I have come to the realisation that this story is seriously under-edited so I will be going back and replacing chapters with edited versions.
I have also noticed that I have changed from first person to third person in the later chapters and was wondering which you preferred. I will not be changing the earlier chapters but would like to know if you want me to continue in third person or first?
The most recent Christmas chapter is a bit all over the place. i know that Hermione and Remus have a conversation about what their doing over the holidays and they plan to spend it together with the gang at the Potter mansion whilst Charlus and Dorea are out of town but I really wanted to bring up some conflict and parent-iness between Hermione and the Potters that she could stew over for a little while.
I will be editing that chapter to include new information that will make it accurate to what is previously written as well as incorporating this new interaction.
Sorry to stuff you around but I swear it will be a better read this way. Honest.
I will leave you with a small Jily drabble as an apology.
"Now that you're my girlfriend, does that mean I'm not a toerag anymore?" James asked her, an annoying grin on his face. Lily sighed.
"No James. you're still a toerag, just a very pretty one. : She said patting his cheek sympathetically.
She turned to walk away only to see Sirius and Remus leaning against each other, trying and failing to keep in their laughter.