Okay I don't like the direction Freedom is going in so I'm redoing my ASL/ Whitebeard Fanfic over. It'll be different from freedom Luffy will be a boy but he's still a little smarter than in Canon and he knows who is father is. He can sympathize more with Ace. They'll all have their cannon devil fruit except Sabo I'll have to give him something else if any of you have any suggestions let me know.
I didn't like the fact that in Freedom the three were powerful yet weak at the same time it didn't make sense so this time I'll make them grow stronger gradually like in Canon. Their will be a surprise that's different from Canon but it'll be interesting.
It'll still have a lot of hurt/comfort family moments. With Shanks and the Whitebeards hell even Dragon. Ohe they'll grow up to be so BAD ASS wait am I allowed to say that...A**? whatever this stary is rated M anyways...
I've already finished chapter one but as you all no I always have mistakes so I REALLLLLYYYY NEEEEEED A BETA READER! see I can't even spell really and need properly . ;P. Anyway I've tried pm'ing beta readers but I haven't gotten a response and I'm not posting until I get it checked over I also need advice on the pairings I don't care if their straight of yaoi but I can't do yuri sorry I have nothing against it I just would be comfortable.
Here is my thought process ***= favs
straight:
AceX?
Sabo X Kaola ***
Luffy X Nami ***
Yaoi:
AceXLuffy
AceX Sabo ***
LuffyXLaw ***
LuffyXZoro
It doesn't matter it's not like I'll be focusing on the romance anyway I just like it to be there you know.
What else should I tell you...
Well PM if you're interested in betaing
if you beta you get sneak peaks come on please answer my plea I really want to update this story! Before I lose interest...I probably won't lose interest cause who doesn't Love ASL right...I'll shut up now
NEED HELP! bye