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On other side, Daya was Quietly sat on Quillas… He does not know but His Doubt over His Bro, Frnds, Dr even Freddie too pressing Him that Something Fishy is here and All these People Hiding Something from Him… but What…!... His Tension was at Peak so murmur…
Daya: aakhir, Baat kya ho skti hay.. (murmur sadly) Boss bhi kitna Dukhi lug raha hy.. Subah Freddie bhi Roya Roya tha.. (rash tone) aur Us Kharos, Rajeev ka is tarah Mujhy Nikal dena aur Aaj bhi Boss ko Akely aany ko kehna aur Wo Dr. Wo haan Beena… (furstratidely) Wo tou…
His murmur Stopped feeling a Ringing tone from His Cell, He saw the Flashing Screen and Picked with…
Daya: Rahul, Sach, (heaved Relaxing sigh with) Main Tumhein yaad kr raha tha…
Rahul (stern): Daya, Aik Paisa Udhaar Nahi dun ga..(tough) aayii Samajh… wesy bhi abhi tak Salary Nahi aayii hy Account mei… already itni Tension…
Daya (interrupts with): kya Yaar, Nahi chahyey koi Udhaar…
Rahul (confuse): phir…?
Daya Updated Him All as right now He needed Someone who must Relax His Heart by Discuss the matter.. Daya said…
Daya: pata Nahi, (irritatingly) kya Chupa rahy hain ye Log Mujh sy..?
Rahul: Daya, Tum itna Mut socho.. (relaxing him with) dekho ho skta hay Abhijeet ko ya Rajeev ko Pata chal gaya ho kay Wo Baby kisi Orphanage sy Belong krta hy, Usy Khana Nahi diya gaya ya Maara gaya hy…
Daya: haan, main ny Aaj Suna.. Dr. Beena ny Bataya….
Rahul: haan tou is liye na…
Daya: magar Rahul, Boss First day sy Tension meiin hy, jis Raat wo Humein Mila tha aur Us waqt tak, balkay Us waqt kya.. abhi tk ye Confirm hee Nahi hy kay Wo Orphanage sy aaya hy ya Kahan sy…
Rahul: Theek hy, magar dekho, Tumhein ye 2/3 Baatein Ssun kr bhi Takleef hui na (Daya Sad and Quiets, Rahul Connected convo after feeling His Silence as) tou Tumhein Takleef sy Bachany kay liye na Unhun nay ye kiya…
Daya (low sound): shayed…
Rahul: shayed Nahi, (stressed) Yehi hay…
Daya: pr Yaar, Itny Choty Bacchy ko kaun Maary ga…?
Rahul really Hurts Badly on His Innocent Pal Stupidity having a Bitter Past but He Relaxes Him with…
Rahul: acha Tum Pareshan Nahi ho.. (Softly) Abhijeet Tumhein Bata he dy ga… Aaj Nahi tou Kal.. hain na…
Daya (Relax): haan…
Rahul: phir Tension Kyun ly rahy ho… 2/3 din Ruk jao… Sub Saheh ho jaye ga…
Daya: haan (slow and Hurt tone) Usy na Billi nay Kaat liya hy… Bechara (sadly) Billi ko Bhaga bhi Nahi paaya ho ga…
Rahul (smiles on His Friend Cuteness so Soothing Him with): hmmm.. pr ab tou koi Billi Usy Nahi Kaaty gi.. (reassuringly ) hain na.. (Lovingly) Tum thori na kisi Billi ko Usy Kaatny do gy…
Daya (little Relax): haan, Main na (Courage tone) Saari Billiyun ko he Maar dun ga…
Rahul: O Bhai, (jerking his head with) Tu Mujrimun ko Maar.. Billiyun ka Peecha chor day…
Daya stared Laughing and after few moments, His Friend Completely Sleeps His Every Doubt and makes Him Tension Free…
Freddie came inside the Hospital and after Meeting Abhijeet who takes Rehan with Him as Small Baby now after taking Juice with Rehan Dipped in Sleep while Freddie sat inside the Room Couch…
Daya seeing Abhijeet and Rehan coming tso started Vehicle and after sitting them, moved ahead hearing Rehan all day Routine Spending with Small Baby and Dr. Beena whom He Titled as DR AUNTY…
Here after their Departure, Ashoke giving a Light Slap on Rajeev Head and say in Tough tone…
Ashoke: O, Pagal.. ye kyat ha.. (angry) haan… Wo tou Abhijeet Tension mein tha aur Wo (cutely) Koala Bear bhi Bahar tha.. warna abhi Band baj jati (imitate) haan, phir Sedatives pr rakkhein gy (stressed) itny Small Baby ko.. hunh…
Rajeev (smilingly): Nahi hua kuch… (Relax) Khair hy….
Ashoke (as Both moving towards Cafeteria with): jabhi Tum Us kay baad kuch Boly Nahi…
Rajeev: haan, (in laugh) Munh Siye Khara raha…
Ashoke: khair, Main ny tou soch liya tha, yahan Abhijeet nay Poocha kay itni Choty Bacchy ko Sedatives.. wahan Main ny Tumhari Class leni shroo ki…
Rajeev: hunh… (harsh way) Tum pr bhi Angry Young Man ka Asar honay laga… Hum Dono Masoom na Tum Logun kay Zulm kay Jaal mein Phanse gaye hain…
Ashoke (teasing): Aik Masoom….
Rajeev move Little ahead while Ashoke followed Him in Smile… He still Confused why Baby was Not much Responding in These hours especially about going to His House and Meeting His Family…
Abhijeet in these Hours, at Residence after Freed from Dinner, Enjoying Green Tea with His Little Bear sat beside Him and Watching some Sports channel… Abhijeet started the Main matter of Revealing what happened with Small Baby as…
Abhijeet (clearing throat with): haan wo Daya (Daya still stick with TV Screen but say HMMM) (Abhijeet added) Wo jo Baby hy na, Small Baby, Us ki Report…
Daya turn towards Him and after Sipping the Last Drop from His Mug, grabbed His Bro Right Palm and say…
Daya: Mujhy pata hy Boss…
Abhijeet Stunned, How was in Shock that who was the Reveler if He was Not, might be Rajeev Personally told this to Daya, or Ashoke Handle Him aur lastly Freddie but… Before His manipulation gives any Result to Him.. Daya added…
Daya (added again): Tum Pareshan Mut ho.. (smiling) Mujhy tou Garv karna chahyey (placing His Head inside His Buddy Chest as He Loved this now a days more and added) kay Mery aas pass Mujh sy itni Muhabbat krny waly.. Mera itna Dihaan rakhny waly Log hain… (look at Him by Tilting His head with) hain na…
Abhijeet Smilingly nodded either started Weaving inside His Bear hairs who Closing His eyes in Sooth and say…
Daya: bas, (cutely) jaldi sy Wo Baby Mujh sy Dosti kr ly…
Abhijeet: kyun..?
Daya: Mujhy Acha Nahi lagta na… wo Baat hee nahi krta… pata hy (sat straight with Excitement) Main nay Us kay liye ek Zabardast sii Cheez dekhi hay (his eyes started Sparkling in addition) ek na Colors ka Box aaya hy (showing Size by hands) itna.. Nahi itna Bara hoga.. Us mein Paint aur Pastel Colors bhi hain aur na Us kay sath Ek Canvis aur Aesal bhi Mil raha hy aur 2.. Nahi.. shayed 4 Brush bhi.. Different Sizes kay.. Price Pooch lii hay Main nay…Dekhna Usy dun ga.. (now standing and grabbing Both Mugs with) Main Advance mein Book karwa aaya hun.. agar koi lay gaya tou…
Abhijeet just Smiles and Completely Relaxed that the Person either its Rajeev/Ashoke or Freddie... He handled Daya very Greatly… somehow His Heart was more Tilting towards Ashoke as He is a Neurologist and Calming Minds is His Best Treatment and Mostly Dr working with Him really Appreciated His this Quality that He Deal Difficult Patients so easily and His Sweetness with Real Thoughts and Examples really played a Vital Role in it and Obviously now the Matter automatically Resolved and Put a Burden of Hiding Something from Daya moved from His Heart…
Next Two days, Abhijeet really Busy as Unexpectedly , He call out for some Ground Level Planning work in HQ so He came in Less Contact in any Reported case including Visited that Baby too…
Cops still did not find any Information regarding the Kid as No Missing Complain while any Announcement coming through any Media totally Confirmed them that Baby was Kidnapped and Running away from their Hands…
CID Investigation not moved ahead on this Plane as No NGO or Orphanage of that Area or Some Other Areas Adjacent to that giving any Complain of any Missing Kid…
Duo having a Small Meeting or taking Updates to Dr. Beena about Her Session in Presence of Dr. Duo where Beena told them…
Beena: Nahi, kuch Response tou aa raha hy Baby ki taraf sy in Do Dino mein…
Daya: pr Mujhy samjh Nahi aatii (confusingly) wo Bolta itna Kum kesy hay.. itny Choty Bacchy tou kitna Bolty hain.. Sawal Poochty hain…
Beena (smilingly): ye Aap sy kis nay kaha..?
Abhijeet (to Ashoke in Whisper): haan, Khud tou Sahab ko Apna Experience tou hy Nahi (murmuring) Jhelty tou Hum hain na…
Ashoke Smiles on Abhijeet Low murmur sat beside Ashoke as Daya was also Not much Talkative.. He is a Man of Silence which Broke in presence of Some Special by using their Extra Skills… Beena added…
Beena: Zaruri Nahi hr Baccha Boly (to Daya) Bolny ka Taluq Surroundings sy hota hy.. Bacchy ko Encouragement milni chahyey… Us kay sath koi Baat krny wala ho.. Us ko Inoculate karny wala ho.. (causually) even Sometimes, Hum Khud Bacchun ko kehty hain kay Buht Bolti hay ye Larki tou bhi Bacchy Chup sy par jaty hain…
Rajeev: aur yahan kya hua hy..?
Beena: I think, Us kay sath koi Baat krnay wala Nahi hoga.. (to All) First, Baby School Nahi jata…
All (shock and shout): kya…!
Beena: haan, (thinking way) shayed Kidnap hony sy Pehlay bhi… kyunky Rehan Jub Apny School, Class, Friends, Teachers, Canteen , Break Time, Chutti, Prayer etc ka Zikr krta hy tou Wo Baccha Buht Keenly sub Sunta hy… Enjoy krta hy… tou shayed Social Life tou hy hee Nahi…
Abhijeet: yani, Aap ka Session Ye bata raha hy kay wo Kidnap Nahi hua.. ya Usy kahein Alug rakkha gaya hay…
Daya Appreciated his Buddy in Heart as by This Comment.. Abhijeet showed His Expertise as if He Kidnapped and Stayed with Others Kidnapped Kids, He must have Some Social Attachments with them… Beena said…
Beena: haan, lagta tou hy… kyunky agar aur Bacchy bhi hoty tou Us ka Un sy Interaction hota.. (lost tone) aur najany kyun, magar lagta hy Wo kuch arsy Pehlay hee Kidnap hua hoga…
Ashoke: haan, ho skta hy.. (brief) warna Kidnappers bhala Usy Branded Kapry kyun Dilwayein gy…
Abhijeet:.. hmm… magar Sub sy Bari Uljhan tou ye hay kay Wo Buht Chota hy magar abhi tak (complete shocking tone) Na Us nay Apny Baap Maa ka Naam liya, Na Roya, Na Un kay Pass jany ki Zid ki, Na Ghar jany ki.. Na hee Apni kisi Bua, Mausi, Chacha, Mama, Uncle, Maid.. kisi ka Zikr kiya.. tou…
Daya (interrupts with): haan, aur agar Orphanage sy bhi aaya hota aur wahan Nahi jana chahta tou bhi kuch tou Bolta, Kehta ky…
Abhijeet (cuts with): khair, Daya.. is Baat ko tou Tum Rehnay hee do… (teasing) Apna Waqt Bhool gaye kya…
Daya Quiets as He understands His Buddy Tease, cz He Personally Hide this Part of His Life till now, even Abhijeet got that Fact that Daya came from an Orphanage during an Investigation of a Case…
All feels a Tingue of Hurt, Pain and Quietness Engulfing the Atmosphere so Beena started as…
Beena: Jee, Aap ny Bilkul Saheh kaha… Main ny is Reference sy Bacchy sy Buht Baat ki.. Rehan kay through bhi (in thinking) pr Wo Apny Baary mein kuch Share krny ko Tayyar Nahi, yahan tak kay Apna Naam bhi Nahi.. Na Apni Pasand, Na Apni Narazgi…
Daya (instantly): Dr, magar last time pr Aap nay kaha tha kay Usy Colors pasand hain…
Beena: Jee, magar ye Us nay Mujhy Kaha Nahi Na Bataya.. ye Mera Observation hay kyunky Wo Drawings krta hy (showing Papers again) aur in Drawings ko Dekh kr koi bhi Bata skta hy…
Daya (cutting with): ky Green, Us ka Fav Color hy…
Beena: Absolutely True.. kyunky kahein na kahein, hr Drawing Figure mein Green Color ka Istaimal hy…
Abhijeet: shayed, Usy Apny baary mein (looking Daya Meaningfully who Hide His Eyes from Dig Bear Deep Black scanning eyes as) Baat krna Pasand hee na ho…?
Beena: haan… ho skta hy…
Rajeev (suddenly): wo Tum ko kya Bolta hy..?
Beena (with sigh): kuch Nahi…
Abhijeet: Nice... (softly) kafi Acha Naam hy…
Beena really Embarrassed while a Cute Smiles comes on Every face while Abhijeet Small Bear Cheeks turned Little Red gives Him Sooth as He Feels that His Teasing regarding Daya Quietness and His Past Life Hurts Him, while Ashoke asked…
Ashoke: aur Rehan ko ya Freddie ko…?
Beena: basically, Dr. Ashoke.. Wo Presence sy Kaam chalata hy.. matlab Usy kuch Chahyey tou Wo Rehan kay pass aa jata hy.. Us ka Hath pakar kr Usy Apni taraf Mutawajja krta hy… Rehan Poochy ky kaun sa Color chahyey tou Ishary sy batata hy.. pr (Sadly) Bolta Nahi…
Abhijeet (amazingly): OMG! Sach mein…
Beena: Jee, (excitedly ) Aap kabhi aisy Bacchy sy milein hain…
Abhijeet (in proud): Roz Milta hun.. ab tou (murmuring) kafi Bara ho gaya hy…
Ashoke (adds naughtingly ): Buddha bhi…
Beena: hmmm…
Abhijeet: khair, Dr. Beena… darasal Kal kay baad Rehan shayed Aap kay Sath Session pr Na ho…
Beena: haan, Rajeev told Me about that… dekhyey.. Main tou Poori Koshish kr rahi hun ky kuch Nikl aayey… (standing after seeing Her Cell just Beeped) thora aur krti hun… (excusing herself with) Sir, Meri ek aur Session Sitting hy Dusry Patient kay sath…
All (standing with): its OK…
Beena (to Duo): I'll Try My Best… Hope Kal koi Achi Khaber Mily…
Duo: Sure.. (humble way) Thank You…
She Leaves the Cabin while now all Four Discussing matters on Random Topics while Hope for a Good News…
Here, Dr. Beena Session going on as Today is Last day cz from Tomorrow Rehan must not coming for Whole day such Freqently so She tried Hard to get out atleast any Information and in that, She asked Rehan Casually…
Beena: acha tou Rehan, Aap ko Apny Dady Yaad aaty hain..?
Either She knew that Rehan Father was Died, but just to take out any Info about Baby Family.. She Pin Point that One especially after Last day Chats with Two Pairs of Duo…
Rehan (revolving on chair as Baby sat on stool with): Nahi…
Voice: Acha hy…
After almost 73 hours, Dr. Beena heard that Small Baby Voice with Clear Letters.. Internally She feels really Happy to atleast Crack that Quiet Shell and also got the Clue to Extending the Conversation on which Plane so asked Usually taking out Chocolate from Her Drawer as…
Beena: Kyun…?
Small Baby (little scare): Dady tou Kaat lety hain na…
Dr. Beena feels that Roof must Fell on Her as She cant Move Herself from few moments..