You guys are awesome! Last night was the most reviews that I have ever gotten and I thank you. This chapter is short, not much happens but its lemony. This was my second attempt at lemons. Tell me if it sucked so I wont attempt again lol. Ill change the rating and everything jk, just tell me what I can do better.
This should be a good reading experience, not a bunch of boring no good lines of bullshit that I just pull out of my ass for fun. I hate when my time is wasted. I'd hate to waste yours.
So lemons...I wanted this story to take me out of my comfort zone, and so far its succeeding. I attempted lemons, wow I can't believe it.
Since this is going to be a long story lets make a deal. Ten reviews a chapter will produce four updates a week. I think its fair. I just want to read your thoughts. They have been very helpful.
Renee may or may not make an appearance, I haven't gotten that far yet. Jake will be in a lot of the upcoming chapters if everything goes well.
If you haven't noticed EXB JXT JXA EXR are all early twenties, so they are young and playful. Alot of this happened in my actual life I think thats why its so easy to write. Much easier to write from Bellas Pov because I know what was going through my thick skull. Can't you tell that Bella is just as scattered brained and unemotionally attached as I am?
...Who did you think was at the door?...
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Disclaimer: These characters belong to Stephanie Meyers :)
Bella Pov
"Bella?", I hear Edward call. I was half way up the stairs, with Rose staring down at me like I have lost my mind.
"Edward?", I say bounding back down the stairs and rounding the corner.
I see Emmett drop Edward on the couch. "That fucker is heavy", Edward lays there holding his stomach. "He's really drunk Bella", I nod in understanding not looking up at him. "You two really need to talk, but I don't suggest you do it tonight", He looks over at Edward as I look up.
I walk over and kneel in front of Edward, I reach out to touch the side of his face. "Why would you do this to yourself?", Moving away some of the hair that fell and stuck to his forehead.
I lean down and kiss his forehead. He groans my name again. "How much did he drink", Rose asks, we both look to Emmett scratching the back of his head.
"Peter said he lost count when he switched to shots", Emmett says. Rose drops her forehead into her hand.
"I have told him again and again what to do when Edward reaches his limit", Rose says quietly shaking her head.
"What's he going to do? Tell his boss no. I doubt that", Emmett argues.
"No but-", Rose starts but I interrupt.
"-So Edward does this often", I ask trying to process everything. "Get piss drunk", Emmett takes a step towards me.
"Only when he's really down, and I promise you Bells, it's not like when we were younger, getting piss drunk for fun. No this is different, he is really going through. You two really need to talk", I hear Edward mumble something so I look back.
His eyes are closed and he's mumbling to himself with a smile on his face. "Talk about what", I ask Emmett, still looking down at Edward.
"It's not my place to say", Emmett replies. Edward opens his eyes and tries to sit up.
"Help me, Em. I want to get him upstairs.", Emmett nods, and comes over to Edward as we try to force Edwards arms over our shoulders and lift him.
Half way up the stairs Edward opens his eyes and looks over at me grinning. "Fucking beautiful", He mumbles. I smile at him. "Fucking beautiful Bella. Bella the fucking beautifullest", He laughs and it causes me to laugh.
Emmett kicks Edwards bedroom door open and we walk in, placing Edward in the bed. "Okay, loverboy", Emmett says with a salute. Edward rolls on to his side. Emmett turns to me. "Go easy on him Bella.", I nod with pursed lips. What could Edward possibly have to say to me?
"It would be a lot easier if you would just tell me", I say to Emmett trying to get him to tell me something.
"Not my place", He said as he backed out of the room, hands up.
"Just a hint", I squint my eyes. Give me something. He sighs.
"I promised Bells.", I looks down sighing. "I already fucked up once tonight", He mumbles. I start to ask what he meant by that when Rose appears at the door.
"All set", She asks. I nod. "See you Monday.",she waves. "Don't let him leave here 7 in the morning if he doesn't look up to it", I nod.
"Goodnight guys. Can you lock up", I ask as they walk down the stairs.
"Will do", Emmett shouts back.
I turn my attention back to my sleeping bestfriend, guy friend, boyfriend? Is that what he said? I have never been a big fan of titles in relationships. It's like as soon as we put a name to it, everything fucks up. I rub my forehead.
I have got to stop overthinking everything and try to organize my thoughts.
"Keep em comin' Pete", Edward says with a drunk induced laugh. I roll my eyes.
Reaching for his feet I say. "Pete's not here Edward", I take his shoes off. I look up in time to see his eyebrows furrowed.
"Bella? Where are you", He asks.
Rolling my eyes again. "Down here you goof", I say from between his legs.
He looks down and his eyes widen. "Well hello down there", He grins, and I laugh, swatting his leg.
"Can you get up now?", I ask him, climbing slightly up the bed. He nods, and sits up. "Why'd you do this to yourself Edward? Emmett half carried you in? I think he hit your head on the door a few times too", He rubs his head.
"Yea, I'm pretty sure that he did", He takes the palms of each hand and rub them over his eyes. "I'm sorry, B. For ruining dinner", I nod glancing down his body. "I am so fucked up.", He chuckles following back on his pillow.
"Yea", I drag out the word. "You called me 'Bella the fucking beautifullest'", I laugh and he joins in but stops short and makes a face. "You okay", I ask slightly panicking. He jumps up quickly heading for his bathroom, where I hear him empty his stomach. I wince at the sound.
"Fuck", I hear him shout. I walk slowly to the bathroom to see him removing his shirt.
"You need anything?", I ask.
He glances around him before looking up at me. "Yes, water please", I nod and walk down the stairs to the kitchen. I grab him a bottle of water.
When I return he's back on the bed and under the covers, one arm drapped over his eyes.
I walk over to him. "You sober up quickly", He jumps slightly as if I woke him up. "Were you asleep?", I say placing the bottle on his night stand.
"I think so", He replies causing me to smile down at him. He reaches over, grabs the bottle and downs it.
"Is there room in there for me", I ask, and am met with a quick answer, as he forcefully shoves the covers back.
I remove my jeans and climb into the bed, snuggling close to him. "Fuck, you're cold", I shiver. He chuckles next to me.
"We're comparing body temperatures now", He ask through his laugh. "I am going to hate myself in the morning", I nod in the dark even though he can't see me.
"You shouldn't drink without eating", I reprimand him.
"I didn't go there to get drunk Bella. I went there to get away", He replies turning on his stomach with his face towards me.
"Away from me", I ask quietly. He shakes his head no.
"Can we talk in the morning?", He asks quietly leaning up he casually kisses my lips, turning on his back. He tries to pull back from the kiss but I want more. I push forward kissing him back. He tastes of vodka and peanuts, but I could care less, drunk or not I wanted him. He pulls back again, and this time I lean forward kissing him harder, I climb over straddling his waist. I place my hands on his chest, and rock against his manhood. Only my clothes and his boxers standing in the way. I lift my arms taking off my shirt, tossing it to the ground. Then I reach back and unclamp my bra.
He looks at me with the hungriest glazed over eyes imaginable, and it spurs me on. I can feel him thickening beneath me as I rock back and forth. He hisses, and places his hands on my hips moving me at his pace. A deep throatlike sound errupts from Edward and without warning he lifts my by the back of my thighs, kneeling on the bed he turns so that now I'm on my back, and he's hovering over me. He bends down and kisses my lips, our tongues battling for dominance.
He kisses down my body, until he reaches my center. This time he doesn't hesitate, he dives right in. He spreads my pussy with his hand and touches his tongue to my clit, then he swirls his tongue around. I throw my head back and moan at the sensation. God it's been so long.
Edward knows what he's doing, every movement is deliberate and sensual. He devours my pussy like it's his last meal and I love every minute of it. My stomach muscles clench, and I lurch, letting me know that I'm close. I lightly touch his head, he inturn growls into my pussy, pushing my legs further apart. The vibration makes me quiver, and my legs shake, he does it again. It's so sexy and primal. I almost cum from the intense pleasure, but he stops, and leans back looking at his handy work. I reach down for his dick, but he moves my hand away, grabs me by my hips and pulls me down the bed. He then pushes my legs apart, and leans between them placing a kiss onto my lips. He then goes down my body giving my breast proper attention. He squeezes my left breast so hard that I wince slightly but he doesn't stop the movement of his tongue swirling around my right nipple. I arch my back, coming forward into his arms. He grips me up into his arms, and groans with his mouth still firmly attached to my nipple.
I feel his hand trail down to my pussy, he inserts a finger, while his thumb rubs my clit slowly, and fuck it feels amazing. I don't know what to focus on, my body is lit, and blazing from the pleasure. This feels so much better than I could ever imagine.
He stops the movement of his hand, and his mouth, but he grips me by both thighs and squeezes with a deep throaty groan. "Fuck", He mutters. "Your body is so fucking sexy", He squeezes my thighs again. "God I want you so bad", He kisses me quickly.
He leans back on his knees and strokes his dick three times before lining it up with my center, and slowly entering me. "Fuck me you are tight"His words run together. He looks up at the celing as he thrust again just as slow, but not as gentle.
"Mmm", I lick my licks. I feel every inch of him, and it turns me on. I feel myself loosen, and become wetter for him. I reach down to feel between my legs and rub my clit to relieve pressure. He looks down and growls. He slams into me and moans. "Oh god baby. I needed this." I feel him roll his hips slowly as he squeezes my waist pulling me towards him. He moans again really loud.
Edward starts moving fast, pounding into me, squeezing and gripping onto whatever body parts he can reach, and it feels so good I can feel knots on my stomach. "Fuck me, oh god yes", I moan out.
He is slamming into me ferociously and I am hanging on for dear life. God it feels good, I look up into his beautiful face, as he looks down where we are joined. He must feel my eyes on him, his eyes snap to my face.
"Baby you are so beautiful", He says to me leaning down to kiss me, as he slows his thrust, but continues rolling his hips. He leans back and closes his eyes, his head is back as he murmurs.
He pushes my legs together and slams into me and I feel the familiar knot in my stomach. I am about to explode. "So good, oh my god", I arch my back. He looks into my eyes and it turns me on, I push back hard against him.
Come for me baby" He pants out and he pulls me hard against his chest til we are practically sitting face to face, he continues to thrust. I throw my head back. It's too much.
"Ahh", I moan. His hands find my waist and he pushes down hard, as he thrusts upward. "Oh god",I yell with closed eyes ass the feeling over takes me and I cum harder than I ever have before, I shudder in delight.
He grips my hips tightly and grunts and with two more hard thrust, I watch his eyes roll back and he moans loudly yelling my name. I can feel him unloading in me and it feels amazing. I kiss his open mouth, then reach up to kiss his closed eyelids.
He sits back on his knees and lays me back on the bed, laying next to me he curls my body up next to his. "Fuck, you are amazing baby", He says to me. "I have never wanted anything as much as I want you, and now that I've had you I don't think I'll ever get enough of you", I reach up to kiss him. He groans.
"What", I ask looking around. "Whats wrong?", He looks down and I follow his eyes to his hardened dick, thick with pulsating veins as if he hadn't just cum thirty seconds ago. I roll my eyes.
"I told you I'll never get enough",I roll my eyes and lean up to kiss him again. "I love you", He says looking deep into my eyes. My face breaks into a smile.
"Not as much as I love you", I shake my head. He raises an eyebrow.
"How did you come to that conclusion?", He asks grinning and I giggle.
"I just know", He pulls me closer.
"There's no way to know that", He mutters. "I love you with my whole heart. How can you possibly love me more"
Instead of answering his question I lean up to kiss him. "I heard an interesting story about my imperfect nose", I raise an eyebrow and he laughs.
"I don't know what you're talking about", He chuckles. "I love your nose. I love everything about you", He tickles my side.
"I gathered", I say between my laughs. I yawned.
"Go to sleep B", He says as he yawns.
"You go to sleep", I poke his side.
"How about we both take our corny asses to bed. I swear we are too old for this shit", I laugh.
"Goodnight B", He says as he leans over and kisses the side of my face.
"Kiss me again", I say before he can move, he kisses my forehead.
"Goodnight.", He mumbles.
"One more", I ask.
He looks me deep in my eyes. "One more sweet heart, then you take your pretty little ass to sleep okay", I nod. He kisses my lips, pulls away but brings me closer.
"Goodnight", I whisper, closing my eyes and falling asleep with a smile on my face.
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