This is the re-written version of chapter 4.
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Chapter 4: The mysterious hunter
The mysterious hooded figure was now climbing on a mountain side, until he spotted a few buildings in the horizon. The hooded figure went to take a closer look, he looked down to see a few people sorting guns and bombs and other different sort of weapons in some crates. 'So this is the terrorist base huh?' the mysterious man thought.
"Have you heard the rumors?" one of the men who were caring a box with guns asked another man who was putting a rifle together.
"What rumors?" The other man with the rifle questioned.
"Some hooded guy that people call Crow, has hunted down serval terrorist bases across the globe."
"Really, just one guy?" The second man asked shocked.
"Yeah, people say that he is some kind of superhuman."
"Superhuman?" The second man said with a small laughter. "Sure he doesn't use some smoke and mirrors." The second man joked.
"Hey it's just a rumor people probably just say those things to make it sound cool." The first man commented.
"But someone must have taken down those bases, shouldn't we be wor-" The second man was interrupted when suddenly a burning ball fell from the sky and crashed in the center of the base.
"What the hell?!" A man shouted as the heat from the flames made him sweat, even the buildings began to melt.
When the smoke cleared in the center was a hooded figure.
"Shoot him!" A man yelled.
Everyone fired at him while the hooded man just stood there taking every single bullet. When he suddenly he turned into a pack of crows.
"Crows?"
A bright light was shining in the sky making everyone look up to see the hooded man with his fist infused in flames.
Blaze meteor dragon: Blazing fist
The hooded man flew down. In the distance people could see a large explosion of flames on the mountain side.
The hooded man was walking away from the base, behind him was several burned men. 'Guess since it's been seven years I should check how Rias and the others are doing.' The hooded man thought as he disappeared.
Kuoh town Japan
The hooded man suddenly appeared on top of a tree next to a bridge. He looked at a young man standing on the bridge he had short brown hair, light brown eyes and he is wearing a high school uniform that is consisted of a black blazer over a white longed sleeved dress shirt with black highlights that is open reviling a red T-shirt.
The hooded man could hear him complaining about the fact that he will die a virgin which made the hooded man sweat drop.
When suddenly a raven haired girl with violet eyes came up to the young man asking him out on a date, the hooded man was still watching from the tree while concealing his presence knowing that this girl was a fallen angel. 'Yuuma Amano, huh? Most likely a fake name.' the hooded man thought.
When the girl Yuuma left the young man known as Issei Hyoudou alone one the bridge, Issei walked away while cheering the fact that a hot girl asked him out.
'Good grief, what kind of guy accept a date with a girl he just met.' Crow thought.
The hooded man averted his attention to the little white haired girl licking on a popsicle. 'Koneko huh? that must mean that Rias has asked her to watch this Issei, he must have some kind of sacred gear. Interesting guess I should watch him myself as well. But first to deal with the little spy.' The hooded man thought as he vanished into thin air.
On top of a building was a man with black hair, golden bangs and a black goatee. "Strange I didn't give Raynare any orders to approach Issei Hyoudou, must have been that damn Koakabiel." Azazel the fallen angel governor said with a little venom in his voice.
When suddenly he felt something cold and sharp on his neck. "Well done, I didn't even sense you their mister, now who are you?" The man said with a smirk as his expression showed that he didn't care.
"I'm asking the questions here. Who are you other than a fallen angel, and what are you doing in Rias's territory?" The hooded man asked while poking his katana on Azazel's neck making a little blood drip out.
"Wow easy there buddy. Don't worry I mean no harm being here, just checking on my subordinate since I haven't given her an order to come here, oh and a little advice, the next time you threaten the fallen angel governor Azazel you better prepare for a fight." Azazel said making the hooded man narrowing his eyes a bit before removing his katana from Azazel's neck. "That's better. Now my mysterious friend who are you?" Azazel asked as he turned around to face the mysterious man.
"They call me Crow." The hooded man replied.
"I meant what's your real name?" Azazel asked.
"…It's Itachi Uchiha, I'm a servant of Rias Gremory." The hooded man answered.
"Where you watching Hyoudou on the Gremory's behalf?" Azazel asked Itachi.
"No, she doesn't even know I'm here." Itachi replied.
"Oh, why's that?" Azazel asked raising his eyebrow.
"I've been on a seven year long journey. And at the moment I'm doing a little investigating before my return." Itachi replied.
"Wait a minute you said you call yourself Crow, then you are the one that's taken down several terrorist bases around the world right?" Azazel said while looking at the hooded man who gave him a nod.
"Well then it's an honor to meet you, but I really must be going now so bye." Azazel said before bringing out his wings and flew up in the air.
'So the fallen angels that are after Hyoudou is taking orders from Kokabiel and not Azazel, I must look into this matter further.' Itachi thought before vanishing once more into thin air as all that was left where he stood was a crows feather.
Occult research club
"The fallen ones have gone in contact with Hyoudou, buchou." Akeno the vice president of the occult research informed her president Rias Gremory.
"I see, well then we will have to wait and see how things go." Rias said while drinking some tea.
"It is as you said buchou he has a powerful sacred gear." The little Koneko said while liking on a lollipop.
The door opened and Michael walked in. He was standing there in a white shirt, his usual black pants and he was wearing reading glasses. "You sure have an interesting choice when it comes to servants Rias." Michael said while taking his glasses off. "One of the perverted trio none the less."
"Well Michael-sensei he is quite interesting, plus he has a very powerful sacred gear." Rias said
Akeno went up behind Michael and hugged him pressing her breasts up against his back. "Ara ara Michael-sensei are you jealous that we will have a new boy in our group." Akeno said in a teasing tone with her lips right next to his ear..
"Akeno your teasing won't work on me, besides I'm a teacher and you're a student you must stop doing this." Michael said with a small blush on his face.
"You say that but you're still blushing." Akeno said in an amusing tone while stroking Michael's cheek. "And besides if I recall you were a student here last year."
"Not my fault that I know all the subjects and that I found the exam to easy, besides I was alive when most of the things you learned at school where invented." Michael said.
"And yet you only look eighteen." Akeno said hugging Michael harder pressing her breasts further up against his back.
"That doesn't change the fact that I'm ten thousand years old Akeno." Michael said as his eyes twitched in annoyance.
"Thought you said for you Shadow demons being ten thousand was the same as being eighteen for you since your body mostly focuses on growing power rather in then mind and body." Akeno said
"Th…tha…that doesn't change anything." Michael said averting his eyes as he blushed even more as Akeno tightened her hug thus pressing her breasts on his back more so much that he was able to feel her nipples on his back.
Akeno giggled. "Your so cute when your blushing."
"Anyway, I came here with something interesting to tell you Rias." Michael said while escaping Akeno's embrace.
"Oh, what?" Rias questioned.
"Ever heard of Crow?" Michael asked.
"Of course he is the guy that takes down terrorist organizations." Rias said putting her tea cup down on the table.
"Well there is a news case about him now." Michael said while using a magic circle to view the news case.
"The mysterious person known as crow has just taken down a terrorist base that was hidden deep in the mountains, the base wasn't discovered until a large explosion of flames covered the mountain side. Leaving only one survivor which I have managed to get an interview from." The news woman said looking at a man that was chained up and shaking with two police guards that stood guarding him.
"So tell me what happened?" The news lady asked.
"We were doing our average things sorting weapons, planning how to overthrow our corrupt government, when he suddenly fell down from the sky so we began shooting at him when he turned into a bunch of crows. He was then flying above us with his fist infused in flames, he then came down on us like a meteorite. And when I looked at him his eyes turned red and had some strange dots in them." The man said while shaking.
"So basically your saying his a superhuman?"
The man then slammed his hands on the table. "He's the devil! He's the devil!" he was then dragged out by the guards to his cell.
"Well apparently this interview is over and I beg you good day." The magic circle then deactivated.
"You think that Crow is Itachi?" Rias asked in a hopeful tone of seeing the man she loved once more.
"It makes sense he arrived two years after Itachi went on his journey." Michael answered.
"And the red eyes sounded a lot like Itachi's sharingan." Rias said while holding her hand up to her chin.
"Plus he used fire magic." Michael added.
"Just like Itachi's dragon slayer magic." Koneko said taking a lick of her lollipop.
"It's already been seven years, so why hasn't he come back yet?" Rias questioned with a slight depressed expression.
"Knowing him he has his reasons. And he promised that he would be back in seven years then he will be back any day now." Michael said as he walked towards the door.
"Where are you going?" Akeno asked.
"I have a history class to teach, I'll see you later." Michael said and walked out from the door.
"You guys don't think that… Itachi has forgotten the promise, do you?" Rias asked her two friends Akeno and Koneko.
"I doubt it, Itachi-kun is not the kind of person to forget anything." Akeno said to her master/best friend with a comforting smile.
"He won't forget." Koneko said as she as well hoped to see him again soon.
"I wonder where he is right now?" Rias asked herself.
Meanwhile outside the building stood the hooded figure Itachi Uchiha aka. Crow. "I promise Rias I will return to help you get out of that arranged marriage with Riser Phenex." Itachi mumbled before he vanished leaving only a few crow feathers behind.
Town square
Issei Hyoudou was standing and waiting for his date to arrive. "She is a little late."
"Here take a flyer." A woman handed him a flyer before moving on.
"I didn't mean to take one." Issei said while rubbing the back of his head. "We grant your wishes?" Issei read what the flyer said. "Huh sounds like a scam."
"Issei-kun!" the voice of Yuuma was heard, Issei turned around to see his girlfriend running towards him.
"Good morning, Yuuma-chan." He responded.
"Sorry did I keep you waiting?" She asked.
"Oh no, I just got here." Issei said. 'Ah! I have always wanted to say that to a chick!' Issei cheered in his mind.
In the distance on a roof top Itachi was standing there dressed in civilian clothing, which consisted of a black t-shirt, dark blue pants and a pair of sunglasses. "I see that Rias's familiar gave him a summoning flyer, guess that now I just need to observe how things go." He said before teleporting into a nearby ally close to the couple. He looked around to see that no one was watching him and blended in with the crowd. He decided to hide his magic presence so that the fallen angel couldn't sense him.
Itachi followed them around town, into a clothing store, a café, when they finally ended up in front of a fountain. Itachi was hidden in his Crow outfit hiding behind a few trees. He saw them walking a little when she suddenly ran up to the fountain turning around to look at Issei. 'Guess this is it…' Itachi thought and stayed hidden in the shadows like the shinobi he is.
"Say, Issei-kun." She moved a little closer. "Do you mind doing me a favor to commemorate our first date?" she asked as she kept moving closer until she was really close to him bowing her head down.
"Wh-what kind of favor?" Issei questioned as he hoped for it to be a kiss.
She looked up at him with a cold glare filled with nothing but bloodlust. "Would you die for me?" She asked with an evil smirk.
"What?" Issei asked with a confused look. "Sorry Yuuma-chan. Can you repeat that?" Issei said while laughing nervously. "I think that it might be something wrong with my ears."
She leaned close to his ears while still smirking evilly. "Could you please die." She said in a cold tone with bloodlust.
She started laughing and transforming growing a little taller, her eyes looking more evil as she grew black feathered wings out from his back, and replaced her cloths with what looked like a BDSM costume.
Issei fell to the ground in shock as he slowly backed away. "Y-Yuuma-chan…"
"Although short lived, playing innocent lovey dovey with you was fun. I'll take good care of this gift from you." Yuuma said referring to the pink accessory on her wrist. She then released a glow from her hand creating a spear of light.
"Yuuma-chan?" Issei questioned with a confused expression.
"Please die." She said with an evil smile on her face as bloodlust was in the air. She then threw the spear at him stabbing Issei in the gut, when the spear vanished he gushed out a lot of blood.
"Sorry, your existence poses a threat to us. So we took the initiative and moved in for the kill. If you want to blame someone blame God for planting a sacred gear inside your body." She then gave a cold smirk. "Thanks for the date it was fun." She said before flying off.
Itachi gritted his teeth and clenched his fist at the thought of letting that fallen angel get away like this, but to ensure that everything goes as planned he had no choice but to let things flow the way they needed.
He looked at Issei to see him slowly dying, when the flyer in his pocket flew out creating a red magic circle that Rias came out of, Itachi watched Rias long beautiful crimson hair blowing in the wind. 'She truly has grown into a beautiful woman.' Itachi thought when he shook his head. 'What am I thinking there are more important matters to attend to.' He watched as Rias used her four remaining pawn pieces on Issei, which healed his wound she then teleported him back to his own house. Once they left Itachi stepped out from the shadows. 'Guess I should watch over him now and help him if he needs it, after all if he dies now he will be dead for good.' Itachi thought before vanishing into thin air.
Next day
Itachi was watching Issei trying to tell his two friends about Yuuma seeing that not one of them remembered her. 'The fallen angel has erased the memories of everyone close to him about herself. Even her contact information on Issei's phone.' Itachi thought
Later on, at night he saw Issei walking to the park where he died, Issei stopped in front of the fountain. "This is where it happened. This is where I took Yuuma-chan on the end of the date." Issei said as he placed his hand on the fountain.
When a voice suddenly appeared. "How unfortunate, it might just be my lucky day to meet your kind in such a place." A man wearing a pale violet trench coat and a black fedora.
Issei was about to run, when a hooded figure jumped in front of him looking at the fallen angel.
"Oh, another one. Are you one of his comrades?" The man asked as he released a pair of black wings similar to that of Yuuma.
"Who knows?" the hooded man said making a magic circle which out of it came a katana. "And who are you other than a fallen angel?"
"I'm Dohnaseek, and you are?" The fallen angel known as Dohnaseek.
The hooded man pointed the katana at Dohnaseek. "They call me Crow." Was all he said before leaping towards Dohnaseek with the katana. Crow swung the katana clashing it with the light spear.
Issei looked confused. "Crow?" he whispered. "As in the terrorist hunter Crow?" he asked watching the battle.
Dohnaseek flew up in the air throwing a light spear at Crow, who simply dodged it. "Quick on your feet huh?" He asked making another light spear.
"Not really this isn't even close to my full speed, your just too slow and weak." Was all that Crow said before jumping up and delivering a roundhouse kick to Dohnaseek's face.
"Why you little!" Dohnaseek cursed as a trail of blood dripped from his nose.
"Time to end this." Crow made a few hand signs.
Water style: water dragon
Crow muttered before a large dragon made of water came out of the fountain crashing into Dohnaseek.
"A-Amazing." Was all Issei could say as he stared in awe at the battle.
Dohnaseek rubbed his eyes a little before opening them seeing Crow who now had red eyes with three black tomoes and a dot in the center, before they morphed into a black pinwheel with a red flower in the center. "Die." Crow said in a cold tone.
Tsukuyomi
Crow muttered and the very next second Dohnaseek let out a scream of pain and terror, and the next second he fell over and died with blood running down from his mouth and nose.
"Is he dead?" Issei asked nervously.
Crow turned around and walked towards Issei which spoked him making him back away a little. "Are you going to kill me?" Issei asked in fear.
"No." Crow replied before walking past him and proceeded to walk away.
A red magic circle appeared on the ground and out of it came Rias, Akeno and Koneko who looked shocked to see a dead fallen angel in front of them.
"Issei did you kill this fallen angel?" Rias asked in a calm tone looking at the little freaked out Issei.
Issei looked at them for a bit before shaking his head and arms all over. "No, no, no, Rias-senpai it wasn't me it was that terrorist hunter guy Crow!" He yelled pointing at the hooded man. That stopped and looked at them.
Rias and the others looked at Crow for a while before he began to walk away. "Wait!" Rias yelled running after him. "Is that you Itachi?!" She yelled making crow stop and turn around extending his arm, making Rias stop but too late.
POKE
Crow poked Rias forehead.
"I-Ita-Itachi?" She muttered as she looked into his dark black eyes and saw a trail of his raven black hair.
"Next time." Was all Crow said before he turned into a bunch of crows that flew away from the scene leaving only crow feathers floating around.
Rias let a few tears run down her cheek as she said with a happy smile. "It is him, Itachi."
Meanwhile in the underworld in the dragon valley
A large green western dragon flew in the sky before noticing a dark presence, and dived down to investigate. Standing on the ground was a man wearing a black coat with a hood covering his face besides the lower half. "Hello there." The man said with an evil grin.
"What's a human man doing in the valley of dragons?" The dragon asked in a little angry tone.
"It's been a while, wind dragon last time we meet you where my pet in my fight against Menma." The man said reviling two sharingan eyes.
"You, you're that blasted human that hypnotized me with does damn eyes all those years ago!" The wind dragon roared in anger.
The man took of his hood off reviling that he was an old man that looked like he was sixty years old, he had grey spiky hair and he had a grin on his face. "That's me, I have come to claim something that's in your body. I'm sure you know what I'm talking about."
"Yeah, I know. That's why I will destroy you little man!" The dragon roared and slammed his claws towards the man, but he simply jumped back.
"I may not be as young as I used to be, and I'm far away from my prime. However, I still have enough power to teach you some manners." The man said grinning while extending his palm towards the green dragon.
Wood style: Wood dragon
The man then slammed his hands together making a dragon made of wood pope out from the ground binding the wind dragon. "I'm still just as powerful as any of the faction leaders after all." The man said with a smirk.
The wind dragon struggled to break free as the grip of the wood dragon tightened. But then it released a roar gathering strength and broke the wood dragon. The dragon blew in a little air.
Roar of the wind dragon!
The dragon shouted as he spewed out a huge whirlwind from its mouth destroying several mountains as it came closer to the man.
The man bit the tip of his thumbs making a line of blood on both of his hands slamming them to the ground creating a few symbols.
Summoning jutsu: Triple Rashomon
Three large walls popped out of the ground in front of the man.
When the whirlwind collided with the first wall it broke through it with ease, the same with the second wall, when it hit the third wall on the other side the man looked as the wall began to crack.
"Now that's the power of a dragon." He smirked and jumped up in the air avoiding the blast.
As the dragon made another roar releasing another whirlwind from his mouth.
The man did a few hand signs.
Fire style: Massive fireball
The man spewed out a huge ball of fire that burned through the whirlwind and grew in size it then went down the dragon's throat. "In case you didn't know fire is superior to wind." The man said with a smirk as the dragon slammed its tail on him making the man jump to the side.
Wind dragon whirlwind fist!
The dragon gathered a lot of wind in his fist making the wind visible to the naked eye.
Wood style: deep forest emergence
The man yelled having a howl bunch of trees take the hit and pushing the dragon back a little.
Wood style: wood golem
The man slammed his hand to the ground making a large beast made of wood. And charged at the dragon slamming the golems fist at its jaw.
"I refuse to lose to you again!" The dragon roared. As it flew up in the air.
Roar of the wind dragon!
"Boring give me something new." The man said as the golem fired out a blast of some kind from its arm colliding with the roar making an explosion.
Wood style: wood clones
The man made five clones that each made a hand sign.
Fire
Water
Wind
Earth
Lightning
They all smirked.
Five element Dragons!
They yelled creating a dragon each, one made of fire, one made of water, one made wind, one made of earth and one made of lightning.
The five dragons slammed into the wind dragon making it grunt in pain. "Now then." The man said as lighting flickered around his body.
Chidori rotation!
The man span around as a lot of lightning flickered around him electrocuting the dragon making it howl in pain.
"You..heh..damn…heh…human!" The dragon panted.
"Now then are you going to give me what I want?" The man asked.
"N-Never…" The dragon replied.
The man then chuckled darkly. "That's too bad then."
"Even if you kill me… You will never succeed… someone will stop you." The dragon said.
"We will just have to see about that." The man lifted one of his arms in the air making black clouds gather while lightning surrounded his hand. "Time to put this fight to an end." He said with an evil smile, as a huge dragon made of lightning formed in the sky. Making the wind dragon look up in shock.
Kirin
He said bending his arm down having the lightning dragon strike the wind dragon.
When the dust cleared the dragon was laying on the ground dying.
"Tell me something, the disappearance of the lightning dragon and the earth dragon it was you wasn't it Kai?!" The dragon muttered with its last breaths to the man known as Kai.
"No that was the work of my henchmen Yagura the water dragon slayer." He said with a smile.
"Da… damn..you….K..kk..Kai." The wind dragon said before dying.
"Now time to claim my reward." Kai said making a few hand signs.
Sealing jutsu: Phantom Dragon
A ghost like dragon went into the wind dragons body, later it came out with something and giving it to Kai before disappearing.
In Kai's hand was a piece of a red jewel. "That makes three only six left."
He then walked away from the dead dragon body and vanished into thin air.
And that's the end for now.
So far the re-writing has been going good I would say, I have corrected several mistakes I've made and added some extra parts. While as in this chapter all I did was correct a few thing and add a few extra words.
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