browns. She enjoys wearing her signature, stylish aviator sunglasses in public, even on the occasions that clouds conceal the bright blue sky and beaming sun like an expanded ivory blanket. The clothing she wears is very loose and doesn't hug her curvaceous figure in the slightest. She wears long maxi dresses and zipped-up leather jackets that mask her D cups along with an ordinary bun hairstyle.


This sums up the first chapter with our first Mary Sue, Latana Maxwell. Like it? Dislike it? Want to give some constructive criticism? Please review!