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Chapter 6
Dick woke up and saw...Savage! He tried to get up but his body was engulfed by pain.
"Please, don't waste your energy you'll need it." Savage said helping Dick up.
"W-Where am I? W-Where's Zee?" Dick asked looking around.
"I'll explain, but you should eat up." Savage said handing Dick a bowl of oatmeal. Aparently Savage, unlike his twin brother was human. His mother took him in and his father took Vandel to the sea. Vandel met Klarion and started to work for him. Klarion needed Zatanna's powers so he can unlock the ancient mermaid power that he will use to take over all the bodies of water. Klarion has freshwater powers but he needs salt water powers because they are more powerfull, exspeacial Zatanna's. And they are prepareing to rip Zatanna's powers from her soul in 1 day max inside a cave in the waterfall.
"Well, come on, we have to go help her." Dick said as he tried to get up but more pain engulfed him.
"Wait, before you woke up I was working on a ancient healing spell. I'm not a mermaid so you might not have full streght so it won't heal you all the way." Savage explained. He contiuned to mix some things in a bowl.
Zatanna woke up. Her head really hurt and something was different she felt a hole in her heart or something. She was in what looked like a dungoen but much nicer. She was sleeping on...hay? 'Wow, hay is really comfy I should tell Dick...Dick! Oh no, I didn't save him. The plan didn't work, maybe I could ask Serenity.' She thought. Zatanna looked and found her ring wasn't on her finger. She must have dropped it when she fell. Well maybe Serenity will help Dick...maybe... Zatanna was snapped out of her thoughts by the sound of the door opening.
"My love..." Klarion said as he came in. Vandel roughly pulled Zatanna to her feet and made her stand. I hurt alot when she stood. Klarion kneeled down on one knee. "Zatanna, will you marry me?" Klarion said in his creepy voice.
"NO! You are so...so...so mean!" She screamed turning away. Hey she really isn't a mean person so that was all she got. "I-I'll find a way out. I'll save Dick and I'll make sure you're... punished!" She said.
"O, I'm soo scared." Klarion said sarcasticly.
"You better be." Zatanna shot back.
"No you better be!" Klarion said. "I'll rip your powers from your soul on the night of the tides and I'll rule all the bodies of water!" Klarion laughed.
"I'll defeat you, I have my powers now!" Zatanna said.
"No you don't! Look on your wrist." Vandel said. Zatanna looked at her wrist to see the golden bracelet that glowed red.
"I can pull it off." She said. She reached for the bracelet and tugged on it. The red light grew darked and Zatanna was engulfed in pain. She then fainted and Vandel threw her on the pile of hay.
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