OMG! Guys I've been gone ages! I'm so, so sorry. I know it's not really an excuse but I've got a windows surface and my friend accidently broke the keypad on it. It really doesn't help that I don't like typing on it whilst it's in tablet mode. Even now I'm typing on a temporary keypad that plugs into it. Yes plugs. I must say I don't like it that much but oh well.
I couldn't help but to notice how random my updates are becoming. I might not be sticking it once a week. You might end up with two one week and none the next. You'll just need to deal with. (Sorry that sounded mean!)
Guess where I went the other day? Thorpe Park. Had a great time with my mates though it's a shame they had to close saw. Off topic sorry.
Anyywayysss onto ze reviews.
Soildercrafter1
Whoa ummmm a few things.
First and foremost, I am trying to remember what I was going to PM you. BUT when I finally got the notification of the new story I was almost asleep, so I read it and put that, hoping I would remember to do so in the morning. But when it was finally morning I forgot and asked "what's for breakfast?" XD
Secondly, so my vote for Hestia doesn't count :(
XD
Finally, wow what a chapter, not sure if you'll have to bump up your rating to T though so...
yeah
well thanks for reading my comment :D
p.s. I bet you are really good a poetry x
Heyy my number 1 reviewer haw ya doing?
Anyway don't worry about what you were going to PM me because we all forget stuff. And yeah sorry about that it's easier to keep track of a poll.
Do ya think so? I'm not sure how these ratings work so if you think so let me know! No worries I read all my comments!
And yes, yes I am if I do say so myself. *Puts on sunglasses.*
Djberneman
I choose Hemera. Also, will u show how Percy raises the hundred handed one?
Yass she's getting quite a few votes now! And yes I will the time different things are based is going to jump around abit though so it won't be focused on just them.
Blackjack9
The story has been going great so far, I liked the style of the other chapters a bit better but this was still good. Vote: I usually don't pick these pairings but with how the story has been going I vote for Percy Reyna or Percy Selene (moon goddess before Artemis).
Thank you! And I'm going to be sticking to the previous style of chapters. I just read something written in this type of style and I was like 'hey why not give it a try.
Thanks for your vote!
Wade98
Ouch, I actually feel bad for Kronos.
Yah I see all the stories that make Kronos an instant bad guy for no reason and I was like 'what if I gradually show him losing his mind?' I honestly think there's a reason for Kronos becoming evil.
TheFallenAce
Great story! Honestly didn't like the new chappie, bit that's just me. Great, original idea! Update fast!
Thank you for the compliment and your honesty. I just wanted to see what people thought of that style of writing. I UPDATED! XD
.908
So ya I have no clue where the poll is so I vote for Thalia or hear. I kinda got confused this chapter.
Okay so for the poll, you go to my profile, it should say POLL at the top, choose who you want and then submit it and BOOM you've voted! Oh and sorry for confusing you.
SamTheKingOfHell
That was moderately creepy to read and I like it. I need more and I thought you said Hestia was a no go pairing? Well if that's allowed then Hestia (Percy x Hestia) if not Hemera still
It was a no-go pairing but so many people were voting for it, I couldn't really say no. and thanks!
RANDOM GUEST
HEYOOOO SO OF COURSE IVE READ THIS STORY TILL THIS THIS CHAPTER AND I WILL KEEP READING IT BUT I HONESTLY THINK YOU SHOULD
WRITE IT IN THE STYLE YOU HAVE BEEN IN THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS. ONE THING YOU SHOULD KNOW, I ALWAYS WRITE IN CAPS LOCK BECAUSE I LIKE TO
WOW YOU LIKE TO DO THIS AND CAN SEE WHY YOU LIKE DOING THIS IT'S ACTUALLY PPRETTY FUN BUTALL I CAN DO IS PICTURE YOU SHOUTING! AND THANK YOU I'M GOING TO STICK TO THAT STYLE I JUST WANTED TO TRY THAT ONE OUT! Wow that was a lot of shouting...
*takes deep breath* okay so there's the reviews, and now the poll.
Hemera - 8
Rachael - 2
Reyna - 5
Nico - 1
Bianca - 4
Hestia - 10
Annabeth - 0
Other - 1
Dam it, it's too hot in the UK today. I think that's everything right? I think so.
So after a long deserving wait…
…the chapter.
Yours,
~Jess
Chapter Seven: Old Friends.
Day After Incident.
He didn't know it yet but a string had just been replaced.
The wail of a baby pierces the air. Birds scatter from the sudden sound. A man paced backwards and forwards, eyebrows creased in concentration, attempting to sooth the bundle in his arms. No luck.
"Come on Hemera, give me something to kill. I'm fine. Give me a kid. What on Gaea am I meant to do?"
He continued to mumble things to himself, pacing backwards and forwards. Yet he failed to notice how the day grew a little bit brighter outside, that the clouds seemingly rolled away, the sun shining more than before.
No. He missed the ripple. A ripple in which appeared out of thin air. Starting off small and growing bigger. Making reality look like water, almost as if it was surrounding the room, submerging it. The man noticed.
A lopsided grin spread on his face as the air seemed to take a shape, ripples slowing, light filing the room becoming brighter and brighter until…
Pop.
There stood a young woman – about the man's age – with bright blonde, almost white, hair braided over her right shoulder. She wore a knee length golden chiton with sandals. A bright smile lit up her face and pastel blue eyes, not a freckle nor blemish on her perfectly tanned skin.
"Hemera," the man breathed. She was more beautiful than ever.
"Percy," the woman – Hemera – responded. She walked towards him, elegantly, without flaw and reached out. Her hand cupping his face, her thumb stroking the white skin in which the scar travels horizontally down his face. "How?" She asked, worry evident in her voice, unused tears waiting to be used but held captive. The day seemed to grow a little darker around them.
A weak smile tugged at his lips seeing her concern, "It's a long story." He leaned in towards her hand in a weak way of comforting her. The bundle in his arms shifted and let out a yawn.
Percy had almost forgotten about the extra being in the room. He stifled a laugh as the small child reached towards Hemera with wonder on his face, wonder which she returned.
"So you're a dad now?" Her voice was so faint he nearly missed is. She removed her hand from his cheek, a broken hearted look adjourning her features.
Percy stood there a moment starring back at Hemera, morning the loss of warmth from her hand, the warmth his own skin lacked. His blood was de-oxygenized. He had no need for oxygen or any gas at all with a minor domain of space.
He continued to just stand there starring at her before booming out with laughter, a heart-warming laughter.
"Me? A farther? Why the Tartarus would you think that? No, no, no, this is my younger brother!"
Hemera stared at him momentarily, the heart broken look being replaced by one of guilt. She opened her mouth to apologise and was interrupted by Percy,
"How about I go and lay him down and then we'll talk?" Percy turned to walk away but not before Hemera grabbed his arm.
"WAIT!" She yelped. Percy stopped, shocked. Hemera composed herself before speaking again, "hisname?" she muttered, her words merged together. Obviously embarrassed about her previous outburst.
"Pardon?" He responds, missing her previous statement.
"What's his name?"
Percy stared down at the bundle in his arms, at the bright blue eyes of it. He never thought about giving hm a name. It'd been the last of his worries. Yet now staring down at the bundle, he felt cruel for not naming it, everything should have a name, and without one… do you really exist? How can you be there and not be addressed? Does that count as living? No. no it doesn't.
Yet now looking down into the electrifying blue eyes of the bundle he knew the perfect name for it.
"Briares," he whispered. "That's his name, Briares." Percy turned on his heel and walked out the room. "If you want to exchange stories," he called out. "We better get his one to bed.
And just like that he was out of sight leaving a confused Hemera in his wake.
Once again sorry for being gone so long and sorry for the short update! I'll try to update ASAP.
But for now you guys can give me a hand, how did Percy get his scar? And what should the name of his sword be? The one I think is most suitable will have their idea put in the story, until my next update, bye.
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((P.S. ignore the random indents, I cant seem to get rid of them))
