(After ending the first part of the story, I thought of how in the story I tried to describe the characters in an accurate manner for any future references, if needed. So I came up with the idea up this segment, or bonus content, giving good information about the main characters that I have created. I also made a list of references to other things in the story that exist elsewhere. So this is basically a list of references used in the story, and even information on the main original characters used in the story. I hope you enjoy.)
References Used
Sot-Kolok's body, large humanoid with six arms, and combat style, wielding six swords, is strongly based on Koloktos from The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword.
The Zant system is named after a character named Zant, the secondary antagonist in The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess.
The Ikana system is named after Ikana Valley in The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask.
(Basically I was a Zelda nerd when I started writing the story. XD)
Also, "Boom. Butterfly Effect," is a quote from the game Until Dawn.
(Copyright owners, don't sue me please.)
Character Information
Eyt / Darth Venison
Real Name: Eyt Pezymn, also known as Lord Venison, Ven (nickname), and Venny (nickname).
Species: Zan-Deer, a fictional species of carnivorous deer-like creatures native to the Zant system. They resemble anthropomorphic deer, with brown and tan fur, three-fingered, hoof-like hands and two-toed, hoof-like feet at the end of digitigrade legs.
Appearance: A thin, slender, Zan-Deer stag, with tan fur and an anthropomorphic deer-like body, with a slightly muscular build. He has black dye permanently coating his forearms (between wrist and elbow), lower legs (between knee and ankle), hips and back. He has long, spiked antlers, resembling spider legs, and wears a loincloth around his waist, covering his front. (Former)
A thin, slender Zan-Deer stag, with tan fur covering most of body, only head and neck fur is visible. On his face he used black dye to design his face, covering his eyelids and making the area around his eyes black, making two black circles over his eyes. And two sharp black lines run down his face from his eyes to his nose. He now wears a Sith outfit from Lord Sorin, a black long-sleeved tunic with a ribcage resembling design on the chest, a dark black belt with a copper buckle, the belt used to hold his weapons and communicator. He also wears long black pants, black combat boots, and a large dark black cloak in which the cape covers his whole body if he stands straight up. His natural antlers are completely gone and replaced with cybernetic antlers surgically drilled into the back of his head, a large metal wedge sticks out of his head, behind his ear from the back to the top of his head. The wedge sticks out and ends with four lightsaber ends, which reveal to be antler-sabers (a first set from Sorin, a big, silver, easily destructible pair with red lightsaber blades). He now has a cybernetic left arm up to his shoulder, and a cybernetic right hand, ending at his wrist. The cybernetic limbs are clearly metallic and virtually indestructible now, and his robotic hands end in three fingers resembling claws. He has a large metal plate covering his back and stomach, wrapped around his waist, protecting where he was once stabbed with a lightsaber blade. (First Form).
A thin, slender Zan-Deer stag, with tan fur covering most of his body, with exceptions of black dyed fur on his right forearm and back. His lack of upper clothing clearly show his muscular upper body and a large metal plate covering his back and stomach, wrapped around his waist, protecting where he was once stabbed with a lightsaber blade. He now wears what's left of the Sith outfit from Sorin, which consists of long black pants, a dark brown belt with a copper buckle, the belt used to hold his weapon and communicator, black combat boots, but he no longer wears the large dark black cloak because he gave it to Rooda, or the tunic because he burnt it. He has cybernetic antlers surgically drilled into the back of his head, a large metal wedge sticks out of his head, behind his ear from the back to the top of his head. The wedge sticks out and ends with four lightsaber ends, which reveal to be antler-sabers. His current pair is an upgraded set from Karus, a bigger, darker, indestructible pair with long, black lightsaber blades. All other features, like face paint and cybernetic limbs, remain the same since. (Current Form).
Born: 31 years Before Battle of Yavin (Zant)
Home: Zant (Formerly), Yavin 4 (Formerly), Ikana (Currently)
Age: 19
Personality: As Eyt, back on Zant, he was quiet and arrogant, most notably being stubborn. He was a very good fighter and he wanted to make it very clear to anyone who challenges him. He is a violent character and is easily angered as shown when he is ever in a lightsaber battle with someone, or when he was downright furious for getting his antlers chopped off his head and losing his position and the village's "honor". He even went back to steal his honor and kill the chief.
He is sometimes obedient to whoever he speaks to, taking orders from the chief (formerly), and Rakine and Mon Mothma.
At first he was just like the people of his village, primitive with little to no knowledge of the outside world. Then Rakine came and completely changed his life from the boring life on Zant, to becoming a mighty warrior in the Jedi arts and the Force. He is incredibly loyal to Rakine for showing him everything outside the Zant system and teaching him everything he knows now, whether in the Force, in combat, or just knowledge of the galaxy and its recent history. He is an incredibly fast learner, figuring out how the outside world truly is, and learning the ways of the Force and how to be agile and successful in lightsaber combat in only mere minutes. He even learned to take out a Sith Lord and the best Inquisitor, Sot-Kolok, in only a few days to about a week worth of training. He learned how to pilot his own ship, the Zant's Nightmare, in a matter of seconds and since then, he's been sailing the galaxy in back to back trips between systems. He knows of the evil of the Empire and has witnessed who the true enemy is, when his village was razed by the Empire.
Weapons: A darksaber with a dark gray hilt, with a long, black emitter end and a short black pommel end. The blade is long and black, leaving a white outline around it. Instead of being flat like Pre Vizsla's darksaber, this one is cylindrical and pointed like a regular blade. (Current.)
A pair of artificial cybernetic antlers that replaced his natural ones. The main section of it has a large silver wedge with four silver identical lightsaber hilts with black emitters. The blades were crimson. (Former.)
A second pair of antler-sabers to replace his original pair after they got destroyed. This was a gift from Karus and the Rebel Alliance. The wedge is the same, only instead of silver, it's black. The four identical lightsabers on each wedge were dark gray, with black emitters. and slightly longer than Sorin's set. The blades are longer than the crimson blades and are all black, to match his darksaber. The antler-sabers have a small system which allows it to detect another blade and repel it, causing no damage to the antler-sabers itself. They cannot break. (Current.)
Two dueling curved-hilt lightsabers from Lord Sorin, both identical and could attach on the pommel ends, creating a saberstaff. The lightsabers are silver with black emitters and pommels and the long blades are a crimson color. (Temporary.)
A long lightsaber with a curved black pommel end, black hilt, and silver emitter. The lightwhip of Sot-Kolok the Inquisitor ignites a very long, flexible red whip-like blade. Since the plasmic blade is flexible, Sot-Kolok's lightwhip was unusually unstable, that his weapon was not extremely reliable in battle. Damaging yes, but don't use it too much. (Temporary).
Allies: Rooda and Rebel Alliance
Enemies: Darth Sorin (deceased), Sot-Solok (deceased), Darth Vader, Darth Sidious, First Galactic Empire
Goals: Protect Randin Village from danger (Failed), To destroy the Empire, To show not all the Sith are evil, Live alone with Rooda on Ikana.
Trivia: Eyt is left-handed, as mentioned in many scenes where he is holding his darksaber mostly in his left hand.
Rooda
Full Name: Rooda Khunelle, also known as Roo (for short, nickname).
Species: Zan-Deer, a fictional species of carnivorous deer-like creatures native to the Zant system. They resemble anthropomorphic deer, with brown and tan fur, three-fingered, hoof-like hands and two-toed, hoof-like feet at the end of digitigrade legs.
Appearance: A slender, young, Zan-Deer doe, with an anthropomorphic, deer-like body, and a feminine build. She has black dye permanently coating her forearms (between wrist and elbow), and lower legs (between knee and ankle). She has no antlers and wears a loincloth outfit that resembles a female bikini. (Former.)
Her physical body remains the same but instead of her bikini outfit, she now has a black, one-piece outfit that covers her entire body, except her limbs, only covering her torso and abdomen. She made a makeshift belt out of cloth and rope that wraps around her waist and carries her weapons and communicator. (Current).
Born: 31 years Before Battle of Yavin (Zant)
Home: Zant (Formerly), Yavin 4 (Formerly), Ikana (Currently)
Age: 19
Personality: On Zant she was a quiet and feared Zan-Deer Warrior, and since women never got the position, she has proven to get it by being the most viscous, the most ruthless, and the best female figure of the village, and at a very young age at nineteen years. She was very respected and often spoke in a quiet monotonous voice on Zant. She was very loyal to the chief, as seen when she returns Eyt home after he was injured, not knowing he would lose his position, and when she struggles to abandon the old traditional ways of the village. But after meeting Rakine and leaving Zant, she begins to open up and she reveals that she was a bright and sweet girl, full of personality. It is revealed that she has had some romantic feelings for Eyt for a long time, and he did for her, but they couldn't show any emotions because it showed weakness. She has been seen kissing Eyt a few times throughout the story. She was seen to be very emotional when he left on dangerous missions, she always worried or wept thinking she would never see him alive again. She is very loyal and respectful to Eyt and Rakine and takes any orders they have, whether to stay put or to stay out of a battle to keep herself safe. She is a very skilled fighter when she fought with a lightsaber pike resembling spear, with two ends. She has received a pair of dueling lightsabers which can connect into a saberstaff, but is barely seen using them in combat. She knows how to pilot a ship as seen when she took Eyt's unconscious body back to Zant after he got injured on Coruscant. She has little knowledge of the Force and has had little to no training, but she respects the Force for its power and how strong Eyt and Rakine are in the Force. She is a very emotional character as she cries when the village was destroyed and every time Eyt left to join the dangers of battle. She even wept when Eyt lost his job on Zant, and at the dead tree outside the cave on Ikana, to serve as a memorial for the loss of the Zan-Deer back on Zant. She may be the character that has cried the most in the story.
Weapons: A spear resembling lightsaber, much like a lightsaber pike, with a long black hilt and two short light blue blades, one on each side, like an extended saberstaff. (Current).
Two dueling curved-hilt lightsabers from Lord Sorin, both identical and could attach on the pommel ends, creating a saberstaff. The lightsabers are silver with black emitters and pommels and the long blades are a crimson color. (Current).
Allies: Eyt and Rebel Alliance
Enemies: Darth Vader, First Galactic Empire
Goals: Protect Randin Village from danger (Failed), To live alone with Eyt on Ikana.
Trivia: She loves both the climates of hot and sandy deserts and the mountainous, snowy regions. When she was young she lived alone in the mountains of Zant living on her instincts and tauntauns, growing a love for snow and tauntaun's meat. She likes the deserts because of the soft, warm sand and the meat from the desert spiders that roam Zant.
Rakine
Full Name: Rakine Cerivian
Species: Human
Appearance: A thin human with medium length, combed back, black hair and a long scar running from his right eyebrow, down his face and neck to his collarbone. He has an average sized head and no facial hair. His eyes are usually green but will occasionally turn "Dark Side" when he is angered. His body has a thin, muscular build. He wears a leaf green jacket with the sleeves tucked up to his elbows. The jacket has big pockets on the inside to hold his blaster. He wore a white holy V-neck t-shirt under his jacket, a brown strap over his right shoulder and around his waist, and gray jeans with a black belt, where his communicator and lightsaber attached to. The jeans' legs are tucked in at the bottom, into large black, knee-high boots. Sometimes he wears Karus' old rebel pilot helmet after Karus died. (Current.)
Born: 38 years Before Battle of Yavin (Mandalore)
Home: Mandalore (Formerly), Coruscant (Formerly), Yavin 4 (Currently)
Age: 26
Personality: A strong rebel fighter, Rakine is very skilled in the Force, being greatly trained both in the Light and Dark Sides, and in combat when he fought against the mighty Inquisitor Sot-Kolok numerous times in the past. He claims to walk a "Grey Path" on the middle ground, and says to intervene only when it's necessary, but mostly while working in the Rebel Alliance. He may be loyal to the Alliance and to the Zan-Deer, but he is sometimes seen as humorous, making some remarks about Eyt and Rooda's relationship, even stating he predicted it from the start. He is sometimes seen as the badass of the group by fighting Sot-Kolok numerous times and even earning a scar in his face from one infamous battle, and even in the scene where he smashes through the windshield of his ship and jumps out as it crashes to the ground. He is witty and clever, knowing how to command a rebel fleet. When he focuses on the Dark Side in combat, he can even be unnaturally cruel and sadistic, as seen by electrocuting Eyt many times in or at the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, and slicing off Eyt's antlers, though this was under Lord Sorin's control. He can still be sadistic after Sorin's death, when he knew the lightwhip was unstable, he jumped back and threw it at Darth Vader as it exploded. His cruel and sadistic nature is from a mental rupture created by his abusive master of the Sith, Lord Sorin, when he tried to learn the Dark Side to focus on the full Force and all its aspects. But he even shows signs of friendliness, by apologizing to Eyt for everything that happened to him from events caused by himself. He'a also very sympathetic when he learns of the death of Eyt's whole family and the Zan-Deer of the village, Randin. Because of this, it is unknown if he lost someone important to him in the past.
Weapons: For being trained in both Light and Dark Sides, he is a very skilled swordsman. He uses a traditional lightsaber, with a sliver hilt and long gray emitter. It has a long red blade. (Current).
A custom blaster he made shortly before joining the Rebel Alliance. It resembles a typical blaster, with red highlights added to it. (Current).
A long lightsaber with a curved black pommel end, black hilt, and silver emitter. The lightwhip of Sot-Kolok the Inquisitor ignites a very long, flexible red whip-like blade. Since the plasmic blade is flexible, Sot-Kolok's lightwhip was so unusually unstable, that his weapon was not extremely reliable in battle. Damaging yes, but too much use caused it to explode. (Temporary).
Allies: Eyt, Rooda, and the Rebel Alliance
Enemies: Darth Vader, Darth Sorin (deceased), Sot-Kolok (longtime rival, deceased), First Galactic Empire
Goals: Teach Eyt the ways of the Force (somewhat Succeeded), destroy Darth Sorin (Succeeded), show the connection between Jedi and Sith and show how similar they are, and bring peace to the galaxy and destroy the Empire.
Trivia: In an earlier point in the story, Rakine implied to have gotten the long scar on his face from his overly abusive Sith master Sorin, but it's most likely that he got it from a battle with Sot-Kolok. It isn't confirmed where he truly got the scar. His memory could've simply been corrupted by his abusive master, thus giving him a partial memory loss.
Sorin
Full Name: Sorin Karraticus
Species: Human
Appearance: a tall elderly Sith Lord, with green eyes, a strong jaw, a wrinkled face, white hair growing on his temples just above his ears and as a white goatee on his chin. He wears a large Sith robe to cover his body which is protected by almost indestructible Mandalorian body armor dyed completely black.
Born: 88 years Before Battle of Yavin (Naboo)
Died: 12 years Before Battle of Yavin (Hoth)
Home: Naboo (Formerly), Hoth (Formerly)
Age: 76
Personality: A sadistic and cruel man, Sorin was one of the nastiest and secretive Sith Lords to have existed. He had remained friends with Darth Plagueuis, another Sith Lord, until Darth Sidious killed him. In fear of his own life Sorin fled to Hoth to an old cave where he lived since. He's known for being mischievous, secretive, and controlling, using both Eyt Pezymn and Rakine Cerivian as living puppets to carry out his tasks while he stayed on Hoth. He has managed to grow a friendly side, offering to save Eyt from the harsh climate of Hoth and to warmly take him as an apprentice. He even mentions how aggressive and abusive he was to his past apprentice (Rakine) by using excessive Force lightning to temporarily rupture the Dark Side as he tried to use it, using that as his reasons to try and be a nicer and more gentle person, which ultimately fails. He is very deceptive as he lies a lot.
Weapons: Two dueling curved-hilt lightsabers, both identical and could attach on the pommel ends, creating a saberstaff. The lightsabers are silver with black emitters and pommels and the long blades are a crimson color. (Formerly).
The Force was used multiple times in multiple ways against both Eyt and Rakine on Hoth, whether it's Force lightning or his power to possess a living vessel.
Enemies: First Galactic Empire, Darth Venison, Rakine Cerivian
Goals: Escape the Empire after Lord Sidious killed his friend Lord Plagueis (Succeeded), To train Rakine and Eyt as apprentices and personal assassins to fight for him without him being in risk of danger (Close, but failed)
Trivia: He was known as a "Cowardly Sith" and said it was for running from a Jedi or never fighting or confronting. This could all easily be a lie used to cover up the fact that he lets his "Force puppets" to carry out his tasks and acts.
Sot-Kolok
Full Name: Sot-Kolok (pronounced "Soht-Kah-loke") Taxiinhiligaar Alqa'Jur Eqsiutriige
Species: Unknown
Appearance: A tall and pale being, Sot-Kolok wasn't a human creature. He had a large and thin body structure, with incredibly thick skin and long limbs. He had six large arms which he used to fight while wielding multiple lightsabers at once, making him a greater threat. He had a long body with a bulky torso, with pale white skin covering his body. He had long and crooked teeth. As an Inquisitor, he wore a unique Imperial uniform, with six sleeves covering his arms, and a pair of armor underneath. He was covered in lightsabers which he used to fight Rakine and Venison on Kommaden.
Born: 125 years Before Battle of Yavin
Died: 12 years Before Battle of Yavin (Kommaden)
Home: unknown
Age: 113
Personality: A cunning assassin and strategic fighter, Sot-Kolok was a cruel member of the Imperial Inquisition as one of it's best warriors. He has slain a great number of rebels and soldiers in the past. He has even fought against Rakine Cerivian many times in many encounters, one o which was likely a cause of Rakine's facial scar. He was also very ruthless and cocky, morbidly killing Karus by swiftly beheading him on Kommaden. Coupled with his skill in lightsaber combat, he was very Force-sensitive, being able to sense danger and use many unique and difficult techniques, including a power to briefly hover in the air and heal his body to perfectly to the point where no scar is left.
Weapons: Sot-Kolok was armed with many types of Imperial lightsabers, wielding two standard lightsabers, six greatsabers, four spinning saberstaffs, and about four lightships, all with red blades. One lightwhip is violently unstable.
Allies: First Galactic Empire
Enemies: Rakine, Darth Venison
Goals: To liberate the Kommaden system and help the Empire gain more galactic territory (Failed)
Karus
Full Name: Karus Gorobon
Species: Human
Appearance: A tall brown haired human, with a thick beard grown on his face and long scraggly hair that dropped to his ears. He has a stubble mustache and his beard goes up to his sideburns. He wore a rebel fighter pilot outfit and a pilot helmet on his head. (Last Worn)
As a Jedi, he had a short beard and a short Padawan braid from his brown hair. He wore a tan Padawan outfit and a brown Jedi robe. (Former/ Force Ghost)
Born: 41 years Before Battle of Yavin (Coruscant)
Died: 12 years Before Battle of Yavin (Kommaden)
Home: Coruscant (Formerly), Yavin 4 (Formerly)
Age: 29
Personality: A former Jedi Padawan, Karus was weak in the Force when he was alive. He is bad with weapons, as seen by his lack of lightsaber training as a Jedi, and his failed attempt at assassinating Sot-Kolok on Kommaden. He never wanted to be a fighter with weapons, and always wanted to be a pilot. He is a wise man, knowing of the stronger powers of the Force from his old master, even knowing how to become a Force ghost to tell Venison and Rakine of the power of Levitation, one of the most difficult Force abilities, only Sorin and Sot-Kolok have had the strength to pull it off. He is loyal to the Rebel Alliance and served as Captain before his death and his best friend Rakine took his place.
Relationships: Eyt / Darth Venison (Fellow rebel and friend), Rakine (Fellow rebel and best friend)
Occupation: Jedi Padawan (Formerly), Rebel soldier (Formerly), Rebel Captain of the Alliance Starfighter Corps (Formerly).
Weapons: As a Jedi Padawan, he once had a lightsaber. It is unknown where it remains now or if he kept it, but it's blade was blue. (Formerly)
He had a blaster on his mission to the Star Destroyer overseeing the Death Star's construction and on the trip to Kommaden (Formerly).
Allies: Darth Venison and Rebel Alliance
Enemies: First Galactic Empire
Goals: Destroy the Empire and restore the Old Republic.
Rulus
Full Name: Rulus Knil-Wean (pronounced "Roo-lus Kneel Wee-ahn")
Species: Kommadenian (A fictional race of intelligent beings native to Kommaden. They had long slender bodies with skin color ranging from blue to green. Their heads were diamond shaped and they had thin necks. Their hands had four long fingers and their feet ended in stubs. The average Kommadenian reached six feet in height when fully grown.
Appearance: A tall female Kommadenian Council Member, Rulus wore a dark red robe with white seams and decorative patterns on it. The robe covered her slender body down to her feet and stopped at her hands, revealing four long blue fingers. Her skin was light blue and her diamond-shaped head rested on her long, thin neck. Her head was mostly covered in a large white hood that attached to the back of her robe. She had bright yellow-orange eyes and a small mouth. She was one of the tallest characters in the story.
Born: 392 years Before Battle of Yavin (Kommaden)
Home: Kommaden (Formerly), Yavin 4 (Currently)
Age: 380 years
Personality: Rulus speaks in a quick and kind voice, to conserve her voice for when she needs to speak up in a council briefing. She is a kind and understanding character, feeling sympathy for Lord Venison when he tells her of his failure to save his family. She is a fighter only in politics, often debating whether certain moves will help save the galaxy from the Empire's oppression.
Allies: Kommaden system, Rebel Alliance
Enemies: First Galactic Empire
Goals: Protect Kommaden and the galaxy from the Empire.