Hey guys! Sorry for the league of absence. I promise to try to be consistent with these things, but no guarantee. Well here's the next chapter.
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Chapter 4- Water Park Flash
Fang
I woke up to find feet in my face. What the? I opened my eyes to get a better picture of whose feet it was. I trailed down the leg and saw that I was Max's. That's sort of a relief. I think.
So Max was a turbulent sleeper? Blackmail worthy. I slapped her feet away from my face, and Max- kind of- rolled onto the floor. Oppsies?
She got up and glared at me. "What the hell Fang? You just don't kick a girl off a bed!" oh god she's going to make my ears bleed. She just kept going and going about how much the fall hurt her, I should treat girls right, blah, blah, blah.
She stopped for a sec, and I thought she was done, but I spoke too soon, and then she continued. Oh god she's turn into Nudge.
I talked her to the ground. My face neared her face, and guess what I did? I told her to shut up. I then got up and crawled back into bed. Finally peace and qui- AHH! I yelped.
I was shocked, from the fact that Max had flipped the bed, and sat on it, leaving me barely able to breathe. I thrashed, and kicked, wailed, and screamed, but she would get off of me. I pretended to be dead. I know it sounds cruel, but I will be dead unless she gets off of me. I think she noticed my unmoving body because I instantly felt the weight ease. She got the bed and put it back on the bed frame. She I got up, stealthily, quietly, and got behind Max, while she was fixing it. When she was done she turned around and I talked her to the bed. Revenge is always my number two priority.
"Get off of me Fang" she said through ground teeth. She was mad. "No." I was finding enjoyment in this. It's kind of funny. We had a staring contest for what seemed like 5 hours, but in reality 3 minutes when Max finally broke down and did something she hasn't done in like 4 years. She kneed me where the suns don't shine. And this time the pain could've had me crying. She pushed me off of her and grabbed my head by the hair and made me look at her. Someone's not a morning person.
"Never play dead again, and never get on top of me like that either." She let go of my head, me still holding myself, praying that I can still have kids someday.
After the pain eased, I got up and found Max making bacon. Oh my god, BACON?! SHE'S MAKING BACON! First time bro.
"Wow Max, you're making breakfast. Since when did you learn to make breakfast?" I've never seen her cook in my entire life.
"Well, after you left, my mom had made me take cooking classes. She wanted me to learn because something had happened." She was looking sad, almost depressed when she said that last thing. I was looking intently at her, trying to make out the reason, but I couldn't get it. But me, being the oh so patient one, just bluntly asked her. She tensed right then and there, and I instantly regretted my words.
"She left Fang; she got up, and left me home at 19. To this day, I don't know where she, nor do I want to. It made me realize that all I need is the cookie jar back at my place." A smirk playing on her face, of course.
~[*]~
"HEY MAX, WANNA GO TO RAPIDS?!" we had been here for 29 hours, and we haven't done anything. = 3=
"SURE!" Yes! We get to do something. I got up and ran into the bedroom, dragged my suitcase out from the closet, while Max, dragged hers from under the bed. We took it out at the same time – I noticed that she had a bikini- and we looked at each other. We had the same thought in our heads. It was like in those stupid, cheesy, Japanese ninja fights when two black lines block your entire head instead of your eyes, something like that. We eyed each other for a few more seconds and we raced to the bathroom. She tripped me, I tripped her, she pulled my shirt, and I pulled her shirt, until finally she kicked the back of my knee, sending me to floor and her into the bathroom first. Crap.
Right when I got up and charged for the door she quickly shut it, me basically slamming my face into it. Once I re composed myself, I banged on the door 3 times and told her she had 10 minutes. I sat on the couch and grabbed my guitar from the stand beside it. I worked a couple of chords to pass the time. When it was FINALLY my turn, she took like 11 minutes in there instead of 10, I took my shower. When I was done, I put on a pair of boxers (AN: = w=) and slipped on my swim trucks. Guess what color they were? Black you say? No, its grey this time fellow stalkers who have chosen to read my life story!
As Max was packing a bag full of her and my clothes, I waited on the couch putting my guitar back. When she came out she probably didn't notice, but she was just in her swim suit, to which, mind you she doesn't usually wear, was a bikini. A red one in fact, which looked really . . . hot on her, as much as that burns on my tongue. I stared at her, and stared, and stared, and stared. Why did I notice before?
~[*]~
When she finally put on a shirt and jean shorts, crud, we left and I drove. Unfortunately, the drive was two hours from where we were staying at, Kendall. After the drive, we made it by 12 in the afternoon. "Um, Fang, why is empty?" Good question, good question. "I called ahead and requested that they close it down to the public so that it's just a you and I day, like the old times." I smiled, well it felt like a smile, and we walked to the biggest ride here, Big Thunder.
We raced to see who get there first. The stairs we passed on because they were a lot of them.
After our long climb, we made it and the guy, Larry apparently, put a floaty thingy of four and me and Max sat across from each other, me grabbing her hands.
"Ok, since its just you two, ima make this quick. You either scream or stay quiet. Try not to fall off 'kay?" thanks for the warning I guess?
We then went in, darkness taking over our sight. We then started to scream when the floaty picked up speed, and me and Max possibly getting hit in the head since the tunnel wasn't too roomy when we turned a little.
As we went further into the tunnel, I saw a little beam of light. This is the cool part. I thought.
As we finally left the darkness, we were greeted with a big funnel of awesomeness. We were laughing and smiling the entire we were riding the funnel. As the ride was finishing I looked and Max and she had a look of longing. I got her attention, "I really missed spending time with you too." She smile, and then we crashed into the mini pool at the bottom. We resurfaced and she jumped and hugged me. I hugged her back, sort of, I don't know.
~[*]~
As the day went by, I and Max were having a blast. She was beating me on a couple of the rides, and me totally doing better dives.
"One more ride before we go back to the hotel?" I looked at Max and answered with a nod.
We go to one of the water slides and climb, yet another long flight of stairs. During our endeavor, I looked up and was looking at Max's back. I trail up and noticed that the strings on Max's bikini top on her neck were beginning to loosen. I didn't say anything, maybe because I didn't want to face a round of interrogation with questions like 'Why were you looking there?', and 'do you always stare at people's neck?' and or the classic, 'are you a creep?' So yea.
As she turned around to look at me, her, err, bikini top loosened and it fell over, exposing her, um chest area. I looked away immediately, trying not to look. As she fixed herself, well tried to, she had asked me to tie it back up. I did but I started to laugh, for no apparent reason.
"What's so funny?" I laughed even more, like full out laughing. I calmed down and told her, that that particular predicament that just went down was awkward and funny for no apparent reason.
Anyways, we made it to the top, the guy repeating what the guy from the first ride Big Thunder, had done. (AN: too lazy to retype it DX). For this ride, though, we had to sit back-to-chest, or to make it easier, I had to sit there and hold on to Max's waist.
He pushed us down, and we made our way down the clear-tube slide, screaming, and me getting glimpse of the sun setting in the corner.
~[*]~
As we made our way home, music blasting through the car, and Max somehow, being able to sleep in the passenger seat.
The drive was kind of lonely, maybe the fact that, it was just me awake. I just sing along to the music, hoping time would pass by. But, that was hopelessly going longer than I had hoped.
I began to get hungry, a weird craving for . . . ice cream?
Awkward
So, what's the first place I go to, McDonalds ™. Why? Cheapest prices I have ever seen.
"Welcome to McDonalds, what can I get you?" intercom lady said.
"2 ice creams please."
"Any toppings?"
"One with a lot of fudge, and another with caramel and nuts please."
"Is that all?" this voice was really getting annoying. It's so robotic and, robotic?
"Yes."
I prayed and thanked the Gods up above that my face, thankfully shaded from the place of lighting, making her unable to see me, leading to the fact that she is unable to recognize me as Fang Walker.
Well anyways, as I pulled into the driveway of the hotel, I left the stuff in there, managed to get Max to a half asleep stage, having the ability to piggy back her up to the room, and me being able to carry the ice creams. I try to make it as fast as I can, but you try carrying a full grown woman. You have? Add a bag of ice cream to that numb nut.
I finally, FINALLY, make it, me practically panting. I drop her on the bed, and go and eat my ice cream.
I open the lid, and open my mouth to taste the colorless goodness. I sit there and think, and think, and think. Ice cream clearly has an impact on my mind.
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