Hello. Not an update but just a few comments lol. Anyways I have received a criticism which is great. When I had reached writing chapter 9 I was planning to do a major re write of the story since it has been so far from my original one, but the original one consist of a lot cross overs.
Things that I will change For example.
The weapons are not only box weapon, flames or etc for Tsuna's part. There are a part where I have blend, Noragami/noblesse/InuXbokuSS or which of the three.
Another is I really don't know how should I write a male Twin of Tsuna since I have been focusing too much on the relationship development of one Hibari and Nuvola. So I will be needing some help on this part. There will be less 'kya' and 'omg' on this part but it will no go down to none.
Grammars. I'm not good in English so if anyone would want to Beta read mine its cool. I will give you the certain week on when will I update supposedly.
There will be less romance and slow built I guess it will take 5 chapter to re tell Tsuna's life and connections and blah blah blah.
There. I can still continue this VG:AV version if you guys want but I can also post the original one (which I mentioned above) if you guys want. But wait for updates since I have 10hrs summer schooling :)
Thank you Guest for criticizing ! I appreciate it
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-SKYE