Third person POV:
Meanwhile, in a large house/mansion in rainbow falls New York, Rose Lalonde stares at the wooden door, which was a reddish orange color, with painfully obvious scratches, that were left by her mother whenever she would come home drunk. Just a few moments before, there had been a loud knock at the door, and Rose had gone to open it.
But instead, she just stares at it, and gulps. The whole situation could stem out into any circumstances and outcomes, from her mother coming home drunk again or a robber, who was being polite by knocking before he stole all of the household's money.
So when there is another loud banging on the thing, Rose comes to her senses and slammed it open, ready for any of the outcomes that would occur when she opened a door.
Outside was a man, clad in a black suit and hat, cigar hanging out of his mouth, jet black messy hair, and a five o' clock shadow that Rose desperately wanted to rid of. But this man was no ordinary man with an unkept appearance to him, this man was Jack Noir, agent of Derse- which was the agency that specialized in assassinations and spying. But only those who had suffered through his gruesome torture in the past could identify the man. The wretched man who would repeatedly stab a child for fun. Rose was one of those people, at least, in the original universe- and she held more hate for this man than Karlat Vantas, who had to live through more pain and remembrance of Jack Noir's doing.
Rose Lalonde then immediately slams the door closed. "Come out kid. Ya need ta get in the van" Jack says, typical gangster voice on, with a gravely hatred within it that caused Rose to shiver.
"No. Go away." She says, shaking madly, remembering how he harmed her.
He punches the door open, grabbing her and pinning her against the wall, a disgusting stench of smoke clouding her lungs, she coughs.
"Heh, now don't go runnin' off girlie" he says, getting too close for comfort.
"No! This is my story now!" She screams, struggling to break free.
"Well," he smirks "not all stories have a happy ending, do they?"
Then everything fades to black.
AN: kk! Short chapter, I know, but they'll be more coming 'round! I'm working on the nxt one rite now! So be patient. Another thing, what did you think of Jack's character in this? Did I depict that well? And for what he did to Rose? You can post your predictions below! I'll see what you think and maybe put it in there? Any critiques are needed. Thank you.
-FP