Bring The Day TO The Night(planned rewrite)

by lightangel16

Marceline has given up hope of ever finding love and has grown tired of an eternal life in the dark so she try's to end it all but is stopped by Finn to find a note on her door but the rest of the note scratched out. Could he be confession his feels to her? read to find out.

3. making a choice

Chapter: 3 making a choice

(Finn and Marceline walked to the cave were Marceline's house was located.)

"Finn please go inside and sit on the couch." Marceline said as she unlocked the door.

"Ok." Finn said as he walked in and sat down.

(Marceline floated to the couch and sat down next to Finn.)

"So Marcy what do you need to talk to me about?" Finn asked.

Marceline sighed as she said "we can't ever be together."

"Why?" Finn asked.

"Because I can't walk in the sunlight with you and it wouldn't be fair for you." Marceline said.

"So I can sleep in the day and see you at night." Finn said.

"No Finn you don't understand I am a creature of the night doomed to walk Ooo and be shunned by the sun and cursed to watch all the people I love die while I live a life of endless torment." Marceline said with a hint of sadness in her voice.

"Then make me a vampire like you so you won't have to be so lonely." Finn said.

"Finn if I did that you would no longer see the beauty of the world under the sun's light." Marceline said.

"Marceline I don't need the sun to show the beauty of the world because I'm looking at the most beautiful thing in the world you Marceline." Finn said

(Marceline's face turned bright red as a charry.)

"Do you really mean that Finn?" Marceline asked.

"Yes I do since the first day I met you I felt a strong feeling for you." Finn said.

"I understand Finn but before I turn you are sure this is what you want?" Finn said.

"Yes I'm sure." Finn said.

"Then you can sleep here and tomorrow I will change you." Marceline said.

(Marceline got up and went to her closet upstairs and go a blanket and pillow and came back to Finn and handed him the pillow and blanket.)

(Finn lay down on the couch and covered up.)

"Goodnight Marcy." Finn said.

"Goodnight Finn." Marceline said.

(The next day)

"Finn it's time wake up." Marceline said

(Finn got up and rubbed his eyes.)

"What time is it?" Finn asked.

"Its 8:59 the sun is beginning to set lets go out and watch it go down." Marceline said.

(The two walked outside and climbed a nearby tree and sat down and watched the sun as it set.)

"Take a last looks Finn because after this the sun will shun you forever." Marceline said as she moved closer to Finn.

"Goodbye world of the day and hello kingdom of the night." Finn said.

"Are you ready Finn?" Marceline asked.

"I'm ready." Finn said.

"Ok" Marceline said.

(Marceline put her arm around Finn and pulled him close then tilted his neck her fangs extended as she pierced Finn's neck and began to suck his blood.)

(Finn felt his body become cold and his heart began to slow.)

(Marceline pulled away and removed her shirt and then took her finger and cut a thin line across her chest above her breast and pulled Finn into her.)

"Finn drink my blood and receive the gift of the damned." Marceline said.

(Finn obeyed and drank.)

(After 2 minutes Finn pulled away and smiled with the blood on his face.)

(Finn's body began to feel heavy, his breathing became slower, and his eyes became heavy.)

(Marceline laid Finn's head on her lap and smiled.)

(Finn looked at Marceline one last time admiring how her skin glowed beautifully as the moonlight shined off it.)

"Don't worry when you awake you will be my loyal servant and I shall be your mistress of the dark." Marceline said as Finn's eyes began to close.

(Everything went black.)

(A.N. I'm going to work on chapter 4 tomorrow so let me know what you think.

Also for those who want (lemon) I will put it in round chapter 8 or 9.)