Hello guys, I've been getting many comments saying to make the story NaruIno, since half of the comment advise it, I'll consider it, but I thought that since Ino is basically like Naruto's sister in the story (Not by blood), that it would be sort of weird. But please leave comments on your thoughts, I will not officially change anything until the next chapter is released.
P.S. Don't own Naruto and on with the show.
Chapter 5- Naruto's Great Reveal
Today seemed like a normal day to most people in Konoha. It was mid January, and many of the birds migrated to the fire country, so the chirping sounds of birds and swaying of trees were heard, and shops were starting to open. But for Naruto, it was another day of acting.
Naruto has a scroll with a special seal of his own design. This seal was for an undetectable transformation jutsu to anyone who signed it with their blood. He is currently transformed into the knuckle-headed idiot that everyone in the class knows and ridicules as Uzumaki Naruto. So he got up and realized that today is the graduation exam.
"Finally, today is the last day I need to act as this idiot," Naruto thought to himself.
He then walked out of the room and realized that breakfast was already made, and that Ino, Inoichi and Mina were waiting for him.
"I knew you wouldn't take long," said Mina, smiling.
"Today is the graduation, how do you guys feel?" Inoichi said to Ino and Naruto.
"I'm glad I don't have to act like an idiot after today," said Naruto, looking down and cringing at his orange jumpsuit.
"You know you didn't have to act like this, right?" said Ino.
"It's for my future, if I'm dead last, I get assigned with the top rookie and kunoichi in the class," said Naruto, "I don't want a team full amateurs."
"I know, I know," said Ino. "I'm glad I can finally treat Nii-san nicely," said Ino.
The parents gave them a look of confusion before Naruto explained, "I asked Ino to treat me like everyone else to help with my disguise, same as Shika and Chouji."
"HOW COULD YOU AGREE TO BULLYING YOUR BROTHER!" screamed Mina.
"It took A LOT of convincing," said Naruto.
After that, they ate breakfast, mostly in peace. Until Naruto looked at the clock and he noticed something.
"OH CRAP, WE LEAVE IN TEN MINUTES!" Naruto screamed. He then dashed around, getting ready and somehow managed to get to the door before Ino.
"Bye Mom, bye dad, see you soon," said Naruto, before he left, not even waiting for a response, or Ino.
Naruto then walked into class and sat in his normal seat, near Sasuke. He looked around and saw most of the boys socializing, most of the girls either staring at Sasuke or talking about Sasuke, and Hinata alone in the corner.
A few minutes later he saw Ino and Sakura trying to squeeze into the doorway… probably in the midst of another one of their competitions. Naruto sighed at the stupidity of this and then noticed Sakura was here and perked up quite a bit.
Then before Naruto knew it Sakura came running to his area and he decided to offer Sakura a seat.
"Hi Sakura-cha…" Naruto said before he was cut off by Sakura pushing Naruto out of the way to get to Sasuke.
"HI SASUKE-KUN!" Sakura screamed along with an Ino hot on her trail.
"I'm glad this ends tomorrow," Naruto thought to himself as he got up.
"Ok guys settle down," Iruka said. Right after everyone sat down quietly, not wanting to get on the teacher's bad side today of all days. "Today, as you all know, is the graduation exams, what you've been training all these years for."
Everyone simply nodded and gave themselves a round of applause.
"Now onto the instructions," Iruka said, "This test will be split up into 4 parts: Chakra-based techniques, Taijutsu, shuriken jutsu and a written test, each embodying what is expected of a genin."
"And which Naruto is expected to fail in," said Kiba, just loud enough for his fellow classmates to hear. Everyone started laughing at Naruto, except for Hinata, who was to shy to defend him, the Ino-Shika-Cho kids who were stopping themselves from beating up the entire class due to Naruto's wishes, and Sasuke because he didn't care.
"Can't even make a clone, but expects to become a genin, what an idiot," said a random kid in the class.
"He's so weak it's hilarious," said another random kid.
"He's going to be made a fool in front of Sasuke-kun again," said Sakura, and after a bit more laughter, Chouji couldn't take it anymore.
"ALL OF YOU SHUT UP!" screamed Chouji, tears falling from his eyes. "Make fun of me all you want, but don't you EVER make fun of my brother again!"
"Yeah, don't laugh at my nii-san!" Ino said Ino said, standing up and showing a face of pure rage, "Sorry Naruto, I just couldn't take it anymore."
"For once it's not a drag, LEAVE MY BRO ALONE!," Shikamaru said in a tone that is the least Shikamaru anyone has ever heard.
"You guys," Naruto said just under his breath, admiring the scene. His brother and sister defending him, standing up to the class.
As this was going on, Hinata was witnessing all of this and was debating in her head whether she should help.
"Should I help? I want to, but what if everyone makes fun of me after? Or worse, what if Tou-sama finds out, I know he doesn't like Naruto-kun," she debated to herself, "But Naruto-kun saved my life eight years ago, and it's about time I helped him." Hinata then proceeded to quietly and timidly get up from her seat, and after a bit of hesitation, she "screamed", "Leave Naruto-kun alone."
It wasn't too loud but the entire class was flabbergasted. It was obvious she liked Naruto, but this is the first time she talked within Naruto's line of hearing, let alone that loud.
Noticing the stares, that she was promptly receiving, she sat back down, and basically hid behind her desk.
Naruto then realized that he was being defended. Even someone he barely knew was trying to protect him. They were possibly giving up their reputation over defending the class loser, someone whom no one liked. And then after about a minute in that train of thought he then snapped, "IT'S DAMN TIME I STARTED DEFENDING MYSELF!"
"I bet if Naruto was serious he could kick everyone here's butt!" screamed Ino.
"Yeah right, he's a Baka with no skill, I bet he'll fail the graduation exam a fourth time," said Sakura.
"Everyone stop picking on your classmate…" Iruka said. And he was going to continue if not for…
"It's OK… Iruka Sensei," Naruto said, "I got this." He then stepped forward with a confident pose and stood on one of the chairs. All of the people in the class stared at him, and he knew, there was no turning back now. "To those of you who were defending me: Ino, Chouji, Shikamaru, Hinata, Iruka, I hold only respect for you… BUT FOR THE REST OF YOU… I'm tired of it," he said as a scowl formed, "My goal was to pretend to be weak so I can be paired up with a better team, BUT I AM TIRED OF ALL OF YOU," Naruto said before he turned his voice quieter but no less menacing. "Tired of the treatment, tired of the solitude, TIRED OF BEING CALLED WEAK AND PRETENDING TO LOSE TO THE WEAKEST UCHIHA I EVER KNEW! I'M TIRED OF HIDING!"
Naruto went into his back pouch and took out a small scroll. He untied the knot holding it shut and rolled it open in mid-air. He then bit his thumb and swiped his bloodied finger across the length of the scroll that appeared to have some sort of seal on it. With a swipe he rolled it shut and jumped off the chair and onto the main staircase. He slammed the scroll on the ground, which created a dent, and he screamed, "PERMANENT TRANSFORMATION RELEASE!"
Smoke appeared all around him, and the class couldn't see him, but a powerful aura was felt. As the smoke started to dim, a silhouette started to form, and a few second later, he was visible. This person looked like Naruto, but it's like he's a totally different person. His aura let out power never felt by most of the kids in their life, his demeanor became serious, and intense, but even that was an understatement. His posture was upright and it felt like he was prepared for anything, his eyes shut but it felt like everyone in the class was under his demeaning glance, one that showed superiority, power, and made the kids feel like ants. Even Sasuke felt like his pride got ran over, both because of his aura, and being called the weakest Uchiha Naruto ever met. His folded arms were basically taunting them to give it their best shot, but the class was too terrified to try. Even his clothes changed.
Rather than the annoying, orange jumpsuit, he now wore a white cloak with a hood and the sleeves ripped off. Underneath he wore what seemed to be high level, shinobi battle gear with long sleeved pants, but his shirt sleeves were promptly ripped off of those to. This showed off his completely RIPPED shoulders and arms, which were only covered by fingerless gloves on each hand. The girls were staring at him, the guys envied him, Hinata promptly fainted, but only after turning beat red, and Sasuke looked at him with interest (… It's not what you think). But undoubtedly, everyone shared the same confusion, and thought, "WHAT IN THE ACTUAL SHIT IS GOING ON RIGHT NOW!"
He then opened his blue eyes that could make even the bluest of seas metaphorically look at him in envy, eyes that showed power and resolve, rather than idiocy and immature eagerness. He then put his arms down to his sides and said in a nearly unrecognizable voice, "It's damn time I showed you just how powerful I really am."
-Story ends-
-EXTRAS-
"PERMANENT TRANSFORMATION RELEASE!" Naruto screamed as smoke immediately poofed into existence. The smoke started to dim and they saw a new, RIPPED, Naruto… that was naked. He was just standing there with his arms crossed, until he felt the AC on his stomach and areas that it shouldn't be. He then looked down only to find that he ISN'T WEARING CLOTHES.
He then seemingly teleported to sit down behind a desk to cover up is private parts.
"Damn it, I forgot to add my cloak and battle gear to the sealing formula," thought Naruto to himself. Looking around, Naruto saw that the guys had a jealous/I just threw up look on their faces, the girls fainted, Hinata flew through the wall like a nosebleed rocket, and Sasuke… When Naruto wasn't looking he caught a glimpse of Naruto's *Clears throat* and let's just say if his pride wasn't shattered before, it is now.
(Aaaaaand... Scene)
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