A Big Thank You so much to All Readers….Today I m talking about Some Points Missing in This or say Mostly in My Stories…
FF is a Place which Fills Up with Extremely Talented Writers…
The Platform having Brilliants Minds of Expressing Stuff especially in Non Investigative Genre…
Either its DUO-MRF, DREAMFANATIC, KRITTIKA, NANDITA, 23DIYA, SK-DUO, SHZK_LUCKY, PALAK, SAMEER KHAN, DNAFAN, DAYA's ANGEL, DUO LOVERS, INNOVATIVE 143CID, LADYMERIANGUE and Others who Mostly Invisible from FF right now…
I m Not belonged to that segment of Writers as basically I m an Investigative Writer…
In Investigation, we must moved with Speed and pace…
We maintain the Suspense and giving Mystery Flair in Our Every Moments…
We expand Our Readers Imagination to Understand the Scene as per their Imaginations as One Scene having Power to show 1000 Pictures…
We mostly wrote in between Lines of Aspect of Stories….
Honestly, This is the Criteria to Involved Readers in Crime Thriller or say Investigative Stuff…
Obviously, its not Fills the Non- Investigative Criteria of Writing…
Here, Detailing was the Biggest Ingredient of Story…
And I m really POOR on it….
Thats the Main reason, I cant handle Most of My Non-investigative Story Correctly and in Good manner…
I found Readers does not Like the Issue (Correct), the handling of Issue (as I Lose so Many Points and Minute Detailing ) and Most Important, cant Create the FEEL/EMOTIONS which really Spoil the Readers Mood either Irritated the Writer as after Doing Extreme Hard work .. I did not Success on My that Flaw…
So, I think to Winding Up this Story…
I m really Obliged to Every Reader who Read after Extracting their Precious time in their Hectic Skedule…
Their Feed backs either based on Praise or Positive Criticism…
Their Support, Approach, Sooth, words, Sentence, Concern all..
It's the Priceless thing, Any Creative Worker got and Never Ever Paying and Returning back to the Sender…
This is the Second Last Chapter of This Story…
Dunt Think, that I winding Up it Hurriedly as My most Regular reader knew that I will start to Posting My Story after Finishing it…
Already its for RIYA Birthday and I wanted to Finish it at 27th but Failed and also Feeling that through This I m Only Depressing My Precious Readers..
This time, Only I m giving a Liberty to Left the margins to Add Some which I Missing as in Starting Chapters till Now, I added Points as Some Readers Pointed…
DRIZZLE1640… Thank You so very much…
ARTANISH… Thank You so very much…
KRITTIKA… Jeee, Accident… Thank You so very much…
BLOOM 78.. kr diya Update.. Thank You so very much…
DSP.1…. haahahah… I m really Surprised that U thinking to get My Brain… Amazing… what will U do by getting a KHALI DABBA… heheheh…. Arry Kala Teeka… Already I tied LEMO MIRCHI around My Head (wink)… hmmm regarding U Loved the Flow of Silent Conversation, Emotions even Chota Baby too.. awww… Thank You so much… Any Reader Words are Assets for the Writer and I m really Lucky to have such Big Assets… Thank You so very much…
DAYA's ANGEL… Chalo kr diya Update.. Hope Kisi ko Kuch na ho.. hain na… Thank You so very much…
PUSH 23… Sure, Thank You so very much…
SK-DUO… haan, I m also Thinking in Different Plane for Daya Sir reaction… Thank You so very much…
PRIYA… Sure, Thank You so very much…
NAINA MALIK… awww, even I dunt Think that My Stories brought tears either Smiles.. I m really Thankful for Ur Precious Tears Beta… Sure, as being a Reader, U have a Right on Writer to Not Request but Order them (hehehe)… Thank You so very much…
SHALU… very Nice Point U raised.. I'll Clear it in This Chapter.. Hope U Like it… Thank You so very much…
GUEST… Thank You so very much…
MISTIC MORNING.. Buht kuch bacha tha Baccha.. Aap ny tou kuch Kaha hee Nahi… awww, YUMMY… Thanks for Reserving that.. Thank You so very much…
LOVEABHI… Bhaiyya hain na.. phir Kahy ka Ghaum… hmmm.. Thank You so very much…
SAMEER KHAN… hmm, Sanbhal tou lein gy Apny Bear ko… itna tou Yaqeen hy.. shayed na ho Painful.. hain na… Thank You so very much…
NANDITA… now, I m really in Regret Baccha that why U Blurted Out such Late and Tolerate Some Bad which U must Point Out Earlier… isi liye Beta, Main ny Pehlay Chapter mein hee Likh diya tha kay Main Chapter wise Likh raha hun tou Main nay Margin rakkha tha (Adding or Editing ka).. Aap ko batana tou tha na kay Dr ka aur Cops ka attitude Aap ko Awkward laga.. Main Kuch Change tou krta na… jub Main Aap ki Story pr Criticize krta hun tou yehi Zehn mein hota hay kay Nandita Baccha, is Point to abhi Correct ya Cover-up kr ly gi ya Usy Reader ka Aik aur Aspect Mil jaye ga.. pr Aap nay aisa kuch Nahi kiya… Aap Khud batao.. ab Main kya kahun… Aap itna Tolerate krny sy Better tha Mujhy First 2 Chapters mein bata dety.. Mujhy aik aspect Mil jata.. ho skta tha kay Koi New Idea Mery Zehn mein aa jata.. koi Achi, Better Situation mil jati na Beta… Aap aik Shaks ko Kuch Acha bata skty thy.. Usy ek aur Mour Us Rasty ka Dikha skty thy.. Usy Ek Soch dy skty thy… as a Brilliant Writer, Aap tou Buht Achi tarah ye samjh skty hain na.. pr Aap nay nahi kiya… Chalo, jesy Aap ki Khushi… regarding Sorry, Nahi Mujhy krni chayey kay aap kay few Words kay Feedback sy main samjh nahi paaya kay aap ko kya cheez Buri lug rahi hay.. ye Ek Creative Person ki Haar hoti hay jub wo Apny Chahny walun ki Khamoshi, Na-pasand aur Gussy ko Nahi jaan paye.. even I m really Sorry to You…Thank You so very much…
ANGELBETU… Nahi sad mut ho.. aisy Reactions koi bhi dy ga Beta… yes, I Presented Rehan there as per His Experience of Life where He does not Aware with such Signs na… awww, baby tou kisi sy Dosti nahi kr raha.. Aap sy kesy kr ly ga… Ain… Chalo sad Mut ho.. kuch nahi hoga.. Main hun na (wink)… Thank you so much..
COOLAK…. Yes, I tried to show Progression in Relation as per time and Reactions with Age… Chota baby does not Afford Rehan Anger na.. already He was Confused and Surprised after seeing the Result of His Attempt as His Thought was Different… Yes, Update is here… Thank You so very much…
ABHI-YA-FAN… arry Pehlay Exam, parhai and later Story… hmmm Yes, I also Showing Daya Sir Reactions on Different Plane this time… chalo Hope U will like it.. Thank You so much…
SOOTHING REFRESHER REVIEWER (SRR)… arry its Ok Boss.. I tried to show still SOME GOOD and PLEASANT in Society.. I knew in Reality, Rarely We found such Pleasant and Good sight of Society but it does not mean that We will not Hope for it and Only Shaded darker version although might be Any ONE PERSON moving on Positive path… World Drastically Losing the Morality/Values but still some have and I wanted to Propagated those SOME cz those SOME moving This World with their Good Deeds.. hain na… if We Think about Barriers, We does not Move an Inch but if We think about Love/Relations/Good/Success/Hope and LORD… We at least TRIED.. I m just doing it with Help of LORD, My Family, Frnds and My Many Readers, Viewers and Well Wishers… Thank You so very much…
D… Really.. kuch Nahi hoga.. haan.. Thank You so very much…
ABHIDAYAFAN (ADF)… Hello Baray.. Dunt say Please.. give Me Order na… No, Daya Sir is Not Avoidiing Abhijeet Sir Health.. I'll Clear it in This Chapter… arry kuch Nahi hoga Baray.. Aap ka ye Pyara sa Chota hy na.. so.. Dunt Worry.. Be Happy.. take a Chill Pill Baray (heheheh)…. Thank You so very much…
BHUMI 98.. haan, ab… (wink)… Thank You so very much…
SANJHANA… shayed haan… shayed nahi… parhaye Is Chapter mein.. hehehh.. Thank You so very much…
BLUE FAIRY… its Ok Buddy…. Hmm, Thanks for like that Hug part… Thank You so very much…
DREAMFANATIC… hmmm, Chalo BUNNI ki sawari pohanchi tou.. arry Baccha.. Pehly studies na…
About CHPTER 1: hahahah, yes, Hope This Current Chapter Solved All Ur Confusion regarding Title and Summary of Plot…
Hahahha, haan Hospital part Mostly Guessed, ab teen hee jagah reh gayii hain, Meri Stories mein Duo kay liye na.. ab Bechary kya Ceekhein gy… hehehe… hmm.. Lets See… Thank You so much…
About CHAPTER 2: hmmm, Yes.. I showed the Person with its Background which makes His Characters Strength in which way… regarding Freddie Sir, U always knew, I Loved to Portray him a Mature, Experienced Cop having Respectful shades for their Senior and Seniors even Juniors for Him… Sooth and Smile.. I tried BUNNI… chalo… Buht Buht Shukriya…
His Half Soul Immediately takes Him Softly inside His Loving Shell and just Weaving and Rubbing His Arm, Hairs and Head to Relaxing Him on that Most Painful News, the Figure just got few time Back…
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Rehan Scream such Loud but Daya cant able to Halt the Quillas at Correct time, He Pressed the Brake with Force while just Wrapped Rehan in a way that His Back coming on Front Wind Screen side while Leaned Back the Seat towards Back to Safe Rehan from Back Injury too…
Quillas Hit with a Truck who Standing Quietly at Roadside and it was Daya Mistake as He did not See it…
Luckily Nothing Much happened except Rehan Unconscious due to Scare… People Gathered and taken out Both Safely from Back side and Sending them to Hospital through Ambulance …
CID Team got the News from Media as few Reporters with Camera People were already there to Cover a Rally which will Move from there and during Correcting their Camera Angles, The Footage of that Accident made and Played on their Concerned News Channels…
Rajat, Freddie and Sachin Immediately went to that Hospital where Both Daya and Rehan Sent and on Daya Order, Preparing Arrangements for Shifting Rehan to Life Line Hospital and in that, Arrangements Preparations, Daya Skipped from the Hospital, How and When.. Nobody knows…
Abhijeet and ACP Sir on their way to Hospital as They got the News when coming out from Meeting Organised at HQ from HQ Staff when Leaving HQ Building…
Abhijeet called Rajat who Updated Him and after getting Daya Skipped the Hospital takes a Sigh and Tell Rajat to Fulfill their Job and after Cutting Call Tell this to ACP Sir who said…
ACP (in shock): pr Us ka Rehan sy Rabta kesy hua… Rehan ka Cell tou Mery Pass hy..
Abhijeet (with Breath): Malum Nahi Sir… (calling Cell company with saying) Main Daya kay Cell ki Location Pata krwata hun kyun Cell Switched Off aa raha hy… wesy Rajat Keh raha tha, Daya Theek hay aur Rehan bhi.. bas Rehan Dar ki Wajah sy Behosh ho gaya tha… Wo Dono Usy LLH Shift kr rahy hain…
ACP nodded while Abhijeet after Calling, Holding and lastly got the Location of His Bear Existence so after Reaching LLH, Checked Rehan with ACP Sir and after Leaving Him here, Rushed to Rest Part of His Soul…
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Abhijeet still Patting on Daya Back Softly and after few time, takes Him towards Jeep, sat Him on Passenger Seat, still He feels Daya's Tears and after coming to Driving Seat, started Vehicle…
In whole Journey He did not say anything to Daya as He wanted that He Expelled Every Tear, but after Reaching Life Line Hospital Parking, when He touched Daya to Step Out, find Him in Dark Sleep…
Rajeev coming out after Attending Daya and then Updated about His Health to Both, His Father and Brother either His Friends with…
Rajeev (sadly): Shock laga hy Usy… kafi Gehra… (all Quietly Sighed, while Rajeev added to Abhijeet) Tum jao, Us kay Pass.. Usy Behoshi mein bhi Jerks lug rahy hain…
Abhijeet moved inside the Room Silently, coming Close to Daya where Staff already Presented so told Him to Help and with Staff Help, He Placed Daya Head on His Chest after sitting on His Bed with Help of Head rest and started Weaving inside His Hairs in Circular movements Astonished Staff after Getting the Minimizing of Bar of Jerk Recorded on Monitor with this Magical Tone of Touch so Evacuated the Room…
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A Small Buzzing Voice appeared suddenly Picked and Entertained with WAIT in Whispering tone Confused the Caller while Receiver after Placing the Head of His Bear Softly on Pillow, leave the Room and now…
Abhijeet: haan Rahul.. Bolo…
Rahul: arry, Main kya Bolun.. Bolo tou Tum.. Wo bhi Apny Buddhy Bhaloo sy… Bechary ko kis Mushkil mein Daala hua hy (Softly) Yaar, Hum Log hain na.. Usy Sanbhal lein gy.. pr Batao tou Usy… Chupao tou Nahi (sadly) Shak, Yaqeen ki Had tou Choro.. ab tou wo Dard ki Lapait mein aa gaya hay… Abhijeet, Tum Samajh rahy ho…
Abhijeet (interrupts in Pain): ab Usy sub pata chal chukka hy Rahul…
Rahul: Us Baby kay baary mein…
Abhijeet: haan…
Rahul (in low tone): kya Wo Orphanage sy aaya hy…?
Abhijeet (deep sigh): Kaash Wo wahein sy aata…
Rahul: matlab…?
Abhijeet (slowly): He was used to Abuse by His Father on Regular bases…
There is No Voice of SHOUT, QUESTION, SCREAM Confused Abhijeet who started in Tension as…
Abhijeet: Rahul.. Rahul.. R U OK.. Rahal.. Tum Theek.. Rahul.. Relax raho.. Wo Baby Theek hy ab.. Rahul.. Tum Meri Baat sun…
The Call Cutting tone really Worried Him a lot… Many times He tried on that Number but got only Switch Off mode really Increased His Tension and Now He called on His Station, got a Number of His Colleague from there who was with Him at Delhi in a Training session and when Call Him and Introduced Him as…
Abhijeet: Hello, Inspector Shukla Baat kr rahy hain…
Shukla: Jee.. Aap…?
Abhijeet: Sorry, Main Sr. Insp Abhijeet from CID Mumbai sy Baat kr raha hun.. abhi Insp Rahul sy Baat ho rahi thi magar achanak Un ka Cell…
Shukla: Insp Rahul tou Nikl bhi gaye…
Abhijeet (shocked): Kahan kay liye…
Shukla: Mumbai kay liye.. shayed 1 ya Derh ghanty mein Pohanch bhi jayein…
Abhijeet (with sigh): kis Airline sy…?
Shukla: Fly India sy…
Abhijeet: Thank You so much.. (apology tone) Sorry Aap ko Disturb kiya…
Shukla: Nahi, its OK…
Abhijeet Ended Call and Look at His Front where almost Every Teary Eye on Him as right now the Painful News is Bombed over Freddie, Rajat, Vivek, Sachin and even Nikhil too so He looks at All and after Hiding Eyes from them, Tell…
Abhijeet: Freddie aur Rajat, Fly India ki Next Flight Pata karo, kub Delhi sy Mumbai Land ho rahi hay aur ja kr Rahul ko ly ao…
Both without any Intentions Standup and Moving while Staff coming and updated about Rehan coming in Conscious state and after His Dr Treated Him, Allowed All to Meet Him so now Oldie DUO, Abhijeet, Ashoke and Rajeev inside, while Nikhil Move inside Daya room with Staff and Sachin and Vivek went to See that Small Baby on their Heart voice…
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Rehan Wakes Up and after seeing His JEET Bhaiyya, ACP Uncle and Others Relaxed as Abhijeet already takes Him in His Loving Shell, He Relaxed and asked…
Rehan: Yaadi Bhaiyya Theek hain…
Abhijeet (leaving him with): Bilkul…
Now Staff sat Him with Help of Pillow and ACP takes Charge and asking Rehan Softly and Relaxly as…
ACP: Rehan Beta, Aap Yaadi Bhaiyya kay sath yahan kesy aayey…? Aap ki Un sy kub Baat hui..?
Rehan: Kal Raat ko…
Salunkhy: Ghar aaye thy kya Tumhary Yaadi Bhaiyya…?
Rehan: Nahi, Phone pr Baat ki thi (happily) Yaadi Bhaiyya nay Mujhy Naya Phone diya hy na (ACP and Abhijeet exchanged an Helpless Glance while Rehan added Sadly) Mera Phone Ghum ho gaya tha na, Main nay Yaadi Bhaiyya ko bataya tha tou Unhun nay Mujhy Freddie Uncle kay hath bhej diya (happy way) aur us mein tou Orange color kay Button jalty hain..…
Rajeev: acha.. aur abhi Aap nay Yaadi Bhaiyya ko Choty Baby kay baary mein kya bataya..?
Rehan: yehi kay wo Pagal hy (rash) ek Dum.. Bolta hy kay Dady Kaat lety hain.. bhala Dady koi Shair, Bhaloo hoty hain jo Kaat lein (press Abhijeet Palm with) hain na Jeet Bhaiyya … Aap batayein.. Nahi hoty na Dady koi Shair, Bhaloo jo Kaat lein (Abhijeet Painfully Smiles while Rehan adds more) bas Yehi…
Abhijeet: hmm…
Rehan: haan aur na, Yaadi Bhaiyya Us ky liye Plane bhi layey thy tou Wo Us ny Yaadi Bhaiya ko Maar diya (All Shocked while Rajeev Instantly Left the cabin, Rehan includes in angry tone) Chout bhi lagi Yaadi Bhaiyya ko.. hunh.. (telling Abhijeet Reassuringly as) abhi Main Us Choty Baby sy Aadha Katti hun Jeet Bhaiyya..
ACP (Smilingly): Nahi, Aap Us sy Poora Dosti kr lo.. (Softly) Aadhi Kaati bhi Achi baat Nahi… hmm…
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Rehan nodded and meanwhile now Staff Entered inside lay Down Rehan with Proper Medications as His Arm still Not Healed by this Accidental Jerk so He Sleeps and All moved out while Salunkhy added…
Salunkhy (disappointed tone): yahein… Chook ho gayii…
ACP: haan agar Rehan ko keh dety ky Ye Secret hy ya Daya ko Nahi batana tou aisa nahi hota…
Abhijeet (with sigh): Sir, ab hr Rasta Band krny kay baary mein tou Nahi Socha ja skta na…
Salunkhy: haan, wesy bhi jitni kisi sy koi Cheez Chupao.. Wo Bahar aa hee jati hay…
Abhijeet: haan, already Meri Halat sy Usy Buht Shak tha (sadly standing at corridor with) jub Keh kr, Jata kr Thak gaya tou Khamosh ho gaya… Wo bhi kya krta… (to Ashoke) wesy Ashoke, Rajeev ko kyun itna Jhatka laga.. Mujhy tou khair (deep sigh) Behosh hona hee tha… chahy Wo Khaber Sun kr hota ya Nahi Sun kr.. already Mujhy Kafi Chakker aa rahy thy.. Us roz bhi isi liye Jaan kr Freddie kay sath aaya tha Hospital ky Driving Nahi kr paon ga.. Bureau bhi Cab sy gaya tha.. Sar mein Buht Dard tha.. (dull tone) aajeeb Thaki Thaki sii Tabiyet lug rahi thi, Kafi Dino sy… aa bhi Tumhary hee pass raha tha kay kuch Suggestion ya Dawa ly sakun… Kuch dino sy Na Neend Saheh ho rahi thi aur Na Khana Peena Regular tha… (confusingly) magar Rajeev…?
Ashoke: basically Abhijeet, kisi ko bhi is Khaber sy itna Shock Nahi laga jitna Us kay FATHER kay is mein Shamil hony sy laga.. Rajeev ko 2/3 jerks lagy cz Wo Bacchun ka DR Nahi hay.. wo GP hy.. already Wo aisy Cases Sunta hy, dekhta hy magar Deal Nahi krta.. (briefly telling) ye bilkul aisa hee hay kay Hum Roz Sunty hain kay Luterun nay Gun Point pr Mobile cheen liya, Zewar, Valet magar jub Gun Humari Kanpatti (temple) pr lagti hay tou Us ka Experience hee aur hota hy… (All Three nodded while Ashoke again added) Beena ko bhi is Khaber sy Bukhar Nahi aaya.. Usy already Bukhar tha.. Dawa bhi ly rahi thi.. aur is Baby ka Session Us nay Emergency bases pr Meri Request pr kiya tha.. magar Bukhar Barh gaya aur Hum sub ko laga ky is Khaber ny Usy Takleef pohanchai hy.. halanky aisi koi Baat Nahi… warna bhala Us ka Bhai Application Kyun Submit karwata… (little rash tone) aur Tum Apni Baat tou karo hee Nahi.. abhi bhi Dekho.. Jo Dawa dii thi.. Khai kya Aik bhi Din (Abhijeet Quiets) (Ashoke added) Phir…
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Here Unexpectedly Beena appeared and after seeing Cops at Corridor with Ashoke, coming towards them after Telling Something to Staff.. After reaching, She asked…
Beena (confuse): kya hua, Aap Log yahan Jama hain…?
Ashoke Updated Him about Daya and Rehan Accident and the Background of that Accident while Staff approached Her and giving Her Something although She said seeing Oldie Duo as…
Beena: hmm, kafi Bura hua.. khair… (to ACP Connected conversation by showing some Drawings to Him as) Sir, Aap ny kaha tha ky Baby sy Drawings ky through, Us kay Dady ki Shakel ya Ghar ki ya kuch ki bhi Banwa dun.. magar… (sweet tone) Dekhye (All seeing Neat Drawings of Rehan, Misha, a Small Cycle in Green Color, Green Lightening Gun, a Small shoes in Green shades, a Green Rabbit spreads Smiles on All Lips, a Small Flower in Green color Glass, Green Aero-plane given to Him by Daya)(Beena added) Aap log samjh rahy hain na In Cheezun ka matlab…
Abhijeet (with love): haan, ye Khushyaan hain, Khawahishein, Pasand…
Beena: bilkul Theek.. Wo Un Cheezun, Logun ko Yaad hee Nahi karna chahta… Dekhye in mein kahein koi Ghar Nahi hay…
ACP: hmm, (seeing them again with) koi Purani Yaad Nahi… (Sure tone) Abhijeet Saheh keh rahatha.. Mushkil sy hee Humaray sawalun ka Jawab mily ga…
Beena: Jee…
Abhijeet (whispering tone still seeing Drawings sheets as): ya shayed Na hee mily…
Salunkhy: wesy, Beena Beta.. ohhh.. (apology tone) Sorry.. matlab Dr. Beena…
Beena (interrupts with): Sir, Beena Beta Zyada Acha hy…
Ashoke (in tease): haan Sir, sub ko BB boly gi.. Log samjhein gy ye bhi BIG B ki Relative hy…
All Smiling while Beena Embarrass as Ashoke Personally made Moment Light either Salunkhy again asked…
Salunkhy: haan tou Beena Beta.. ye Baby jo hy.. ye kisi Staff ya kisi sy Comfortable hy..?
Beena: Nahi Sir.. Dekhyey abhi tak Wo kisi ki Goud mein Nahi aaya… koi Usy Touch kary tou Jerk krta ya Peechy hat jata hy.. is mein Zaruri Nahi kay koi Aadmi ho.. Aurat bhi… Hum nay Staff mein bhi Ek Khasi Bari Umer ki Aaya ko Us kay Cloths change krny, ya Nehlany ya Sponging ya Feeding kay liye rakkha hy kyunky Wo Un ko Dekh kr Dara Nahi… (softly) hr Cheez Families ko Nahi bataii jati.. Hum Khud Bacchy ki Psyche Dekh kr Treatment mein Shuffling krty hain… (with smile) aur ab kahein ja kr wo Mujh sy Hath Milata hy.. Sir ye Greet krna, Thora Smile.. ye sub Wo seekh raha hy.. (sadly) Sir hy bhi tou 3 ya sawa 3 saal ka… abhi Na Usy Rishtun ki samjh hy Na Lams (touch) ki.. Jo Shaks Usy Hurt Nahi krta.. wo Usy Achy sy Mily ga.. jesy Aap Logun ny Dekha hoga ky ab Wo kisi sy Nahi Darta.. kyunky Aap Logun kay Lams/Lehjy/Lafzun mein Usy Khauf ya Dard kay bajayey Muhabbat mili… (with smile) isi tarah Freddie Sie sy.. kyunky Frreddie Sir nay Us ki Pehli Mulaqat mein jis tarah Us Ice Cream shop pr Usy Handle kiya, Easily table aarange ki, Help Out kiya.. Ye usy Buht Bhaya.. is liye Wo Freddie Sir sy Cheez ly kr Khata hy… Un sy Attachment bhi hy.. pr Limit tak…
Abhijeet: hmm.. Theek hy.. (seeing Drawings with) Aap Insists Mut karein.. wesy Anything Else…
Beena: baaqi ye kay Baccha Acha Respond kr raha hy.. Recover bhi.. Wo Jaldi Is Khauff sy Bahar aa jaye ga…
All (sure): Zarur…
Abhijeet: BTW, , kya Main ye Drawings rakh skta hun… (Beena Confused) (Abhijeet added) Main Aap ko kuch Der mein Lauta dun ga…
Beena nodded and Left the Place with Greet while now Rajeev approached after taking His Round and told All…
Rajeev (to Abhijeet): Abhijeet, chalo Daya ko kuch Der mein Hosh aa jaye ga…
Abhijeet (moving out with): aur Rahul…?
Rajeev: haan, Rajat log aa rahy hain.. abhi Freddie ny Vivek ko Call ki thi…
Salunkhy (to Rajeev): Tumhein Humein Daya ky Stitches ka Batana tha Rajeev…
Rajeev: Sir, Mujhy Andaza Nahi tha (casual) khair just 3 Stitches theen aur wo bhi Deep Down Zakham Nahi aaya tou Daya nay bhi Mana kr diya tha…
ACP (with sigh): khair, jo hona hy.. wo tou ho gaya…. (to Abhijeet) jao, Daya ko dekho…
Abhijeet (moving with Tell Rajeev): Rajeev, Rahul ko Dekh lena.. wesy Rajat hy magar wo shayed Theek Nahi ho…
Rajeev nodded and now Abhijeet Entering inside Daya room and takes His Same Position where His Bear Head still Rested on His Loving shell and Enjoying His Soft Fingers Gentle Pores Massage…
Rajat and Freddie coming with Rahul, Looking Lost and Quiets… Rajeev approached Him and without any minute Loss, Hugged Him Tightly and takes Him with Rajat to His cabin while Freddie joint Vivek…
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Daya coming in Conscious state feeling Himself Secured inside His Shield so Trying to Cozily invaded His Head inside His Loving Cover More which Opened Abhijeet Eyes, who Look at Daya and His Soft Struggling so Smiles, and Whisper…
Abhijeet: Uth gaye…
Daya (look upword and ask in Weak tone): Rehan…
Abhijeet (pat on His Head Softly with): Wo Theek hy…
Daya (nodded and again Closing His Eyes by Saying as in Lost tone): Boss, Wo.. (broken tone) B.. Ba… Baby…
Abhijeet really Inhale a Painful Breath but except Rubbing Daya Head, He did not do anything as feeling the Silent Salty Drops Wetting His Shirt or Heart…
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Here Rahul really in Angry shade, still He can't Believe on that so started Expelling His Anger with…
Rahul: Rajeev, Befiker reh… (rash) Apny Area ko bhi Main Khangalta hun.. Dekhna Chorna tou hy Nahi Us ko…
Rajat: haan Rahul.. already Main nay Hr Informer ko Alert kr diya hy…
Rajeev: arry magar Dhoond kisy rahy ho… (telling) Baby nay Us ka Bataya tou Nahi hy na…
Rahul: Dekho Rajeev.. Baccha 3 saal ya thora ooper ki Age ka hy.. zahir hay Bus ya Auto mein Beth kr tou aaya Nahi hoga.. (to Rajat) Rajat Us Area ko Chaan maar…
Rajat: already Done Rahul.. magar ho skta hay Us ka Wo (rash) Ghatya Baap Usy Wahan Chor kr Bhag gaya ho…
This is the Point Rahul Quiets and Rajeev Looking at Rajat as it has Something Fishy… now its looking Possible but Rajeev added…
Rajeev: Tum Log Us Baby ko wahan Us Area mein ly kr Kyun Nahi jaty.. shayed kisi Ghar ko Dekh kr Wo kuch Boly ya React karay…?
Rajat: haan, ye ho skta hy… pr Rajeev..?
Rajeev: haan haan, Beena sy Baat kr ky ly jana…
Rahul: magar Rajeev, in Logun (signaling Rajat with) ny Us Area ko Check kiya na, Kisi Ghar sy kisi Baby kay Ghayeb hony ki News Nahi mili ya Police Station sy tou…
Voice: aur agar kisi ko Pata hee Na ho ky is Ghar mein koi Baby hy tou aur Na Baby ko Apny Ghar ka Pata ho cz agar Wo kabhi Ghar sy Bahar hee Nahi aaya ho tou…?
Ashoke entering and all Heads moved towards Him after seeing Him with Rest Cops and now wanted to Left Hospital so just coming here to Meet Rahul and say Good Bye to Him.. ACP who already rose that query added …
ACP (again added): haan, tou phir Rahul (look at Rajat and again) haan Rajat…?
Both Quiets while now ACP asking to Rajeev about Rehan who told that He would be Stayed for Night just in Observation so Now leaving cabin and Hospital with…
ACP (to Rahul and Rajat): Sochna…
Now all moved out while Both Look at each one and sat with THUD as ACP Sir was Correct to Some extent…
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Abhijeet now coming in Charge after feeling Daya still in Sad and Crying session so Picking those Neat Drawings from side table and Spreading them over Daya and His lap who look at them and ask…
Abhijeet: kya, Tum chaho gy kay ye Khushyaan Maan'd (Pheeki) par jayein… ain… (Daya nodded either Softly spreading His Right Palm Fingers Gently on them while His Half Soul added) Daya, ek Wo Ek Munna sa Pauda hy… abhi Jar Pakri Nahi hy Us ny Zameen pr… tou kya Behatar Nahi hoga ky Hum Usy Us Kharab Zameen sy Nikal kr kisi Achi, Naram, Khushboo bharii Zameen mein Lagayein.. hmmm (again Soft nodded coming on His way so added again) Us sy Hansii ki, Khushi ki, Rishtun ki Konpalein Phootein… hain na… (little Bear again nodded so Big Bear started as) phir Hum Kyun Usy aur Khud ko Un Dard sy Dukhi karein.. jin ko na Wo Yaad krna chahta hy aur na Hum yaad Dilany ko Tayyar hain… Tum Nahi krty na (his head still nodded in NO, Abhijeet adds) phir Usy kyun… (Softly arranging all Neat Drawing Sheets with) Dr. Beena keh rahi theen ab tou Baby Buht Khush rehny laga hy.. Darta bhi Nahi… thora Bolta bhi hy (cutely) Mery Dodo jesa…
A Small but Sweet Glimpse of Smile He got from His Little Bear so just patting His Head wo Closed His Eyes again and moved in a Dreamy world where He also dunt want to See His Dark Past…
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Next Morning, Rehan coming in Conscious state and found Small Baby and Misha in His Room with His Maa Jee…
Doctors Satisfied All and after seeing Him Safe, His Maa Jee also Relaxed while now Abhijeet coming and Rehan Enthusiastically told …
Rehan: Jeet Bhaiyya, Dekhyey Chota Baby aaya hy Mujh sy Milny…
Abhijeet Smiles while Feels that the Small Baby look at His behind Keenly.. it's a Very Small Look but He did either His Face showed Sorrow Texture too…
Abhijeet Amazed that might be Baby Searching Daya behind Him after His Weird Attempt which makes Him Sad and Ashamed too…
Staff coming and takes Baby as its time for His Meals and Medicine while Maa Jee and Misha went with Vivek to Canteen for taking Lunch on Abhijeet Insists, who asked with Rehan as…
Abhijeet: Rehan, kya Wo Baby, Yaadi Bhaiyya ka Poochta hy..?
Rehan (sat now placed his Head on Abhijeet Arm and say in Apology tone): Jeet Bhaiyya Aap Us Baby sy Gussa tou Nahi hain na…
Abhijeet (wrapped him with): Nahi Baccha…
Rehan: haan, wo na (sadly) Buht Dar gaya tha…. Main Yaadi Bhaiyya sy kahun ga Wo Us sy Milein…
Abhijeet (excited tone): kuch Poocha tha kya Us nay..?
Rehan: haan, kehny laga Wo PLANE WALY UNCLE ka hain… (telling) wo Theek sy Nahi bolta na, tou matlab tha Kahan hain…
Abhijeet (with smiles): Jee, Theek hy Beta… Mujhy pata hy.. (sweetly) aur abhi tou Wo kitna Chota bhi tou hy…
Rehan: aur kya, Mujh sy Poory (counting on His Finger Pores and added) haan, 5 saal Chota hy…
Abhijeet: wah bhae, phir tou Aap Us kay Baray Bhai huay na…
Rehan (excited): awww, jesy Aap Yaadi Bhaiyya kay hain…
Abhijeet (with love): haan, Mera Gudda…
Rehan smiles inside His Loving Hug while Abhijeet Smiles thinking it's a New Beginning of Bond with Small Baby and Daya, Hope Swinging in Full Blossom in Future…
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Now Three Doctors discussing to Discharge Small Baby as there is No Point to Stay Him at Hospital but where He was Living as still He was Not Comfortable with Anyone whom takes His Responsibility so They Discussing it with Beena who Suggested as…
Beena: Baccha, dheery dheery sub sy Set tou ho raha hy, magar utna Nahi kay Hum aisa koi Decision lein…
Rajeev: haan, (irritative tone) magar Yaar, Hospital mein itna rehny sy Us pr Mentally Bad Impression par skta hy…
Beena: haan, aur Mera khayal hay abhi is waqt Wo agar Social Stream mein aa gaya tou Buht Acha hoga… Us ki Schooling start ho jaye.. Frnds banny lagein…
Rajeev (Softly): Leny ko tou Main ly jaon Usy.. magar…
Ashoke: khair, Jaldi Mut karo… itna kiya hay.. kahein Bacchy ka Brain Stressed Na ho jaye.. give Him some time… Theek…
Both Doctors nodded as the Discussion only Restrained till Beena cabin and now all moving on Waiting state…
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Daya was coming on Regular mode Slowly and Lazily but from the Next day although He met with Rehan too, Rajeev still Advising Him as…
Rajeev: Dekho, thora Dihan rakhna Apna.. Truck ka Bumper Quillas kay Front Mudguard pr lagny sy Tumhari bhi Backbone ko Jerk laga hy tou thora Uthny, Bethny aur Jhukny mein Care krna.. aur haan, ye Pain Killer (writing Prescription with) likh raha hun, ly kr (tease) Ihsan kr dena Mujh pr (Daya made face, Rajeev adds)… khair abhi Abhijeet aata hy tou Chaly jana…
Daya (lazily): acha.. phir Main Garden mein Bethta hun (looking outside from window as) mausam bhi Acha ho raha hy…
Rajeev (seeing Weather with): haan, bearish ki Prediction hy… chalo, (Daya standing so heard) Rehan ko bhi Lety huay jana, Us kay Dr nay bhi Usy Release kr diya hy…
Daya nodded and after taking Prescription moved to Garden, sat there without any Specific Thought till Abhijeet Not Back after Meeting with His Informer and takes Him to Residence…
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Rehan and Small Baby Playing in Small Baby room and suddenly after throwing a Look over Windowpane, Rehan shout….
Rehan (shout happily): Baarish….
Small Baby look over Windowpane but can get that Happy Shout Meaning as Rehan rushed out from room and then coming back and Excitability said…
Rehan: Aao, Choty Baby…
Small Baby followed Him while Rehan Dashed in Speed with Abhijeet and Freddie who just coming inside, Abhijeet grabbed Rehan with…
Abhijeet: aaram sy Rehan…
Rehan moved ahead with Big Smile while Small Baby too either in Confusion and after them Abhijeet and Freddie as Freddie got a Glimpse of Daya at Garden Bench… Both moved in Talking whether Freddie got a Call so turn back aside to Entertained it while Abhijeet Moving On…
He saw that Reahn went to Garden after crossing Stairs while Small Baby after Crossing 2 Stairs as He is taking much time in Crossing Stairs Stopped with Widens Eyes…
Daya looking Rehan as His YAADI BHAIYYA Call still Echoing at garden Surrounds who stand Up and grabbing His Arm who was Showering in Rain with…
Rehan (unlocking His Arm from Daya Grip with): Yaadi Bhaiyya, Mujhy Pakrein….
He started Running while Daya behind Him, Both under Rain with Chuckling and Laughing while Small Baby was in Confusion, Rehan coming towards Him during Running with Shout…
Rehan: aao Choty Baby, (excited) jaldi… Baarish Khatam ho jaye gi…
Small Baby still standing on Same place although now His Mouth little Open.. Abhijeet Softly and Slowly Moving and Murmuring Loudly after sitting on Same Stair little Far as…
Abhijeet: ahan, Chalo Beth jaty hain… itni Achi Baarish hy…
He looks that Small Baby also sat on Stair after seeing Him Sitting and Enjoying Rain… Rehan again said to Small Baby as…
Rehan: aao na Choty Baby.. (happily) Dekho kitna Maza aa raha hy…
Abhijeet feels that Small Baby wanted to Go and Play with Rehan but somehow He was Scaring with Rain..
Might be its His First Experience so Abhijeet Quietly after some time Standing although taking out His Cell and started Talking and Crossing Stairs as…
Abhijeet (talking on fake Call): arry haan, itni Baarish ho rahi hay… (extending His arm and Rain drops falling on His Palm with) Maza aa raha hy Yaar…
He showed Himself totally Involved in Call while now seeing that Small Baby after Standing, crossing Steps and with Little Hesitation, extend His Arm towards Outside, then back it, Looking Silently over Abhijeet still Engaging in Call with same Extending Arm as now He was Playing with water Drops, again Slowly Extending His Arm and open His Palm like Abhijeet and Rain drops falling on His Small Palm Exploring a Great Experience for Him as coming a Big Smile on His Lips, His Small Eyes having Big Eye lashes started Twinkling while His Excitement at Peak which Mesmerizing Abhijeet and Suddenly Rehan Pulls Him and started Tickling Burst Laughs of Baby and now Rehan said…
Rehan (to Daya, who stopped after seeing this as): Yaadi Bhaiyya, ab Chota Baby bhi Humary sath Khail raha hy, Aap Usy bhi Pakrein…
Daya nodded and behind Both and grabbed Rehan who turned Catcher this time and catch the Small Baby Running here and there Looking like a Hopping Cute Small Plant who turned Catcher now and grabbed Daya…
Abhijeet really Smiles as He feels His Little Bear Childish Effort to come in contact of Small Baby Intentionally so He Catches Him either just Touch Him Not completely Clutch His Leg, Arm or Cloths but its Enough for His Quiet Dodo Big Happiness…
Now Abhijeet feels that all Three specially Small Baby started Shivering so Wrapped that Session by Ordering…
Abhijeet (calling all Three with): Chalo Chalo… Buht Naha liya aur Khail bhi liya…
All One by One moving Upward and changing their Outfits, Occupied Small Baby room..
Rehan sat on Small Baby Bed while Freddie coming with Pakora and Hot Soup for Smalls and Tea for Bigger s ..
Small Baby coming out and after seeing Freddie giving Bites to Rehan, trying to Hopping on His Bed but cant Handle, Abhijeet trying to Clutch but Reject His Idea and then Dragging the Stool with His Foot towards His Bed side, Hopping over it and then again Hop back to Floor…
Small Baby look it and then Repeated Same and now He was also over Bed, trying to Eat Pakora but after seeing Rehan Opened His Mouth Every-time when Freddie giving Him Bites, He also Opened His Mouth this time when Freddie giving Bites to Rehan, now Feeding Him too gives Smiles to All while after Feeding Both Kids Soup, Small Baby Tired and Sleeps while Rehan moved with Duo as He was also feeling Tired and Dull…..
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Next Morning, CID Team and Both Dr at Small Baby room with Misha too, ACP Sir Inoculate Rehan as…
ACP: bhae Rehan, Aap nay tou Humein Apny New Friend sy milwaya hee Nahi…
Rehan (to Small Baby): arry haan, Choty Baby, (signaling ACP Sir as) ye ACP Uncle hain (now to Salunkhy Sir with) aur ye Baray Doctor Uncle…
Small Baby nodded His Head after looking Smiley Faces against Him, while ACP Sir asked to Rehan as…
ACP (to Rehan, looking keenly at Small Baby with): acha bhae, Aap nay Humara tou Bata diya… pr Humein tou Pata hee Nahi, Aap ky New Friend ka Naam kya hay..?
Misha (cutely): Chota Baby… ACP Uncle…
Abhijeet: lo bhae, ye kya Baat hui… ab Mujhy pata hy Aap ka Naam MISHA hy, pr koi Buht Chota sa Aap ko SHASHA bhi tou Bolta hy…
Small Baby Mouth Opened and Eyes Widen either He Look at Abhijeet in Shock as when Beena gave those Drawing sheets to Abhijeet saying after showing Him Misha Sketch that When Baby made Misha Sketch and She asked about Whom Is She.. He Replied as SHASHA…. Abhijeet again…
Abhijeet: aur jesy (to Rehan) Aap ka Naam Rehan hy.. pr koi Aap ko (Baby instantly Hiding His Eyes spread a Sweet Smiles on Abhijeet Lips wo added again as) AANI bolta hay aur (looking at Daya with) Daya bhi tou Aap ko Haani bolta hy na…
Rehan (naughtingly): aur Main Aap ko Jeet Bhaiyya…
Misha (sweetly): aur Main Baray waly Uncle…
ACP: Bilkul, tou aisa Naam tou sub ka hota hy… pr Asli Naam tou kuch aur hota hy na.. jesy Mera Pradyuman,…
Salunkhy: aur Mera (with smile) Salunkhy…
Abhijeet: aur Main, Abhijeet…
Daya (with His Soothing smile): aur Mera tou Chota sa… Daya…
Rajat: aur Main hun Rajat…
Sachin: Main Sachin…
Vivek: aur Main Vivek…
Nikhil: Nikhil…
Rajeev: aur Main hun Rajeev…
Ashoke: aur Main Ashoke…
Voice (suddenly appeared as): Paap…
Abijeet (confuse): kya…?
Small Baby thought His Whispery Voice can't get by these Elders so now little Loud with Little Excitement too as…
Small Baby (little Excitement): Meaa Paap…
For a moment a Complete Silence as All Elders felt that their Soul Depart from their Bodies and be back inside Body Wrapper when Misha said Confusingly…
Misha (disappointingly as): ye kya Naam hua…?
Small Baby nodded His Head Telling Assurance about This as His NAME while ACP Sir Touch His Index Finger on Baby Palm Softly after seeing His Officers in Huge Pain and say after Composing Himself…
ACP: hmm, acha Hum Log tou New Friend hain na Aap kay (Small Baby nodded without Understanding) (ACP added) tou Aap ka Naam bhi New hona chahyey…
Salunkhy (pressed Abhijeet Shoulder which bring Him back in Scene with): haan, Bilkul.. koi Pyara sa…
Misha: haan, (thinking) jesy….
A Voice coming from Door when a Left Step was just about inside, having tons of Tears but a Firmness Sparked as…
Voice: Daniel… (another step entered and now) Daniel Fredric…
Nothing but a Brilliant Statement Engulfed the Situation in Complete Happiness where Rajat started Clapping and Rehan adds…
Rehan (thinking with): Mushkil hy…
Sachin (casual): kya Mushkil..
Rajeev: aur kya.. (make it easier as) Aap DANY kehna…
Misha: haan, (repeat) Dany.. (giving assurance) ye Achy hay… (to Baby) kyun Choty Baby…
As expected, His Head again nodded in Speed in Positive really brings Big Smiles on All Lips while Daya instantly stand and Hugged that Man who Pressed an ENTER button to LOG IN this Baby INSIDE the WORLD by giving Him ID and PASSWORD…