Prologue
Grey mist hung low on the ground… a red outline surrounded everything even the moon. Many shadows moved around the ground, standing in a clearing where two she-cats, one being a white and the other being Blue-grey, and they both had the bright light of stars in their fur. Shadows engulfed the clearing and three cats padded out of the forest. One cat was a large Dark/light grey tom with amber eyes, the other a tortoiseshell she-cat, and the final being a Grey tom with black stripes.
"Thistleclaw how a-." The white she-cat mewed, her blue eyes glinting with sadness.
"Save it Snowfur…!" Thistleclaw hissed his amber gaze moving to the blue-grey she.
Thistleclaw flicked his tail signaling the other two cats to back up. The blue-grey she-cat looked at the tom and growled slightly her tail lashing.
"So Bluestar… what brings you two, to this place." the tom asked sitting down.
"Greeting Thistleclaw… we have come, because that 'Kit' or Hawkkit… needs to be released from this place" Bluestar sighed looking at the tom.
"Why should we..? that kit belongs to us, he has dark-forest blood in him…, he possesses our powers!" He hissed his fur bristling.
"Because he deserves to live a full life!' Snowfur broke in her eyes wide.
All the cats remained silent until Thistleclaw gaze a loud hiss.
"Fine… but when it's time… he comes back to us...for ever.." He hissed.
"Deal…." Bluestar mewed.
The two starclan cats faded leaving Thistleclaw alone.
"Mapleshade..Darkstripe keep an eye on Hawkkit when we send him to the clans" Thistleclaw growled turning to them.
The two cats nodded and padded back into the forest, Thistleclaw chanted some words and a large light flared from a small bundle of twigs and leaves. A few moments later the light faded and Thistleclaw fell down.
"H-Have fun kit… we'll meet again…" he coughed.
A brown tabby tom padded through the forest his amber eyes narrowed. He soon came to a clearing where small mewling sounds came from the brush.
"Huh…." the tabby looked down and followed a scent trail only to find a light brown she-cat with a small kit huddled at her side. the kit was a brown tabby with snow white paws and chest fur.
The tabby placed a paw on the she-cats stomach but there was no gentle rise and fall.. she was dead. Looking at the kit his eyes widen, the kit seemed familiar, but he didn't care, he picked up the kit and pads off into the forest.
'Beware of this kit Bramblestar… his destiny is unclear to us' the wind seemed to whisper the warning but Bramblestar did not hear it.
Eh not the best but it's better than my first version!, so what do you think.. will Thistleclaw keep his promise and leave Hawkkit alone until its time, or will he break the promise?