Wow. It has been a long time. This most likely will be yet another false promise, but whatever. I am currently in the process of revising and editing the first chapter, and by the time most of my few readers read this I will be on the second. I know there were way too many errors at first, so I am deciding to fix them. Along a few other things, like adding more descriptions and improving my writing. I will be taking down the original story as I believe the changes will be too great to simply edit the original document. So wish me luck and have a good day.